苏州吴江存志外国语学校面表达汇编中考英语专项训练含答案解析

一、中考英语书面表达汇编

1．（·江苏中考模拟）目前，许多中学生利用周末和节假日上课外补习班，对此人们有不同的看法。请根据下面内容写一篇短文。

注意：1. 表达清楚，语法通顺，上下文连贯；

2. 必须包括提示的所有信息，并适当发挥，至少两点；

3. 词数：100词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；

4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。

Nowadays, many middle school students are taking all kinds of after-school classes at weekends or on holidays. There are two different opinions about it.

Some people think that

【答案】Nowadays, many middle school students are taking all kinds of after-school classes at weekends or on holidays. There are two different opinions about it.

Some people think that students can get better exam results and go to better senior high schools by taking extra classes. They also believe that students can avoid watching too much TV or playing computer games in this way.

But others have a different opinion. They think that students need more time to rest. If they take too many classes, they mi ght feel too stressed. That’s not good for their health.

As for me, I don’t think taking extra classes is necessary. Learning hard in class is enough. We just need to go over our lessons after class. We can also teach ourselves as it is very important for us to have a lifelong learning ability.

【解析】

【分析】

整体分析：这是一篇提纲话题作文。是一篇议论文，第一段要写目前，许多中学生利用周末和节假日上课外补习班，对此人们有不同的看法。第二段要写中学生利用周末和节假日上课外补习班赞同者的观点。第三段要写中学生利用周末和节假日上课外补习班反对者的

观点。第四段要表述作者自己的观点。

【详解】

写作之前要1.审清题目，看看有哪些要求？哪些时态？人称？2.确定文章类型，记叙文？说明文？议论文？看图？还是应用文？3.确定时态，单一还是混合。4.写下关键词、短语、句型。5.列出提纲和段落，并运用适当的句型和过渡词衔接。6.根据提纲和段落结构句型及关键词句完成文章。写完后反复阅读修改推敲润色，人称、时态、单复数一致等。运用自然过渡法和自然衔接法来是文章更为地道、通顺、纯正。用短语、句型：all kinds of ，Some ···others，As for me ，Some people think that ···。They also believe that···。If they take too many classes。It is very important for us to have a lifelong learning ability.来增加了文章的亮点。

【点睛】

这类作文的写作方法要注意认真审题，可以分四段写：总体简单描述话题；赞成；反对；你的看法。注意过渡性语言的使用。做到：要点要全，表达要清晰明确，使用短语，句型要准确，注意避免拼写和语法错误。

2．（·中央民族大学附属中学昆明五华实验学校中考模拟）A good book is important to me 要求：1. 紧扣主题，意思连贯，语言通顺，书写规范。2. 不得使用真实姓名和校名，如需使用名字，请用Mike, Gina等英文名字; 校名统一使用Guangming Middle School。3. 词数不少于60。

【答案】A good book is important for me. It can not only help broaden my horizons, but also give me inspiration. From the good book, I can learn what others think, and their views about the world. What’s more, I can even live their lives, which are totally different from mine. For me, a good book is really like a good friend, who can teach me how to solve the problems when I am in trouble. A good book helps me a lot, and it is quite important for me in my life.

【解析】

【分析】

本题是命题作文，根据题目一本好书对我是重要的，自己写相关内容，可以是你读了什么书，该书对你产生了什么影响。也可以是一本好书为什么对你来说是重要的。

【详解】

本篇文章主要从为什么对我重要这个角度来写。文章时态主要用一般现在时，人称为第一人称。题目并没有给过多的提示信息，所以需要学生自己思索行文内容。在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

【点睛】

首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡

平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

3．（·东莞市虎门智升学校中考模拟）书面表达

如今的交通已经成了许多城市的主要困扰。假如你是一名工程师，请你设计一种交通工具，既可以解决部分交通运行的问题，又有助于环保。

要求：

1. 要展开大胆的想象，可以假设为一种空中交通工具，也可以是地上交通工具。

2. 内容要合理、完整、丰富与流畅。

3. 词数：不少于80。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

An Important Vehicle

As an engineer, I try my best to invent an important vehicle.

