上海玉华中学书面表达英语作文汇编中考英语专项训练含答案解析

一、中考英语书面表达汇编

1．（·江苏中考模拟）三年的初中生活即将结束，你一定对初中生活留下了很多美好的回忆。下周五你班要召开毕业班会，请根据下面的英文提示，并适当发挥，以“I remember ”

为题，写一篇90词左右的短文，分享你校园生活中的一次活动或经历。

要点如下：1. What’s the event?

2. When and where did it happen?

3. How did you feel at that moment?

4. How has the event changed your life?

注意：1.短文需包含以上要点，并适当发挥。

2.短文中已给出的部分，不计入总词数。

3.短文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等相关信息。

I remember

How time flies! My junior school life is coming to an end.

【答案】I remember

How time flies, my junior school life is coming to an end. I had a lot of memories during the three years’ study. What impressed me most is the school charity sale.

When I was in Grade Eight, our school planned to hold a charity sale to help the children in poor areas. We prepared well for the activity. We made some postcards, bookmarks, and even some kites in our spare time.

Finally, the big day came. The charity sale was held on our playground. We felt nervous at first, then our teachers came to join us. They encouraged us and gave us some help, so we became happy and excited. Everything went well. Our class got nearly 800 yuan in the end. Then we sent the money to Project Hope to help those poor children.

It was a wonderful and unforgetta ble experience and I’ve learned a lot from the activity. If everyone gives a helping hand to those in need, the world will be much better.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如come to an end，plan to do，a lot of，hold a charity sale，prepare for，in our spare time，hold on，at first，come to join us，give us some help，in the end，a lot，in need等。而复杂并列结构It was a wonderful and unforgettable experience and I’ve learned a lot from the activity./ We felt nervous at first, then our teachers came to join us.和When I was in Grade Eight, our school planned to hold a charity sale to help the children in poor areas./ They encouraged us and gave us some help, so we became happy and excited./ If everyone gives a helping hand to those in need, the world will be much better.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更

有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】

书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

2．（·北京中考模拟）“书山有路勤为径, 学海无涯苦作舟”, 成功不会从天而降, 美好的未来需要靠不断努力来创造?

某英文网站正在开展以“天道酬勤” 为主题的征文活动?假如你是李华, 请用英文写一篇短文投稿, 讲述你通过勤奋, 取得进步甚至成功的经历, 并谈谈你的感受?

提示词语: diligence （勤奋）, make progress, effort, proud

提示问题: ? What did you achieve by working hard?

? What did you do to make it?

? How did you feel about it?

【答案】Diligence is a must for us to reach our goals. I never realized it until I tried every effort to win the English speech competition last year.

It was quite a big challenge for me because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in public. To give a better performance, I made full use of my spare time to prepare for it. I recorded my lines and asked my foreign teacher to correct my pronunciation. Then I kept practising day and night. Besides, I seized every chance to speak in front of my family or friends. The more I practised, the more confident I became. In the end, I won the competition and got a prize.

It was so great that all my efforts paid off.I felt so proud of myself.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇话题作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下你通过勤奋, 取得进步甚至成功的经历。所提供的材料中列举了“书山有路勤为径, 学海无涯苦作舟”, 成功不会从天而降, 美好的未来需要靠不断努力来创造。主要从：你努力工作取得了什么成绩？?你是怎么做到的？?你觉得怎么样？这几个方面去介绍。时态为一般过去时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料和提示词的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具

【高分句型一】

It was quite a big challenge for me because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in public. 这对我来说是一个很大的挑战，因为我对自己的英语口语没有那么自信，在公共场合说话也很害羞。

句子because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in public.是由because引导的原因状语从句。

【高分句型二】

The more I practised, the more confident I became. 我练习得越多，就越自信。

这句话用到了“the+比较级，the+比较级”结构。表示“越……，就越……”的意思。

3．（·浙江中考模拟）

如今，很多父母很关心孩子的学习，想随时监控孩子的学习状况如下图中 Tony 的母亲。请简要描述图片内容，分析图中现象，谈谈你的看法和建议，并写一篇 110 词左右的短文向Parents 杂志投稿，让父母们通过阅读你的文章有所启发。

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________【答案】Tony's mother wanted to keep watch on Tony's study. She was wrong to do so. First of all, he violated the right to privacy. It also disturbs Tony's study and makes him respond strongly. From a child's point of view, children may yearn for independence. What they want is affirmation of their own abilities. But excessive supervision itself denies and distrusts their own abilities. Although we never mean to look down on their own children, maybe they don't think so. When children find themselves under surveillance, how can they confide in us in the future? It will also affect the future self-confidence building, which also leads to more worrying children, which forms a vicious circle affecting parent-child relationship. In any case, family environment is the root of children, but first of all, it must be stable and reliable. In this way, monitoring children's learning is of little significance. We should always do our part well. Let children learn and grow in a relatively independent environment.

