2019年济南市中考英语作文写作技巧及试题汇编

话题一：写人记事

例文：初中阶段你印象最深的又是哪位老师？请用英语写一篇题为“The Teacher I Never Forget”的作文。内容包括：1.简要介绍老师的性格或特长；2.列举一个事例，说明老师是如何在学习上帮助或鼓励你取得进步的；3.感谢老师，祝愿老师。

The Teacher I Never Forget

How time flies! Three years has passed since I became a middle school student. I had very good memories of my classmates and teachers. The teacher I never forget is Mr. Zhang, an English teacher. He is very kind and friendly. He helped us not only in class but also after class. About two years ago, Mr. Zhang noticed that I was worried about my poor pronunciation. So he offered me many suggestions to improve it, and he also gave me every chance possible to speak in class. With his help, my pronunciation has greatly improved.

I must say many thanks to Mr. Zhang. I wish him a healthy and happy life in the future!

例文：假如你是某中学的一名学生。6月3日，是星期五，在放学回家的公交车上，你所经历的一件事情让你印象深刻。请根据以下要点用英语写一篇日记。

要点：1. 一位老爷爷和十来岁的孙子上了车，老人拿着书包和小提琴；2. 你给老人让座，老人的孙子却坐了下来，老人只得站在旁边；3. 孩子大声喊着向老人要水喝，并将空水瓶扔到车上；4. 你认为孩子应该尊敬、照顾老人，保持环境卫生。

On my way home on the bus, I saw an old man get on with his grandson of about ten. He was carrying the boy’s schoolbag and a violin. I gave my seat to the old man at once. However, the boy sat down first. The old man had to stand nearby. After a while, the boy shouted to his grandpa for water and then dropped the empty bottle on the bus.

When I saw this, I got very angry. I think the boy should not only respect and take care of the old man but also keep the environment clean.

话题二：环保污染

例文：节约资源, 保护环境. 从我们身边的小事做起，假设你是一个注重“低碳”生活的中学生, 请以“My Low-carbon Lif e”为题，写一篇短文，简单描述自己的“低碳生活”。提示: (1)每天步行上学; (2)离丌教室时，关灯、电扇、电视等；（3)不用水时, 记住关水龙头，循环使用水；（4)充分使用纸张；（5)不使用塑料袋。

My Low-carbon Life

so we must do

taps, fans, TV sets and lights in time when we don’t need them. What’s more, water should be reused by us. Third, it is good to make full use of paper. We should use the both sides of the paper. By doing this, we can save many trees. At last, remember to go shopping with basket rather than plastic bags. I believe our life will become better and better if we can do these things.

Lower carbon, happier life. Let’s take actions.

例文：目前，我们的家乡正在实施“城乡清洁工程” (cleaning project).请你根据以下信息，给某英文报写一篇短文，就清洁卫生和食品安全两个方面谈谈你的看法和建议。状况：1.垃圾到处可见，污染空气、土地和水源。2.摆卖不安全食品，危害人们的健康。建议:1.城乡统一堆放垃圾。2.禁止生产不合格食物，不卖不买有害食品。

Presently, a cleaning project is carried out in our hometown. It is necessary for us to clean our living environment, because rubbish can be seen everywhere. The air, the soil and the water are all polluted. Some kinds of unsafe food which is harmful to people's health appear in the stores and some supermarkets.

I think we must stop the pollution and the harm. People must throw the waste into the rubbish bins. Don't allow anyone to produce and sell any unsafe food. Pay attention to the food before eating, sure it is safe. If we can do that all, our hometown will soon be cleaner and more beautiful

话题三：体育健康

例文：每个人都有不同的生活习惯，养成良好的生活习惯，会使我们拥有健康的体魄。良好的生活习惯有哪些呢？例如：每天按时起床和睡觉；饭前洗手；多吃水果和蔬菜，不吃垃圾食品；多参加体育锻炼；不乱扔垃圾和随地吐痰；不要再马路上玩耍，横过马路注意交通安全等。

How to Develop Good Living Habits

Everyone has different living habits. Good habits can make us keep healthy. As teenagers, what should we do?

In my opinion, everyone should get up and sleep on time every day. Don’t play or watch TV all night. That is bad for our health and affect our work. We should eat more vegetables and fruit, and eat less meat. I advise everybody to take more physical exercises. Don't eat junk food, for example instant noodles. Don't litter and spit. Don't play on the road. Remember to obey the traffic rules. No jaywalking.

In a word, if we want to keep healthy and happy, we must develop good living habits.

例文: 请以I Love Sports为题写一篇英语短文。1.你喜欢的体育活动有哪些？2.进行体育活动有哪些好处？3.你最喜欢的体育活动是什么？

help to build up our body and make us strength. It can also keep illness away. By doing sports, I’m becoming stronger and more confident(有信心的) than before. My favorite sport is swimming. I like swimming because I like playing with water. Also I think swimming is more popular than other sports and it’s easier to learn. I feel relaxed when I swim. I love sports! I think everyone should spend some time on sports every day because health is more important than other things in modern life.

