高中英语建议信和倡议书作文精心整理

建议信

How to write a letter for advice

⑴说明建议的内容；

⑵提出具体建议的原因；

⑶指出采纳建议的益处。

注意事项：语言要委婉、礼貌，顾及对方感受。

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a letter. Suppose you are Zhang Ying. Write a letter to Xiao Wang, a schoolmate of yours who is going to visit you duri ng the summer holiday for a week. You should write at least

100

words accord ing to the suggesti ons give n below in Chin ese.

1、表示欢迎。

2、提出对度假安排的建议。 3 、祝愿

Dear Xiao Wang,

I am very glad to know that you are soon coming to Beijing

to join me in the summer holiday. I'm look ing forward to your arrival.

If you can stay in Beiji ng on ly for a week, I am afraid that you will have a tight schedule 份关系for visit ing a nu mber of places of historic in terest. I'd like to suggest that you first visit some famous 了然

places that you have the greatest in terest in, such as the Palace Museum, the Summer Place, the Great Wall; then you can visit those places you think less the n 紧凑importa nt. I believe this kind of arran geme nt will make you have eno ugh time to appreciate （欣赏）力

what you really want to see.

Moreover if you really want to be a good traveler, it is n ecessary for you to read some books about these places before you come to see them with your own eyes. With more kno wledge about these places, you will have a better un dersta nding of Chin ese history and culture.

I am eager to meet you soon in Beijing. Wish you in advanee a pleasant trip to Beijing. 合文体要求

第一段表示欢迎

表明建议的原因语气亲切，

符合说话人身

叙述词和副词一目

使文章结构使自己的安排具有说服

建议有理有据

表达良好的祝愿，符

假如你叫孙军，是恩施高中的学生，要给市长写一封信，反映学校门前交通拥挤现象，包括

参考词汇：穿行thread one ' s wa y 天桥overpass

范文1

Dear Mayor,

I 'm a student of No.1 Middle School. Here I have something to tell you.

Next to a primary school stands our school, facing a main street. Whenit comes to traffic jams , it ' s crammed with cars during the rush hour. What makes things worse is that childre n have to be picked up by their pare nts owing to their young age. As a con seque nee, ① it ' s of great dan ger / ② it ' s extremely dan gerous for the stude nts to go through the traffic. Accord ing to the phe nomenon stated above, it is high time that releva nt authorities took some measures like buildi ng an overpass.

I ' m looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Sun Jun

范文2

Dear Mayor,

I ' m a student of No.1 Middle School. Here I have something to tell you.

① Borderi ng a primary school,/ ② Located next to a primary school, my school

faces the main road directly, which always has a traffic jam at the peak time of

the whole day.① Additi on ally/ ② In additi on, many pare nts send their young childre n

to school and fetch them home, ① thus maki ng the traffic heavier./ ② thus caus ing more serious traffic jams./ ③ thus resulting in more serious traffic jams. There is no denying that we students, threading our way through masses of cars, are exposed

to great dan ger. ① Seeing these matters, n ever will I stop urging our gover nment to take some measures. For the sake of improving the quality of traffic, it is sig ni fica nt to build an overpass./ ② In order to release the stress of traffic

problems, I stron gly suggest that releva nt authorities should take active/effective

measures like building an overpass./ ③ From my point of view,/As far as I ' m

concern ed,/In my opinion, some measures are supposed to be take n by gover nment as soon as possible such as buildi ng an overpass to improve the con diti ons of the

traffic./ ④ Aimed at solving these problems, the government should take some measures immediately, such as buildi ng an overpass ahead of our school.

I ' m looking fo rward to your reply.

Yours,

Sun Jun

例1广州某电视台打算开办一个面向中学生观众的英语节目，新聘任了来自英国的John作

为节目编辑助理。现在，John 就节目内容向广大中学生征求意见。假如你是学生李华，建

议开办"广州全接触” (All-round Guangzhou) 节目。请根据以下节目设想给John写信：

I know you ' re going to set up an English program for middle school students.

So I ' m writing to suggest a program —“All - round Guangzhou . This program will cover topics like the history, education, famous scenic spots, food and famous people

of Guan gzhou. It would be better to broadcast it on weeke nds so that we stude nts can have the cha nee to watch it.

Besides, you can also in vite some middle school stude nts to get in volved in the program, which will surely arouse other stude nts ' in terest in it. Not only will

this program help stude nts improve their En glish, but also get them to know more about the culture of Guan gzhou so as to in troduce Guan gzhou to foreig n visitors.

