【英语】中考英语书面表达答题技巧及练习题(含答案)

一、英语书面表达

1．亲爱的同学们，初中生活即将结束，你们一定有很多的感触.假如你是Tony,名城中学九（1）班的学生。请以 My junior high school life为题,写一篇80词左右的短文。

提示：

1.个人基本情况介绍

2.校园（校园干净而美丽，活动非富多彩）；老师（传授知识，教会做人,经常鼓励）；同学（和睦相处，互相学习，共同进步）。

3.对学校、老师、同学表达感谢和祝福。

要求：

1. 文章包含以上提示内容，适当发挥。

2.文中不能出现真实的校名和人名。

【答案】My junior high school life

My name is Tony. I am studying in Grade 9.As time goes by, my colorful junior middle school life is coming to an end. I’m glad to tell you something about my school life.

Our campus is clean and beautiful, and there are all kinds of activities. Our teachers teach us rich knowledge and how to behave ourselves. They also encourage us to work hard. We all get on well with our classmates. Besides, we learn from each other and make progress together.

I thanks for my school, my teachers and my classmates. Wish them better.

【解析】

【分析】

这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我的初中生活。

【详解】

结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：My name is……，I’m glad to……，Our campus is……，Our teachers teach us……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。【点睛】

本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我的个人情况，接下来介绍我们的校园，老师和同学，最后对学校、老师、同学表达感谢和祝福。此处go by, come to an end, tell sb about sth, all kinds of, behave oneself, encourage sb to do sth, get on with, learn from, make progress等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

2．书面表达

假如你是九年级学生李华，你的美国笔友Billy发来邮件询问你平时锻炼的情况。请你根据以下信息，给Billy回封电子邮件，并建议他每周都要花些时间锻炼身体。

写作要点：

1. 你最近正忙于为即将到来的体育测试（physical test）做准备。

2. 介绍你平时锻炼的情况：

（1）每天锻炼的时间：不到一个半小时。

（2）偶尔不锻炼的原因：作业多，没时间。

（3）擅长的体育运动：球类运动。

3. 谈谈锻炼给你带来了哪些好处。

写作要求：

1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。

2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。

3. 字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清晰。

4. 至少80词。

Dear Billy,

It’s my g reat pleasure to receive your e-mail.

___________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________ ____________

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Billy,

It’s my great pleasure to recei ve your e-mail. You wanted to know about my usual exercise. I’ll tell it to you.

I am busy preparing for the coming physical test. So I take exercise less than an hour every day. Sometimes I don’t do exercise, because I have so much homework that I have n o time to do it. I do well in playing balls.

Doing exercise can help me keep a strong body, and it is good for my health. Besides, I think it can make me relaxed by doing exercise. So I advise you to spend more time doing exercise every week.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【分析】

这是一篇给材料作文，给Billy回封电子邮件，介绍自己平时的锻炼情况，并建议他每周都要花些时间锻炼身体。

【详解】

结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I am busy……，because I have……，Doing exercise can help……，So I advise you to……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

【点睛】

本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头表示很高兴收到Billy的来信，接下来介绍我平时的锻炼情况，最后指出锻炼给我带来的好处以及我建议Billy要多锻炼。此处be busy doing sth, prepare for, do well in, be good for, advise sb to do sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

3．书面表达

随着电子时代的到来，西方文化如潮水般涌来，中国传统文化的传承面临着巨大的挑战。有人认为学校应当开设传统文化课（set up traditional culture classes），但也有人认为没有必要。假如你是Mike,请你用英语写一封邮件，给你校英文报投稿写一篇短文，词数80左右，谈谈你对开设传统文化课的看法。

Dear editor,

As we all know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid development if international technology nowadays. _____________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _____________

Yours,

Mike

【答案】Dear editor,

As we know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid development of international technology nowadays. In my opinion, it’s necessary for schools to set up traditional culture classes.

First, traditiona l culture is the root of Chinese. As Chinese, we shouldn’t give up our traditional culture and run after Western culture. Second, traditional culture classes can give students chances to know more about our nation. They can raise their sense of national pride. Last but not least, setting up traditional culture classes can spread and develop our Chinese culture.

All in all, it is of great importance to set up traditional culture classes in schools. Let’s call on more schools to set up traditional culture classes!