话题四：语言学习

例文：假设你校要举办一期英语墙报,交流学习英语的感受,请你按下面表格中的内容要点提示写一篇题为“Find your own way to learn English” ,介绍你学习英语的体会。

1.最初的情况:学习困难。如：拼写听力差、语法出错、阅读速度慢。

2.现在的情况:学习方法。如：记

单元词汇表(vocabulary list) 多听磁带借书阅读3.学习体会:学好英语的关键。如：专心致志、自有方法。

Find your own way to learn English

There are many ways to learn English, but everyone should have his or her own way.

At first, I had many difficulties in Learning English. For example, I couldn’t spell some English words, and couldn’t understand what people said when they were talking fast. I often made mistakes in grammar and read very slowly.

Now I have found some ways to improve my English. I copy down the vocabulary lists for each unit and keep them in my mind. I listen to English tapes every day and I can understand mostly what people talk about. I often borrow English books and read them after class.

The most important thing to learn English well, I think, is to keep your mind on it, so that you can find your own ways to improve your English.

例文：假如你是张华，你的加拿大朋友Dave来信向你了解学习汉语的方法，清根据以下要点用英语写封回信。除以下外再提出一条建议。

要点： 1.加入汉语班学习，可向老师学习并与同学练习汉语；2.看中文电视、读中文书、报纸、杂志；

3.听、唱汉语歌，有助于汉语词汇；

4.交中国朋友，即可练习口语又可了解中国。

Dear Dave,

I’m glad to get your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here is my advice. First, As a foreign, you need to go and join a Chinese learning activity group, the most important thing is to remember as many Chinese words as possible.

Second, if you want to improve your listening ability, you’d better read Chinese books, listen to the tapes and

radio programs in Chinese. You can watch the Chinese TV programs or DVDs.

Third, you make some Chinese friends. Your friends can teach you a lot of Chinese songs and introduce some Chinese festivals to you, too.

In a word，I think we will have a good time .write to me soon.

话题五：旅游及交通安全

例文：越来越多汽车进入我们的家庭生活，改善了我们的生活，但同时也带来了很多问题，如塞车和车祸，给家庭和社会带来极大的危害。作为中学生，我们应该怎样做呢？内容包含：1.遵守交通规则，如走人行道/过斑马线。2.别在街道上或马路上玩耍和踢球。3.劝父母不能酒后驾车。

With more and more cars coming into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. But unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents.

Traffic safety is everybody's business. We must obey the rules. For example ,we must walk on walk side .when we cross zebra -crossing ,stop and look right and left ,then go across fast. Don’t play football on the road .we can tell our parents not to drink before they drive, not to run through red lights, not to talk and laugh while driving etc.

We can say cars are coming into our life, but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody's business can we be safe driving on roads and walking on walk side.

例文：目前，许多中学生不重视课外阅读。请你根据下表内容写一篇短文，对这一现状进行分析并提出建议。要点：一、不重视课外阅读的原因：1. 作业太多2. 没有读书习惯3. 时间花在电脑或网络上。二、课外阅读的好处1. 更多地了解世界2. 学会如何思考3. 生活更加丰富多彩。三、对学校或同学的建议（至少一点）

At present only a few students do some reading after class. Here are several reasons.

First of all, quite a lot of students are burdened with too much homework. Still others haven’t formed a habit of reading. They would rather spend their spare time on TV or on the Internet.

However, reading has many benefits. Through reading we can learn more about the world. Besides, it can help us think better. Last but not least, reading can make our life more colorful.

Here are my suggestions. For one thing, teachers are supposed to limit the amount of our homework so that we can have more time to read. For another, it’s a good idea to form reading clubs and learn from each other.

话题九:提出解决问题

例文：保持健康的体魄，拥有健康的生活方式对于我们每个人来说都是重要的。请以How to keep fit为题，从健康饮食、体育锻炼和养成良好的生活习惯等方面写一篇文章。

As we all know, it is important for us to keep healthy and have a healthy life. How to keep fit? First, we

food, which is bad for our

health. Second, to do sports is necessary for us. It is a good idea to run and play ball games. Last, it is useful for us to have a good living habit. We should go to bed early and get up early. We must wash our hands before meals. What’s more, we should brush our teeth twice a day.

例文：你的笔友Tom上周来信想你倾诉了他在班上学习成绩很好，但朋友很少，感到孤独的烦恼，并向你寻求帮助。请根据提示给他写回信，给他以帮助。

写作要点提示：1）简述Tom的烦恼；2）针对他的烦恼提出几点建议；3）表达你对他的鼓励与祝愿Dear Tom,

I got your letter last week. I hear that you do very well in all the subjects. Congratulations！But you have few friends. You feel lonely. You don’t know what you should do. I give some advice:

First, you should help the students who are in trouble, both in study and in life. They think you can get on well with them.

Then, join them. You can play and sing with them. Doing that can make you a member of them.

Last, after class you can talk with them. Share the sadness and happiness with them.

