专题06 书面表达(第01期)-2019届高三英语百所好题速递分项解析汇编

【宁夏银川一中2019届高三第一次月考】假定你是李华。某英文报社正在举行题为“科技改变我们未来的生活”的征文活动，要求同学们想象科技将如何改变我们的生活环境、工作和休闲方式。请根据你的畅想用英语写一篇短文。

注意：1. 词数100左右（开头已为你写好，但不计入总词数）；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

With the development of science and technology,

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【答案】With the development of science and technology, our life in the future will be quite different from what it is now.

At that time we’ll live in a greener and more beautiful world with trees, birds, blue skies and sunshine. And we'll be able to arrange things like meals, bathing and sleep with our smart phones. Robots will be able to do most of the housework for us. As for work, we'll mostly work at home, communicating ideas for work online. If necessary, we'll have video meetings with our partners around the world. During our free time, we'll be able to travel to places of interest in new vehicles like flying cars. We'll even enjoy space trips to the moon and other planets.

All in all, our life will become more comfortable and convenient.

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试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，要求用英文写一篇短文，背景是某英文报社正在举行题为“科技改变我

们未来的生活”的征文活动，要求同学们想象科技将如何改变我们的生活环境、工作和休闲方式。写作时注意发挥想象，准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。

【河南省信阳高级中学2019届高三第一次大考】请观察所给的图画，并根据你对该图画的理解写一篇英语短文，内容包括：

1.简要描述图片，并说明该图片所揭露的现象；

2.分析造成该现象的原因(至少两点)；

3.提出自己的看法。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.开头已给出，不计入总词数。

The Internet has long been regarded as a wonderful tool that allows students to gain insight to useful resources and information. However，this is not always the case.

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【答案】The Internet has long been regarded as a wonderful tool that allows students to gain insight to useful resources and information. However，this is not always the case.

As is vividly shown in the picture，a boy is happy with the fact that he can depend on the Internet to finish tasks without any difficulty. It mirrors that students tend to make use of the Internet to gain information nowadays.

There are some reasons accounting for it. First，students find it convenient to surf the Internet for useful information. Second，the pressure to succeed also causes students to turn to computers for accurate answers. Consequently，it’s likely that students will lose interest in studying，which is not beneficial to their overall development.

In my opinion，it is vital that students gain confidence in themselves and their abilities while doing tasks. Besides，teachers and parents should encourage students to be creative. Finally, doing tasks independently is of great significance.

【亮点说明】本文是一篇看图作文，采用三段式，条理清楚，要点明确，要点齐全，布局合理，运用高级句子。As is vividly shown in the picture, a boy is happy with the fact that he can depend on the Internet to finish tasks without any difficulty. It mirrors a common phenomenon. As引导的非限制性定语从句和that引导的同位语从句在句中完美结合；Internet to gain information they need.句中使用定语从句；To begin with, students find it convenient to surf the Internet for useful information, where problems can be solved with the help of several clicks. where引导定语从句；What’s more, there’s no doubt that the pressure to succeed also causes students to turn to computers for accurate answers.含同位语从句的固定句式用在句中；As a result, it’s likely that

students will lose interest in studying, which is not beneficial to their overall development.同位语从句和非限制性定语从句同句出现；Besides, what teachers and parents should do is encourage students to be creative. What引导主语从句堪称经典；另外，Nowadays, To begin with, What’s more, As a result, In my opinion, Firstly, Besides,的运用为文章增色添彩。

考点：考查看图作文

【衡水中学2019届高三开学二调】假定你是李华，你校将举办一个中国古代发明展览，你想邀请你的英国朋友Peter一起参观。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：

1. 展览的时间和地点；

2. 展览的内容（古代发明成就）。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Peter,

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Yours,

Li Hua 【答案】Dear Peter,

I know you are interested in ancient Chinese culture. There is a good news that an exhibition of ancient Chinese inventions will be held in our school next Monday. It will last for five days. We can visit it at any time during the exhibition.

The show will display some great inventions in ancient China, including the world-famous Four Great Inventions: the compass, papermaking, gunpowder and printing. They had significant effects on the development of society. For example, thanks to papermaking and printing, a great deal of ancient information has been kept in books. These great ancient inventions made tremendous contributions to the world civilization.

Looking forward to your reply!

