初中英语短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加或一个单词的删除，以及其他单词的修改．

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧，并在其下面写出该增加的词．

删除：把多余的词有（）画掉．

修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．

注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．

3．在答题卡的第四节的题上答题．

Everyone knows that natural resource of the world are limited， and many people in developing countries spend too many money on lots of unnecessary new clothes． This is waste of energy a nd materials． And it is also bad for people's health． Some people smoke cigarettes and drink l ots of beers and wine， even though they are warn not to do so．They are used too much energy．Something must be done to stop the waste of energy． At the same time， we should to make e very effort to produce more energy of the wind and sun．

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解析：

每个人都知道世界的自然资源是有限的，许多发展中国家的人花了太多的钱在许多不必要的

新衣服上．这是浪费能源和材料，而且也对人们的健康有害．一些人抽烟，喝很多啤酒和葡

萄酒，即使他们被警告不要这样做，他们使用了太多的能量．

必须做些事情来停止浪费能源，同时，我们应该尽一切努力从风和太阳中产生更多的能量．

1．resource改为resources．resource是错误的，应为natural resources自然资源，resource 在这里是可数名词，故resource改为resources．

2．and改为but．and是错误，and表示并列，这里说的是每个人都知道世界的自然资源是

有限的，但是许多发展中国家的人花了太多的钱在许多不必要的新衣服上．前后句是转折的关系，所以用but但是，表示转折，故and改为but．

3．developing改为developed．developing是现在分词，有进行的意味..也就是"发展中"的意思．而文中应该指的是发达国家．应该用developed．故developing改为developed．

4．many 改为much．many是错误的，这money是不可数名词，要用much修饰，故many 改为much．

5．is后加a．根据题干此处应说这是一种能源和材料的浪费．表示泛指，waste是辅音音素开头的单词，所以waste前应加冠词a．故is后加a．

6．beers改为beer．beers是错误的，lots of后接不可数名词

或名词复数，beer啤酒，是不可数名词，故beers改为beer．

7．warn改为warned．warn是错误的，根据题干这里是一般现在时的被动语态，结构为

be+done，即使是他们被警告不要这样做，故warn改为warned．

8．used改为using．used是错误的，根据题干，这里是现在进行时，结构为be+动词的现在分词，即他们在消耗太多的能量．故used改为using．

9．to去掉．to是错误的，这里有should，后接动词原形，所以to去掉．故to去掉．

10．of改为from．of是错误的．of表示…的，from表示来自，从，这里表示我们应该尽一

切努力从风和太阳中产生更多的能量．故of改为from．

When Sarah was a teenager，she used to fight against almost everything with her family．But five years ago，while she was studying in abroad in England，she heard a song was full of feelings about returning home on the radio．Ever since then，she was a fan of American country music．Country music is just about modern life in the US，such as the importance of money and successful，but not about belong to a group．However，country music brings us back to the good old days when people were kind to each another．

Sarah hasn't gone to Nashville yet，but she knows that there are also always musicians and singers like Garth Brooks．Sarah has already listened to most of his songs．"He's selled more than 120million records．I hope to see him sing lively one day!"Sarah said．

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解析：

当莎拉还是个孩子的时候，她总是她的家人争吵，但五年前，她在英国留学的时候，她在广

播电台听到了一首充满思乡情的歌曲，从那时起，她成了美国乡村音乐的粉丝．

乡村音乐和美国的现代生活有关，如金钱和成功的重要性，但它们不属于一个群体，然而，

乡村音乐把我们带回了美好的日子，那时人们彼此都很友好．

莎拉还没有去过纳什维尔，但她知道一些音乐家和像加斯?布鲁克斯一样的歌手．莎拉已经

听了他的大部分歌曲．"他卖了超过1200万的唱片．我希望有一天看到他现场演唱！"莎拉说．

【解答】When Sarah was a teenager，

she used to fight against almost everything with her family．But five years ago，

while she was studying in abroad in England，

she heard a song was full of feelings about returning home on the radio．Ever since then，

she was a fan of American country music．Country music is just about modern life in the US，such as the importance of money andsuccessful，but not about belong to a group．However，country music brings us back to the good old days when people were kind to each another．

Sarah hasn't gone to Nashville yet，but she knows that there are also always musicians and singers like Garth Brooks．Sarah has already listened to most of his songs．"He's selled more than 120million records．

I hope to see him sing lively one day!"Sarah said

1．把against改成over．结合题干she used to fight ____ al

most everything，fight over为…争吵，是固定词组，应该用over．

2．把in 去掉，结合while she was studying in abroad in England她在英国留学的时候，abroad，副词，在国外，前面不加介词，所以把in去掉．

