(名师整理)最新英语中考写作《科技世界》专题精讲精练

主题训练13----科技世界

【名师点拨】

在这个主题训练中，我们仿佛进入了科技世界，可以了解电脑、网络等科技方面的发展，也可以更多了解各科》科普知识(如：可视电话、网上学习、机器人的运用等)。进行这个主题训练是培养学生创新思维的举措之一。

【主题词汇】

an important part, in our daily life, useful, search, download music, search for information, read English. Weekly, with. . . help, send/receive e-mails, make telephone calls.，buy sth. online, interesting. colourful Internet bars，shopping online, surf the Internet (上网), the electronic dictionary, look up the word, make our life colourful and meaningful,prevent…from, news from hom e and abroad，be worried about, give yourself up to, in my point of view(以我个人的观点) . learn…by myself,be harmful to our eyes, influence our sleep, be not safe, waste time, influence our study(影响学习)

【常用句型】

1.What’s worse…

2.Worse still, some Internet bars are not safe enough,

3.The Internet is invented to enrich our life and to improve the efficiency of our work rather than. shackle us with a chain.

4.In recent years, people are developing an inseparable relationship with the Internet.

5.But we should not give ourselves up to the Internet, or visit websites with unhealthly contents,

6.Can you imagine what our life would be like without it?

7.i think every coin has two sides. We should use Internet bars properly.

8.The Internet is playing an important part in our daily life9.With the development of

modern science,..

10.I like the Internet, it’s an important part of our daily life because it is useful for our

work and studies.

11.Life has changed for millions of young people across the world who now make

friends online.

12.And friends in your real life are always more important than those so-called friends

you meet online,

13.Technologies make our life much easier and our work more efficient than before,

14.I hope technologies will make our life more convenient.

15.You shouldn’t play computer games too late at night. It will take you so much time

that. you have no time to do homework. I suggest that you play computer games at weekends after you finish your homework.

【模拟试题】

The Internet has changed our life

a. What changes has the Internet brought to our lives?

b. What do you think of the Internet?

【要点分析】

1.开门见山，表明观点。

2.根据论点，具体阐述理由。

3.论点与论据要一致，不能前后互相矛盾

4.时态=一般现在时。

【思路写作】

I)谈谈因特网使生活产生的变化

1.Nowadays, many people simply feel they cannot live without the internet,

2.I get uniq ue fresh point of view, which could hardly be found elsewhere, That’s true! The Internet has already changed our life, hasn’t it?

3.As is commonly believed：the development of the Internet has influenced our present life in many ways，which has made our life more convenient arid efficient.

4.As a primary source of information as well as an efficient means of communication, the Internet offers people a colourful and convenient life

5.Thanks to the Internet, we can purchase almost everything without leaving home,As long as we own a credit card, browsing certain shopping websites and buying goods are just simple, it is the Internet that has made our life so convenient and wonderful.

II)谈谈你自己对因特网的看法

1.Taking advantage of the internet，I find the most influential thing is the large

amount of information available on the Internet.

2.Many Famous universities recorded their courses and posted them on the Internet, enabling people from all over the world to quickly and easily start learning for free.

3.On the internet, we can communicate with each other, QQ， a software developed by Tencent, enables us to hove a discussion either individuaily or in group.

4.Microbtog service, which attracts more and more users, is a new form to keep in touch with the outside world.

5.We can get entertainment, varying from growing unreal vegetables to playing online games.

https://www.360docs.net/doc/7c17809308.html,ernments publish their latest policies and decisions online for worldwide recognition.

https://www.360docs.net/doc/7c17809308.html,panies and enterprises resort to the Internet for more business opportunities and potential customers home and abroad.

8.Universities and researchers turn to the Internet if they’ d seek international cooperation or funding.

【范文评讲】

原文稿

As is commonly believed, the development of the Internet has influenced our present life in many ways, which has made our life more convenient and efficient.

At first, the main purpose of the Internet was to transmit information, However, features such as e-commerce and real-time communication have become the most attractive part of it.