I am sure it will be well-received by the middle school stude nts. I hope you can take my suggesti on into con siderati on.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

例2假设你是小明的好朋友李华，小明参加了一个英语演讲比赛，他对比赛非常担心，向你求助，请你根据以下内容给他写一封建议信。

写作内容说明回信的意图；向小明提出建议；预祝小明比赛成功。［精华点评］

建议信的写作关键在于作者给出建议的语气委婉而中肯，使对方容易接受。很多考生习

惯使用祈使句或者You should的句型表示建议，这样比较生硬，因此考生转换不同的句型使语言丰富，如范文中使用了you should..., you had better..., remember to do 等句

型。在最后祝愿对方成功的时候，可以用简明扼要的句型，如wish you good luck / wish

you success / may you succeed, 使文章长短句结合得当。

Dear Xiao ming.

You have told me that you are very n ervous about the coming speech con test and

I will try to make some suggesti ons which I hope can help you. In my opinion, you should get well prepared before the speech con test by practici ng before a mirror. Besides, you had better use a brief and concise Ianguage in your speech so that you can leave a deep impression on the judges. Whenyou are giving the speech, remember to keep smile and even if you forget your words, don ' t be panic and just continue

your speech, because no one will no tice it. Wish you success in the speech!

Yours ,

Li Hua

例3假如你是李华，你刚收到了你的朋友王梅的电子邮件，她在邮件里向你询问在高中如何

学好英语。请你根据下列的内容给她写封回信。

1. 上课认真听讲，做好笔记，课后及时复习；

2. 词汇是基础，每天早上花半个小时的时间背诵单词，朗读课文；

3. 课外多与同学用英语交流，提高听力和口语能力；

4. 每天坚持写日记。

注意：1.词数120—150词左右，短文的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总数；

2. 内容可适当发挥，注意行文连贯。

Dear Wang Mei,

I ' m very glad to have received your e -mail. Now I' m writing to give you some advice on how to lear n En glish well in high school.

First of all, you should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in class so that you can go over your less ons as soon as you can/regularly after class. As is known to all=As we all know, vocabulary is of great importa nee / esse ntial. You should spe nd half an hour in the morning recit ing words and read ing texts aloud.

What' s more, try to com mun icate with your classmates in En glish out of class. In this way you can improve your liste ning and spoke n En glish quickly. Last but not least, you should develop the habit of keep ing a diary, which helps improve your written English and helps you go over/review the words and expressions that you have

learnt.

I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: where there is a will, there is a way. /The man who has made up his mind to win will n ever say “ impossible ” .

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

例4你是我们学校一名很热心的学生，得知我们校要建设娱乐休闲中心，正在征求同学们的

意见，请你根据以下几个方面的提示给校长写一封120词左右的建议信。

1. 娱乐休闲中心应该包括乒乓球室和羽毛球室。

2. 最好在学生的课余时间开放。

3. 尽量不要收费。

4. ……

Dear Mr. Preside nt,

It ' s come to my attention that our school is going to build a new leisu re center.

I ' m writing to ask you to consider the following suggestions.

Firstly, I ' d like to suggest that there should be a table -tennis room as well as a badm inton

court. I think it would do great good if you could build the cen ter with an eye to those students who are interested in playing table-tennis

or badminton. Secon dly, could the cen ter ope n in our spare time? If so, we will have eno ugh time to make full use

of it. Thirdly, we will be more tha n happy if the cen ter is free.

As we all know, not every stude nt can afford the extra expe nse.

Thank you for reading my letter. I hope you will consider my suggestions. If the cen ter is built, it will greatly enhance stude nt life here on campus.

Yours

sin cerely,

Li

Hua 倡议书

写倡议书时，尽量使用具有鼓动性和感召力的语言，如名人名言、格言、警句、以及对

偶、排比等句式，以提高语言的表达效果。例如，

在倡议书的结尾使用下列句子就可起到很 好的效果。

“ Believe yourself and you can , man age it! Stick to it, and your dream will come true! ”

“ Dear frien ds, come on! If you thi nk

you can, you can! ” “ Please start from now on! You n ever know what you can do un til you try! ” Structure :

1. In troduction 发出倡议的根据、原因和目的。

stateme nt of the problem how serious is the problem summary of the proposed soluti on----i n brief, what soluti on do you propose?

2. Body 所倡议的具体内容和要求。

What do you want done?

How should it be done?

What things or people are n eeded?

Whe n? How much will it cost?

