(完整word版)2018届中考英语专题复习(江苏)：书面表达

2017江苏中考书面表达汇编

图片写作

（2017扬州中考）书面表达(计30分）

A.句子翻译(共5小题;每小题2分，计10分）

76. 昨天这个时候，我们正在上一节关于中国文化的课。

【分析】We were having a lesson about Chinese culture at this time yesterday．

【解答】答案：We were having a lesson about Chinese culture at this time yesterday．昨天那个时候at this time yesterday 表达的是过去正在进行的动作，故用过去进行时was/were+doing，主语we，故were，have a lesson about Chinese culture 上一节关于中国文化的课；昨天的这个时候为at this time yesterday，故答案是We were having a lesson about Chinese culture at this time yesterday．

【点评】过去进行时．表示过去在某一时间段或某一段时间内正在发生或进行的动作或状态．其形式为主语

+was/were+V-ing．常与表示过去的时间状语连用，如：last night，last Saturday等；或者与when，while，as引导的过去时间状语连用．例如：We were watching TV from seven to nine last night．昨天晚上七点到九点的时候我们在看电视．What was he researching all day last Sunday？上周日他一整天都在研究什么？

77. 她无忧无虑，因为我们把她照顾得很周到。

【分析】She never worries because we take good care of her．

【解答】答案：She never worries because we take good care of her．

首先分析句子的时态和结构：句子表述的是现在的情况，所以用一般现在时，动词"忧虑"是worry，"她无忧无虑"是She never worries，短语"把她照顾得很周到"是take good care of her，引导原因状语从句用连词because，故答案是：She never worries because we take good care of her

【点评】此题考查对整句话的翻译，做这类题时先分析所给汉语句子意思确定相关的词汇和句型，然后仔细推敲时态考虑人称和数的变化等容易出错的问题．

78. 如果你砍伐这些树木，将会受到惩罚。

【分析】You will be punished if you cut down these trees．

【解答】答案：You will be punished if you cut down these trees．．

首先分析句子的时态和结构：这是一个含有条件状语从句的复合句，从句用一般现在时，主句用一般将来时，结合汉语用被动语态，一般将来时被动语态的构成是：主语+will be+动词的过去分词，"砍伐"是cut down，动词"惩罚"是punish，故答案是：You will be punished if you cut down these trees．

【点评】此题考查对整句话的翻译，做这类题时先分析所给汉语句子意思确定相关的词汇和句型，然后仔细推敲时态考虑人称和数的变化等容易出错的问题．

79. 生活就像一场赛跑，你要么领先，要么落后。

【分析】Life is like a race．You either take the lead or fall behind

【解答】答案：Life is like a race．You either take the lead or fall behind．

首先分析句子的时态和结构：句子表述的是一般性的事实，所以用一般现在时，此处的"像"用介词like，短语"要么…要么…"是either …or …，短语"领先"是take the lead，"落后"是fall behind，故答案是：Life is like a race．You either take the lead or fall behind

【点评】此题考查对整句话的翻译，做这类题时先分析所给汉语句子意思确定相关的词汇和句型，然后仔细推敲时态考虑人称和数的变化等容易出错的问题．

80.他说得太快，不能清楚地表达自己的想法。

【分析】He spoke so fast that he couldn't express himself clearly．

【解答】答案：He spoke so fast that he couldn't express himself clearly．．

首先分析句子的时态和结构：句子表述的是过去的事情，所以用一般过去时，结合汉语用so…that…引导结果状语从句，"说得太快"是speak so fast，"不能清楚地表达自己的想法"can't express himself clearly．，故答案是：He spoke so fast that he couldn't express himself clearly．