I hope you can make more friends and become happy.

Yours,

Lisa

例文Life is just like a mirror, you smile at it, and it smiles at you, too. 请你以“Learn to Smile”为题，根据下表所列的要点写一篇100词左右的文章（文章开头已给出）。

Learn to Smile

I remember a song by Westlife, the first sentence of it is “Just a smile and the rain is gone.” Do you like smiling? I think you should learn to smile.

First, we should learn to smile at yourself when something unpleasant happens in your life. If you fail an exam or you are misunderstood by your friends, don’t be sad. Just smile at yourself. Smiling at yourself brings back your confidence. Sometimes the one who beats you is not others, but yourself. And smile can also keep you healthy.

Second, it is important for you to learn to smile at others. It will make you communicate better with people. Smiling at others makes you happy as well.

In a word, smile is a kind of language belonging to everyone. It passes love and friendship and helps shorten the distance between you and other people. Living with a smile, every day will be shiny.

例文：假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Lucy计划今年暑假来江西度假，她向你了解江西城市生活和农村生活的情况，以便选择度假地点，给她写一封邮件，先介绍城市生活和农村生活的相同点和不同点，然后说说你自己更喜欢哪种生活，并说明理由。

Dear Lucy,

I'm very happy that you are coming to Jiangxi to spend your summer holiday. There are some similarities and differences between city life and country life. Both in the city and in the country, people's life is getting better and better. They pay more and more attention to keeping fit. However, there are some differences. In the city people go to supermarkets to buy what they need. They eat at home or in restaurants. They live in apartments and travel around by car or bus. After work, they go to cinemas, clubs or parks to relax themselves. In the country, people grow vegetables and rice by themselves. They live in houses and ride motorbikes or bicycles to go around. In their spare time they would like to visit their neighbors or watch TV at home. As for me, I prefer to live in the city because there are more places to enjoy myself. I often go to libraries, bookstores and science museums, where I can learn much about the world.

I am looking forward to meeting you! Best wishes!

作文训练

一、在初中三年的学习生活中，父母、老师给了我们很多帮助。假设你是李明，在即将毕业之际，用英语写一段文字以表达感激之情。感谢的对象在父母、老师中任选其一。

内容必须包括以下提示点：1、感谢的对象及原因；2、举例说明帮助你的事由、经过和结果；3、你的感受和打算。

注意：1、文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及地名；2、词数在80-100之间，已给出的文字不计入总词数。Dear __________

Words can’t show my thanks to you,

___________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

Best wishes

Yours

Li Ming

【答案】

Dear Mr/Mrs/Miss X,

Words can’t show my thanks to you.You’ve helped me a lot in my studies since I came to this school.When I was in trouble,you used to encourage me and give me some advice.At one time I failed to pass an English test and I was very sad about it.You came and cheered me up.You told me some good ways to improve English.With your help,I’ve made great progress in English.I’m so thankful to you for your kind help that I’ll work harder and try to do better in the future.

Best wishes

Yours

Li Ming

Dear Mum/Dad/Mum and Dad,

Words can’t show my thanks to you.You’ve taken good care of me in the past three years.When I was in trouble,you used to encourage me and cheer me up.Once I argued with my classmates and I didn’t know how to deal with it.You talked with me the whole evening and gave me a lot of advice on how to get along with others.With your help,I’ve become a popular boy/girl and made a lot of friends.I’m so thankful to you for your love and care that I’ll work harder and try to do better in the future.

Best wishes

Yours

Li Ming 【亮点说明】本文用了一些短语和句式，增加了文章的色彩。如：in trouble；At one time；make great progress in; take good care of; argue with; talk with; work hard等。短文中还用了一些连词如：

when，that，and等，使句子结构更加复杂化，增加了文章的亮点。

二、英语课上，老师向同学们介绍了2015年度“最美孝心少年”的感人事迹，你深受感动。请你用英语写一则日记，写出自己的感受。

内容要点及要求：

1. 表明自己将向“孝心少年”学习；

2. 你将在日常生活、学习中做些什么来孝敬父母；

3. 词数：80左右。开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。

提示词（可选用）：learn from, respect, care for, do some housework, study hard

Monday, June 30 Sunny This morning, our English teacher told us some stories about “the most beautiful filial piety youth in 2015 ”.

【答案】

Monday, June 30 Sunny

This morning, our English teacher told us some stories about “the most beautiful filial piety youth in 2013”. I was deeply moved. Those teenagers set us a good example in respecting and caring for parents.

I used to make my parents unhappy and now I feel ashamed about it. I think I should learn from them. I will help do some housework and take good care of my mum and dad when they are ill.

I will try my best to study hard so that I can enter the key high school in our city. I hope

I can become a filial piety youth like them.

(88 words)

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如:set an example for为……树立榜样；used to do sth过去常常做某事；take care of照顾；try one’s best to do sth尽力做某事；强调句式It is adj for sb to do sth，做某事对某人来说怎么样等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出彩。

三、为了配合“足球进校园”活动，你们班开展了一次主题班会。请你以足球迷的身份，根据下列表格中的要点提示，用英语向同学们介绍足球这项运动并谈谈自己的梦想。

注意：1. 词数90左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；

2. 短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；

3. 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

参考词汇：梅西 Messi

Dear classmates,

I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20,000 football-themed schools by 2020.

