(名师整理)最新英语中考写作《叙事忆旧》专题精讲精练(含答案)

主题训练3----叙事忆旧

【名师点拨】

这个主题训练是以记叙文为主的练习，也是初中学生必须掌握的写作文体之一。要写好此类主题，学生要学会做一个有心人，注意平时身边发生的小事（如：爱心捐款活动、志愿者活动等），从一个小的切入口来清楚描述事情，从而悟出道理。

【主题词汇】

an unforgettable experience( 一次难忘的经历) , have a lot of memories(有很多回忆), be in a good mood , learn. . . from. . . . look forward to doing, be proud of, in order to, come true, do sb. a favour, give sb. a hand, help sb. with sth., with the help of sb., take good care of sb. , make one's life happy and full of laughter( 使某人的生活快乐并充满笑声）

【常用句型】

1. The more. . . , the more. . .

2. .. . is the best way to. . .

3. .. . in order to. ..

4. It is common knowledge that.. .

5. I once had an experience. . .

6. It is the most unforgettable experience that has ever happened in my life.

7. I am sure that. .. .

8. Memory is a kind of treasure.

9, ... plays an important role in our daily life.

10. Everyone knows...

11. We should do.. . so as to do...

【模拟试题】

The most unforgettable experience in my memory

a. What happened to you?

b. When and where did it happen?

c. Why is it unforgettable?

【要点分价】

1．可以写写你的经历（时间、人物、事件、结果）和你的感受。

2．仔细审题。确定时态（一般过去时为主），确定需要用韵词组和句型。

3．为什么难忘？从你的经历中学到了什么（详写）?

4．切记不要偏题（如：不是“难忘的”而写成其他的感受）。

【思路写作】

1)你的经历（when,where,who,what,how...）

1. I once had an experience.,.

2. It is the most unforgettable experience that has ever happened in my life...

3. Three years ago, my pa rents and I flew to Japan.

4. My classmates and I had a birthday party in March this year.

5. The most unforgettable experience in my memory was one day my classmates and I went to the park,

6. Last summer I went to visit my uncle by air.

7. I will never forget the military training.

8. One day , I noticed a man was stealing a woman's purse on a bus.

9. We went to Disneyland. It is an amazing amusement park.

10. We got up early in the morning and we were all very excited because my family and I went to the countryside

to have a picnic.

11. There are a lot of memories in my heart that I can't forget. When I was ten years old, I travelled by plane

with my parents.

12. As we all know, everyone has something speciaI in his life. I think I will never

forget my 14th birthday because on that day my parents gave me my first

birthday party in a hotel.

13. I think my childhood was wonderful, and it made me know: "To be patient. "'

14. It was a happy childhood that was filled with knowledge and relaxation.

15. When I open the book which is full of photos, I always look back on when I was

small. It 's really the most valuable time that I have. I will never forget it.

2)你的感受

1. I think this is the most unforgettable experience in my memory.

2. .There were many interesting things and many famous cartoon characters. I

had a wonderful time in it.

3. On that day, I began to feel that I have the duty for my life. And I must be stronger.

4. I felt that I was growing up, and I should be responsible for myself.

5. How frightening and unforgettable the experience was!

6. I never took a plane before, so I was too excited to fall asleep the whole night.

7. lt's really an important day to me and l'II be kind to my parents all the time.

8. Everyone has a different childhood. It may be wonderful, exciting or hard. I have an unforgettable childhood.

9. Childhood is a memory without pressure, competition and hypocrisy(虚伪).

10. Friends share common interests. It is shown that two people become friends easily when they have some common interests. For example, two friends may be in love with the same sports, studying in the same school or living in the same neighborhood.

Friends make sacrifices. Friends make sacrifices for each other.

Friends never run away from difficulties. It is always shown that true friends always stand up tor their friends in times of difficulties,

Understanding. Friends understand each other without even saying a word. A

single smile can brighten up the faces of all the friends.

【范文评讲】

原文稿

When I was a Grade Two pupil, I liked playing the firecracker very much during the

Spring Festival. But as a young boy, I didn't know how to ploy it safely. An accident happened. Once the firecracker was lit, and my face and fingers were injured by the fire. It was not very serious, but I still absent from school and stayed at hospital for about two months. I was taken good care of by my parents and nurses. Therefore, you can hardly know that by looking at my face and fingers.

It was a sad and unforgettable experience in my life. Since then, I haven't done

anything if I couldn't know that it is safe. I learn safety first.

