最新整理雅思写作高分范文赏析：Animal Testing
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2015年雅思写作大作文真题解析
2015年6月6日雅思写作（一） 题目类别society 提问方式Discussion 考试题目 Some people prefer to provide help and support directly to those in their local community who need it. Others, however prefer to give money to national and international charitable organizations. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 有人认为给需要救助的人自己的帮助更加可取，有人认为给有需求的国家或国际援助组织提供经济援助更加重要，讨论两种观点，给出你的意见。 Although people in industrialized countries lead a high standard of living, it is undeniable that there are still 1.2 billion people living below the poverty line. In order to solve poverty-related problems, I feel that all kinds of help should be encouraged and respected. Giving a helping hand to those who are in need in the local community seems reasonable. It is because even in the richest countries, there are still a lot of people, such as disabled people and orphanages, suffering from famine and extreme poverty. For this reason, it is easy and convenient for us to help our fellow citizens, such as donating food or clothing to them, so that we can see the result of our actions immediately. By contrast, it is rather difficult to track expenditure of international aids, which might result in corruption in some cases. Those who donate money to domestic and international charities believe that the collection of money has a tremendous effect on the poor countries compared with other forms of help. This is because few people are able to donate a large amount of money to construct schools, hospitals and roads in poor areas. Instead, governments and charities can achieve this. International aids can also purchase vaccines which are available in developed countries by using the money raised worldwide and save millions children’s life. In my view, minor proportion of donated money and other sorts of help should be appreciated equally as long as the money reaches to those who need it desperately. The government could run campaign and encourage door-to door help. At the same time, charitable organizations should make every penny count for donors.(word count：274)
雅思写作高分黄金句型
雅思真题范文精选高分黄金句型及例句 笔者（胡义祥--南京新航道人气写作主讲）注：以下12种黄金句型为雅思写作大作文核心句型。熟练掌握以下句型的使用，并灵活运用雅思写作大作文精准定位法，大作文得分7分左右（考生写作时要求不偏题，词汇使用恰当）。 一：被动句 1：As a result, the quality of the whole population had been influenced, and a country could never be expected to develop fast with a low education rate.（28） 2：Nowadays, a large percentage of young people being admitted into universities can be witnessed and a country`s population is instilled with a fresh flow of well educated people, which can lead to the prosperity of a country.（37） 3：Firstly, by setting up a special day, an organization can better promote a specific activity, thus more people would know what it is trying to tell them and their perception of caring and social responsibility would be further woken.（39） 二：形式代词IT 1：However, some of them begin to notice that international travel also makes it possible for criminals to conduct some illegal actions like evading arrest. （24） 2：Especially with the easy access to computer technology, it has been increasingly noticed that a growing number of people prefer to work or study from home. （26） 3：It can be seen everywhere that people in the modern world are under huge pressure and have to spend most of their time on their work or study, which, consequently, hardly does any good to the family relationship.（插入语）（38） 三：限定性定语从句 1：Dating back to 30 years ago when scientific technology was not accessible to everyone, children were more interested in traditional games such as playing poker or playing chess.（28） 2：On the contrary, a company or a school is a place where lots of people are bunched together and asked to do the same thing at the same time.（29） 3：Due to the large number of students` graducating from universities, more people seek for good jobs and the job market becomes the arena where fierce competition can be seen all the time. （32）
