2018届高考英语二轮复习书面表达针对练邀请信
书面表达针对练(一) 邀请信
题目要求
(2017·全国卷Ⅱ)
假定你是李华,想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸(paper-cutting)艺术展。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1.展览时间、地点;
2.展览内容。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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四步作文法
第一步审题谋篇
1.体裁邀请信
2.时态一般现在时和将来时
3.人称第三人称为主
第二步要点要全
1.我是你的学生李华。
I'm_Li_Hua,_one_of_your_students.
2.我写信想邀请你参观中国剪纸艺术展。剪纸是中国的传统艺术形式之一,我确信你一定会喜欢剪纸。
I'm writing to invite_you_to_visit_the_paper-cutting_exhibition. Paper-cutting is one of_Chinese_traditional_art_forms_and_I'm_sure_you_will_like_it.
3.艺术展将在下星期六上午8点到11点在当地博物馆举行。
The exhibition will_be_held_in_the_local_museum_from_8:00_am_to_11:00_am_next_Saturday.
4.有一些著名的艺术家将当场表演如何剪纸。
There_are_some_famous_artists. They will perform_how_to_cut_paper_on_the_spot.
5.从全国各地收集的一些漂亮的剪纸艺术画将被展出。
Some beautiful paper-cutting works, which_were_collected_from_all_over_the_country,_will_be_on_show.
6.如果你喜欢,你也能参加剪纸活动。我相信对你而言将是一个令人难忘的经历。
If you like, you_can_also_join_in_paper-cutting. I'm_sure_it_will_be_an_unforgettable_experience_for_you.
7.盼望着收到你的来信。
I'm_looking_forward_to_hearing_from_you.
第三步句式要美
1.句4合并升级为定语从句
There_are_some_famous_artists_who_will_perform_how_to_cut_paper_on_the_spot .
2.句5升级为过去分词作定语
Some_beautiful_paper-cutting_works,_collected_from_all_over_the_country,_wi ll_be_on_show.
第四步衔接要顺
One possible version:
Dear Henry,
I'm Li Hua, one of your students. I'm writing to invite you to visit the paper-cutting exhibition. Paper-cutting is one of Chinese traditional art forms and I'm sure you will like it.
The exhibition will be held in the local museum from 8:00 am to 11:00 am next Saturday. There are some famous artists who will perform how to cut paper on the spot. Meanwhile, some beautiful paper-cutting works, collected from all over the country, will be on show there. If you like, you can also join in paper-cutting. I'm sure it will be an unforgettable experience for you.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
改写两用
这是根据本题目学生完成的一篇习作,文中有10处错误,请改正。
Dear Henry,
I am writing to invite you to take part in the Chinese paper-cutting art exhibition be held in the art gallery from 8:00 am to 11:00 am the next Sunday.
As is known for us, paper-cutting is a traditional art form in China, that has a history of more than 1,500 year. People often beautify theirs homes with paper-cutting during festivals and weddings. In this exhibition, you can see pap er-cutting with all kinds of patterns. Beside, some famous artists will perform how to cut paper on the spot. I wish that you can grasp this opportunity to learn tradition Chinese culture further.
I'm looking forward to hear from you.
Yours sincerely ,
Li Hua
答案:
Dear Henry ,
I am writing to invite you to take part in the Chinese paper-cutting art
exhibition ∧to be held in the art gallery from 8:00 am to 11:00 am the next Sunday.
As is known for to us, paper-cutting is a traditional art form in China, that which
has a history of more than 1,500 year years . People often beautify theirs their
homes with paper-cutting during festivals and weddings. In this exhibition, you can see
paper-cutting with all kinds of patterns. Beside Besides
, some famous artists will perform how to cut paper on the spot. I wish that you can could
grasp this opportunity to learn tradition traditional
Chinese culture further. I'm looking forward to hear hearing
from you. Yours sincerely ,
Li Hua