【点评与评分】

这是一篇叙事性的文章。在这篇文章中，作者选择了一件二小事：从过年玩爆竹受伤，明白了“安全第一”的道理。事情很小，但选材很新，意义很深刻。以小见大，正是这

篇文章的成功之处。按中考作文20分一计算，属于第二档～第一档的文章，可得16～17分。需改进之处：

1. It was not very serious,but l still absent from school and stayed at

hospital for about two months.因为absent是形容词，所以应与be动词搭配

在一起使用，was absent。

2. Since then,I haven't done anything if l couldn't know that it is safe.这句

话中，安全是要“确保”的，所以把know改为make sure更合理。

修改稿

When I was a Grade Two pupil, I liked playing the firecracker very much during the Spring Festival. But as a young boy, I didn't know how to play it safely. An accident happened. Once the firecracker was lit, and my face and fingers were injured by the fire. It was not very serious, but I was still from school and stayed at hospital for about two months, I was taken good care of by my parents and nurses. Therefore, you can hardly know that by looking at my face and fingers.

It was a sad and unforgettable experience in my life. Since then, I haven't done anything if I couldn’t make sure that it is safe. I learn safety first.

【范文选登】

1. When I was twelve, my classmates and I had a football match in the park. All of us were interested in it. We started the match at nine o'clock. Although we lost this match, we were still very happy. After the match, we were very tired, so we went to the KFC to have a rest, I think this is the most unforgettable experience in my memory.

2. Three years ago, my parents and I flew to Japan. I saw it from the plane. Oh,it is a beautiful island.—_There we went to Disneyland. It is an amazing amusement park. There were many interesting things and many famous cartoon characters. I had a wonderful time in it, Then we went to a Japanese restaurant. All the food was delicious. We had a good meal! That is my unforgettable experience.

3. My classmates and I had a birthday party in March this year. lt's our fourteenth birthday, At the countryside, we celebrated our birthday together. We ate a big cake and played with each other. I car,not forget it because it's very meaningful. On that day. I began to feel that I have the duty for my life. And I must be stronger.

4. The most unforgettable experience in my life was one day my classmate-s and I went to the park. We were all very happy and had a good time there. But on my way back home, we walked a:long a small river. Jack saw some small fish in it, so he tried to catch them. But he was so careless that he fell into the river. I quickly gave him a hand and saved him. How frightening and unforgettable the experience was!

5. Last Sunday was my birthday. My birthday is always a sweet experience for me every year. So was this one. We got up early in the morning and we were all very excited because my family and I went to the countryside to have a picnic. After that my father drove us to the beach. There were good views and the wind blew gently. It was very comfortable. At night we went back home. And Mum cooked noodles called Long Life Noodles for me. It

was very delicious, I felt that I was growing up, and I should be responsible for myself. What an unforgettable experience!

https://www.360docs.net/doc/325908125.html,st summer l went to visit my uncle by air. I never took a plane before, so I was too excited to fall asleep the whole night. On the day of the flight, the crew took me from my parents to the seat, Luckily , my seat was near the window. When I saw the sky, I was very happy. Then I slept on the plane until it landed. How exciting and unforgettable the experience was!

7. There are a lot of memories in my heart that I can't forget. When I was ten years old, I travelled by plane with my parents. I saw the plane was huge and beautiful, I was excited to see the huge plane. After a few minutes, I sat on the plane, I felt it was flying. I saw the beautiful blue sky and white clouds. The houses and the roads were smaller and smaller. They were so beautiful, What an unforgettable and nice experience it was! I really loved it. 8. One day, I noticed o man was stealing a woman's purse on a bus. I was young and not strong so I didn't know what l should do. At that time, a man who was in the front of the bus caught him. Then I phoned the police. The pol ice got there in time. Of course, the thief was taken away by the police. I think the man was brave. I will be a brave man like him when I grow up. How unforgettable the experience was!

9. I will never forget the military training we had in the secondary school. In order to learn to work in a team, we had a five-day training. We were very tired from standing, running and working. Among the students, I was the most tired one because I was very naughty and told to run over 5 circles around the playground in those days.But in the end I understood that working as a soldier is very hard and difficult but full of honours. We should learn from the soldiers.

10. There're a lot of memories in my mind which I will never forget.

It was Monday, and the weather was a little hot. After having so many lessons, I went out of the main gate of school with my friends. I looked around to find my father's car, but I failed. What's much worse, I forgot to take my cellphone so I couldn't call my parents. Unfortunately, I didn't know that while I was waiting for my father anxiously, my father was waiting with worry. At last, I couldn't bear it and I took a taxi to get home an d my father drove home alone.

How unforgettable the experience was! From this experience, I learn that I shall be careful. If I am careless,

I will get myself into trouble.