It's________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

I hope my idea can come true one day, and everyone can be interested in it.

【答案】An Important Vehicle

As an engineer, I try my best to invent an important vehicle. It's an air bus. You are right. It's a kind of special bus, and it can also fly in the air. When there are too many cars and buses on the street, it can fly in the air. It doesn't cause any accidents or trouble. At the same time, it is so convenient that lots of people will take it.

On the bus, there are enough seats for the passengers. What's more, it doesn't run on oil but a kind of special water. That's to say it will be very good for people to take it, because it doesn't produce any pollution at all.

I hope my idea can come true one day, and everyone can be interested in it.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇给材料作文。假如你是一名工程师，要求你展开大胆的想象，设计一种交通工具，可以假设为一种空中交通工具，也可以是地上交通工具；既可以解决部分交通运行的问题，又有助于环保。根据所给的提示材料可知本文时态用一般现在时，人称主要为第一和第三人称。在写作时，要注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查字数是否符合要求。

【点睛】

首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡

平稳，自然流畅；最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

4．（·海南中考模拟）假如你是Tom, 你的父亲工作很忙，经常熬夜，吸烟，很少吃早餐，也没有时间锻炼，所以身体不太好。6月17日是父亲节，请你根据你父亲的情况，给他写一封信，谈谈你的看法并给他提一些具体的建议。

要求:1. 意思连贯，语言流畅，语法正确，书写规范。

2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称等信息。

3. 词数:80词左右，开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Dad,

This letter is a gift for the Father’s Day.

Happy Father’s Day, Dad!

Yours,

Tom 【答案】Dear Dad,

This letter is a gift for the Father’s Day. June 17 is Father's Day, and I sincerely wish you good health. I know that you are busy working all day and often stay up late to work. The next day you often go to work without having breakfast. You smoke a lot to relieve the pressure of work, but it’s really bad for your health. Long hours of work and little exercise make you unhealthy, I am worried about your body.

Health is more important to you. I hope you can take care of your body and don’t st ay up late at night. Smoking is harmful to health, so give up smoking as soon as possible. I hope you can exercise in your spare time. I wish you have a strong and healthy body. Happy Father’s Day, Dad!

Yours,

Tom 【解析】

【详解】

考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。通读材料可知，这是一篇向父亲表达情感的写作。因为是写给父亲的一封书信，因此人称为第二人称。时态为一般现在时态。要根据短文提示，把父亲身体不好的原因写清楚，并提出中肯的建议，表达出对父亲的体贴与关爱，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。要求语句通顺、意思连贯。文章结构紧凑、行文连贯、表达清楚。

5．（·浙江中考模拟）今年我国首次将高考作弊列入刑事处罚，称为史上最严高考．此事引起社会广泛关注．作为一名中学生，请你根据以下提示，就"学生考试作弊"这一话题，谈谈自己的看法．

要求：

1．词数80-100；开头已给出，但不计入总词数．

2．文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称及其它相关信息，否则不予评分．

3．参考词汇：exam-room 考室exam-cheating 考试作弊 electronic products 电子产品 micro-earphones 微型耳机 competing environment竞争环境

It's very common for students to cheat in the exams．This year,our country has passed a law that fights against this kind of law-broken behavior．It is reported that …_______

【答案】It's very common for students to cheat in the exams．This year，our country has passed a law that fights against this kind of law-broken behavior．It's reported that some students carry some important information or notes into the exam-room．Some students copy others' answers．What's more，others use electronic products，such as mobile phones，micro-earphones to pass on the answers．

There are many reasons for students to cheat in the exam．Some students are too lazy to work hard．They want to get good grades in order to enter a good high school or a good university．Some students have too much pressure from their parents and teachers．They only want to make them happy．

In my opinion，it's dishonest of the students to cheat in the exams，and it's unfair for other students．In order to create a fair competing environment，we should say NO to the exam-cheating．

【解析】

【详解】

高分句型一：Some students are too lazy to work hard．一些学生太懒了而不努力学习．

句中使用了"too…to…太…而不能…"结构。

高分句型二：In order to create a fair competing environment，we should say NO to the exam-cheating．为了营造公平的竞争环境，我们应该对考试作弊说不．