雅思写作经典范文 雅思小作文数据描述模板25个
雅思写作经典范文雅思小作文数据描述模板25个 1.the table shows the changes in the number of……over the period from……to…… 该表格描述了在……年之……年间……数量的变化。 2.the bar chart illustrates that…… 该柱状图展示了…… 3.the graph provides some interesting data regarding…… 该图为我们提供了有关……有趣数据。 4.the diagram shows (that)…… 该图向我们展示了…… 5.the pie graph depicts (that)……. 该圆形图揭示了……
6.this is a cure graph which describes the trend of…… 这个曲线图描述了……的趋势。 7.the figures/statistics show (that)…… 数据(字)表明…… 8.the tree diagram reveals how…… 该树型图向我们揭示了如何…… 9.the data/statistics show (that)…… 该数据(字)可以这样理解…… 10.the data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that…… 这些数据资料令我们得出结论……
11.as is shown/demonstrated/exhibited in the diagram/graph/chart/table…… 如图所示…… 12.aording to the chart/figures…… 根据这些表(数字)…… 13.as is shown in the table…… 如表格所示…… 14.as can be seen from the diagram, great changes have taken place in…… 从图中可以看出，……发生了巨大变化。 15.from the table/chart/diagram/figure, we can see clearly that……or it is clear/apparent from the chart that…… 从图表我们可以很清楚(明显)看到……
2015年6月6日 雅思大作文解析
2015-6-6 Task 2 An ask 2 Analysis Some people p ople prefer to provide help and support directly to loca local community who need it. Others prefer to give money to national and international charitable organizations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.有?人喜欢直接帮助社区中需要帮助的?人。也有些?人喜欢把钱投给国内或国际慈善组织。讨论这两个观点并且表达你?自?己的想法。 1Topic 话题 Charity 2Question type 题型Discuss 3 5W ANALYZE THE QUESTION审题 （WHO+what+when+where+why+how） WHO: people WHAT: do charity How: direct support vs money donation Where: local vs national & international 4identify key words and their synonyms 关键词理解 support directly=direct involvement give money to=donate charitable organizations=charities 5identify all the writing tasks 确定全部写作任务 1. some people prefer direct help 2. others donate to non-pro?t organizations 3. own opinion Brainstorming and organ d organizing ideas 写作思路 Direct support Donation to non-profit 6Necessary: 必要性 组织运作不当，造成损失: charity frauds Bene?ts: 重要性 积极参与：direct involvement 及时?高效: concretely helping ?立竿?见影: make a signi?cant difference Necessary: 必要性 有些问题单纯本地解决不了 not easy to tackle at the local level Bene?ts: 重要性 资本有效运作：Meet more basic needs with fewer dollars 减税福利：tax bene?ts for helping globally
雅思写作-小作文范文-柱状图
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Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. 在审题过程中我们需要特别注意以下几点： 1. 时态：关注时态是小作文能否取得高分的关键，同样对于地图题，我们也应该很好地注意时态，本文的时间是明确的，都是过去的时间，因此全文应当使用一般过去时。 2. 顺序：该图属于动态的地图题，这种类型的地图题一律按照时间顺序来写。在这道题中，也就是按照图的顺序依次来写，不要把元素拆开。如果是静态的地图题（即不涉及时间变化的题型），则按照空间顺序来写。在描述单幅地图时，我们可以采取上北下南的顺序描述，或者从左到右的顺序也可以，但值得注意的是，如果地图上有明显的方向标示，那就要根据这个标示来描述。 下面我们一起来分析文章的写作。 第一段：Introduction 引言段就是把题目进行改写。原文中的diagram，可以替换成figure，原文中的shows，可以改为illustrate, demonstrate, reveal, indicate等词。宾语development，可以替换成transformations，也可以改为宾语从句how the village of Kelsby developed/ changed. 题目中给出的时间比较模糊，可以具体化为in 1780, 1860 and 2000. 【例文】The three maps illustrate how the village of Kelsby changed in 1780, 1860 and 2000. 第二段：描述1780年的地图 1780年的情况只涉及到静态的数据，因此只需要用存在句即可表达，不涉及任何变化的单词。但是，考生非常容易把这些元素全部用there be这个句型来表达，从而导致句式单一。表示存在的句型除了there be之外，还有非常简单的have句型，还有lie/ be located/ be situated这样的结构。另外还有一种倒装句型，比如“桌子上面有一本书”，可以翻译为on the desk is a book. 除此之外，要注意几个元素的顺序问题。这里有四大元素：住宅区homes，树林woods，农场farms，还有一条河流river。理论上只要按照一定的空间顺序（比如顺时针、逆时针，从左到右）都是可以的，但是要考虑家庭数量的变化是导致其它所有变化的根本原因，因此建议先写住宅区homes。 还有就是土地单位的表达，land是不可数名词，因此不能说a land，只能说a piece of land。为了表达更加精确，可以用a plot of land（一小块），a stretch of（一长片），a large expanse of（一大片）。 另外朗阁海外考试研究中心提醒考生们还要注意方位词的表达。地图题中常用的方位词有：in the east/ west/ south/ north of ...; in the eastern/ western/ southern northern part of ...; 如果是在角落，可以用in the southwestern corner of ...; 在河流的上/下游：at the lower/ upper reaches of the river; 在河岸：alongside the riverbank; 在河流的南端：at the southern end of the river.
