英语写作技巧:2.2+高考读后续写高分技巧+Word版含答案

英语写作技巧:2.2+高考读后续写高分技巧+Word版含答案
英语写作技巧:2.2+高考读后续写高分技巧+Word版含答案

2. 高考读后续写高分技巧

(2018·浙江高考) 阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。

It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.

We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad’s friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.

His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guest room of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. “The day starts at dawn on my farm, ” he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze(吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.

In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride,

and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn’t going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. “Don’t be late for supper, ” Uncle Paul cried, “and keep to the track so that you don’t get lost!”“OK!”my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven(编织的)blanket spread out upon the ground just for us. 注意: 续写部分分为两段, 每段的开头语已为你写好。

Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. __________________

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We had no idea where we were and it got dark.

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练考场审题

Step 1: 精准审题谋篇布局

文体记叙文

时态一般过去时

原文分

析第一段: 交代故事的背景。介绍了度假的原因和地点

第二段: 简单地介绍了旅途

第三段: 对在农场的日常活动的简单介绍

第四段和续写故事的展开有很大的关系。这一段讲到了如何发生了我和爸爸去骑马的故事。而续写的内容就是在此基础上展开

写作思

根据第一段所给首句Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. 这一句是故事发展的转折点, 可从rabbit出现后带来的反应扩展开, 可以写马的反应, 也可以写人的反应, 但要注意与第二段首句相呼应

第二段首句是We had no idea where we were and it got dark. 这一句呼应前文Uncle Paul的叮嘱——不要误了吃晚饭, 可从如何寻路返回

农场去写

Step 2: 头脑风暴字字珠玉

(1)美词: previous;in vain;at the point of desperation;a faint voice

(2)佳句

①Frightened as I was, I tried to keep my balance to prevent me from falling off .

②Fortunately, minutes later, the horse stopped before a river, out of breath, and so did I.

③What we could do was to go back along the previous track slowly. Step 3: 斟酌词句妙笔生花

要点1: 这个出其不意的出场让我的马疯狂地跑起来。

一般表达:

This unexpected appearance made my horse run wildly.

句式升级(定语从句)

This unexpected appearance frightened my horse, which made it run wildly.

要点2: 尽管我很害怕, 我努力不(让自己)掉下马来。

一般表达:

Although I was frightened, I tried not to fall off the horse.

句式升级(倒装句)

Frightened as I was, I tried to keep my balance to prevent me from falling off.

要点3: 我们只能沿着之前的路慢慢走回去。

一般表达:

We could only go back along the previous track slowly.

句式升级(主语从句)

我们所能做的只有沿着之前的路慢慢走回去。

What we could do was to go back along the previous track slowly. Step 4: 衔接过渡斐然成篇

Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. This unexpected appearance frightened my horse, which made it run wildly.

I tried my best to control it, but in vain. Frightened as I was, I tried to keep my balance to prevent me from falling off. Fortunately, minutes later, the horse stopped before a river, out of breath, and so did I. At that moment, my dad also came up. Seeing I was OK, he was quite relieved. But it was clear that we got lost.

We had no idea where we were and it got dark. We didn’t know where the farm house was. What we could do was to go back along the previous track slowly. But it was really difficult for us in such a dark situation. Just as we were at the point of desperation, we heard a faint voice from the distance. “It must be Uncle Paul, ” I said. So we cried back with excitement. Finally, Uncle Paul safely brought us back home. What an amazing ride!

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阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。

A Vacation with My Mother

I had an interesting childhood. It was filled with surprises and amusements, all because of my mother—loving, sweet, yet absent-minded and forgetful. One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her.

My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota, and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way. As the first day of our trip approached, David, my eight-year-old brother, and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our friends. Who knew if we’d ever see them again? Finally, the moment of our departure arrived, and we loaded suitcases, books, games, camping equipment, and a tent into the car and bravely drove off. We bravely drove off again two hours later after we’d returned home to get the purse and traveler’s checks Mom had forg otten.

David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was driving while Dad slept: “You stand outside the door and play lookout(放哨)while I go, and I’ll stand outside the door and play lookout while you go. ” I had terrible pictures in my mind: “Honey, where are the kids?” “What?! Oh, Gosh. . . I thought they were being

awfully quiet. ” We were never actually left behind in a strange city, but we weren’t about to take any chances.