Yours,

Mike

【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，谈谈我对开设传统文化课的看法。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Chinese traditional culture is facing……，it’s necessary for schools to……，we shouldn’t……，They can raise……，it is of great importance to……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注

意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了中国传统文化面对的问题，接下来介绍我认为开设传统文化课的必要性的原因，最后号召更多的学校开设传统文化课。此处because of，in one’s opinion, give up, know about, last but not least, set up, all in all, call on等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

4．诚信是中华民族的传统美德，也是社会主义核心价值观内容之一。而你的朋友Daming最近却被诚信危机所困扰。上周末，他本来和Lingling相约一起去电影院看电影，但是他却因为在家复习考试，把这件事忘了，直到第二天才想起来。因此，Lingling很生气，并且不愿接受Daming的道歉。

请你就此事给校报投稿，以“The Importance of Promise”为题，内容要点如下：

1、简述事件；

2、谈谈自己的看法，并给Daming一些建议。

注意：

1、词数80—100；

2、行文连贯，逻辑合理；

3、文中不能出现真实的校名和人名；

4、文章的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

The Importance of Promise

Dear editor,

People always emphasize（强调） the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise.

Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it.

Yours,

Tony 【答案】The Importance of Promise

Dear editor,

People always emphasize（强调）the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise.

Recently, a thing happened to my friend, and I think it was really his fault. Last weekend, my friend Daming had a date with his friend Lingling to watch a movie. But he totally forgot it that day because of his review for his exam. So Lingling got too angry to forgive him. In my opinion, it was really his fault. Forgetting the date not only led to Lingling’s anger, but also made her lose trust in him. Keeping promises is always the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation. What Daming should do now is to ask for forgiveness and promise that he will never do that again. Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it.

Yours,

Tony

【解析】

【分析】

本文为一篇稿件，需要学生通过大明和玲玲之间，大明没有信守承诺的事情，谈自己的看法。信守承诺是中华民族的传统美德，在写作过程中，注意文章结构，先写出大明和玲玲之间的事情，然后再说自己对此的看法。

【详解】

首先，第一句话直接点明作者的观点，大明是犯错了的。然后仔细阐述了事情发生的经过。接下来说出自己对此事件的看法，不信守承诺会导致失去别人的信任，对大明的建议是除了认错之外，还需要再次保证永不再犯。

【点睛】

文章结构清晰，符合逻辑，先表明自己观点，然后阐述事情，提出自己的观点和建议。整篇文章在谋篇布局上，比较严密。除此之外，中间也使用了一些连接词，例如but，so，because of等，使文章更加通顺。

5．假设你是来自中国的中学生李华,打算参加当地组织的国外冬令营,看完了这个网页后,你打算给Liz Payne留言,表达你在冬令营期间想去London Canal Museum参观的愿望。

内容包括：

1.简单介绍自己；

2.留言目的（包含冬令营的时间,听Liz Payne的讲座）；

3.预期收获。

作文要求：

1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名；

2.语句连贯,词数80个左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数,也不必抄写在答题卡上。

Dear Liz Payne,

I’m Li Hua,

Yours,

Li Hua 【答案】Dear Liz Payne,

I’m Li Hua, a middle school student learning in Grade 3 in China. I’m writing to tell you that our city will have a Winter Camp during this winter vacation. I hope to have a chance to visit London Canal Museum. From https://www.360docs.net/doc/989411330.html,, I know you will have a report “An Update on the Cotswold Canals”February 6th, which will happen during the same period of our Winter Camp. And I also hope to listen to your talk so that I can know more about the Stroudwater Canal, the Thames and Severn Canal. What’s more, I hope to learn more about London Canal Museum and even more about the UK.

I’m looking forward to your reply!

Yours,

Li Hua 【解析】

这篇作文要求我们以中学生李华的身份，给Liz Payne写一个留言。文章内容主要包括三个部分：首先是介绍自己的身份；然后写留言的目的，包括冬令营的时间、想要去参观London Canal Museum以及听Liz Payne的讲座；最后简单介绍一下你的预期的收获。写作时，应根据题目的这些要求，组织语言，串联成一篇短文。通过分析可知，这篇短文应使用第一人称I来叙述，时态应以一般将来时态和一般现在时为主。注意英语句子的表达和汉语习惯是不同的，不能逐词翻译，而应从句子的整体考虑，使用正确的句式结构以及适当的词汇、短语和句型，保证句子的准确性和语言的地道。另外还应注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯。穿插一些高级词汇和复杂句式，提升文章档次和水平，使表达更加流畅。