【详解】

这是一篇图画作文，根据图片中的相关信息介绍一下父母为了关心孩子的学习，想随时监控孩子的学习状况，就这样对吗？仔细分析所提供的图片内容，主要从你的看法和建议这个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含图片中的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。

【高分句型一】

When children find themselves under surveillance, how can they confide in us in the future? 当孩子们发现自己受到监视时，他们将来怎么能向我们吐露心声呢？

句子When children find themselves under surveillance是由when引导的时间状语从句。【高分句型二】

It will also affect the future self-confidence building, which also leads to more worrying children, which forms a vicious circle affecting parent-child relationship. 这也会影响未来的自信心建设，也会导致更多的担忧儿童，形成影响亲子关系的恶性循环。

which also leads to more worrying children, which forms a vicious circle affecting parent-child relationship.是由which引导的定语从句。

4．（·山东中考模拟）书面表达

今天早上你目睹了一起事件（下图），你想以"Mother Stops Him"为题写一篇短文，向你校英语报社投稿。短文内容如下：

1. 描述亊件。

2. 发表你的想法。

要求：

1.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

2.不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。

3. 100个词汇左右。

参考词汇：lift…up扶起，knock…down撞倒，trust信任

Mother Stops Him

_______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________

【答案】This morning, my mother took me to school. On the way, I saw a car knock an old man

down and the car ran away. The old woman fell to the ground and could not move. I saw this situation and immediately went over to help the old man lift up, but my mother stopped me saying, "Don't lift him up, or he 'll say you hit him." But I think helping others is what we should do. That old woman will certainly appreciate me, so I trust that as long as everyone gives a little love, the world will become a better place.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇看图作文，所给材料较为详细，逻辑清楚，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。根据要点内容可知短语主要应用一般过去时态，主要是第一人称，句型以简单句为主。写作时要灵活运用，注意主谓一致，单词拼写正确。

【点睛】

本文在写作中使用了很多固定句式，如：The old woman fell to the ground and could not move. I saw this situation and immediately went over to help the old man lift up。所以在学习中，我们应注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.

5．（·北京中考模拟）环境保护人人有责，如果我们每一个人都能珍爱美丽地球保护自然资源，相信我们的家园会越来越美好。

某英文网站正在开展以“Going Green”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈我们面临的主要环境问题是什么，为改善环境我们能做什么，以及你的期望。

提示词语： pollution, protect, save, recycle, take action

提示问题：● What are the main environmental problems we have?● What can we do in our daily life? ● What’s your wish?

Now there are many environmental

problems._______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________

【答案】例文

Now there are many environmental problems. Such as air pollution, water pollution and so on.

I believe that there are many things we can do in our daily life, we can save energy by go to school by bike or on foot. We can use less water by turning off the tap while we brush our teeth, and taking shorter showers. When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into

different bins.

I hope everyone can take action. Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference. Let’s work together to make a b etter place to live.

【解析】

【详解】

题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，写作时要把我们面临的主要环境问题是什么，为改善环境我们能做什么，以及你的期望全部包括。

例文点评：例文采用的是三段式；用第一人称来叙述为改善环境我们能做什么；时态采用的是一般现在时，描述建议时，描写具体，条理清晰。

高分亮点：

短语：save energy；brush our teeth；put it into different bins；take action；make a big difference。

句型：When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins；Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference。

【点睛】

首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如save energy；brush our teeth；put it into different bins；take action；make a big difference。以及状语从句等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

6．（·北京中考模拟）4月23日是“世界读书日”，你校英语俱乐部正在开展主题为“多读书，读好书”的活动。假如你是李华，请你写一封倡议书，向全体同学发出号召。内容包括：应该读什么样的书，以及读书的意义。

提示词语：story, novel, knowledge, improve, important

提示问题：● What kind of books should we read? ● Why do we read?