高分句型三：it's dishonest of the students to cheat in the exams．学生考试作弊是不诚实的

句中使用短语有：“in order to do sth 为了做某事”，“say No to…拒绝…”，“copy others' answers抄袭他人的答案”，“get good grades取得好成绩”。

6．（·甘肃中考模拟）发明创造改变了世界。作为一名中学生．假如你梦想当一名发明家，应该怎样做才能实现梦想呢?请根据下面的漫画提示，以“How to Become an Inventor”为题，写一篇短文。

要求：1. 80词左右，可适当发挥。（文章标题和开头已给出不计人总词数）

2．文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称等相关信息。

How to Become an Inventor?

【答案】How to Become an Inventor?

With the development of science and technology, inventions have played an important role in the society and even changed our world. As a student in middle school, I want to be an inventor like Edison. But how can I let my dream come true? In my opinion,First,studying hard is the basic method.It is clear that only when we study hard to acquire the knowledge about the science and technology can we fulfill the need of innovation.Second,interesting is the best teacher.Hardly can we imagine a child without passion of exploring will get progress in innovation Third,we need the spirit of creativity which provides us different thoughts to solve the problem.What's more important,Never give up.Keep our belief.That's the key to success for all scientists,such as Madame Curie and Darwin.

What I have list above is my answer to how to become an inventor,and that is what I'll persist doing in the future with my whole passion.

【解析】

【分析】

这是一篇话题作文，以“How to Become an Inventor”为题，写一篇短文。

【详解】

结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I want to be……，studying hard is……，we need……，That's……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

【点睛】

本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我想要成为一个发明家；接下来介绍为了成为一个发明家，应该如何做；最后指出为了成为一个发明家，我要坚持做下去。此处play an

important role in, come true, give up, such as等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

7．（·河南中考模拟）有一种爱，它是无言的，是严肃的，在当时往往无法细诉，然而，它让你在过后的日子里越体会越有味道，一生一世忘不了，它就是那宽广无边的父爱。父亲节马上就要到了，你准备为敬爱的父亲做些什么？请以“Warm Father's Day”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你将如何与父亲一起度过这个特别的日子。

要求：1.词数80左右；

2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；

【答案】Fathe r’s Day is coming and you must be thinking of giving a present to your father. Different people like different kinds of gifts.

If you have enough pocket money, you can buy a useful but not expensive thing, like a tie. I think your father will like it. But if you don’t have enough pocket money, you can do something that you can do, for example, you can prepare a cup of tea. When your father comes back from work, he can drink it.

No matter what you do, the most important thing is to make your father happy on Father’s Day. Don’t you think so?

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇命题作文。要求以“Warm Father's Day”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你将如何与父亲一起度过“父亲节”这个特别的日子。首先我们要认真审题，看清题意，确定文章的中心思想、主题。在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性。同时要注意准确运用时态和人称，语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；另外，可以用上一些句型、短语，较高级的语言，这样会使文章更出色。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

要求：1.词数80左右；

2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；

8．（·北京中考模拟）4月23日是“世界读书日”，你校英语俱乐部正在开展主题为“多读书，读好书”的活动。假如你是李华，请你写一封倡议书，向全体同学发出号召。内容包括：应该读什么样的书，以及读书的意义。

提示词语：story, novel, knowledge, improve, important

提示问题：● What kind of books should we read? ● Why do we read?

Dear students, the World Reading Day is coming.

So I’m here again to call on all of us to read more books and read good books.

Li Hua

【答案】例文

Dear students, the World Reading Day is coming. As a middle school student, everyone should read books. Firstly, reading increases our knowledge and we can learn the world affairs without going out. Secondly, reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills. Finally, reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future. Therefore, start to reading, no matter how old you are and what you are doing.

So I’m here again to call on all of us to read mor e books and read good books.

