Unit 10 第4课时Writing--九年级英语人教版培优讲义含答案

＂三步法＂写＂介绍风俗类＂作文

1. 总体介绍。可以用：They are different from ours. Let me give you some suggestions about...等。

2. 分细节介绍。可以用：It is impolite...; You are (not) supposed to...等。表示顺序可以用单词first，second，then，finally等。

3. 以祝福或期待收尾。可以用：Have a good trip./I’m looking forward to meeting you soon.等句子结尾。

【易错点提示】1. 注意时态，多用一般现在时。

2. 注意should，be supposed to, be expected to 后接动词原形；It is + adj. + to + 动词原形。

【参考词汇和句式】

单词custom, meet, visit, should, suggestion, advice, first, second, third, then, finally

短语be different from, shake hands be (not) supposed to, be expected to

句式I’m looking forward to..., It’s polite/impolite to..., Have a good trip!

【典例】同学们，在刚才的阅读中我们了解到一些有关西方饮食文化的有趣知识。现在某国外旅游杂志向你约稿，请你以＂When in China, do as the Chinese do!＂为题写一篇文章，向西方读者介绍我们中国的饮食文化。以下是此杂志社发来的稿件要求，请仔细阅读，完成写作。

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☆Length: About 80 words.

☆Content（内容）：

Please try to answer at least 4 of these questions from our readers.

◇Are meals in China the same as meals in the West?

◇What time are lunch and dinner served in China?

◇How do people in China eat food?

◇How do people in Chiba behave politely while eating with the old?

◇How do we know that a meal is over in China?

◇Is it a good idea to talk about food during a meal?

◇Will there be just three courses or more in China?

要求：内容合理；要点齐全；句子及篇章结构准确、连贯；书写规范。

【佳作展示】

When in China, do as the Chinese do!

Meals in China are different in some ways from meals in the West.

First, in China, lunch is usually served at around 12 o’clock. As for dinner, Chinese people eat it much earlier than people in the West. Second, chopsticks are used to eat most food. Third, it is impolite of people to eat first while eating with the old. You’re supposed to wait for the old to begin eating. Finally, Chinese people like to talk about food, so it’s a good topic during a meal.

In a word, the golden rule is: When you’re in China, watch the Chinese and do as they do! Have a good trip in China!

【亮点回放】本文准确使用了first，second，third，finally等词；合理地运用了主动、被动语态形式，比如，lunch is usually served..., chopsticks are used to... (被动语态)，Chinese people eat it... （主动语态），使句式丰富，内容充实；短文中许多短语的运用也十分恰当，如：be different from, in some ways, as for, be supposed to, in a word等。学科&网

（一）

假如你是李丽，你的一位英国笔友Peter发来了e-mail,说他下星期来中国，他向你询问中国的餐桌礼仪，请你给他回一封e-mail，告诉他相关事宜。

要点：1.让客人和长辈先吃每一道菜；

2.不要用筷子敲碗；

3.不要将手伸到饭桌对面(reach across）夹菜

4.等大家都到齐了，才开始吃；

5.为主人的长寿、健康、成功干杯。

提示词：guest客人，elder长辈，tap敲，longevity长寿

Dear Peter,

____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Li

（二）

结交朋友在校园生活中是必不可少的，学校英语社就该如何交友为话题做了一次讨论。请你根据下面提供的思维导图，写一篇英文倡议书，谈谈如何交友。

（总结）

要求：1. 包含导图中的所有信息和基本结构，可适当发挥；

2. 词数80词左右（不可超150词），开头和格式已给出，不计入总词数；

3. 文章中不得出现真实的人名、班名、学校名。

How to make friends

My dear schoolfellows,

As we know, ______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________

Sincerely yours,

Andy

（三）

假如你是李明，你的朋友Peter即将面临中考，然而他却深感压力巨大，寝食不安，情绪低落，学习效率低下。请你写一封信给他提一些有益的建议，帮助他调整心态，提高学习效率，轻松迎考。要点如下：1. 学会放松（体育锻炼，听音乐……） 2. 健康饮食 3. 充足睡眠 4. ……

注意：1. 词数：80词左右。（文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）

2. 可适当发挥，但必须包含以上要点。

Dear Peter,

Don’t worry about your study too much. First, you should __________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________

（四）

假如你是某国际学校九（1）班的班长，你班将邀请英国教授Peter Smith做一个关于环境问题的报告。请你根据下面表格内容拟写一个有关报告会的口头通知。

其他安排会后讨论

注意：

1. 内容应包括提示及表格内的全部要点；

2. 词数不少于80.开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。

May I have your attention, please?

As you know, environment is very important in our life. ___________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________

（一）

Dear Peter,

I’m glad to receive your e-mail. Now I want to tell you something about Chinese table manners.

In China the host or hostess won’t eat any dish until the guests and elders begin. You can’t tap bowls with the chopsticks. You shouldn’t reach across the table or in front of someone to get something to eat. You can’t start to eat until everyone is at the table. Also, you should toast longevity, good health or success of the host or hostess. Welcome to China!

Yours,

Li Li

（二）

How to make friends

My dear schoolfellows,

As we know, when many people are asked who is the most important person for them, most of the answers are my parents, my children and so on. But don’t forget that there is one kind of pepole who doesn’t have direct

relationship with you, but they can also share happiness and sorrow with you! It is your friends!

Everyone needs friends, so it is very important to know how to make friends! Fristly, we should choose the friends. We should make friends with the people who are kind and friendly. Then, we should share our happiness and sadness with our frinends.What’s more, we should try to communicate with them. Be patient and try to discuss with them! A real friend can make a big diffirence in our life, so try your best to keep your friendship go on!

【写作亮点】

这篇作文结构清晰完整，表达准确流利，要点齐全。文中有一些好的表达方式如Everyone needs friends,so it is very important to know how to make friends! Be patient and try to discuss with them! A real friend can make a big diffirence in our life, so try your best to keep your friendship go on!等等。

（三）

Dear Peter,

Don’t worry about your study too much. First, you should learn how to relax yourself.I think doing more sports is good for your health.Listening to music is also a good way to relax. And I think it’s necessary to have hea lthy eating habits. Please remember to have breakfast every morning. It can give you enough energy to study for the whole morning. You’d better go to bed early and have enough sleep. It will keep you active during the day. Finally I think you should talk with your friends, parents or teachers often. Tell them about your thoughts and feelings. Try to get help from them. I hope you can stay in good spirits, and study better.

Yours,

Li Ming 【名师点评】

考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【写作亮点】

这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如I think doing more sports is good for your

health. Listening to music is also a good way to relax.等，Finally等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

（四）

May I have your attention please?

As you know, environment is very important in our life. In order to learn more about the nature of England and improve the awareness of invironmental protection, our school will invite professor Peter Smith to give us a speech about the invironmental problems and achievements in England in recent years. The speech will begin from 2:30 to 4:00 pm on Thursday, May twentieth. And the speech will be given in the conference center on the forth floor of our library. After the speech, we will have a discussion. All the students must attend it on time.

【写作亮点】

这篇短文涵盖了题目要求的所有要点内容，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在文章的结构组织上多用简单句，文章脉络清晰，自然流畅。同时，文章还使用了一些常用的句式和短语，这为文章增色不少。