【点评】此题考查对整句话的翻译，做这类题时先分析所给汉语句子意思确定相关的词汇和句型，然后仔细推敲时态考虑人称和数的变化等容易出错的问题．

作文

为了进一步提升扬州国际文化旅游名城新形象，我市正在举办中学生英语导游大赛，请根据以下流程图提示完成一篇参赛导游词．

参考词汇：Slender West Lake 瘦西湖Five-pavilion Bridge 五亭桥

He Garden 何园double-path corridor 复道回廊

要求：（1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下午连贯

（2）必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥

（3）词数：100词左右有（开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；

（4）不得使用真实姓名，校名和地名等．

【分析】这是一篇图画作文，让我们写一篇关于扬州国际文化旅游名城的导游词，注意题材是导游词，这需要我们根据提示信息，并发挥我们的思维力和创造力，把这些内容补充完整．有题目可知，写导游词时要用第三人称介绍扬州，还要有第二人称与游客互动，时态为一般现在时．内容包括：扬州的大体介绍，包括它的位置和历史，其次还有比较著名的游玩的地方，为什么著名等．最后可以介绍一下扬州的文化及精神所在等等．我们可以将本文分为三部分，第一部分表示对游客的欢迎，第二部分介绍扬州，第三部分祝愿游客玩得高兴．

重要的短语和句型：

lies between…and…坐落于…和…之间

have a history of…years 有…年的悠久历史

be famous for 因…而出名

not only…but also 不但…而且…

Yangzhou is fomous for the places of interest 扬州因风景名胜而出名be famous for 因…而出名

Yangzhou is not only the beautiful scenery city，but also the history city．扬州不仅是风景名称，还是文化名城．not only…but also 不但…而且…

【解答】参考答案：

Ladies and gentlemen，

Welcome to Yangzhou!I'm your tour guide，Yangzhou，my hometown，lies between the Huai River and Yangtze Rive．It is the most important transportation pot．＜大体介绍扬州＞

It has a history of over 2500 years，and it is one of the 24 famous culture cities of China．Yangzhou is famous for the places of interest，if you go to the gardens，you can have a good look at the Slender West Lake，where there is Five-pavilion Bridge．Besides，the He Garden is also attractive，you can walk on the double-path corridor，which is so great＜非限制定语从句，介绍扬州风景＞．Yangzhou is not only the beautiful scenery city，but also the history city．＜过渡句，高分句型not only…but also 不但…而且…＞you can't miss the museums，in the China Paper-Cutting Museum，you can enjoy the Chinese paper history，which can help you to know more about the Chinese history．＜介绍扬州历史文化＞

I hope you'll have a very nice stay in Yangzhou．

【点评】写图画作文时，我们最好不要遗漏图画所给的重要信息，注意不要生搬硬套，注意语句的连贯与衔接．对于一篇导游词，注意说话的对象是游客，行文要注意简化，不要抱沓冗长，最好能够写短的简单句，这样比较能够

得分，同时注意写作文时使用一定的连接词，比如，what's more last but not the least等等．写作文完成时要注意检查修改，以避免遗漏，如果有条件的话，最好能够先打个草稿，再抄到答题纸上，这样更容易得高分．最后，注意去使用一些句型和短语，使整篇短文意思连贯流畅，方能成就一篇好作文．

表格写作

（2017南通中考）为了满足广大学生对DIY的喜爱，你们学校成立了DIY俱乐部。假如你是Justin，想加入该俱乐部，请根据下表所提示的要点和内容写一份申请函，谈谈你想加入该俱乐部的理由。

要点内容

培养独立意识独立思考；自主选择；敢于尝试（或自拟内容）

调节学习生活获得乐趣；丰富生活；体验成功（或自拟内容）

提升个人素养直面困难；……（请考生自拟两点内容）

参考词汇：独立independence n. ；调节adjust vt. ；素养quality n.

注意：1.申请函中必须包含所给要点，具体内容可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

2.词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。

3.申请函中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。

Dear Chairperson，

I would like to join the DIY Club.

I hope I can be a member of the DIY Club.