Thank you for your attention.

【答案】

Dear classmates,

I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20,000 football-themed schools by 2020.

Football has a very long history. It is liked by people all over the world. The World Cup takes place every four years. Playing football has lots of advantages. First, both boys and girls can take part in it. Second, it helps develop team spirit. What’s more, playing football is good for our health.

I’m a football fan. Messi is my hero. He has a gift for playing football. My dream is to become a famous football player like Messi. I hope China will hold the World Cup some day.

Thank you for your attention.

写作亮点：本文语言精炼，像第二自然段的Football has a very long history. It is liked by people

all over the world. The World Cup takes place every four years. it helps develop team spirit. What’s more, playing football is good for our health. 等等句子，简洁，但是句意表达清楚；同

时，本文用了被动语态、动名词作主语、不定式作表语等等语法形式，使表达生动；用了first, second

等使得短文层次清楚。

四、每年夏天，溺水事故频发。请你就此写一篇短文谈谈你的看法。

内容包括：

1.我们应该如何防止此类事故发生？（两点建议）

2.如果看到有人落水，我们应该如何施救？

3.呼吁同学们热爱生命，注意安全。

作文要求：1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中提到出现的学校真实姓名。

2.语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

Almost every year in summer, many people are reported dead from drowning accidents. How to prevent such sad accidents?

【答案】

Almost every year in summer, many people are reported dead from drowning accidents. How to prevent such sad accidents?In my opinion, we shouldn’t go swimming in dangerous places or places we know little abou, such sa reservoies and rivers . Second , we had better not swim when we feel tired or hungry.

If we see someone fall into the water, we shouldsave him in a perpor way . For example , we

can shout loudly as we can to get those with good swimming skills to help him.

Life is valuable . We should take it seriously. We must remember that safety should always

come first while swimming.

写作亮点：这篇短文内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。词汇和句型句式运用恰当。如提建议的句式：

In my opinion, we shouldn’t go…, we had better not swim….条件状语从句等。

五、假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter来信询问汉语中一些流行的网络语言的意思，请根据下列提示回

一封电子邮件。

●点赞（Dianzan）：赞同、喜爱

●任性（Renxing）：随心所欲

●秒杀（Miaosha）：快速达到目的

●土豪（Tuhao）：很富有

●。。。。。。

注意：1. 词数80-100；

2. 请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥；

3. 文中不能出现真实的校名和人名；

4. 邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Peter,

As the Internet is developing fast, more and more new words and phrases have been created

in Chinese. Here are some examples.

All the best!

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】

Dear Peter,

As the Internet is developing fast, more and more new words and phrases have been created

in China. Here are some example.

One of the most popular words is Dianzan,which is often used when you quite agree with someone.

Another example is Renxing. When you say somebody is Renxing,you mean that they will do whatever

they like. The phrase Miaosha first came from online shopping, which means you can complete your

shopping order before others. But now it’s widely used when you achieve your purpose in a very

short time. If you descibe somebody sa a Tuhao, you mean that he is very rich.

You can find lots of such new Chinese words. Keep learning , you’ll know more about our language

and culture.

All the best!

Yours

Li Hua

写作亮点：这篇短文语言无误，行文连贯，表达清楚。在具体的写作中句式丰富，如：定语从句which is

often used when you quite agree with someone. Another example is Renxing.，宾语从句; you mean

that they will do whatever they like,条件状语从句: If you descibe somebody sa a Tuhao, you mean

that he is very rich.等。

六、你校将开设一些特色课程，学生可根据兴趣进行选择。请根据以下内容提示为学校英文网页写一篇短文，介绍这些课程、提出你建议增设的课程并说明理由。

Students in our school are free to choose some special courses according to their interest. …注意：1. 参考词汇：模型制作 model making

2. 词数80左右（文章开头已给出，不计入词数）；

3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。

【答案】

Students in our school are free to choose some special courses according to their interest. These courses will help students relax themselves after school. There are many courses for them to choose, such as English drama, football, or model making. Here is more information.

If you want to improve your oral English, English drama may be the first choice. It is a good chance to practice not only oral English, but also performing skills. If you are interested in football, take the football course. It is good for your physical health. Besides, you can learn more about teamwork. What about model making? You will be amazed by the science world and become interested in it.

For my part, a painting course can be added, because students like drawing so much. I hope these courses would be helpful and each student would enjoy a bright and colorful school life here!