雅思写作流程图解析
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考生面临的比较普遍的问题就是：图里面的词汇可能认识的只有一半，碰到这种情况，考 生应尽量猜，运用常识和看图猜词意。图里面可能会给出一定数量的动词，也可能没有给出。具体而言，一般会出现三种情况： 1. 图详细＋注解详细 流程图中出现过的词汇可以使用一次，第二次出现的时候尽量换成其同义词甚至可以是近 义词。但即使猜出了大概含义，找出同义替换仍然比较困难。对此，有两种解决方案： 1). “名词动用”，如果原图给出了某个词的名词形式，在你的作文中可以将其转变成该词 的动词形式。同理，形容词可以换成副词（通常在该形容词后加-ly），副词变成形容词。 比如剑桥真题6 Test 3的范文中：原图第二个步骤中的“food”, 作者改成了动词“feed”。 2). 根据“下义词”，找出其“上义词”，比如说“furnace”（熔炉）在“玻璃瓶的回收”之类的 流程图中都会出现，我们称之为“下义词”（即含义较具体），而其“上义词”（即概括性较 强的表达）可以是“a container”。 2. 图详细＋注解简略 这种情况要求考生把图片中出现的、而注解中表述比较简略而省掉的信息运用考生会的表 达方式补充出来，尤其注意动词的使用。比如：“玻璃瓶的回收”这一流程中有个步骤是把 碎玻璃倒进熔炉里面将其融化，图片画得较详细：一个椭圆形的鼎样容器，上面画的温度 计显示融化玻璃的具体温度数值，燃料是用木炭还是煤炭还是天然气……但下面的注解可 能只有三个单词：the melting process。显然，我们不可能只用这三个单词描述这一步骤，原因很简单，即考生都熟悉的一个悲剧——图描述完了，字数没写够！遇到这种情况，建议考生用自己的话把图表信息补充完整。 3. 图简略＋注解更简略 同样还是以“玻璃瓶的回收”流程为例，其中一个步骤是玻璃瓶被重塑成新瓶子、并注入相 应液体产品后，被卡车送到超市，消费者购买并使用。该步骤在原图中只出现了两个名词——“supermarket”和“customers”。实战中有相当数量的考生只用一句话说完了这个步骤（比如：These bottles are transported by trucks to supermarkets, and then they would be bought by consumers.）。这种写法与上面的写法后果是一样的——
关于雅思写作句式14种句式变换高分内容
关于雅思写作句式14种句式变换高分内容
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雅思写作八分经典范文背诵
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雅思写作题目解析：年轻人不快乐的原因
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1. 幸福感其实和自我的期待值相关，欲望好像是盐水，越喝越渴。有时候，年轻人想要提升自我，但是，又缺乏力量，想要后退，又不甘心，欲求不得的焦虑正是不快乐的根源之一。 2. 罗素在论及快乐的时候提及朋友和爱好能够是快乐的重要源泉，所以，个人爱好很少以及交际圈很小的人，很难获得更多快乐。 解决策略： 1. 父母承担对于子女的责任，为他们营造快乐健康的成长环境。 2. 教育者协助学生们调整心态，同时，缓解学业负担，丰富校园活动。 3. 年轻人积极交友，培养乐观人生态度，发展个人爱好，获得更多快乐源泉。 原创语料库： 1. numerous youngsters = a great many teenagers = a number of young people n 很多年轻人 2. youngsters = teenagers = adolescents = the young = young adults = those who are in the formative years n 年轻人 3. acquire = attai n 二 obtai n v 获得... 4. well-being = pleasure = happiness n 幸福 5. feel cheerful = feel delighted = feel happy v感到快
雅思作文句型
雅思大作文高分句型 I. 不要总是以有生命的名词或者人称代词开头。 屌丝：People experience many great changes in the last half century. 高分：文章原句 技巧：找到原句中的非生命名词短语，把它变成主语。 屌丝：Because the rich and powerful people impose the changes (such as in working conditions or property developments) that depends on them. 高分：文章原句 技巧：使用强调结构。在强调的内容前加上it is，强调的内容后加上who/that, 公式就是It is + 强调内容+ that + 非强调内容 屌丝：Many people think birth control is quite necessary in China. 高分：It is widely(commonly) thought/believed/held/accepted that birth control is quite necessary. 技巧：使用主语从句。Many people think...= It is widely(commonly) thought/believed/held/accepted that..... 屌丝：Many Chinese people have gone to the Unite States in the past 15 years. 高分：The past 15 years have bought many Chinese people to the United States. 技巧：用时间做主语，效果非常好。The last half of the 20th century has seen/witnessed many great breakthrough in every aspect. 练习： 1.In many of these countries, this increasing number of visitors (mostly from western countries) has caused problems like drug abuse and alcoholism. 2.Because only rich people have enough money to travel overseas, poorer countries such as Thailand and Indonesia have become the playgrounds of wealtheir nations. II.英语中被动使用频率远远高于汉语 屌丝：They make a lot of innovations to make money for a few people. 高分：文章原句 技巧：宾语变主语 屌丝：We may think more of the elderly who live apart from their children. 高分：More thought may be given to the elderly who live apart from their children. 技巧：动词变名词。 练习： 1.We produce millions of tons of pollutions every day. 2.Nowadays sophisticated computer games fascinate every child. III.不要总是用“如果”、“因为”、“当”等口语意味较重的句子。不要对动词过于依赖，要