Yours,

Li Hua 【解析】

【分析】

学校将举办一个中国古代发明展览，李华想邀请英国朋友Peter一起参观。要求给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1. 展览的时间和地点；2. 展览的内容（古代发明成就）。

【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如宾语从句you are interested in ancient Chinese culture.同位语从句that an exhibition of ancient Chinese inventions will be held in our school next Monday.全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

【云南省昆明市2019届高三摸底调研】假定你是李华，英国网友Tom对你的家乡菜很感兴趣，你买了一本英文版的中国地方菜谱（local recipe）快递给他，请给他写一封电子邮件提醒他接收，内容包括：

1．礼物简介；

2．预计收件时间。

注意：1．词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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【答案】Dear Tom,

Knowing that you are interested in my local food,I bought a Chinese local recipe for you as a gift.

It is a best-seller with an attractive cover that is recommended by many popular restaurants in China. When going through the content, not only can you find varieties of Chinese local food, but also you can get to know the simple tips on making them. In addition, the recipe is translated into English and that's why I chose it for you. Yesterday afternoon I delivered it through Mail Express.You are expected to receive it next Wednesday. Please keep me informed if you get it.

I hope my gift can bring you joy and enrich your life.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua 【解析】

【分析】

本文书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。

【点睛】本文是一篇电子邮件，内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。文中使用高级句子。Knowing that you are interested in my local food,I bought a Chinese local recipe for you as a gift.现在分词做原因状语；It is a best-seller with an attractive cover that is recommended by many popular restaurants in China.此处it是形

式主语，that是真正的主语从句；When going through the content, not only can you find varieties of Chinese local food, but also you can get to know the simple tips on making them.现在分词做时间状语，同时句中使用部分倒装；the recipe is translated into English and that's why I chose it for you.句中使用why引导的表语从句。

【山西省大同市第一中学2019届高三8月考】如你是李华，最近你的一个外国朋友Peter来信说想了解一些有关中国水饺的情况。根据下列要点写封回信：

1. 水饺在人们心目中的地位；

2. 水饺的种类和吃法；

3. 一些春节期间吃水饺的习俗。

注意：1. 根据提示要点写一篇不少于80词的文章；

2. 可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；

3. 开头和结尾已给出（不计入总词数）。

Dear Peter,

I’m glad to receive your letter asking for the information about Chinese dumplings. Here is some information.

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Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua 【答案】Dear Peter,

I’m glad to receive your letter asking for the information about Chinese dumplings. Here is some information.

In China, though there are many different kinds of food, dumplings are regarded as real Chinese food. Everyone in China likes dumplings very much, and there are many different kinds of dumplings.

Some have meat and vegetable in them while others have sugar, eggs and other tasty things. Usually people make dumplings at home. If you have no time to make them, you can buy them in supermarkets. Then you take them home, heat them up and eat them with vinegar.

The Spring Festival is very important in China. During the Spring Festival, we make dumplings. Usually we put a coin in one dumpling. The person who eats the dumpling with the coin in it will be very lucky in the year.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua 【解析】

【分析】

本文书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封书信。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】本文是一封书信，内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。In China, though there are many different kinds of food, dumplings are regarded as real Chinese food.句中使用让步状语从句；Some have meat and vegetable in them while others have sugar, eggs and other tasty things.此处while（然而）是并列连词；If you have no time to make them, you can buy them in supermarkets.句中if是条件状语从句；The person who eats the dumpling with the coin in it will be very lucky in the year.句中who引导定语从句。

【河北省衡水中学2019届高三上学期一调】假定你叫李华，你的英国笔友Tom将来中国旅游，想体验中国高铁，写来邮件请你帮助购买北京到黄山的高铁票。请回复邮件。内容包括

1．表示欢迎

2．请他将护照复印件发至你邮箱

3．简单介绍中国的高铁。

注意：1．词数100左右

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯

参考词汇：高铁CRH

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【答案】Dear Tom,

You cannot imagine how delighted I feel when I know that you are coming to China. You know a copy of the passport is a must for buying the ticket for foreigners.So you are supposed to send one to me by email.Additionally, when the ticket is booked, you could pick it up by having your passport checked upon arriving in Beijing.

Finally, I’d like to express my appreciation for your choice.CRH is the best means of transportation in China.China’s advanced technology contributes to its high speed,comfort and safety,which also enjoys areat fame abroad.