Dear students, the World Reading Day is coming.

So I’m here again to call on all of us to read more books and read good books.

Li Hua

【答案】例文

Dear students, the World Reading Day is coming. As a middle school student, everyone should read books. Firstly, reading increases our knowledge and we can learn the world affairs without

going out. Secondly, reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills. Finally, reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future. Therefore, start to reading, no matter how old you are and what you are doing.

So I’m here again to call on all of us to read mor e books and read good books.

Li Hua 【解析】

【详解】

题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，但写作时要按照应用文格式写，写作时承接短文开头，写出对学生的倡议。

例文点评：例文采用的是一段式，写的是阅读的好处，时态采用的是一般现在时，描述倡议时，描写细致，条理清晰。

高分亮点：

短语：Firstly；Secondly；Finally；a good way to do sth；broaden our knowledge and horizon。

句型：reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills；reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future。

7．（·山东中考模拟）为了宣传和弘扬中华优秀传统文化, 某双语杂志将举办征文活动来介绍中国的经典故事, “程门立雪（Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully）”是其中一个选题。请你根据下面的内容提示, 用英语写一篇短文参加此活动。

内容提示：

1. 杨时去拜见老师程颐一老师在睡觉一杨时在雪地等一老师醒来发现杨时在门口

2. 通过介绍这个故事, 发表你的看法或者观点。

要求：

1. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯：词数：100左右.

2. 不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称、老师和同学的真实姓名。

【答案】Long long ago, there was a man called Yangshi. Once he went to visit his teacher, Chengyi. Unfortunately, Mr. Cheng was sleeping in the room. He didn’t wake up the teacher. So he stood in front of the gate. At that moment, there were snowflakes flying over his head and it was very cold. But yangshi still stood in the snow until Mr. Cheng woke up. When the teacher woke up, the snow was very deep. Yangshi was like a snowman standing at the gate. Finally, the teacher was moved deeply.

After reading the story, I think we should respect our teacher. We should study hard.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇材料作文，主要介绍中国的经典故事, “程门立雪（Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully）”。目的是宣传和弘扬中华优秀传统文化。时态为一般过去时，灵活运用动词的过去式。作文要包含材料上的所有信息，通过介绍这个故事，发表看法或者观点。写作时，避免汉语式英语。注意固定搭配及主谓一致的问题，例如:There was/ were...注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，具有条理性。

8．（·合肥市五十中学东校中考模拟）诚信是中华民族的传统美德，也是社会主义核心价值观内容之一。而你的朋友Daming最近却被诚信危机所困扰。上周末，他本来和Lingling相约一起去电影院看电影，但是他却因为在家复习考试，把这件事忘了，直到第二天才想起来。因此，Lingling很生气，并且不愿接受Daming的道歉。

请你就此事给校报投稿，以“The Importance of Promise”为题，内容要点如下：

1、简述事件；

2、谈谈自己的看法，并给Daming一些建议。

注意：

1、词数80—100；

2、行文连贯，逻辑合理；

3、文中不能出现真实的校名和人名；

4、文章的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

The Importance of Promise

Dear editor,

People always emphasize（强调） the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise.

Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it.

Yours,

Tony 【答案】The Importance of Promise

Dear editor,

People always emphasize（强调）the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise.

Recently, a thing happened to my friend, and I think it was really his fault. Last weekend, my friend Daming had a date with his friend Lingling to watch a movie. But he totally forgot it that day because of his review for his exam. So Lingling got too angry to forgive him. In my opinion, it was really his fault. Forgetting the date not only led to Lingling’s anger, but also made her lose trust in him. Keeping promises is always the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation. What Daming should do now is to ask for forgiveness and promise that he will never do that again. Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it.