点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目要求的所有信息，没有遗漏要点。作者主要从三个方面叙述：首先介绍了自己的身份和写留言的目的；接下来详细介绍了自己参加这次冬令营的愿望；最后是一个简单的结尾。如果分段叙述效果则会更好，那样会使文章的层次更加清晰。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以第一人称、一般将来时和一般现在时为主，谓语动词形式准发，语法规范，符合英语句子的表达习惯。短文以简单句结构为主，也使用了一些复合句和较高级的句型，如I’m writing to tell you that our city will have a Winter Camp during this winter vacation.中使用了宾语从句；From https://www.360docs.net/doc/989411330.html,, I know you will have a report “An Update on the Cotswold Canals” February 6th, which will happen during the same period of our Winter Camp.中有一个非限制性定语从句；And I also hope to listen to your talk so that I can know more about the Stroudwater Canal, the Thames and Severn Canal.中有一个结果状语从句等。整篇文章语句通顺、意思连贯、表达流畅。

6．为了宣传和弘扬中华优秀传统文化, 某双语杂志将举办征文活动来介绍中国的经典故事, “程门立雪（Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully）”是其中一个选题。请你根据下面的内容提示, 用英语写一篇短文参加此活动。

内容提示：

1. 杨时去拜见老师程颐一老师在睡觉一杨时在雪地等一老师醒来发现杨时在门口

2. 通过介绍这个故事, 发表你的看法或者观点。

要求：

1. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯：词数：100左右.

2. 不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称、老师和同学的真实姓名。

【答案】Long long ago, there was a man called Yangshi. Once he went to visit his teacher, Chengyi. Unfortunately, Mr. Cheng was sleeping in the room. He didn’t wake up the teacher. So he stood in front of the gate. At that moment, there were snowflakes flying over his head and it was very cold. But yangshi still stood in the snow until Mr. Cheng woke up. When the teacher woke up, the snow was very deep. Yangshi was like a snowman standing at the gate. Finally, the teacher was moved deeply.

After reading the story, I think we should respect our teacher. We should study hard.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇材料作文，主要介绍中国的经典故事, “程门立雪（Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully）”。目的是宣传和弘扬中华优秀传统文化。时态为一般过去时，灵活运用动词的过去式。作文要包含材料上的所有信息，通过介绍这个故事，发表看法或者观点。写作时，避免汉语式英语。注意固定搭配及主谓一致的问题，例如:There was/ were...注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，具有条理性。

7．俗话说，国有国法，家有家规。家规是中华民族传统文化的重要组成部分。我们的国家主席习近平多次强调良好家风家规的重要性。假如你是李华，请你根据以下表格内的要点提示，并结合你的家庭实际情况，给你的英国笔友Sam写一封信，向他介绍一下你的家规，并向他展示一个温情智慧的中国家庭。

要点提示：

写作要求:

1.文章须包括所给内容要求，可适当发挥，使行文流畅、通顺；

2.省略号部分请各用2-3句话作适当发挥；

3.词数90左右。文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Sam,

Haven’t written to you for a long time! As you know, family rules are an important part of our Chinese traditional culture. Today I’m writing to tell you something about my family rules. There are many rules that we have to follow.

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________

What about you? Do you have any family rules? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon!

Yours,

Li Hua 【答案】Dear Sam,

Haven’t written to you for a long time! As you know, family rules are an important part of you Chinese traditional culture. Today I’m writing to tell you something about my family rules.

There are many rules that we have to follow. First, you should respect the old and love the young. You are also supposed to be kind to other. Next, it’s a good habit to be honest and keep your words. What’s more, you should keep studying , go to bed and get up on time. You mustn’t stay up too late.

In my opinion, every family mu st keep rules and children shouldn’t develop bad habits, like telling lies and be rude to others. We should be strict with ourselves.

The family rules also make a great difference to me. I learn to think about others’ feelings and Chinese traditional culture.

What about you? Do you have any family rules? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon! Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【详解】

本文属于材料作文，向山姆介绍你的家规并向他展示一个温情的中国家庭。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如be supposed to, be kind to, keep your words, what’s more, in one’s opinion, develop bad habits, be rude to, be strict with, make a difference to以及it is a good habit to be honest中it作形式主语。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

【点睛】

写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：

认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词

数是否符合要求等。

8．上周，你们班就初中生能否骑电动自行车上学进行了一次讨论。现在，请你根据下表用英语写一篇介绍讨论情况的短文。注意：

1.短文须包括写作提示和表格中所列的全部内容；

2.时态运用正确，书写工整、规范；

3.80-100词。生词提示：electric adj.电

【答案】Last week， our class had a discussion about whether junior students could ride electric bicycles to go to

school.25 students of our class agreed with it， because they said it was convenient for them and it could take

them less time to go to school. But the other 35 students didn’t agree with them. They said it was not safe for

the junior students to get to school by electric bicycles， for they were too young. They also said in the morning

the traffic was busy and the students couldn’t ride electric bicycles quickly.

