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Dear Gogo,

Hi, Gogo.My name’s …. I’m a student.I’m twelve years old. Let’s be e-mail pen friend. My hobbies are swimming, drawing, and surfing the net. I go swimming about four times a week. I can swim very well. I think swimming is good to our health. Sometimes I draw pictures about cartoons. I enjoy drawing a lot. I surf the net everyday. I can learn from the net. What about you? Do you like surfing the net? Please write to me soon.

Yours,

Lily

2、今天是星期天，妈妈给了一张清单给Tony，让Tony到超级买家里人所需的物品，请看下面的List，写一写他们将要买什么？

Today is Sunday. Tony is going to buy something for his family. His mum gave a list to him. What is he going to buy? He is going to buy some fruits, two rolls of toilet paper, a pair of shoes and some candies. They are for his mum. He is going to buy some envelopes and some stamps for his father. What about him? He wants to buy a carton of ice-cream. So he will buy a canton of ice-cream. That’s a busy Sunday for Tony.

3、今天是妈妈的生日，家里人准备了200元给Mum开party，看看价格，需要买些什么，好好计划一下，该怎样花？请写一写你的计划与看法。

Today is my mother’s birthday. We are going to have a birthday party for mum. My father gave me. 200 yuan to buy the things for the party. I will go shopping with my father. I will buy three bags of chips, a carton of ice cream, four bottles of coca cola and a big cake. They are 100 yuan. My father will buy a bunch of flowers.They are 60 yuan. They’re expensive. We will also buy some food. They are less than 40 yuan. That’s cheap. We will cook for mum that day.

4、请选用下列形容词介绍你家里人或班里的情况。

smaller bigger shorter taller father thinner older younger…

There are five people in my family. They are my grandfather, grandmother, father, mother and I. I’m the youngest in the family. My grandfather is fatter than my grandmother. My mother is bigger than my father. I was short, but now I’m taller than my family members. I have a happy family. I love my family.

5、假设你在公园里迷路了，你怎么办？想一想，写一写。

Last Sunday, I went to a park with my mother. There were so many people in the park. Suddenly, I could not see my mother. Oh, I was lost. Later, I ran to a man. I asked him if he see my mother. He said: “No”. I walked to a woman and asked her: “Can I use your phone?” I called my mother. Then I told her I will wait near her car. So my mother found me near the car.

6、寒假快到了，请写一写你的寒假计划，想一想你将如何度过愉快的春节。

The winter holiday is coming. During the holiday, I’m going to get up late. First, I’ll do my homework. Then, I’m going to play computer games. After that, I’m going to go to Hong Kong. There, I’ll go shopping. I’m going to see movies. I’ll eat some tasty food. I’ll help my aunt do some housework, too.

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