Yours,

Tony 【解析】

【分析】

本文为一篇稿件，需要学生通过大明和玲玲之间，大明没有信守承诺的事情，谈自己的看法。信守承诺是中华民族的传统美德，在写作过程中，注意文章结构，先写出大明和玲玲之间的事情，然后再说自己对此的看法。

【详解】

首先，第一句话直接点明作者的观点，大明是犯错了的。然后仔细阐述了事情发生的经过。接下来说出自己对此事件的看法，不信守承诺会导致失去别人的信任，对大明的建议是除了认错之外，还需要再次保证永不再犯。

【点睛】

文章结构清晰，符合逻辑，先表明自己观点，然后阐述事情，提出自己的观点和建议。整篇文章在谋篇布局上，比较严密。除此之外，中间也使用了一些连接词，例如but，so，because of等，使文章更加通顺。

9．（·广东中考模拟）学校将举行“给学弟学妹的一封信”的英语征文活动。你打算投稿，请根据以下内容提示写一篇短文。要求包含以下内容并适当发挥。

1.形成良好的学习习惯：听讲、复习；

2.保持健康的生活方式：饮食、起居；

3.处理好跟他人的关系：友善、分享；

4.其他建议......（至少2条建议）

注意：

（1）词数80个左右（文章的开头已给出，不计入词数）

（2）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分

Dear fellow schoolmates,

Now we will leave our school and enter a senior middle school. I have some personal suggestions to share with you. …

【答案】First, I suggest you form a good habit of studying. Listen to teachers carefully in class and hand in your homework in time .Whenever you have difficulty, please ask your classmates or teachers for help.

More importantly, good health is important for success in the exams. You need to get up early and go to bed early to get enough sleep. B esides, you’d better have a balanced diet and avoid eating junk food.

As we all know, a good relationship can make us happy and comfortable. Be friendly to others and help those who are in trouble. We should share sorrow and happiness with others.

Last but not the least , it is necessary for us to relax. You can do some sports such as walking or playing balls. Listening to music and seeing movies are also good ways to relax.

Hopefully you can enjoy your school life and have a bright future.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇书信作文，也是提纲类作文。学校将举行“给学弟学妹的一封信”的英语征文活动。你打算投稿，请根据以下内容提示写一篇短文。结合所给材料可知本文时态是一般现在时。使用的句型主要有祈使句和建议性句型（You should，we should, you can，you’d better 等）。认真阅读提示，审清主题，根据提示要点，列出本文的写作提纲，要包含所给的所有内容并适当发挥。写作中可适当使用连词，注意表达顺序，表达要有条理性，语句通顺，意思连贯，要符合逻辑关系，字数要在80词以上，不要写的太少。写完以后，注

意再读一遍，看看有无拼写、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。本文提纲：首先，我建议

你养成良好的学习习惯。上课认真听讲，及时交作业，遇到困难请向同学或老师寻求帮

助。更重要的是，良好的健康是考试成功的重要因素。你需要早起早睡以获得充足的睡

眠。此外，你最好均衡饮食，避免吃垃圾食品。众所周知，良好的人际关系可以使我们快

乐和舒适。善待他人，帮助有困难的人。我们应该和别人分享悲伤和快乐。最后但并非最

不重要的是，我们有必要放松。你可以做一些运动，如散步或玩球。听音乐和看电影也是

放松的好方法。希望你能享受你的学校生活，有一个光明的未来。

【点睛】

本书面表达是给学弟学妹的一封信，给他们提出学习建议。这篇文章语言规范，叙事清

楚，时态运用正确，叙述清楚条里，语句通顺，意思连贯，特别适用了表示先后顺序的词（First, More importantly, As we all know, Last but not the least ,）使文章更具条理性，思维缜

密。（1）学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的

表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。（2）列好提纲和要点及需要的重要短语或句型。（3）切

忌堆砌词语、句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅、连贯。注意表达的顺序。（4）注

意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。（5）注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动

词时态、语序、主谓一致等。

10．（·广东中考模拟）近年，有一些地区提出把游泳纳入中考的体育考试，并在学生中做

了一次问卷调查。下面是一个学校的调查结果，请你根据调查情况写一篇英语短文阐明调

查结果及表达自己的观点。

赞成的学生人数占：57%不赞成的学生人数占：43%

理由：

1. 强身健体，预防疾病

2. 训练求生技能

3. 休闲娱乐，放松身心理由：

1. 害怕水

2. 有危险性

3. 气温低时容易感冒

你的观点与理由？

要求：

1. 词数80左右。（文章的开头已给出，不计入词数）

2. 不得透露学校，姓名等个人信息，否则不予评分。

In recently years, some districts are planning to include swimming in the examination of physical

education. And they made a survey about it in some schools, Here’s the result from one school.

