上海中考英语作文专题指导
上海中考英语作文专题指导
一、中考英语作文写作模式一一“四审四注意”写作法
“四审”:
一审标题文体格式。这样可以为下面的写作,如人称、时态、内容、格式等奠定基础;
二审人称。如是以第一人称I或we为主还是以第二人称you或第三人称she, he, it或they
为主;
三审时态。一般而言,写作时文章应多以现在时(包括一般现在时、一般将来时、现在完成时和现在进行时)或过去时(一般宜用一般过去时和过去进行时)为主,切忌时态混乱;四审内容。如有提示,应尽量按照所给提示来写,不可偏题乱发挥,可将有关内容提炼分解
成几句展开叙述,不可遗漏,这是很重要的一点,一般文章按who,when, where,what,how,why等要素展开。
“四注意”:
一注意如果文章没有给出开头结尾,一定要写开头结尾。当然,开头和结尾的方式不能太落
于俗套,要有一定的新意,一般一两句即可,结尾要点题,有所立意;
二注意句式要富于变化,不能通篇只有一种句式或句式过于单调,否则即使无语言和内容错
误也难得高分,如可适当运用if, when, although等状语从句,I think / I hope / I believe that 等宾语从句,如用定语从句必须有绝对把握;
三注意适当运用连接词,女口on one hand, on the other hand; what 'more; however等,这样使
文章更有层次、更富逻辑性,若语言和内容没问题,做到第二、三项“注意”就很有希望拿
组织结构分。
四注意善于运用有把握的词汇和句型,尽量运用课本所学词句,坚决避免不正确的“中国式英语”,更不能乱“发明”,一般一篇文章能用8个左右的好短语或句式已很不错。
最后需要提醒考生的是,中考作文要取得高分,词数不能太少也不能太多,笔者觉得,以80词
左右为宜。另外,书写一定要认真、工整,以免造成不必要的失分。
二、中考英语作文常见语言错误调查分析
1.时态错误
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3.名词单复数错误
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中考英语总复习专项训练题
写作专项训练
A.中考英语热门写作话题
1.关于学习
Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “ How to learn English well ” .(以 "怎样学好英语”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
Use the following points as a reference.(以下内容供参考)
?When did you start lear ning En glish? (in …/ ... years ago)
?How do you lear n En glish? (liste n carefully, study with a group, read En glish every day ...) ?What is difficult to lear n? (liste ning, grammar ...)
2. 关于兴趣
Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “ My interest ”. (以“我的兴趣”为题写
一篇不少于60 个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容供参考)
? What is your interest?
? Why do you like it so much?
3. 关于写事
Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “ Unforgettable memories ” . (以“难忘的回忆”为题写一篇不少于60 个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容供参考)
? What is your unforgettable memory?
? Why do you think it is unforgettable?
4. 关于计划
Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “ My plan for summer holiday ”. (以“我
的暑期计划”为题写一篇不少于60 个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容供参考)
? What are you going to do during the coming summer holiday?
? Give at least two points.
5. 关于朋友
Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “ My good friend ” . (以“我的好朋友” 为题写一篇不少于60 个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容供参考)
? Who is your good friend?
? What do you often do with him or her?
? Why do you regard him or her as a good friend?
6. 关于写人
Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “ My English teacher ” . (以“我的英语老师”为题写一篇不少于60 个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容供参考)
? Who is your English teacher?
? Do you like him or her?
? Why do you like him or her?
7. 关于英语
Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “ I changed my ways of learning English ” (以“我改变了我学习英语的方式”为题写一篇不少于60 个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容供参考)
? How did you learn English in the past?
? Why do you change your ways of learning English?
? How do you learn English now?
8. 关于旅行
Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “An unforgettable trip ”. (以“一次难忘的旅行”为题写一篇不少于60 个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)