1. An unforgettable thing

When I was a young child, I was too shy to talk to anyone. My classmates often laughed at me. I was sad

but could do nothing, Later, something happened, and it changed my life. It was an English speech contest. My mother asked me to take part in it. What a terrible idea! It meant I had to speak in front of all the teachers and students of my school. But my mother told me, "Believe in yourself, " And I tried my best to practise it. With my mother's love, I did well in the contest. Since then, everything has changed. Whenever I do anything, I always tell myself "Nothing is impossible. I can make it. " I become more confident after the contest.

2, A most exciting moment

In my memory, I always remember that day. It was May 9th, 2012. All the Grade Eight students in our school went to Changqing Island to celebrate the 14th birth day. It was the first time that we celebrated our birthday together. All of us were excited. We song and danced and played games at the party.The most exciting moment was to read the letters from our parents, We were moved because suddenly we realized we were the artists who painted our future with the brush of today.

3. A difficult choice

It happened in our classroom. One morning, when I entered our classroom. I happened to see one of my best friends copying another student's homework. As an honest student, I should tell my class teacher about it. But he is my best friend. How can I do that? It was really difficult for me to choose. I thought a lot. At last, I decided to tell my teacher about it. Although my best friend didn't talk to me for a few days. I still think he will understand me. Because we all should be honest persons.

4. My childhood

Childhood usually takes up an important part in one's lifetime. When I saw the picture of my hometown, it would remind me of my childhood.

I often played ball games and chess in my childhood like other children. But the things I did most was to help my mother do some housework. I helped her mop the floor and clean the furniture. Therefore, my mother would not be very tired. I enjoyed doing it very much. Because of what I did in my childhood. I become a good warm-hearted child and I am loved by almost everyone who has received help from me. I think l've got very good education in my childhood and I was happy.

My childhood is a precious memory. It also lets me know helping others will make our life happy and full of laughter.

5. My first meeting with a foreigner

One day when I was walking on Nanjing Road, suddenly a foreigner asked me how

to get to No. 1 Department Store. I understood what he meant, but I couldn't express myself correctly. I could

only say a few words in broken English. At last the foreigner understood and said with a smile, "You'd better learn English well and speak more English. "From this experience, I know how important English is. I will do my best to learn English well so that I can speak English fluently,

6. On a rainy day

It was a winter day. I was waiting for a bus. Suddenly, the weather become rainy. The rain was heavy. Luckily, I took an umbrella when I left home. But other people who were waiting for the bus didn't do. I thought being a helpful people was very important. So I held my umbrella to let them get on the bus without getting wet. They all thanked me. I felt warm with joy. The bus set off again, but the water from my umbrella dripped to the floor. I felt very sorry about it. At that moment, a student offered me a plastic bag. I looked at his face with thankfulness. After that day, l knew it we help others, we will be helped when we are in trouble.

7. My weekend

As a Grade Nine student, my weekend isn't as relaxing and free as before, I have to do my homework and attend the class. But I also can do some sports, watch TV and even play computer games sometimes. I have time to talk with my classmates. L enjoy the life like this. To make a long story short, my weekend is both busy and happy.

8. The first time I cooked food

About three months ago, neither my father nor my mother was at home. Sol had

to cook food myself. It was on unforgettable experience. I couldn't control lots of

things, such as how much salt I should add, how long the food should be cooked and

so on. To make a long story short, it was very terrible and the dishes were the worst

that I even tasted.

At that moment, I knew my parents both worked hard. So we should understand

our parents and respect the hard-working result of our parents.

9. A visit to the Great Wall

During the winter holidays, I visited the Great Wall with my parents. We took a train and it ran very fast. When we arrived at the Great Wall, we climbed up many steps. There were many foreigners on the way up to the Great Wall. When we reached the top, we could see all the views clearly.

It was really great, I enjoyed my journey to the Great Wall very much. I hope to

visit there again one day.

1. A _______ (happy/bad/special) memory .

2. A(n) ______ (lucky/unforgettable/...) experience/day

3. The moment I was praised by _______

a. Who praised you?

b. When and why were you praised?

c. How did you feel?

d. What did you think of at that moment?

4. The most exciting moment

a. What happened that day?

b. Why was it very exciting?

c. How did you feel?

5. My present days/A diary

6. My childhood

7. A day I’ll never forget

8. Love around us (2 examples)

9. The most unforgettable thing I did in the winter holidays

10. A visit to_________

11. A day in spring

12. The good deeds around me

13. The coming weekend I ______

14, The first experience I _______

15. That day we _______

16. I will never forget _______

a. Who will you never forget?

b. What will you never forget?

. c. Why will you never forget?