小学生英语作文写作窍门及范文

小学生英语作文写作窍门及范文
小学生英语作文写作窍门及范文

小学生英语作文写作窍门及范文

【写作窍门】

小学英语作文一般还是以看图作文为主,在写作的过程中,最常见的一些毛病就是文笔不好,英语词汇不够,但是的问题就是英语作文离题了,这是作文的大忌。

今天这里帮助大家分析一下小学英语作文经常出现的一些问题,根据这些问题来注意写作技巧;

(1)选材不恰当:尤其是看图作文,没有照图片发挥,而是任意“创作”。

(2)词汇不够:形容“开心”的事,通篇都是“开心”,没有别的形容词;

(3)句子不通顺:尤其是英语式华语,例如“小丽掉了课本”(正确是“小丽的课本掉了”)。

(4)构思不完整、详略不当:开头写了一大半,来到主题中心思想时却两句话带过,结尾更是草草了事,犯了主题不突出的毛玻

(5)观察力不够,描写不深入:例如描写弟弟顽皮,没有举例具体说明。

小学作文:看图作文最容易

窍门:依照个别的图片造句,然后将个别图片的造句串连起来,加上一些连贯词汇、描写和形容词等,便能达到基本要求。

【范文一】

My hobby is collecting stamps(集邮). There are many stamps in my room. I like stamps very much. There are many things on the stamps. They are colorful and beautiful. After school I usually go to the post office and there are many people there. I learn a lot from collecting stamps. I like collecting stamps very much.

【范文二】

Today is Sunday.I get up early.Because I play sports.I wear my T-shirt and my skirt.Then I go to the playground to play ping-pong with Lucy.

We are happy.After that,we eat breakfast .I like drinking milk but she likes drinking juice.At 10:00,I play the piano.

Then I eat lunch at 2:30. I will go to school to study English. After that,I will go home and eat dinner.Then I will go to bed.

This is my day. Do you like it?

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