Taking advantage of the Internet, i find the most influential tiling is the large amount of information available on the Internet, Suppose you are leaving trouble

in finishing your assignment—it is unlikely to find everything from the textbooks, but you can search the Internet, Compared to the library, the Internet is much faster and more accurate. What you need to do is just a single mouse-click. To be frank, I choose to search the Internet first whenever I have a question.

There is no denying that the Internet has changed our life. At least, I am deeply convinced.

【点评与评分】

作者在这篇文章中观点鲜明，思路清晰,选词恰当，能用灵活的语言和多样的句式表达因特网対我们生活带来的巨大影响。其中，文章的第二段作者植鲜明地阐述了自己两个观点：因特能传输大量的信息，同时，也给人们的交流带来了方便。按中考作文20分计算,属于第二档?第一档的文章，可得16?17分，需改进之处：

1.it is unlikely to find everything from the textbooks, but you can search the Internet,在这句话中,作者想表述用因特网来代替从书本上获取信息和知识，可在句末加上instead。

2.文章被结尾处似乎还没有说完，有墜虎头蛇尾的感觉，添上以下这句话，会显得更加完整些。Without the Internet our life would be rather tough.

修改稿

As is commonly believed, the development of the Internet has influenced our present life in many ways, which has made our life more convenient and efficient.

At first, the main purpose of the Internet was to transmit information, However, features such as e-commerce and real-time communication have become the most attractive part of it.

Taking advantage of the Internet, I find the most influential thing is the large amount of information available on the Internet. Suppose you are having trouble

in finishing your assignment—it is unlikely to find everything from the textbooks, but you can search the Internet,instead. Compared to the library, the Internet is much faster and more accurate. What you need to do is just a single mouse-click. To be frank, I choose to search the Internet first whenever I have a question.

There is no denying that the Internet has changed our life. At least, I am deeply convinced.

Without the Internet our life would be rather tough.

【范文选登】

1. For thousands of years, human beings have been taking lessons in the same traditional way by listening to the teachers in a dassrodtm, But in the past few decades, the Internet has changed this style. World-famous universities like Yale,Harvdrd and Oxford recorded their courses and posted them on the Internet, enabling people from a 11 over the world to quickly and easily start learning for free, Lectures and speeches given by Ted and other ideas worth spreading are available as well, I, myself sometimes take these lessons. Sitting in front of my own computer, I get unique fresh point of view, which could hardly be found elsewhere, That is true! The Internet has already changed our life, hasn’t it?

2. Nowadays, the Internet reaches every corner and plays an important role in

our daiiy life. People from all walks of life utilize it to communicate, entertain and shop, Obviously, it has deeply influenced our life,On the Internet, we can communicate with each other. QQ a software developed by Tencent, enables us to have a discussion either individually or in group, Microblog service, which attracts more and more users, is a new form to keep in to-uch with the outside world. We can get entertainment varying from growing unreal vegetables to playing online games.

Thanks to the Internet, we can purchase almost everything without leaving home. As long as we own a credit card, browsing certain shopping websites and buying goods are just simple. It is the Internet that has made our life so convenient and wonderful,

3. if askeed what is the greatest invention in the twentieth century, my answer wouid be the Internet, As a primary source of information as weil as an efficient means of communication，the Internet offers people a colourful and convenient life,

Nowadays, many people simply feel they cannot live without the Internet. Governments publish their latest policies and decisions online for worldwide recognition, Companies, and enterprises resort to the Internet for more business opportunities and potential customers home and abroad. Universities and researchers turn to the Internet if they’d seek internationaj cooperation or funding. Common folks like us also rely on the cyber world in various ways，for communication, entertainment, banking and shopping.

【范文链接】

1.

Studemts shoud be online

In my opinion，the Internet is helpful. As you know, the Internet is playing a more and more important role in our daily I ife. On the Internet, we can read news from home and abroad arid get as much information as we want. We can send e-maiis or make phone calls on line, We can also enjoy music, watch matches, play computer games and do the shopping online.

But we should not give ourselves up to the internet, or visit websites with unhealthy contents, Otherwise, we’ll get our life and stuy ruined. Anyhow, this doesn’t prevent the Internet from becoming our friend.