3．把was 去掉，结合题干she heard a song full of feelings，她在广播电台听到了一首充满

思乡情的歌曲．full of feelings about returning home on the radio 在这是后置定语修饰song，所以应该把was去掉．

是现在完4．把was改成has been．根据上半句Ever since then，应该用现在完成时，since …

成时的标志词．现在完成时态表示过去发生或已经完成的动作对现在造成的影响或结果．或从过去已经开始，持续到现在的动作或状态．本题属于从过去已经开始，持续到现在的动作

或状态，现在完成时态的构成：助动词have/has+过去分词，主语是she，应该用has been．

5．把successful改成success，结合题干such as the importance of money and___如金钱和成功的重要性，money名词，钱，和空格处的单词是并列的，都应该是名词，success，名词，成功．

6．把belong改成belonging，结合题干，空格处是about，是介词，后跟动名词，所以把belong 改成动名词belonging．

7．把another改成other．结合题干和句意 when people were kind to each ___，那时人们彼此都很友好．each other是固定词组，互相．

8．把gone改成been，根据Sarah hasn't Nashville yet，莎拉还没有去过纳什维尔，have been to曾经去过某地；have gone to已经去了某地，应该用hasn't been to 表示没有去

过某地．

9．把selled改成sold，根据He's more than 120million records，这是现在完成时，he's 是he has 的缩略式，后面应该是sell的过去分词，sold．

10．把lively改成live，根据I hope to see him sing one day，我希望有一天看到他现场演唱，sing live是固定的用法，现场演唱，所以把lively生动的，活泼的，改成live．

下列短文的划线部分是错误的。

Confucius was born in the state of Lu in the year of 551 B.C. When he is 3 years old, his father died. And when he was 17, his mother died. And Confucius received a good education when he

was young. In his thirty, Confucius began to teach. He spent the rest of his life teaching. In the

age of 55, Confucius begins to travel around China. He tried to search for good rule of behavior. When Confucius was 68 years old, he returned back to Lu, his home state. He wrote lots of books after he came back. Five years after, he passed away. Although he has been died for several thousand years, we can still remember he forever.

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解析：

【小题1】was.

【小题2】But.

【小题3】thirties.

【小题4】At.

【小题5】began.

【小题6】rules.

【小题7】returned / came.

【小题8】later.

【小题9】dead.

【小题10】him.

试题分析：

小题1:根据上下文可知孔子的事迹应用一般过去时。

小题2:“尽管其父母双亡，但---”根据上文知是转折。

小题3:习惯用法“在某人三十几岁时”用In his thirties。

在---岁时”。

小题4:固定词组at the age of“

小题5:根据上下文可知孔子的事迹应用一般过去时。

小题6:rule是可数名词，故用其复数形式。

小题7:return就相当于come back.重复了。

小题8:表示“在---之后”时，after用在时间之前，later用在时间之后。

小题9:和一段时间状语for several thousand years,连用时，die用be dead代替。小题10:作动词的宾语，人称代词应用其宾格形式。

I live in the country and my father was a farmer. 16．___He is now forty—five year old. Because of years of 17．____hard work, he looks old than his age. When I

was 18．_____young, he use to tell me the importance of

study. 19．_____Father knows little about English and other

subject. 20．______But he usually gives me some good advices on

how 21．______To learn my lessons good. He is not only kind to

me 22．_______But also very strict with me. With the help, I’ve

made 23．_______great progr ess. I’ll never forgot what he

taught 24．_______me. I think my father is a best father in the

world. 25．_______

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解析：

16．is17．years18．older19．used20．subjects21．advice22．well23．his 24．forget25．the试题分析：

16．考查动词时态。句意：我住在乡下，我的父亲是一个农民。根据时态

保持一致，用一般现在时，故改为is

17．考查名词复数。句意：他现在45岁了。要用复数，故改为years。18．考查形容词比较级。句意：她比他的年龄看起来老多了。根据题意可

知用比较级，故改为older

19．考查固定词组。句意：当我还小的时候他过去常常告诉我学习的重要性，故改为used，used to do表示过去常常做某事。

20．考查名词复数。句意：关于英语和其他的科目父亲知道的很少。Other +

名词的复数。故改为subjects。

21．考查固定词组，句意：但是他通常给我一些怎样学好英语的建议。Give sb some good advice on sth在某方面给某人一些建议。故改为advice是不

可数名词。

22．考查副词。句意; 但是他通常给我一些怎样学好英语的建议。修饰动词用副词，故改为well。

23．考查代词。句意：在他的帮助下我已经取得了很大的进步。With one’s help在某人的帮助下，故改为his

24．考查介词。句意：我永远不会忘记他交给我的东西。根据时态，will +

动词原形，故改为forget

25．考查冠词。句意：我认为我的父亲是世界上最好的父亲，the +形容词

的最高级，故改为the。