Hope you will enjoy your trip on CRH.

Yours,

Li Hua 【解析】

【分析】

本文书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。You cannot imagine how delighted I feel when I know that you are coming to China.宾语从句和时间状语从句完美结合；which also enjoys areat fame abroad.句中使用非限制性定语从句；另外，are supposed to ，Additionally，Finally,等的使用为文章增色添彩。

【广东省中山市第一中学2019届高三上学期第二次统测】假定你是李华，你们班级的节目"哈姆雷特（Hamlet）"将参加下个月学校"英语文化节"话剧drama比赛，你给度假中的外教Mr．Hurst写一封电子邮件，并附上节目录像，请他给予你相关的指导．

注意：1. 词数100左右;

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;

3. 邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好。

Dear Mr. Hurst，

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Yours，

LiHua.

【答案】Dear Mr．Hurst，

I am sorry to disturb you while you are enjoying your vacation．I am writing on behalf of my classmates for your advice．

Recently we have been busy preparing Hamlet for the Drama Competition to be held next month，which is an important event in our school's English Cultural Festival．With the attached video of our rehearsal，I sincerely hope you could offer your guidance on our performance．I would also appreciate it if you could share your valued opinion on our costumes，acting skills and onstage light and sound effects．

Any suggestions are highly appreciated and we will make proper adjustments accordingly．I hope you have a pleasant vacation despite my disturbing you．

Yours,

Li Hua 【解析】

【分析】

本篇书面表达属于开放类作文，要求写一封信。

【点睛】本文内容完整，语言表述流畅。文章使用了几个高分句型1. we have been busy preparing Hamlet for the Drama Competition to be held next month，which is an important event in our school's English Cultural Festival．which引导的定语从句，且该句式中的谓语部分使用的是现在完成进行时。2. I would also appreciate it if you could share your valued opinion on our costumes，acting skills and onstage light and sound effects．本句使用了常考句型：I would appreciate it if …。

【山东省济宁市第一中学2019届高三上学期第一次调研】假定你是李华，你刚从英国为期五天的旅游回来，非常感谢好友Rick的款待。得知他对中国的文化非常感兴趣，特别是即将到来的国庆节，请你写一封信介绍中国的国庆节。内容要点：

1. 感谢他的招待；

2. 介绍中国的国庆节（时间、意义等）；

3. 欢迎他来中国。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Rick,

How is everything going?

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Best wishes.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua 【答案】Dear Rick,

How is everything going? I had a five-day trip to London last week. I would like to express my gratitude for your hospitality and kindness when I was in London.

Knowing that you take a great fancy to Chinese culture, especially National Day, I would love to introduce it to you. National Day, one of the most significant festivals in China, falls on October 1st every year. People celebrate this festival in celebration of the foundation of People’s Republic of China dating back to 1949. People in China will hold a variety of acti vities to honor that day, such as holding grand military parade, having a travel.

Welcome to China. You will have an unforgettable experience if you come to China before this festival.

Best wishes.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua 【解析】

【详解】第1步：审题。根据提示可知全文是一封信件，要求考生给Rick写信感谢他的款待并介绍中国的国庆节，全文以一般现在时和第三人称为主。

第2步：组织要点。1. 感谢他的招待；2. 介绍中国的国庆节（时间10月1日、庆祝新中国成立、举行各种活动，如阅兵式等）；3. 欢迎他来中国。

【点睛】本篇范文结构完美，条理清晰。范文时态和人称运用准确，涵盖了文字提示要求的所有要点，且有适当的个人发挥。考生运用了多样式的句型结构，整篇文章富有变化，并不死板。使用了较多的高级词汇，如gratitude 、significant、celebrate、date back to等等；尽量运用了丰富的句式，如分词作状语：Knowing that you take a great fancy to Chinese culture, especially National Day, I would love to introduce it to you.同时文章的一些串联成分，这些串联词让各个要点更为紧密地结合在一起。以上写作技巧的运用提升了文章的层次，显示了考生具有很强的驾驭语言的能力。

【广西桂林市第十八中学2019届高三上学期第二次月考】假如你叫李华，将到英国参加一个英语学习俱乐部活动，你要在会上交流自己的英语学习体会。请根据提示写一篇发言稿。内容包括：学习方法、学习收获、学习困难。

注意：1．短文词数100词左右。

2．内容充实，结构完整，可适当增加细节，以使语意连贯。

3．书写须清晰、工整。

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【答案】Dear friends,

In today’s world, being able to master a foreign language will be helpful in our life. Here I’d like to share my learning methods.