3. Con clusion

要表示倡议者的决心和希望 ben efits — How will the proposal help the pers on readi ng the letter

—what do you want the reader to do As chairma n of the En viro nmen tal Protect ion mention different kinds of pollutions we human beings

water pollution is one of the serious problems. bei ngs, pla nts and an imals. It is urge nt that some stro ng measures should be adopted to solve the problem. (In troduct ion of the topic and himself/ threats / proposal) Since we are dependent on water, we should be involved in finding a solution to this problem.

a call to action

范文欣赏 Committee, I have no reason not to are faced with . Among them, It threatens the survival of _____ human

Weadvocate that certain measures should be taken as soon as possible even though it may take a decade or more to improve the water quality, even though it may cost a lot of money to clea n the polluted rivers. || In the first place,

the governments in both developed countries and the developing countries should lay down rules and regulations in respect of the pollution problem. Secondly, factories in tow ns and cities must be forbidde n to drain waste liquids into rivers, lakes and seas before they are totally treated and purified. ___________

(measures / difficulties )

I am certain that remarkable results will be achieved in this respect. Rivers

which used to be polluted by in dustrial wastes will be clea ned and fish which could not live there a few years ago will be seen again. Let' s act now to make our world a better place.

(foreseeable results/ a call)

例1由于废气、污水、白色垃圾等环境污染已危及到人类的健康与生存，为鼓励大家节能环

保，你们学校将举办一次“低碳行动”的环保活动,假设你是高三(6)班的一名学生,将要

在这个活动中向全体师生发起“低碳生活”的倡议，以下是倡议的内容：

1.尽量绿色出行：采取步行或自行车方式；

2.少喝一次瓶装水；

3.尽量不用一次性制品，

如一次性木筷子和塑料袋；4.每周至少手洗衣服一次； 5.每周少开手机、电视一天。

［写作内容］1.活动背景； 2. 倡议目的； 3. 倡议内容。

［精华点评］本文的难度在于如何合并信息点，考生需要用三个句子覆盖五个倡议。这时通过分析，可以发现，绿色出行是减少废气排放；减少使用瓶装水和一次性物品是为了减少白色污染；手洗衣服和减少使用手机、电视机是节能，因此考生可以把信息点按照这个逻辑分成三句，并且做出适当的补充，如to avoid white pollution..., ...it will be of great ben efit to sav ing en ergy 等。

考生可以使用不同的词组表达同一个概念，使文章语言更丰富，如表示建议，考生既可

以说make a suggestion..., 也可以用it is suggested that...；又如“一次性(物品)”

的表达，既可以使用unrecyclable 也可以用disposable表达。总之一篇好的作文，是非常有必要在词、短语、习惯表达、过渡词和句型等方面下功夫的。

［参考范文］

I amLi Hua from Class Six, Senior Three. Wehumanbeings are seriously threatened by the environmental pollution, such as waste gases, dirty water and white pollution. In order to en courage all of us to save en ergy and protect our en vir onmen t, I am going to make the following suggestions. It is suggested that we should walk or take bikes if we go out. To avoid white pollution， we can reduce the use of bottled water

and unrecyclable items such as disposable chopsticks and plastic bags.

What' s more, if we can wash clothes by ourselves at least once a week as well

as turn off our TVs and mobile phones for one day every week, it will be of great

ben efit to sav ing en ergy. I believe every one, as a member of this global village, should take resp on sibility to take part in the global gree n campaig n!

Li Hua

例2报纸上曾出现过一条重要新闻：全国塑料袋有偿使用(pay for plastic bags) 。报道

中说是国务院办公厅(ge neral office of the State Cou ncil) 发出的通知，商场、超市和

农贸市场等商家将不允许提供免费的塑料袋。请你帮助小区居委会(Commu nity Reside nt Committee)拟订份倡议书，包含以下内容：倡议的目的；倡议的具体内容和建议。

你可能用到的词汇：

Re-usable shoppi ng bags 可重复使用的购物袋Degrade 降解v. Degradable 可降解

的adj.

As has been announced by the office of the State Council, plastic shopping bags will not be provided free in supermarkets and other shops since June 1st. We will be blessed with a better world free from white pollution from now on.

As a plastic bag user myself, I can un dersta nd your troubles without plastic bags. But we all know that one sin gle plastic bag will take years to be degraded, which in the mean time, will do a lot of harm to our environment. In additi on, plastic bags are pois onous to some exte nt. In order to make our environment clea ner and healthier, let ' s answer our gover nment's appeal and take action with a positive attitude.

Our community residential committee has worked out several plans. First, we can substitute cotton bags and other re-usable bags for those plastic ones. Second, be en couraged to don ate used clothes, and in retur n, cott on shopp ing bags will be provided for free. Last but not the least, tell your pare nts, childre n and friends

the importa nee of using degradable shopp ing bags. If every one has formed the new good habit, the society ' s awareness of environmental protection will be raised con siderably.

Let' s join our hands in fighting against white pollution and make our community

a better place to live. We believe that your con tributio n can make a differe nee.