写作亮点：这是一篇优秀的范文。短文中作者按照题目的要求给我们介绍了学校即将开设的三个特色课程的活动内容，又发挥想象力补充了第四个课程painting course,内容完整，要点全面，语句通顺，符合题目要求。短文中作者使用了正确的时态和人称，句式表达符合英语的规范。作者还使用了丰富的句型和句式，如here are many courses for them to choose, such as English drama, football, or model making、It is a good chance to practice not only oral English, but also performing skills.、Besides, you can learn more about teamwork、For my part, a painting course can be added, because students like drawing so much等。这些句型的使用从整体上提高了作文的档次，显示了作者较高的写作能力。七、假设你叫李磊，请你针对这封信的内容，给这位父亲写封回信，谈谈你的看法。要求：条例清楚，语义连贯，句式规范，字迹工整。词数80左右。

Dear editor,

I'm sorry to trouble you. I have a daughter. She is 13 years old. She likes making telephone calls. As soon as he gets back from school, she picks up the telephone and calls her classmates. She talks and talks, sometimes for 2 or 3 hours. We can't use it. I tell him not to do it, but she is unhappy. What should I do?

A worried father 【答案】

Dear Sir,

Don't worry. You can have a word with her and tell her what to do. As a student, she must put her heart into the study. Making telephones too much is bad for her study. If she goes on doing it, you can tell it to her teachers. I think they can help you.

You can also find out whom your daughter calls up. You may ask their parents for help.

You may buy a telephone for her. She can make telephone calls with her own telephone, but she must pay for it by herself.

Yours,

Li Lei 书面表达做题策略：

1.详细审题，判定体裁→

2. 明确题材，确定时态、人称→

3. 按照要求，锁定要点→

4. 根据要点，选定词句→

5. 文笔流畅，结构紧凑—→

6. 一气呵成，誊写清楚→

7. 审慎推敲，消灭遗漏→

8. 单词拼写，时态、语态、语气，主谓、标点皆须细致→

9. 遵我八法，水到渠成！

八、卫生健康饮食：健康一直是人们关注的问题。我校要举行以“关爱健康”为题的主题班会,请根据下面提示内容谈谈你的看法,写一篇80字左右的发言稿（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。

主要内容有：保持健康的重要性，保持健康的方法或结论，你对健康的看法（如：多吃水果蔬菜，保持饮食平衡，多锻炼以健身强体，减少不良习惯）

Dear boys and girls，

【答案】

Dear boys and girls，

Here is my advice about how to keep healthy．As a middle school student , first you’d better do more exercise such as playing ball games running swimming and jumping rope．Then you should pay attention to your diet or meals．Don’t eat too much meat and sugar but more vegetables and fruit．Third you need enough sleep or rest．Next keep yourself happy．As people often say smiling makes younger．Last you mustn’t drink wine or smoke．They are bad for your health．That is my advice．I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life．Thank you, bye!

九、“How to Deal

提示词：actively(积极的), review(复习), fear the exams(害怕考试), fail(失败), form some good habits(养成好的习惯), diets(饮食), relaxed(轻松的)

要求:1.用上所给要点和提示词（可适当发挥），使短文连贯、通顺;

2.词数80左右，短文首句已给出，不计入总词数;

3.文中不得提及考生所在学校及自己的姓名。

How to Deal with the Exam Stress

Everyone may have the exam stress. A little bit of stress can be a good thing to us.

【答案】

Possible version:

How to Deal with the Exam Stress

Everyone may have the exam stress. A little bit of stress can be a good thing to us. If we have proper stress, we can think actively and work harder. Besides it can remind us to review our lessons in time to remember them. So we can pass the exams easily.

However, if we have too heavy stress, we can’t sleep well at night and we may feel too tired. We may fear the exams too much and fail in the end.

In my opinion, to deal with stress, we’d better plan and prepare well. We should also form some good habits, such as enough exercise and healthy diets. Then we’ll feel relaxed and do well in the exams.

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头考试带来的压力的好处，接下来介绍考试压力的不利之处，最后指出我们解决考试压力。此处用了remind us to，feel too tired，too heavy stress，in the end，form some good habits, do well in等短语。这些短语的运用也让文章增色不少。

十、假设你们班在毕业前夕讨论填报高中志愿问题，基本上有两种观点，有点同学认为在本地就读高中比在外地就读高中有利，但有的同学认为在外地比在本地有利，他们的观点如下：假设你是李明，九年级三班学生，请根据以下的信息写一篇报道。

提示词：study in our city., study out of our city, convenient, be independent (独立), good condition

Dear Editor:

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Yours,

Li Ming

【答案】

Dear editor,

I’m a student in Class One , Crade Three . In the class meeting we had a discussion about which senior high school we’d beter enter , the schools in or out of our city .

Some students think it’s convenient to study in our city while studying out of our city costs lots of money and wastes much time on the way.

Other students think that the schools out of our city may have good conditions and it’s helpful for students to learn to be independent. Besides, without so many old classmates around, they would have less chance to play or go to the net bars together.

The discussion was very heated.I think studying in or out of our city has some advantages and disadvantages. As for me, I prefer studying in my own city.

Yours , Li Ming 写作亮点：这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。

1, 对成长过程中可能遇到的问题进行简要描述，提出自己的观点、建议等。主要涉及如何释放学习压力、调节情绪，如何处理同学关系等。句型

1．Molly is an easygoing girl who gets along well with everyone.