Li Hua 【解析】

【详解】

题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，但写作时要按照应用文格式写，写作时承接短文开头，写出对学生的倡议。

例文点评：例文采用的是一段式，写的是阅读的好处，时态采用的是一般现在时，描述倡议时，描写细致，条理清晰。

高分亮点：

短语：Firstly；Secondly；Finally；a good way to do sth；broaden our knowledge and horizon。

句型：reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills；reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future。

9．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达

假设你是某英文报纸“Teenagers”栏目的编辑Betty，日前收到了Lucy的来信。她在信中诉说了她的烦恼，请你根据Lucy的来信，用英语写一封90词左右的回信。要求内容合理,信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

I’m sorry to know that you aren’t allowed to read eBooks.

_______________________________________

All the best!

Betty

【答案】Dear Lucy,

I’m sorry to know that you aren’t allowed to read eBooks.

In recent years, electronic books, as a product of information technology, have gained more and more popularity. It is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits. For one thing, they are so convenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. For another, their appearance will make paper-waste less.

However, as every coin has two sides, electronic books also have some disadvantages. For example, long time of reading e-books does harm to our eyes. And there are more radiation which is harmful to people's body.

In my opinion, E-book cannot take the place of traditional book, but it's an useful product. I think that e-books are beneficial if we read correctly and properly instead of reading over.

All the best!

Betty

【解析】

【详解】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如in recent years，as a product of，live in，more and more，so…that，for example，do harm to，be harmful to，in my opinion，take the place of，instead of等。同时For one thing, / For another,/ However,等使短文的叙述很有条理，而It is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits./ they are so convenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. / And there are more radiation which is harmful to people's body.

/ I think that e-books are beneficial if we read correctly and properly instead of reading over.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】

书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

10．（·江阴初级中学中考模拟）你是一位九年级的学生李明，你用英语写一封邮件给你的笔友Amy，感谢她对你关心，并告诉她目前你在全力以赴为中考而学习，并与她交流一下目前的学习和生活情况。要点如下：

（1）. 虽然你大部分功课你都学得比较好，但是你对自己不满意。你认为自己学习上还要

（2）. 你的父母对你严格要求，但是也很关心你。（举例说明，适当发挥2—3句）……（3）. 老师很乐意帮助你们。他们希望你们实现自己的理想。他们说（适当发挥2—3句）……

注意：

（1）. 要求语句通顺，意思连贯。

（2）. 第2要点和第3要点要用2—3句话作适当发挥。

（3）. 词数90个左右，邮件开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

Hello!

Dear Amy, thank you for caring.

Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination.

How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours

Li Ming

【答案】例文Hello!

Dear Amy, thank you for caring.

Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination. I have got good results in most of my subjects, but I am not happy with myself. I think I must spend more time on my studies.

My parents are really strict with me. However, they care for me as well. Once upon a time, I failed in my physics exam and felt stressed and sad. They had a close communication with me and helped me solve my problems and cheer up again.

My teachers are also ready to help us. They hope that we can realize our dreams. They tell us to try our best and not to give up. Life is always full of ups and downs. It's important not to be afraid of any kind of difficulty.

How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours

Li Ming

【解析】

【详解】

本文属于材料作文，告诉艾米目前你在全力以赴为中考而学习，并与她交流一下目前的学习和生活情况。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如get good results, spend+时间

+on sth, be strict with, however, care for, as well, once upon a time, help sb do, cheer up, be

ready to, tell sb to do, try one’s best to do, be full of以及it is adj to do sth等，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

【点睛】

写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：

认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

11．（·山东中考模拟）假如你是学生会主席，你校学生会打算以“保护环境”为主题搞一次社会实践。请你根据下列提示用英语写一封倡议书。

要点如下：1.少开汽，多走路。2.停止向河内排放废水。3.少用餐巾纸，塑料袋。4.节约水电，多植树。

要求：1词数：80--100；2.请结合实际增加细节，适当发挥。3.倡议书的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

【答案】Dear classmates,

As we all know,the earth is in trouble because of the way we are polluting it.Each one of us must do something to help save our plante.Firstly,transportation is the main factor of air pollution.So we should walk more instead of driving.Secondly,industrial pollution is serious.Waste water from factories is poured into rivers and lakes and this causes water pollution.Thirdly,we should stop using plastic bags when we go shopping.Finally,remember to turn off the lights and taps whenever we’re not using them and we should plant more trees to protect our earth.