【答案】例文In recently years, some districts are planning to include swimming in the examination of physical education. And they made a survey about it in some schools. Here’s the result from one school.

About 57 per cent students like to have swimming lessons at school. Because it can help build up our body and guide against （prevent） illness. Besides, swimming is a survival skill when we face some natural disasters. It is also a good choice to go swimming lo relax ourselves when we are free.

However, 43 percent students are against this plan for some reasons. First, some of them are afraid of getting in the water. Second, it may be dangerous because we may drown. Then, when it is cold, we may catch a cold.

In my opinion, it’s a good idea lo have swimmi ng lessons. I can improve my health, and relax myself after classes as well.

（In my opinion, it’s not a good way to have swimming lessons at school. Because it’s expensive to build a swimming pool, and sometimes it’s difficult to keep the water clean because there are many students at school.）

【解析】

【详解】

本文是一篇材料作文，根据所给材料，阐明关于“把游泳纳入中考体育考试”的两种不同观点，而且最后还要表达出自己的观点，所以文章主要用一般现在时。文章分为三个部分，第一部分，首先引出本文话题，并用Here’s the result from one school.起到承上启下的作用，引出调查结果；第二部分分别阐述两种不同观点About 57 per cent students like to have swimming lessons at school. Because….; However, 43 percent students are against thi s plan for some reasons.最后提出自己的观点并进行总结In my opinion…。注意阐明观点列举理由时，要注意条理性，比如用到表示次序先后的词first, second, then；或者句型It can…… It also can…..,besides…..等；本文内容完整，写作条理清晰，语言表达准确，是一篇不错的文章。

11．（·武汉外国语学校中考模拟）书面表达

长跑是人们热衷的体育活动之一。武汉马拉松（Wuhan Marathon）因独具特色的赛道及赛事组织已成为一年一度的全程盛事。假如你是李华，你的笔友Tom想知道关于武汉马拉松的一些事情。请用英文给他回一封电子邮件，介绍这项赛事。内容包括以下要点：

1.马拉松是非常流行的国际体育项目；

2.通过马拉松，人们可以强身健体，还可以结识新朋友；

3.首届马拉松于年举行，吸引了很多人的关注；

4.赛通途径多个武汉著名景点,如：中山大道、东湖绿道、黄鹤楼，被视为最美的马拉松赛道；

5.补充一至亮点个人想法。

注意：1.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；

2.次数60-80，邮件的开头已给出，不计入总次数；

3.内容连贯，不要逐条翻译

参考词汇： event n.项目 track n.赛道 Greenway n.绿道

Hi Tom，

I hope you're doing well. In your email, you asked me someting about Wuhan Marathon. Here is the information.

Li Hua

【答案】Hi Tom，

I hope you're doing well. In your email, you asked me something about Wuhan Marathon. Here is the information. Marathon is a very popular international sport. Through the marathon, people can keep fit and make new friends. The first Wuhan marathon was held in and attracted a lot of attention. The players will pass by many famous scenic spots in Wuhan, such as Zhongshan Avenue, Donghu green road and Yellow Crane Tower, which are regarded as the most beautiful marathon course.

I think the people in Wuhan likes the event.Most of them want to take part in it.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份给自己的笔友Tom写一封电子邮件，给他介绍关于武汉马拉松的一些事情。题目中给我们列出了具体的写作内容，我们可以按照这些提示来组织语言，并增加一些内容，使文章更加充实。其中第五条需要学生们自己发挥想象力，补充一到两点的个人想法，这一部分是不受限制的，学生们可以自由发挥，但需要注意内容需要与全文大意连贯起来。通过审题可知，这篇短文应以一般现在时态为主，根据表达需要灵活运用，并使用适当的人称，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时需注意英语表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能逐词翻译题目中的内容，应从句式的整体结构出发，使用恰当的词汇、短语和句型。在文章中还应使用一、两个高级句型或复杂句式，提升文章档次。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯、表达流畅。