2. 1 like the Internet

I like the Internet, It’s an important part of our daily life because it is useful for our work and studies. I often search for and download information through it, I also read English Weekly on it, It’s very hefpfui for me to improve my English .With its help I can a I so practise playing chess with my net friends. We can also use the Internet to send e-mails and make phone calls, And shopping online is convenient and easy, in my spare time, I often watch films or listen to music on the Internet. The Internet makes my life more interesting and colourful, Can you imagine what our life would be like without it?

【决胜中考】

3.最近你班就“该不该关闭网吧”的话题展开讨论，讨论的结果如下表。请根据表格提示，发

Recently our class had a discussion about whether Internet bars should be banned,some thought it is wrong to ban Internet bars. First, Internet bars provide a chance for students without computers at home to search for the information they need in study. Second, students can make friends on the Internet and communicate with each other, and this is good for their mental health. Third, they can also go to bars to play computer games and enjoy music, which are good ways to relax.

However, others thought it is easy for students to get addicted to the Internet in these bars,which have a bad effect on their studies. Besides, they may meet some bad people in the bars. Worse still, some Internet bars are not safe enough.

I think every coin has two sides. We should use Internet bars properly.

4. QQ or Skype or WeChat

Life has changed for millions of young people across the world who now make friends online. Whether you use QQ，Skype or WeChat, you are a member

of this group. “I don’t often talk with my parents or grandparents, but I talk a lot with my old friends on QQ, Most of my classmates use QQ after school.

QQ is the biggest messaging service in China A record from Tencent, the company which developed QQ, shows that 4 million people used it on Saturday night in October.

Many people would like to meet each other when they feel like they have got to know someone very well, Fox’s Shadow once met one of her online friends face to face, It was a girl who was a football fan like herself and they went to a football match together,

A 16-year-old Beijing boy, named Bart Simon online, dislikes QQ users, “I

used to chat on QQ, but I found that most people were talking about foolish thi ngs,” he said. Now he chats online in English using Skype, “I only chat online because I’ve got friends in Japan，the US and Singapore，” he said, “I want to learn more about foreign cultures” But he spends little time chatting on QQ as he sees it as a waste of time.

“If you are realty addicted to it，sometimes you can not give your mind to your lessons,” he said, “And friends in your real life are always more important than those so-called friends you meet online.”

5. What do technologies bring to us?

Technologies make our life much easier and our work more efficient than before. However, every coin has two sides. For example, we can get more information from the internet more easily, but some students spend too much time on it and have neglected their schoolwork. Cellphones make people in different places get in touch with each other more

easily. But it seems that people have less time to visit each other in person, and get less and less familiar. What is even worse, some students even use cellphones to cheat in examinations, It brings us bad effects,

I hope technologies will make life more convenient and bring us good effects.

6. I like smartphone

Recently I have bought the latest smartphone by Apple. It has surely attracted my attention because it has exquisite appearance, unique design, high-quality image and sound enjoyment.

The smartphone has some advantages. First of all, it can help people realize the dream of video calling. Secondly, it is faster, thinner, has a longer battery life, and it features video calling. Finally, the communication will be more convenient because not only friends can say hello with a big smile from across the globe but also the mother can take a good took at her son a broad.

For these reasons, I likes smartphone best. I believe it makes our life more and more wonderful.

【相关主题】

1. My view on computers .

a. Do you often use computers in your daily life?

b. What do you know about computers?

c. How do you think about computers?

2. My view on playing computer games

a. Do you enjoy playing computer games?

b. Do you think computer games a re good for us? Why or why not?

3. Should students be online or not?

4. How to use the Internet properly?

a, Do you iike using the Internet?

b, State your views on using the internet property.

5. QQ or Skype or WeChat

a. What do you know about QQ or Skype or WeChat?

b. Have you ever used it (QQ or Skype or WeChat) to communicate with your

friends?

c. Who are the people you often communicate with? What are your topics?

d. How do you. like it? What are your reasons?

6. What do technologies bring to us?