The Students’ Union

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇要求假如你是学生会主席，你校学生会打算以“保护环境”为主题搞一次社会实践。请你根据下列提示用英语写一封倡议书。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。

12．（·天津中考模拟）假如你是阳光中学的李华，你校成功举办了“中华诗词朗诵比赛”，请用英语写一篇短文，介绍活动情况并呼吁更多的人参与这样的活动。内容要点如下：

注意事项：

（1）须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、行文连贯作、适当发挥；

（2）词数在80个左右，文稿的开头已给出，不计入总词数；

参考词汇：中华诗词朗诵比赛 Chinese Poetry Reciting Competition;表现 performance; 高度评价think highly of ;朗诵recite;天赋gift;免费的free

I'm Li Hua from Sunshine Middle School. Our school...

【答案】I'm Li Hua from Sunshine Middle School. Our school held a Chinese Poetry Reciting Competition on the afternoon of May 23rd. It was held in the school hall. The competition is held every tram. This year it was a big success again. All the teachers and students thought highly of the students' wonderful performances. Wang Li from Grade 8 won the first prize. She has a real gift for reciting .Each winner won a free ticket for the book show.

I hope more people will take part in this activity and enjoy the beautiful Chinese culture

【解析】

【详解】

本题是一篇给材料作文，介绍“中华诗词朗诵比赛”活动情况并呼吁更多的人参与这样的活动。短文用第一人称和第三人称，还会用到被动语态的句子。写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文，其次考生可根据表格中的要点提示去写作。文章必须包括要点中所给的信息，但不要逐句翻译，并补充两条个人的观点。在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

13．（·杭州市清河中学中考模拟）小明在朋友圈发了一段文字，表达了自己的苦恼，假如你是他的朋友，请回复他，表达你的观点，并给他一些你的建议。要求不少于80个字。

Hi, Xiao Ming!

【答案】例文Hi, Xiao Ming!

In my opinion, you have to take a long talk with your parents. On the one hand, You should let them know that you’re serious about learning art and you’re clever enough to plan the future for yourself. Interest comes first, and one can do better in everything if it is connected with their interest. So this is the best chance for you to achieve your dream, though it’s just the very beginning to enter an art school.

On the other hand, you should be understanding with your parents because they really care about you. They want you to be better. But everything may happen if you attend Zhong Kao. If you fail, both your dream and your parents’ wish won’t be able to be realized. That’s the worse thing nobody wants to see.

Simply put, keep your dream! Communicate more with you parents, and ask your teacher for help if necessary!

【解析】

【详解】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如in my opinion，have to do，take a long talk with，on the one/other hand，enough to do，connect with，care about，want you to be better，both …and，be able to，ask for help等。而并列结构Communicate more with you parents, and ask your teacher for help if necessary!和You should let them know that

you’re serious about learning art and you’re clever enough to plan the future for yourself./ So this is the best chance for yo u to achieve your dream, though it’s just the very beginning to enter an art school./ If you fail, both your dream and your parents’ wish won’t be able to be realized.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】

14．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达

我的英语学习

初中即将毕业，你在英语学习方面积累了较多的经验与方法，请你向你的表弟介绍你的做法，根据下面表格中的内容，按要求用英语写一篇短文，

要求：1．语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；

2．必须包含表格中所有内容，并作适当发挥

3．行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；

4．词数80－100。

【答案】My English Study

How time flies! My three-year middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my English study.

First, listen more. Listening to the radio is a good way to learn English. We can relax ourselves by listening to English songs. Second, say more. Use spoken English when communicating with classmates. Speaking English can enhance the ability and confidence to learn English well. Third,

read more English books. Reading can broaden our horizon and help us understand English culture. In addition, learn some grammar rules to better understand and use English. Finally, we can write about our daily life.