2．We should put more time and energy into study and try to be a student with both a kind heart and good grades.

3．We all want to grow happily and healthily, so we have to do some things.

4．Life is not always full of sunshine. When we are in trouble, we should be brave enough to deal with problems.

5．The more knowledge you have, the more confidence you will have.

【佳作赏析】 Han Mei is an easygoing girl who_gets_along_well_with_everyone. She is also talented_in (be talented in“有……的天赋”，高级词汇) performing. What's the most important, she is warmhearted (结合要点：写同学的情况). Once she knew a girl in her neighborhood who had so serious an illness that a large amount of money was needed. She called on all the kids to give away pocket money to the unlucky girl. Besides, she organized a charity show to raise more money (结合要点：描写同学的所做的事情). When_the_girl_and_her_parents_got_the_money_, they were really moved. Han Mei should also put more time and energy into study and try to be a student with both a kind heart and good grades(结合要点：提出建议).

假如你是李华，准备参加学校举办的主题为“快乐成长”的英语演讲比赛。请按要求写一篇短文，主要内容包括：1.保持快乐的心情；2.努力学习；3.积极参加体育锻炼。

Dear friends, we all want to grow happily and healthily, so we have to do some things. First, we should keep ourselves happy. Life is not always full of sunshine. When we are in trouble, we should be brave enough to deal with problems. Next, we must study hard. The more knowledge we have, the more confidence we will have. Finally, we have to do sports to keep fit. We can go running, play ball games or take a walk after a day's study. If we do those things well, we will grow happily and healthily.

2,语言学习困难，要求考生针对该现象进行描述，并提出合理的建议并阐述自己的观点。主要涉及教学方式的变化、课堂学习方式、英语学习方法等。

1．I enjoy learning English, but I am not good at it.

2．It is hard for me to understand other people when they talk. 3．I find English grammar is very hard to learn.

4．Could you please tell me how to improve my spoken English? 5．In English class, we should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes when necessary.

6．We should take part in all kinds of activities, such as reading, writing, having discussions and playing games.

7．It's very important to be confident when you learn a foreign language.

8．I think that doing lots of listening, speaking, reading and writing practice is the secret of becoming a good language learner

假如你是韩梅，对英语很感兴趣，但不知如何提高英语听、说、读、写的能力，语法对你来说也是一大难题。因此，你打算给你远在加拿大的笔友Kate发一封电子邮件，谈谈这些问题。

Dear Kate，

I'm writing to you for some questions about learning English. I enjoy_learning_(enjoy doing 的用法) English, but_(转折词的使用，流畅自然) I don't do well in it (结合要点：写学习英语很棘手). It isn't easy for me to understand other people when they talk. So_(连词的使用，过渡自然) I feel worried._I_think_(引出个人的看法) that doing_lots_of_listening,_speaking,_reading_and_writing_practice_ is the secret of becoming a good language learner (结合要点：写成为好的语言学习者的秘诀). Another thing that_I_find_very_hard_ is English grammar (结合要点：写出了英语语法很难). However_(副词的使用，自然连贯), it is very necessary for me. Could you please tell me how you learn English in Canada (结合要点：提出问题)? Are you the same as we Chinese students?

I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

回想三年的英语学习历程，丰富多彩的英语课堂活动一定给你留下了许多难忘的回忆。请你以“What should we do in English class？”为题写一篇英语短文，谈谈在英语课堂上学生应该怎样做，才能使英语学习更有效。

提示：1.Listen to the teacher. 2．Take part in activities.

3．Be confident in ourselves.

What should we do in English class?

In English class, we should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes when necessary. Try to answer questions in English. We should take part in all kinds of activities, like reading, writing, having discussions and playing games. We need to work in groups with our classmates to help each other and learn from each other. It's very important to be confident. Speak English loudly in front of the class and never be afraid of making mistakes. In this way, we can make much progress.

3,健康生活问题，试题主要涉及健康问题、饮食习惯、食品安全等。1．Many young people like eating junk food very much. 2．Here is some advice on how to keep healthy.

3．We must have healthy food rather than junk food.

4．Though junk food is delicious, I prefer traditional Chinese food. 5．To keep healthy, we should eat less junk food.

6．It's a good idea to have more healthy food like fruit and vegetables.

近来，中小学生的健康问题日益引起人们的关注。请用英语就该问题谈谈你的看法。

内容包括：1.列举中小学生面临的健康问题。

2．谈谈怎样才能保持健康。

Many students like eating junk food very much (结合要点：写中学生面临的饮食健康问题). They have poor eyesight (结合要点：写中学生面临的身体健康问题) because_they_don't_have_the_right_way_to_read_ . And (连接词，使之与上文连贯) they often play computer games for several hours (结合要点：写中学生面临的娱乐健康问题). Here_are_some_suggestions on how_to_keep_healthy in our life. We must have healthy food, rather than junk food. Reading_in_a_right_way is good for our eyesight. We should stay away from computer games. If_we_can_do_these_things, I think(结合要点：明确提出观点) we will keep fit.