Yours Sincerely，

Justin

【答案】

Dear Chairperson,

I would like to join the DIY Club. For me, I like to do something by myself, here are some reasons why I want to join your club.

First, make things by myself can cultivate my independent consciousness because I need to make things on my own. It’s important for teenager to think independently and choose freely, and try things bravely.

Second, join the club can adjust my study life. DIY has so much fun an d it can enrich my life. What’s more, after I finish a objects, I can experience success.

Third, DIY can improve personal qualities. It makes us to face difficulties directly, be patience and keep our minds to do things.

I hope I can be a member of the DIY Club.

Yours Sincerely,

Justin （2017无锡中考）近期，一部片名为《摔跤吧，爸爸!》的印度电影在各地热映，引发了观众对父母育儿方式的热议，为此英文报Teens将在下期开设专栏讨论这—话题。假设你是Alice,上周随父亲一起观看了此片，请结合观后感受给报社写一封英文信参与讨论，内容提示见下表

总体印象一部充满正能量的电影

内容概要一个印度父亲和他两个女儿的故事

父亲为实现自己的世界冠军梦逼迫女儿们接受训练

起先两人都不愿意，但父亲非常严厉，最后成功了

热议焦点父母是否该为孩子决定未来？

你的观点...

注意事项：

英文信须包括表格中所有提不内容，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；

表格中“你的观点”—栏须用2-3句话进行合理阐述，作适当发挥.

词数在90个左右，信的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数.，

信件内容必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。

参考词汇：

正能量（positive energy) 世界冠军（world champion)

【范文】

I think it is full of positive energy.

It tells a story about a father and two daughters. In the film, the father wants to realize his world champion dream by training his two daughers hard . At first, the two girls don’t agree. However, their father is very strcit with them. They finally make a big success.

Afte r the film, many people discuss whether parents should decide their children’s future.

I suggest our parents should guide us to choose our own life. When we have difficulty making decisions, they should

give us wiser advice.

（2017盐城中考）

学校将举办英语写作比赛，请根据所给提示，以“My life in 20 years”为题，写一篇短文，分享你对未来的憧憬。

注意事项：

1．词数: 100词左右(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)；

2．文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；

3．文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥。

My life in 20 years

I’m alw ays working hard for a bright future I imagine

_____________________________________________________________________________

【答案】

My life in 20 years

I’m always working hard for a bright future I imagine. In thepast school life, I have learnt a lot of k nowledge and made many friends. My past life in school have much fun, and now I want to talk about something about my future.

In the present I study hard to get collage. After collage life I will face more new challenges, for example, the first is I need to get a job and work hard to make money. I want to be a teacher when I grow up because I want to impart my knowledge to the new generation.

Second, I need to make money to support my parents because they have given me so much when I was young. What’s more, I will take good care of them to express my thanks

（2017泰州中考）今年是地级泰州市成立二十周年，你们学校正在参与"文明泰州人"的讨论，请你根据如表提示，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈如何做一个文明的中学生．

地点内容

在家里对父母有礼貌，多做家务活，…

在学校尊敬老师，与同学友好相处，勤奋学习，…

在公共场合遵守交通规则，排队等候，不乱扔垃圾，…

要求：

1）词数100左右．开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数．

2）所写内容必须包括表格中所有的信息，并作适当的发挥．

3）不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息．

参考词汇：文明的civilized

It is 20 years since the City of Taizhou was set up．Our city has become richer and people feel happier．Recently，all of us are talking about how to be civilized students in our school．

In my opinion……

Let's join together to be civilized students!

【解答】It is 20 years since the City of Taizhou was set up．Our city has become richer and people feel happier．Recently，all of us are talking about how to be civilized students in our school．

In my opinion，we should be polite to our parents and help them do more housework at home．[在家里的表现】At school，we should respect our teachers，get on well with our classmates and study hard．【在学校的表现】We should also obey traffic rules．When the traffic lights are red，we should stop．When we wait for a bus，we should wait in line．Don't throw litter or spit in public．And we'd better not talk or laugh loudly．We should never say dirty words．Be friendly to others and always ready to help the people in need．【高分句型一】【在公共场合的表现】

If everyone behaves well，our city will be more beautiful and more attractive．【高分句型二】

Let's join together to be civilized students!