【解析】

试题分析：本题要求以初中生能否骑电动自行车上学进行了一次讨论。根据所给要点写一篇80-100词左右的英语短文，而且要做到表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯。根据所给要点可知，本文主要以一般过去时态书写。要注意把每一个要点都表达出来，不要遗漏任何一个，书写时一定注意时态的正确使用。观点分明，谈及理由按照要求至少要各写两点。并注意上下文要语句贯通。并且要围绕主题适当发挥。

写作亮点：短文中作者按照题目的要求，给我们介绍了持不同观点的学生各自的理由，结构清晰，要点全面。时态运用正确，书写工整规范。该文中以下几个句子用得很好。Because they said it was convenient for them and it could take them less time to go to school. They also said in the morningthe traffic was busy and the students couldn’t ride electric bicycles quickly.阐述各自观点时，理由也很充分。

考点：提纲类作文。

9．中学生在成长过程中经常会碰到一些烦恼。假设你是李华，请根据下表提示，用英语写一篇发言稿，在班会上谈谈你遇到的烦恼以及你自己的做法。

要求：1. 词数100左右，开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

2. 所写内容必须包括表格中所有的信息，并作适当的发挥。

3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。

Hello everyone,

I am Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them.

That’s all. Thank you!

【答案】Hello everyone,

I am Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them.

I am not very tall and very common. But I don’t care and I believe in myself.

My par ents don’t understand me and I have very few friends. I encourage myself to be kind to others and learn to communicate with others very well.

I often feel stressed because of my study and I don’t have many chances to join the after-class activities. I will plan my time very carefully and improve my study in a very good way. Try to join as many activities as possible and achieve a balance between study and hobbies.

That’s all. Thank you!

【解析】

试题分析：本题是一篇给材料作文，要求用英语写一篇发言稿，在班会上谈谈你遇到的烦恼以及你自己的做法。要求从个人外貌特点、与人沟通及学习压力等方面进行写作。要包含表格中所有的信息，并作适当的发挥。短文用第一人称形式，一般现在时态。

写作亮点：短文开头直奔主题：我想要谈谈我的烦恼及怎样处理他们；后面三段分别从外貌上的烦恼、与父母交流上的障碍、学习上的压力几方面分别谈论自己的烦恼及处理的方式，生动具体，条理分明。文中的不定式作宾补、作定语、作宾语用得准确恰当；and连接的并列句、并列谓语等等都使短文显得简捷生动。

【考点定位】考查提纲类作文。

10．根据要求完成大作文，词数：80-100词．

丰富的校本课程可以让你的生活更精彩．请根据下列图示中所提供的特色课程，按内容及

要求，用英文完成写作．

内容包括：

1．Which course（s）do you like？

2．Why do you like it/them？

3．What can you learn from it/them？

写作要求：

1．依据你的兴趣选择课程（数量不限）；

2．短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；

3．文中不得出现真实的校名及姓名．

Of all the courses，I like __________

________________．

【答案】例文

Of all the courses, I like sports best because I am interested in playing basketball. I can make a lot of friends when I play basketball. And I will learn the spirit of teamwork. So I want to choose sports.

I also like paper cutting because it is very interesting and I can learn more about traditional Chinese culture. That’s why I want to choose paper cutting.

I often help my parents with housework when I am free. So I want to learn how to cook delicious food. I think it is very useful course because I’d li ke to cook something different for my parents.

I believe these courses will make my life more colorful.

【解析】

【详解】

1.题干解读。本题属于材料作文，主要讲述你喜欢的学科、原因以及你从你选择的学科中学到了什么。注意时态的运用，灵活运用所学单词、短语和句型。切记不要遗漏要点。

2.例文点评：这是一篇优秀的文章，很好地完成了试题中所规定的内容。条理清晰。前三段分别讲述他所喜欢的学科（体育、剪纸和厨艺），并解释愿意以及收获，最后一段讲述这些学科对他的生活的意义。

3.高分亮点：

单词短语：like...best, be interested in, make friends, the spirit of teamwork, want to do, help sb do, be free, would like to do, make sth adj以及形容词修饰复合不定代词时，形容词放后面。高分句型：That’s why I want to choose paper cutting中why引导的表语从句。

【点睛】

首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如like...best, be interested in, make friends, the spirit of teamwork, want to do, help sb do, be free, would like to do, make sth adj以及形容词修饰复合不定代词时，形容词放后面等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。