健康生活关系到青少年的成长。最近，你们班就KFC(肯德基)食品的优缺点进行了讨论。请你根据下表提示简要描述同学们的看法，并发表自己的观点。

Recently, our class held a discussion about

the advantages and disadvantages of KFC. Here are the results of it. On the one hand, KFC has its advantages. It's delicious and eating in KFC is a kind of fashion. It's also a good way to experience

western food. On the other hand, KFC also has its disadvantages. Most food in KFC is junk food, which is bad for our health. Besides, the food may not be safe because it's not fresh. What's more, the food in KFC is usually very expensive.

Though KFC is delicious, I prefer traditional Chinese food which is more delicious. To keep healthy, we should eat less junk food. It's a good idea to have more healthy food like vegetables and fruit, just as the saying goes, “An apple a day keeps the doctor away.”

4,未来的计划和设想，对计划或打算进行描述，同时表达自己的愿望及计划实施的效果等。

1．The summer/winter holiday is coming.

2．I'm going to have a good rest and relax myself.

3．I'm sure I'll have an interesting and meaningful holiday.

4．If possible, I'd like to go to Beijing for a visit of the Great Wall. 5．We are going to meet at the school gate at 7：00 on Sunday morning.

6．I am going to take part in the social activities so that I can know more about the society.

7．I will try to spend more time in chatting with my parents and help them to do some housework.

8．I will read more useful books because reading more books is not only interesting but also can make me learn more knowledge.

紧张的初中学习生活就要结束了，你即将迎来一个轻松的暑假。请根据下面方框内的提示写一篇短文，谈谈你的假期计划。

【佳作赏析】The summer holiday is coming . I'm

going to have a good rest and learn to relax myself (结合要点：描写好好休息，学会放松). I will read more useful books because reading more books is not only interesting but also can make me learn more knowledge . I will try to spend more time in chatting with my parents and help them to dosome housework (结合要点：写陪父母聊

天，帮他们做家务). I am going to take part in the social activities (结合要点：描写参加社会活动) so that I can know more about the society. If possible, I'd like to go to Beijing for a visit of the Great Wall (适当发挥拓展). I'm sure I'll have an interesting and meaningful summer holiday.

初三毕业在即，你班将组织一次课外活动。假如你是班长，请根据提示内容，用英文写一篇80词左右的

活动计划。

内容要点：1．下周日早上8点在校门口集合，下午2点返回； 2．坐公交车前往寸金公园 (Cunjin Park)；

3．唱歌、跳舞、野餐、与老师合影；

Our class is going to have a picnic in Cunjin

Park next Sunday. We are going to meet at the

school gate at 8：00 a．m. on Sunday morning.

And we will be back at 2：00 p．m. We plan

to take a bus to Cunjin Park. We will have

many activities there, for example, singing,

dancing, having a picnic and taking photos

with our teachers. I'm sure we will have a

lot of fun. I will ask my classmates to take

plenty of food and drink. We should pay

attention to the safety. And we must keep away from fire all the time.

5,人物故事类要求考生对人物进行描写。主要涉及描写人物的简历、变化以及自己对此人物的看法等。

1．My friend Jenny comes from New York.

2．She has a round face and often wears a pair of glasses.

3．He often helps his classmates with the homework, and also helps the people in trouble.

4．I want to be a person like Helen from now and get along well with everyone.

5．I miss so many good friends, especially my best friend—David. 6．He is a 15yearold student,

who is outgoing.

7．He is good at playing basketball.

8．I hope that he will become a famous person in the future and we can keep in touch with each

other

在初中三年的英语学习中，Daniel的善良和助人为乐等优秀品质给同学们留下了深刻的印象。请根据下表

提示，用英语写一篇题为“My Friend Daniel”的短文。

My friend Daniel comes from Beijing Sunshine Secondary School. He has a round face and often

wears a pair of glasses (结合要点：描写图片中人物的长相). He is good at playing computer games

(结合要点：写擅长玩电脑游戏), but_(转折词的使用，使行文跌宕起伏) he dislikes sports. He has many

good personalities. He is helpful (结合要点：写乐于助人). He often_( 使文章流畅自然) helps his

classmates with the homework, and also_( 使文章过渡自然) helps the old cross the road. He is

kind to others (结合要点：写对人友善). He works at the Helping Hands Club. He is willing to help

the people in need. He is also creative (结合要点：写有创造性). For_example_(举例说明，使文

章生动), he can create a TV program. He is generous to his friends (结合要点：适当展开). He likes

to share his things with them. So (so一词引出作者学到的内容) I want to be a person like Daniel

from now and get along well with everyone.

亲爱的同学，你即将初中毕业了。在这三年的学习生活中，你一定结交了许多好朋友，请你用英语写一篇短文，介绍一下你的好朋友Li Lei。

要点如下： 1．他乐于助人，性格外向，兴趣广泛；

2．他成绩优秀，经常在学习上帮助我；3．我准备送他一个……以表达感谢；4．我对他的祝福和希望。We are graduating from school soon. I miss so many good friends, especially my best friend—Li Lei.