话题写作

（2017南京中考）请根据杂志KIDVOICE的内容，以“Kids and Learning”为题,用英语写一篇短文，发表你的看法。

KIDS HA VE AN OPINION TOO!

Hi! I’m Sigmund Friend, the editor (编辑) of a new magazine KIDVOICE.

We like hearing from kids. We know you’ve got things to say.

We want to hear from you.

Here is a topic you might have an opinion about. . .

注意：

1. 对所有要点逐一陈述，适当发挥。

2. 词数80左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。

Kids and Learning All kids want to be good at learning. ▲

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【分析】这是一篇图画作文，让我们写一篇关于kids and learning的作文，这需要我们根据提示信息，并发挥我们的思维力和创造力，对这些内容逐一陈述. 有题目可知，写这篇作文应用第三人称，时态为一般现在时. 内容包括：第一部分阐述观点，孩子是否擅长学习；第二部分，孩子应如何处理好学习与玩之间的关系.

重要的短语和句型：

be good at擅长

just as a saying goes正如谚语所说

have a good knowledge of对. 有个很好的了解

All in all，only when we balance the relation between playing and learning，can we be good at learning总之，只有处理好了学习与玩耍的关系才能学习好only when…can we…只有当…我们才会…倒装句型

Just as the saying goes"All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy"，只学习不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻just as 正如…；适当引用谚语会得高分

【解答】参考答案：

Kids and Learning

All kids want to be good at learning. Some children are good at learning，but some children are good at playing，and they are not good at learning，why？This is because some children know how to balance learning and studying. ＜阐述观点＞First，just as the saying goes"All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy"，＜谚语开头，易得高分＞a good learner should know to play properly，if he or she plays happily，he will try to learning well. Besides，all learning decrease the interest of study. Second，students should make a proper time list，and try to follow the list. Last，parents and teachers should give tips to the students so that students can have a good knowledge of the study. ＜观点层层递进＞

All in all，only when we balance the relation between playing and learning，can we be good at learning. ＜高分句型＞【点评】写图画作文时，我们最好不要遗漏图画所给的重要信息，注意不要生搬硬套，注意语句的连贯与衔接. 行文要注意简化，不要抱沓冗长，最好能够写短的简单句，这样比较能够得分，同时注意写作文时使用一定的连接词，比如，what's more last but not the least等等. 写作文完成时要注意检查修改，以避免遗漏，如果有条件的话，最好能够先打个草稿，再抄到答题纸上，这样更容易得高分. 最后，注意去使用一些句型和短语，使整篇短文意思连贯流畅，方能成就一篇好作文

（2017苏州中考）假定你是苏华，你最近认识的英国笔友David给你发了一封电子邮件，想了解你初中三年来在学习和生活方而的一些收获、困惑和感受. 请认真阅读下而的邮件，根据信中的内容及你的实际用英语回复.

To：suhua@china. com

From：davidsmith@britain. com

Subject：School life

Dear Su Hua，

Glad to hear you're graduating from junior high. I'm interested in how you feel about those three years of school

life. Would you please tell me the following things？

●What do you like best about your school life？

●What﹣s the biggest problem as a junior student？

●Who has helped you most？And why？

●Do you enjoy your school life？Why or why not7

I look forward to hcaring from you soon.

All the best，

David

洼意：1. 词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；

2. 回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使全文连贯、通顺；

3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息.

Dear David，

Thank you so much for your email. I'm very happy to tell you about my school life.

How about your school life？Write to me soon.