On the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea: Why didn’t we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there? David and I became nervous. To our great relief, Dad turned down the idea. Mom never could understand our objections(反对). If a strange family showed up on her front doorstep, Mom would have been delighted. She thinks everyone in the world is as nice as she is. We finally found a vacancy in the next town.

注意: 续写部分分为两段, 每段的开头语已为你写好。

The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us.

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We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the

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【参考范文】

The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. We decided to camp along the river. The views there were surprisingly beautiful—the warm sunshine, the fresh air, the clean water. We sat on the grass, enjoying the splendid nature. However, when Dad was about to put up our tent, he was disappointed to find that it had been left in the hotel. Well, Dad had to go back to fetch it to continue our camping.

We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. Every time we got to a new place, Mom would cheer up like a child. She would get off the car excitedly, laughing and dancing around. Together we enjoyed the modern sights in the big cities, the historical buildings in the small towns and the amazing scenery in nature. When

we came back to the hotel after the tiring but excellent visit, Mom would hug us and kiss us on our faces. How sweet she was! Absent-minded and forgetful as she was, she never forgot to express her love to us.

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阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。

One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, “I’m going to find a better spot for us to camp”and walked away.

With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.

“Tom!”she cried. “Help!”

No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold

him and tell him how much she loved him.

Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling(滴落)somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.

As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me?Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again. 注意: 续写部分分为两段, 每段的开头语已为你写好。

But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.

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It was daybreak when Jane woke up. _________________________________

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But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. She had to stay alone in the forest for another cold night. Jane was so tired and disappointed, but she didn’t lose heart. She knew Tom must be trying his best to search for her. She believed that the helicopter must have been called by Tom and was sure it would come back again tomorrow. She found a place near the stream and slept.

It was daybreak when Jane woke up. She walked along the stream, hoping to find a suitable place so that the helicopter could find her. She was so lucky that before long a big rock appeared, which was high above the trees. There she climbed and waited with her yellow blouse in hand for the helicopter to come again. To her great joy, she didn’t wait long

before she saw the helicopter in the sky. She waved hard with the yellow blouse and the helicopter quickly found her. She was right and it was Tom who called the helicopter and saved her.

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3-1 A few weeks before Thanksgiving one year, my husband and I decided to invite a guest over for the holiday. I called a senior center and they suggested Ilse. She was a stubborn 78- year-old lady, who favored sequined(亮片的)T-shirts. On Thanksgiving, within minute of arriving, Ilse welcomed the glass of wine my husband offered with a wide smile. By the end of the evening, we felt as if we were old friends. The more time I spent with Ilse, the more she became like a surrogate (替代的)grandma. So when her only son Ralph died, I realized she was too upset to be left alone and helped her hire a caregiver. For me, she was like a family and I was the only one left in her tribe. Each time I stopped by her apartment, Ilse seemed more disconnected than the time before. Late one afternoon, when I called her, I was unable to understand what she was saying. I drove her to the emergency room, where the doctor confirmed she had suffered a mild stroke. During the next few days, I dropped by her apartment, but she was no longer the energetic, stubborn Ilse I knew. At the end of the week, I received an early-morning phone call from her caregiver. " Please come over now," the woman said, her voice matter-of- fact. "She's passed away. ” When I arrived, I saw Ilse lying on her bed, motionless, her eyes closed. I sat on the edge of the bed, too shocked to cry. 注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150词左右; 2. 至少使用5个短文标有下划线的关键词语; 3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好; 4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1: The morning after Ilse's death, I read through her will and saw my name. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________ Paragraph 2: I donated the money to a cause she cared about deeply: children. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____ Paragraph 1 She had left me a large sum of money. I didn’t remember her saying anything about it. If she had, I would have insisted she donate the money to charity or give it to a friend she had known longer. I couldn’t accept the money because Ilse was a friend and I’d helped her out of loyalty and respect, not with the expectation of being paid. Paragraph 2 Various families and charities benefited from her donations. Some families received funds to send their grade-schoolers to summer camp. Through the local food program, her donation provided children with food to take home with them. My placing a phone call to the senior center and meeting Ilse had definitely made my life richer. I took a chance on humanity, and Ilse’s friendship was the jackpot. 3-2 Last year at Christmas time, my wife, three children and I were on our way from Paris to Nice. Somehow everything went wrong. Our hotels were “tourist traps” and our rented car broke down. On Christmas Eve, when we checked into a dirty hotel in Nice, there was no Christmas spirit in our hearts. It was raining and cold when we went out to eat. We found a small restaurant poorly decorated for the holiday.

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