【点睛】

这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求给Tom写电子邮件，介绍了关于武汉马拉松的事情。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有信息，并对信息进行加工、处理和补充，使文意更加清楚、连贯。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般现在时态为主，个别句子使用了过去时态，谓语动词形式准确，语法规范。文章句式以简单句为主，表达简洁、明了，穿插使用了复杂句式，如宾语从句、定语从句等。调整文章节奏，提升了文章档次。文章中使用了一些较好的短语和句型，如Through the marathon, people can keep fit and make new friends. 、The first Wuhan marathon was held in and attracted a lot of attention. 、The players will pass by many famous scenic spots in Wuhan, such as Zhongshan Avenue, Donghu green road and Yellow Crane Tower, which are regarded as the most beautiful

marathon course.、I think the people in Wuhan likes the event.等。

12．（·广东中考模拟）假如你是班长李华，今天你们班对即将到来的暑假计划进行了讨论。你们班的外教David对此很感兴趣。请你根据以下信息，给 David写一封电子邮件，告诉他讨论的情况及你自己本人的计划及原因。

注意：

（1）邮件应包含所有要点

（2）词数80个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数）；

（3）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分

注：社会实践 social practice activities

Dear David

I'm writing to tell you something about our discussion today.

Yours

Li Hua

【答案】Dear David

I'm writing to tell you something about our discussion today.

The students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation. Half of the students plan to travel at home and abroad. They want to relax and enjoy the beautiful scenery. Thirty percent of students plan to read more books. They believe that reading can increase knowledge. Reading books can make people smart and develop interests. 20% of them plan to take part in social practice activities. They want to exercise themselves and make new friends.

I'm going to take part in social practice activities, too. I want to learn something new and get good experience from these activities.

Best wishes!

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

【详解】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如how to do，spend a meaningful summer vacation，half of，plan to do，travel at home and abroad，enjoy the beautiful scenery，take part in，social practice activities，make new friends 等。而非谓语动词结构The students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation./ Reading books can make people smart and develop interests.和宾语从句They believe that reading can increase knowledge.的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】

13．（·海南海口实验中学中考模拟）书面表达

安全对于每个人都很重要。中学生年龄较小，学生安全更是人们关注的焦点。请根据以下提示，写一篇关于学生安全的英语作文。

内容提示：

1.交通安全：遵守交通规则，不闯红绿灯等；

2.食品安全：吃健康食物，不吃垃圾食品等；

3.活动安全：进行体育锻炼时，不要弄伤自己，不私自下河游泳等。

提示词语：

study hard, read, healthy food, exercise, help, chores, at home,

Travel Safety is very important to everyone.

_______________________________________________________________

【答案】Safety is very important to everyone. Middle school students are like precious flowers –so their safety is becoming a focus for us all.

First, we must obey the traffic rules when we go out. Don’t cross the street when the light is red. Secondly, we should eat healthy food. Don’t eat junk food. Eat more fr uits and vegetables. Eat less meat and eggs. Finally, be careful not to hurt yourself while you are playing outside. It’s dangerous to go swimming by yourself, so don’t go swimming without permission. These are some important safety tips to remember.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要使用一般现在时，主语是第一人称。写作时注意人称、时态的搭配及主谓一致问题。同

时适当使用连接词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【点睛】

这篇短文涵盖了题目要求的所有要点内容，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在文章的结构组织上很好地使用了简单句和复合句，文章脉络清晰，自然流畅。同时，文章还使用了一些常用的句式和短语，如：祈使句的使用、we must、we should、in a word、It’s +形容词+ to动词不定式结构以及序数词的使用等，这为文章增色不少。在学习中注意积累，牢记一些常用句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

14．（·天津中考模拟）书面表达

假定你今天是英语课上的值日生，请根据表中信息完成主题为“班级新闻”的值日报告。

要求：（1）报告必须包括表中全部内容，可适当增加细节，但不要逐条翻译；

（2）报告的开头和结尾已给出（不计入总词数），你只需接着写；

（3）词数在80-100左右。参考词汇：捐赠 donate 希望工程 the Project Hope

Hello, Everyone! Here are some important things that happened this week.

____________________________

【答案】Hello, Everyone! Here are some important things that happened this week. Let me tell you something about the speech contest. My classmate- Lijia has kept practicing spoken English these days. With the help of the teacher, she worked so hard that she won the first place in the English speech contest on Wednesday afternoon.

And now let’s talk about the good things that happened in our class. 200 books, 50 school bags and 4200 yuan were donated for the project Hope. In addition, Li Ming got ill on Monday and our monitor sent him to the hospital in person.

Our colorful school life brings us so much happiness that we will remember the days forever. That’s all, thank you!