In a word, only when we develop interest in studying English can we learn it well.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如look back，listen to the radio，a good way to learn English，relax ourselves，communicate with，help sb. do，do more reading，in addition，in a word等。而感叹句How time flies!，倒装句only when we develop interest in studying English can we learn it well.和复杂从句结构Use spoken English when communicating with classmates.的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】

15．（·天津中考模拟）请你根据以下内容提示，以“The Story of Lingling”为题，为社区宣传专栏写一篇短文，介绍在玲玲身上发生的一件事。

（1）上周晚饭后玲玲和妈妈一起出去散步，在社区的门口看见一个钱包；

（2）玲玲把钱包捡起，发现钱包里有身份证和一些钱；

（3）玲玲和妈妈把钱包交给保安，保安把这个消息发到小区的微信群中；

（4）失主看到消息后，过来取回钱包并对玲玲和妈妈表示感谢；

（5）你觉得……

参考词汇：社区 community 身份证 ID card 保安 guard 微信群 Wechat group 失主owner

要求：

（1）词数：80～100个。

（2）短文的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。

（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。

The Story of Lingling

Last

week___________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________

【答案】The Story of Lingling

Last Friday, Lingling went out for a walk with her mother after supper. She saw a wallet at the door of the community. Lingling picked up her wallet and found that there were ID cards and some money in it. Lingling and her mother handed the wallet to the security guard, who sent the news to the microphone group in the community. When the owner saw the news, he came to fetch her wallet and thanked Lingling and her mother. .I think Li Hua did a good deed.We should learn from her.

【解析】

【详解】

本文是一篇给材料作文。根据以下内容提示，以“The Story of Lingling”为题，为社区宣传专栏写一篇短文，介绍在玲玲身上发生的一件事。文章时态用一般过去时，人称主要为第三人称。本文所给材料比较详细，考生要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并可适当发挥。在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

【点睛】

点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

16．（·海南中考模拟）假如你是王梅，有一个弟弟/妹妹一直是你的梦想，去年你家里添了一个弟弟/妹妺，你非常开心，请根据内容要点，写一封电子邮件给你的笔友李蕾，和她分享你的快乐，告诉她你的变化。（ brother， sister任选其一）

内容要点: （1）我一直想有个弟弟、妹妹；

（2）去年我的梦想实现了，有了弟弟/妺妹；

（3）他/她非常可爱，给我们带来了欢乐，伴我成长，不再孤单；

（4）我学会了分享和照顾家人；

（5）请补充几点弟弟、妹妹到来后你的变化。

参考词汇：joy； grow up with sb.伴某人成长;on one’s initiative主动地；help do the housework；study hard； set an example 树立榜样。

写作要求：（1）不得使用真实姓名和校名

（2）包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯；

（3）字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清楚；

（4）词数80左右。（书信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。）

Dear Li Lei,

I have been dreaming to have a brother/sister. Last

year,___________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________

I’m lucky and happy to have a brother/ sister. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours,

Wang Mei 【答案】Dear Li Le,

I have been dreaming to have a sister. Last year, my dream came true. I was really happy to have such a lovely baby sister.

She brings lots of joy to our family and she grows up with me day by day. Every time I see the big smile on her face, my heart is full of sweet feelings. I will come over to see her and play with her as soon as I get home every day. Now I’m not alone any more.

Above all, I have learned to share and look after others since she was born. I learn to help my mother do the housework, such as washing clothes, cooking and looking after my little sister on my own initiative. In order to set a good example for my little sister, I decide to study hard all the time and go to a famous university one day. Taking care of the baby is a hard job and I learn to be patient from it. I also learn to be kind and friendly to her.

I’m lucky and happy to have a sister. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours

Wang Mei 【解析】

【分析】

这篇书面表达顺应了当今的热门话题，“二胎”，主要是站在孩子（考生）的角度，分享有了弟弟或妹妹后的喜悦。

【详解】

这是篇材料作文内容要点给的比较详细，考生主要把所有要点表达清楚连贯就是篇不错的短文；参考词汇中，给了一些很好的词汇，考生一定要把它们融合到作文里。在写作时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，这样才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。

17．（·北京市十一学校中考模拟）假如你是光明中学的李阳，你看到了动物保护组织Animal Group的招聘信息，请你依据主要提示，给Animal Group的主席Mr. Mario写一封邮件，并表达自己想当志愿者的意愿。

写作要点：

1.表达自己想当志愿者的心愿。

2.向Animal Group介绍自己。

（ 1）我是李阳，15岁。

（2）喜欢喂养小动物，运动，读书。

（3）乐于助人，有爱心。

3．至少说出两点你想要参加动物保护组织的原因。

Dear Mr. Mario ,

How are you doing?