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题目类别教育与科技提问方式利弊判断 考试题目 Some people say that playing computer games is bad for children in every aspect. Others say that playing computer games can have positive effects on the way children develop. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 分析：教育与科技、教育与媒体可谓是雅思考试的热点，而且这些话题跟广大考生们息息相关。平时对生活多一些思考，备考期间针对话题词汇和句型多写多练，这些都是理想分数的 保障。 文章结构：4段 首段：导入话题，表达立场。 主题段1：玩电脑游戏对孩子的各方面有害。 主题段2：玩电脑游戏对孩子的成长有利。 结尾段：总结上文，重申立场。 In recent years, the prevalence of computer games has exerted a significant effect on children’s life. As to whether they affect children negatively, there is an endless debate. Despite the fact that playing computer games is an effective way to relieve pressure, the problems associated with study and health cannot be neglected. Clearly, playing computer games is regarded as a main factor leading to poor academic performance. With the entertaining nature, computer games will easily distract children from their studious pursuits. With the passage of time, children will probably fall behind their peers in academic development. In addition, when children spend too much time playing computer games, they are less likely to participate in physical activities, which is one reason why many children suffer from obesity. As a result, these overweight children’s confidence may be undermined and their health may be negatively influence as well. Despite these disadvantages, the advantages can still not be ignored. First of all, the latest research shows that game-playing helps children to home their communication and interpersonal skills. In many cases, players work together in teams to achieve goals, competing against other players. Therefore, their social skills and teamwork spirit are put to the test. Also, computer games can have positive and therapeutic effects on players. Games provide an opportunity for children to decompress and tune out of strains and stresses of everyday life. Giving their time to rest is critical for emotional and mental well-being. In conclusion, it is not advisable for children to play computer games, for the reasons that it not only has a negative impact on their study, but also makes them lose confidence, although computer games provide a form of relaxation.
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Topic one 1.to cultivate one's independence 培养独立性 2.to develop a strong sense of responsibility 培养强烈的责任感 3.to foster a sense of competition and cooperation 培养竞争和合作感 4.be necessary to sth 对...是必要的 5.in one's future career/development 在未来的事业发展中 6.to enhance one's social awareness/consciousness/realization 提高人们的社 会意识 7.to become more socially adaptable 更具社会适应性 8.to keep pace with the outside world 跟上外面世界的步伐 9.to build up/ establish one's confidence 建立自信 10.offer somebody a sense of achievement/ accomplishment 给与成就感 11.to actualize/realize one's value and capability 实现价值与能力 12.to make money/earn money 挣钱 13.to form a good habit of frugality/thrift 养成勤俭的习惯 14.to provide a chance/opportunity for sb 提供机会 15.to apply A into B 把A应用到B 中 16.to apply for sth 申请 17.in return/in reward 作为回报 18.obtain/acquire/reap/gain/attain 获取 19.cooperate and compromise 合作与妥协 20.to master interpersonal skills 掌握人际关系技巧 21.to ease/lessen/relieve financial strain/burden 缓解经济压力和负担 22.to enjoy a more colorful and interesting campus life 享受多彩和有趣的校园 生活 23.to widen one's horizon 拓宽视野 24.to shape one's character 塑造性格 25.to exert a negative/adverse impact on one's study and life 对学习很生活产 生负面的影响 26.to have a positive influence on sth/sb对学习很生活产生正面的影响 27.take up/occupy one’s space and time 占用时间和空间 28.the sole task/ the main task 主要任务 29.to make the best of/ to make full use of/ to take the advantage of 充分利用 30.be essential to/be fundamental to/ be basic to 对...是很根本的 31.be mature and rational/be immature and irrational 成熟和理性的/或相反 32.be vulnerable to/ be exposed to 对...是敏感的/暴露在... 33.social evils 社会罪恶 34.to go astray/be led into traps/to become lost sheep/to fall down the slippery slope 误入歧途 35.to tell/distinguish/differentiate right from wrong 明辨是非