【解析】

【详解】

本题是一篇材料作文，假定你今天是英语课上的值日生，请根据表中信息完成主题为“班级新闻”的值日报告。本文人称主要是第一和第三人称，使用的时态有一般现在时、一般过去时、现在完成时和一般将来时，一定注意时态的转换。认为阅读材料，认真审题，确定主题，提示要点就是本文的提纲要点，根据要点适当发挥，列出提纲。短文必须包含所给要点，，条理清楚，字数80-100左右。要运用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有连贯性。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。本文提纲：

大家好！以下是本周发生的一些重要事件。我来告诉你一些演讲比赛的情况。我的同学李佳这些天一直在练习口语。在老师的帮助下，她努力工作，在周三下午的英语演讲比赛中获得了第一名。

现在我们来谈谈我们班上发生的好事。为“希望工程”捐赠了200本书、50个书包和4200元。另外，李明周一生病，班长亲自送他去医院。

我们丰富多彩的学校生活带给我们如此多的幸福，我们将永远记住这些日子。

就这些，谢谢！

【点睛】

书面表达要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。语言要规范，时态运用要正确，叙述清楚条里，学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。写作六步法：1.审题：文体，时态，人称。2.抓住要点：要点是否齐全，适当补充。3.扩充句子：通过增加状语，定语，连词，使句子意思饱满充实。4.连句成文，合理使用连词。5.改正错误：拼写是否错误，语法时态是否正确，连词是否恰当等。6.誊写作文：注意书写工整美观整洁。

15．（·天津中考模拟）书面表达

生活中好友间也会因各种原因闹些小矛盾，当你与朋友间产生不愉快后，你会如何处理此类问题呢？请根据以下提示点谈谈你的想法。

1. 上周日，你的好友Lisa，弄丢了你最心爱的图书，这是妈妈送给你的生日礼物；

2. 但是Lisa并没有因此而道歉，你很难过；

3. 你喜欢阅读，认为读书可以开阔眼界，所以你很珍惜自己的每一本书籍；

4. 接下来你打算……参考词汇：cherish珍惜open up o ne’s eyes开阔眼界

要求：

1. 字数80-100个；

2. 开头已经给出不计入总词数；

3. 要点齐全，行为连贯，适当发挥。

When I have trouble with my best friend

There are always problems around us, even between close friends. Let me tell you something about myself. Last Sunday.

_______________________________________________________________________________ ______

__________________________________________________________________

【答案】When I have trouble with my best friend

There are always problems around us, even between close friends. Let me tell you something about myself. Last Sunday my best friend Lisa lost my favourite book that was a birthday present from my mother. The book is very meaningful for me. What’s more, she didn’t apologize to me about this, I felt quite sad. I love reading, because it can open up our eyes and increase our knowledge. I cherish every book of mine and they are my treasure.

So I am going to have a serious talk with Lisa in order to tell her my true feelings. I think we can buy a new one and read it together. In fact, understanding is the most important thing between friends.

【解析】

【分析】

本文是一篇材料作文。

【详解】

根据题干“生活中好友间也会因各种原因闹些小矛盾，当你与朋友间产生不愉快后，你会如何处理此类问题呢？”要求可知，本文用一般过去时，人称用第一人称。

英语作文一般分为三个部分：

第一部分：开篇点题——我将介绍和好友闹矛盾的一件事情。

第二部分：文章主体——具体介绍这件事情的始末。

根据事情发展顺序，从先到后交代事情的经过，我做了什么，为什么会和好友有矛盾。

这些内容用一般过去时，注意动词的过去式变形。

1. 上周日，你的好友Lisa，弄丢了你最心爱的图书，这是妈妈送给你的生日礼物；

2. 但是Lisa并没有因此而道歉，你很难过；

3. 你喜欢阅读，认为读书可以开阔眼界，所以你很珍惜自己的每一本书籍；

4. 接下来你打算……

第三部分：总结全文——好友之间应该互相理解。

16．（·安徽中考模拟）假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Jack热爱中国的唐诗宋词。最近他对母亲节你在博客里发的《游子吟》（Song of the parting son）很感兴趣，给你写信想了解该诗，请你根据以下提示给他回信：

1.作者：孟郊

2.时间：唐朝

3.内容：母亲为儿子做衣服

4.主题：母爱的伟大

注意：

1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；

2.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；

3.词数: 80-100词左右，信件的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jack,

I’m glad to hear from you. I know you are interested in this poem Song of the parting son.