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________

Looking forward to your reply!

Yours Sincerely,

Li Yang 【答案】I really hope I can be a volunteer of Animal Group. I'm Li Yang. I'm 15 years old. I like feeding small animals, sports, reading. I am a very loving boy. I often help others. I like small animals and want to help them.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇给材料作文。本文给出了一些要点，并给出了作文的开头。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系

【点睛】

这篇短文用正确的语句表达了每一个要点。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。

18．（·江苏中考模拟）加入你是英国交流学生 Neil，你在南京 Sunshine Middle School 两个月的学习生活即将结束。请你根据以下提示，以 Neil的名义，用英语给 Sunshine Middle

School 校长写一封感谢信。

? what you've learned about Chinese culture

? how the teachers and students help you

? what your homestay family do for you

注意：

1. 对所有要点逐一陈述，适当发挥。

2. 词数 80 左右，感谢信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。

Dear Sir/Madam,

I would like to express my thanks to you. During my two-month stay in Nanjing, I feel really grateful for what you have done for us.

【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,

I would like to express my thanks to you. During my two-month stay in Nanjing. I enjoyed myself

very much.

I took the rich and colourful courses. I have learned Chinse Kungfu from a P.E. teacher.It is really

amazing! I also know something about Chinese paper-cutting in Art lessons.Though I can’t speak

Chinese.I have little difficult talking with the teachers and students here,theyare always ready to

help me.

I felt excited when I spent a weekend with a family. In their family,they taught me how to make

dumplings.We also visited Confucins Temple.We had a good time together. I feel really grateful for

what you have done for us.

【解析】

【详解】

本文是一篇书信作文。根据以下提示，以 Neil的名义，用英语给 Sunshine Middle School 校

长写一封感谢信。文章时态用一般过去时，人称主要为第一人称。本文所给材料比较详

细，考生要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗

漏要点，并可适当发挥。在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，

中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；

尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单

词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，

确保正确无误。

【点睛】

点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每

个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、

段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文

章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检

查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

19．（·靖江市第三中学中考模拟）年11月15日泰州市召开了深化全国文明城市创建迎检部署会，会上我市正式启动了“泰有礼”全民主题实践活动，形成崇德向善、文明有礼的道德风尚和城市标识，同时组织“泰有礼”志愿服务队伍，围绕“文明礼让”“文明交通”“文明餐饮”“文明上网”等文明实践活动，承担起对市民日常行为进行劝导的责任。假如你是其中的一名志愿者，请根据以下提示写一篇150字左右的英语短文。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。（以上背景内容无需表达）

内容提示：

1.在家尊敬父母，帮助他们做家务活；

2.出行时，排队候车，不随地吐痰、不乱扔垃圾；不在公共场所抽烟、喧哗（比如在图书馆或博物馆）

3.诚实守信，不撒谎，不说脏话；

4.对人有礼貌，帮助别人；坐车时请让座给老人，残疾人，尤其抱小孩的妇女；

5.遵守交通规则，做到红灯停，绿灯行；

6.请你就此话题一点个人看法。

要求：1.条理消楚，字迹工整：可围绕主题适当发挥；2.文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名、地名成其他真实信息；

As a member of the city, I think we

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I’m sure our city will become more and more beautiful and cleaner as long as we all try our best to do something for it!

【答案】As a member of the city, I think we should respect our parents at home, and help them with the housework. While we are travelling, we should pay attention to our own behavior, such as waiting for a bus in line. We should never spit or litter everywhere. What’s more, we can’t smoke or talk aloud in public, such as in the library or the museum. During our daily lives, we ought to be honest, never tell lies or say bad words because it’s rude to others. Also we should be polite and helpful to others. When we are on the bus, we can give our seats to the old and the disabled, especially the women with babies in their arms. And we should obey the traffic rules. Remember to stop when the traffic light is red and walk when the traffic light is green. Don't forget to protect our environment. Though we are young, we can still do something to help. I’m sure our city will become more and more beautiful and cleaner as long as we all try our best to do something for it!