Best wishes，

Su Hua. 【解答】Dear David，

Thank you so much for your email. I'm very happy to tell you about my school life. （开篇点题）

I like the Football Club best because I've made quite a few friends by joining the club. Moreover，it's an excellent chance to learn team spirit.

However，I've also met some problems over the three years. The biggest one is how to achieve a balance between my schoolwork and my hobbies. Whenever I am in great need，my English teacher always comes to help me. 【高分句型一】She is the person who has helped me most in the junior high school. 【高分句型二】（介绍我的学校生活）In short，I enjoy my school life because it's colourful and meaningful. （总结全文）

How about your school life？Write to me soon.

Best wishes，

Su Hua

（2017常州中考）随着互联网的发展，许多中学生开始利用互联网进行学习。对此，某英文报组织了“合理利用互联网进行学习”的征稿活动，请你根据以下要点写一篇英语文章进行投稿。

互联网用于学习的优势 1.学习资源丰富

2.查找资料方便

3. ....

可能导致的问题 1.迷上网络游戏

2....

建议....

注意： 1.表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确

2.必须包括表格中所有的要点，并适当发挥

3.词数不少于90字（文章开头已经给出，不计入总词数）

4.不得使用真实姓名和校名

参考词汇：

resource n.[C] 资源

Dear editor,

I’ d like to say something about this topic.

________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【解析】本篇习作是话题作文。要求就“合理利用互联网进行学习”这一话题写一篇文章。根据表格提示，结合自己使用互联网的情况学习的优点，作为写作第一部分，拓展内容可以选择互联网视频教学这一优点。第二部分说明学生利用互联网同时导致的一些问题，包括玩电脑游戏，沉溺于互联网不和父母、朋友交流等。第三部分简要说明自己的建议并结尾。注意：1.由于整篇文章是陈述客观事实，所以用一般现在时态。2.恰当运用短语或句型使句子叙述不显枯燥。

【范文】

One possible version:

Dear editor,

I’d like to say something about this topic.

With the development of the Internet, many students enjoy surfing in their spare time. Some students are used to looking up the information about their lessons and use the Internet to do their homework. There’re many resources on the Internet and it’s convenient for students to find out what they need. Many websites store much knowledge and open up to students. Some websites also provide students with teaching videos. They’re useful and helpful for students’study.

But on the other hand surfing the Internet causes a lot of problems. Some students are mad at playing computer games. They spend most of their spare time on games. What’s more, some students are always on the Internet and seldom talk with their parents. The Internet takes up nearly all the students’ spare time and they have little time to spend

with their friends. They have trouble getting on well with others.

In my opinion, students should use the Internet properly. It’s better to regard the Internet as a good helper in our study. Don’t let the Internet control your life.

（2017宿迁中考）“小手拉大手，同做文明人。”自创建文明城市、文明乡村以来，宿迁人民万众一心，众志成城，让人点赞的行为随处可见。作为中学生，我们也作出了自己的努力。请根据以下所给要点，写一篇英语短文。

要点：

1.种植花草树木；

2.遵守交通规则；

3.公共场合不大声喧哗；

4.公交车上主动给有需要的人让座；

……（自主发挥，至少两点）

参考词汇：文明的civilized 遵守obey

注意事项：

1.词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；

2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。

Since creating the civilized city and countryside, all the people in Suqian have made joint efforts. Their good behavior can be seen everywhere.

As junior students, _______________________________________________________________________

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【答案】

One possible version:

Since creating the civilized city and countryside, all the people in Suqian have made joint efforts. Their good behavior can be seen everywhere.

As junior students, we have also made some contributions to the civilized Suqian. For example, to protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees. Also, for our own and others’ safety, we obey the traffic rules and never run red lights. In addition, we no longer talk or laugh loudly in public. What’s more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need.

Besides, we have formed a good habit or throwing rubbish into a dustbin, never littering anywhere. Furthermore, we are accustomed to queuing up for tickets or something else.

All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Suqian city more civilized.