Yours,【答案】Dear Jack,

I’m glad to hear from you. I know you are interested in this poem Song of the parting son. Now I’m writing to tell you something about it.

Song of the parting son is one of the most popular Chinese poems. It was written by Meng Jiao, a famous poet in Tang Dynasty. It describes a common matter in daily life—a mother making clothes for her son, which is familiar to most of us. It mainly shows how great a mother’s love can be. In a word, this short poem has touched many people’s hearts.

If you have any other questions about this poem, please tell me.

Yours,

Li Hua 【解析】

【分析】

这是一篇材料作文。

【详解】

根据内容可知，这是一篇书信类文章。时态是一般现在时。人称是第一人称和第三人称。英语作文一般分为三个部分：

第一部分：交代写信目的——朋友Jack热爱中国的唐诗宋词。我将给你介绍《游子吟》（Song of the parting son）这首诗。

第二部分：文章主体部分——具体介绍《游子吟》（Song of the parting son）这首诗。

1.作者：孟郊

2.时间：唐朝

3.内容：母亲为儿子做衣服

4.主题：母爱的伟大

第三部分：信的结语——如果对方有任何问题，可以继续问自己，并期待收到对方的来信。

17．（·湖北中考模拟）书面表达

我校决定让学生轮流打扫厕所，以此作为教育学生的一种方式。这件事在学生中引起了强烈的反响，请你把下列不同意见整理成一篇书面材料，报告给学校。

同意：1．多数学生是独生子女，不会做事。

2．学生应该学会做艰苦的工作。

3．学会理解和尊重清洁工人的劳动。

不同意：1．很脏，容易使学生生病。 2．不是学生应该做的事情。 3．打扫教室就足够了。

注意：1．短文应包括表中所有内容，可适当发挥，但不要逐字翻译； 2．不少于80词。生词提示：respect尊重

【答案】A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor.

Some students think it is a good way of education. Now most families have only one child. They never do hard work. To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. It can also help them understand and respect the cleaners.

But others have different points. They think it is easy for them to get sick. They don’t think it is students＇jobs. Cleaning the classroom every day is enough.

【解析】

【详解】

阅读题干要求，这是一篇看法类的作文，那么首先得点明讨论的话题，然后分别写出不同人群对此事的看法，时态以一般现在时为主。

重点词汇及短语：argument争论；take place发生；among（三者或三者以上）之间；a good chance for sb对某人来说是个好机会；help sb do sth帮助某人做某事；get sick生病。亮点句型：

（1）A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor. 自从我们学校让学生做自愿劳动以来，在学生中发生了一场激烈的争论。现在完成时（have/has+done）。

（2）To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. 做义务劳动是他们学习如何做困难工作的好机会。动词不定式作主语，谓语动词用单数，疑问词+to do。

18．（·北京中考模拟）假如你是李华，下周你们学校将要组织学生开展“父亲节活动计划”分享活动，你打算先分享给你们班交换生Peter，希望听听他的看法。请用英语写一封电子邮件，告诉他你的计划是什么，你为什么这么做，并表达你渴望得到他建议的心情。

提示词语： gift, love, opinion

提示问题：● What’s your plan for Father’s Day? ● Why do you do so? ● What do you want

Peter to do?

Dear Peter,

How is it going?

We will share the plan for Father’s Day next

week.__________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】例文

Dear Peter,

How is it going?

We will share the plan for Father’s Day next week. I am going to do some meaningful things for my father. Firstly, I am going to buy a beautiful card for him. And then, I plan to cook him a big meal. Though I am not good at cooking, I can ask my mother for help.

I will do this because I love my father deeply. He works very hard every day to support my family. Would you please give me some advice? I am eager to receive your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【详解】

题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，但写作时要按邮件格式写。在写作时应承接短文开头；第二段写你为什么这么做；第三段表达你渴望得到他建议的心情。

例文点评：例文采用的是三段式；用第一人称来叙述父亲节计划；时态采用的是一般现在时为主，描述具体建议时，描写细致，条理清晰。

高分亮点：

短语：the plan for Father’s Day；some meaningful things；buy a beautiful card for him；give me some advice。

句型：Though I am not good at cooking, I can ask my mother for help；I am eager to receive your early reply。

19．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达