First, I think it’s useful to learn grammar and remember as many as useful sentence patterns as possible. I believe the more we read, the better our English will be. So I spend much time reading English newspapers and magazines after class, which helps to improve my English. Besides, TV and radio programs are of great help. Learning English not only increases my awareness of foreign cultures but also helps me to communicate with English-speaking people and to make more new friends.

However, sometimes I get discouraged because I keep forgetting words I have just learned. I’d like to use the opportunity to seek for your advice.

Thank you.

【解析】

【分析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一篇发言稿。

【点睛】本篇范文结构清晰，内容完整，过渡衔接严谨自然，符合发言稿的要求，其中不乏亮点句型。The +比较级，the+比较级，结构的使用，I believe the more we read, the better our English will be. Not only…but also 的使用，Learning English not only increases my awareness of foreign cultures

but also helps me to communicate with English-speaking people and to make more new friends. 【黑龙江省双鸭山市第一中学2019届高三上学期第一次月考】假定你是李华。你将代表学校参加国际高中生环境保护论坛。请你根据以下要点写一篇发言稿。

1.环境保护的紧迫性

2.如何开展环境保护

3.呼吁大家积极参与

注意：1.词数 100 左右

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯

参考词汇：论坛 forum

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【答案】Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious all over the world. For example, cars have made the air unhealthy for people to breathe and poisonous gas is given off by factories. Trees on the hills have been cut down and waste water is being poured continuously into rivers. Furthermore, wherever we go today, we can find rubbish carelessly disposed. Pollution is, in fact, threatening our existence.

The earth is our home and we have the duty to take care of it for ourselves and for our later generations. Fortunately, more and more people have realized these problems. Measures have been taken to cope with these problems by the government. Laws have been passed to stop pollution.

I hope the problem will be solved in the near future and our home will become better and better.

That’s all. Thank you.

【解析】

【分析】

本文是一篇提纲类书面表达，要求考生把自己当成李华，将代表学校参加国际高中生环境保护论坛，请写一篇关于环境保护的短文。全文以一般现在时和第三人称为主。

第3步：根据提示及关键词组进行遣词造句，关键词为become more and more serious、give off、pour、threaten our existence、realize these problems、cope with、stop pollution等。写作时注意演讲稿的格式和惯用语。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】本篇范文结构完美，条理清晰。范文时态和人称运用准确，涵盖了文字提示要求的所有要点，且有适当的个人发挥。考生运用了多样式的句型结构，整篇文章富有变化，并不死板。使用了较多的高级词汇，如cope with、take measures to do sth、pass laws、threaten our existence

等；尽量运用了丰富的句式，如让步状语从句wherever we go today, we can find rubbish carelessly disposed. 同时文章的一些串联成分，如furthermore等，这些串联词让各个要点更为紧密地结合在一起。以上写作技巧的运用提升了文章的层次，显示了考生具有很强的驾驭语言的能力。

【山西大学附属中学2019届高三9月模块诊断】假设你是李华，是某中学国际部的一名学生。你有幸做外教Chris的向导，带领他去当地一家中华老字号(China Time-honored Brand)饭店品尝中国传统美食。请你按如下提示给对方写一封邮件，告知这次行程安排。

1．饭店情况； 2. 出发时间、地点 3. 交通方式

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯

参考词汇：specialty特色菜

Dear Chris，

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua 【答案】I’m so honored to serve as your guide to a local restaurant to taste traditional Chinese food. The restaurant enjoys a good reputation and has won a China Time-honored Brand title. The environment is clean and elegant, not to mention its high quality dishes as well as top services. The traditional and unique soup dumplings are its specialty, which I do believe you will have a good feast on.

By the way, it’s convenient to get there by bus, for it’s just within easy reach of the downtown. We’ll meet at the vus stop near our school this Sunday morning. Bus No. 9 will directly take us there.

I hope you will have great fun.

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【分析】

这篇书面表达属于应用类作文，要求写一封信。

【点睛】作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如：The traditional and unique soup dumplings are its specialty, which I do believe you will have a good feast on.定语从句的运用；I hope you will have great fun.宾语从句的运用。本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。