He is a 15yearold student, who is outgoing. He is always willing to help others. He has lots of interests such as swimming, reading and drawing. He is good at all the subjects and he often helps me with my lessons so that I can keep up with my classmates.

We are going to leave school. I'll send him a pen to thank him for helping me so much. I hope that he will become a famous person in the future. And we can keep in touch with each other.

6,节假日活动、旅游景点、旅游线路以及写游览日记等。

1．It's a good idea to go traveling during the summer vacation. 2．I think the best place to visit is the Great Wall.

3．We can see many ancient buildings, including palaces, temples and towers in Xi'an. 4．You'd better go with your friends or family.

5．I am going to travel to London with my parents after the final exam. 6．We'll be away for about seven days.

7．I hope that you can provide me with some information about the customs of France.

8．I would like to travel to some exciting places this summer holiday.

旅游可以让人身心放松，增长见识……初中毕业在即，很多同学想利用暑假去旅游。请你根据下面的内容提示，写一篇短文，并给出旅行建议。

内容提示： 1．Where is the best place to go?2．What is the place special for? 3．What should you pay attention to?

It's a good idea to go traveling during the summer vacation. I think the best place to visit is the Palace Museum(结合要点：点明旅游的最好的地方). As_we_all_know ( 高级用法), the Palace Museum, also known as the Purple Forbidden City, is_wonderful and famous_for ( 增加了文章的亮点) its long history in the world. We can see a lot of ancient buildings, including palaces, temples and towers (结合要点：描述其特殊的地方). If_we_want_to_visit_the_Palace_Museum , we should pay_attention_to (pay attention to“注意”，高级短语) our safety. We_had_better (had better “最好”，后跟动词原形，增强了语言表达能力) go with our friends or our family(结合要点：提出合理的建议).

假如你叫李华，是某中学初三学生。你计划于毕业考试后去英格兰旅行。请根据下列提示给你的英格兰笔友写一封信，告诉他你的安排并就相关问题向他询问。

1．考试结束后和父母一起去英格兰旅行；2．计划在英格兰停留十天；3．向他询问英格兰的风俗习惯；4．请他建议去英格兰哪些地方旅行。

Dear Ben，

How is everything? I am going to travel to England with my parents after finishing the final

exam. We'll stay there for about ten days. But I don't know much about it. I hope that you can provide me with some information about the customs of England. I would like to travel to exciting places in England. Please introduce some interesting places to me.

I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours truly，

Li Hua

7,情感问题，要求结合自己的经历或者感受进行写作。常见的情感类表达有爱、快乐、微笑、幸福、痛苦和烦恼等。

1．There may be something unpleasant in our life.

2．Smiling to ourselves can bring back our confidence and beat the unhappy feelings.

3．We should learn to smile to others, and it will help us to get closer to others.

4．I believe our world will be more wonderful and our life will be happier and happier.

5．I get much help and love from many people in my life.

6．When I have problems with my study, my teachers are so patient and helpful. 7．The person I love most is my mother. 8．When I grow up, I will do what I can to make my mother happy. 微笑是一种态度。请你以“Learn to Smile”为题，为你校《英语园地》写一篇稿件。

内容要点包括：1．学会对自己微笑；2．学会对他人微笑；3．微笑是一种语言。

Smile is an attitude for life (引出话题). We should face everything with smile.In our life, there may be something unpleasant (高级用法). Smiling to ourselves can bring back our confidence and (连接词，表示并列关系) beat the unhappy feelings(结合要点：微笑对自己的作用). Sometimes (副词，使过渡自然流畅), the greatest enemy is ourselves. Most important of all, smiling benefits our health. We should also (连词，使行文流畅自然) learn to smile to others, and it will help_us_to_get_ closer to other people. Therefore (连接词，表示总结), smile is the most widely understood language (结合要点：微笑是一种语言).

Let's learn to smile. I_believe (引出个人观点) our world will be more wonderful and our life will be happier_and_happier．

在日常学习和生活中，你一定得到过很多人的帮助和关爱，此时此刻你会有很多感谢的话要说。请根据下面所给的提示用英语写一篇短文。

提示：1.感谢的人：亲人、老师、同学……2．感谢他们的原因：生活方面、学习方面……3．对他们的美好祝福。

In my life, I get lots of help and love from many people. Now I want to express my thanks to them. First, I want to thank my parents. They provide a happy life for me. They do much for me and give me so much love. Second, I want to thank my teachers. They are so hardworking. When I have problems with my study, they are so patient and helpful. Third, I want to thank my classmates. They make me feel less lonely. I will remember the days we play and study together.

Thank you, my parents, my teachers and my classmates. I hope you are in good health and have a better future.

9,环保：先列举环境中出现的某一现象，要求考生先就该现象进行描述，然后提出建议，最后阐述自己的观点。主要涉及低碳生活、节约资源、保护环境等。