最新 中考英语书面表达易错大盘点(word)

最新中考英语书面表达易错大盘点(word)

一、中考英语书面表达(含答案详细解析)

1.最近一份学生体质健康调查结果显示,学生近视率仍维持在高位水平,且越来越低龄化。请根据下表所提示的内容,用英语写一篇短文,并发表自己的观点。

参考词汇:近视的 shortsighted

要求:

(1)词数:80~100个。

(2)开头已给出,不计入总词数。

(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。

The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present, _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________

【答案】The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present, about 70% of the students are shortsighted. Here are some main causes.

Some students may not have enough sleep. Some students spend too much time reading or doing their homework without a rest. Some students even like to watch TV or use computers for a long time.

In order to have good eyesight, we should do eye exercises every day. We can also try to do more sports in our spare time. We should have the good habit of using our eyes.

I think all of us should understand the importance of protecting eyes and try our best to protect them.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇图表作文。根据题干要求可知,本篇文章主要使用一般现在时写作,人称用第三人称复数和第一人称。内容包括:学生近视原因:1.睡眠不足(not enough)2.长时间看书、做作业、用电脑等(for a long time)防止近视的方法:1.做眼睛保健操,多进行体育活动(eye exercises)2.养成正确的用眼习惯(have the good habit of)个人观点:如:我认

为,我们应该了解保护眼睛的重要性,尽最大努力保护我们的眼睛。(I think ???;try one's best to do sth.)。

常用的重点句型和短语有:sb. spend some time doing sth.,in order to do sth.,try to do sth.,the importance of…等。

2.书面表达

同学们,中考后就会迎来漫长的暑假了,班会课上老师组织大家讨论假期学习和生活计划。假如你是李华,请根据以下内容提示用英语向同学们汇报一下你的计划。

内容提示:

注意:

1. 表达中必须包括所给要点,可以适当发挥,不要简单翻译。

2. 词数90左右。开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。

3. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。

Dear classmates,

Summer holiday is coming, and here is my plan for it.

____________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________

I hope all of you can enjoy the coming holiday. That’s all. Thank you.

【答案】Dear classmates,

Summer holiday is coming, and here is my plan for it.

First, I'd like to choose several good books and read them carefully. This can help me open my mind and learn more about the world. I also think it's necessary for me to learn at least one skill. I'm interested in cooking, so I will learn to cook some delicious dishes during the holiday. Second, health is the most important. So I will eat healthily and exercise more. I plan to eat more

fruit and vegetables and keep running every day.

Third, it's a good idea to join in some charity activities because we should be kind to someone in need. I will pay more attention to protecting our environment so that we can make our Earth a better world. Also, travelling out is a good choice. While travelling, we can be close to nature and learn about different cultures. We have more chances to search the Internet. I know unhealthy websites are harmful to us. I will say no to them.

I hope all of you can enjoy the coming holiday. That's all. Thank you.

【解析】亮点说明:这篇习作的层次清晰,内容饱满,表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语,例如I'd like to do,help me open my mind,at least,be interested in,during the holiday,plan to do,join in,be kind to someone in need,pay more attention to,be close to nature,search the Internet等。而First, I'd like to choose several good books and read them carefully./ Second, health is the most important./Third, it's a good idea to join in some charity activities because we should be kind to someone in need.等表顺序词和综合句式的运用,既使短文层次清晰,又丰富了习作内容,使表达多样化,是本文的最大亮点。

点睛:书面表达题既不是汉译英,也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以,考生不能遗漏要点,要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

3.亚洲文明对话大会近期在北京召开,你的印度朋友Danny收看了大会相关报道,对华夏文明产生了浓厚的兴趣,来信向你了解中国文化。假设你是李华,请根据以下内容提示用英语写一封回信给Danny。

注意:1. 词数90词左右,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。

2. 回复必须包括所以要点,可是当发挥,是短文连贯,通顺。

3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

参考词汇: civilized 文明的

Dear Danny,

I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization(文明) of China, I would like to share something with you.

I hope you can come to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hear from you soon.

All the best,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Danny,

I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization(文明) of China, I would like to share something with you.

Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world. China is a country of 56 nationalities. Different nations have difficult cultures. In my country, we have many traditional festivals, such as, the Spring Festival, Mid-Autumn Festival and the Dragon Boat Festival . They are also called “three major Chinese holidays” in China. Here are the customs of eating Zongzi and racing dragon-boat on the Dragon Boat Festival.

China is a nation of etiquette (礼仪). Chinese people can respect, trust and help each other. We all learn and grow together. Everyone in my school should protect the whole public environment. Climbing the trees, picking the flowers and throwing garbage at random are not allowed there.

I hope you can come to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hearing from you soon.

All the best.

Li Hua 【解析】

【分析】

本文要求给你的印度朋友Danny写一篇关于华夏文明的回信。

【详解】

文章需要介绍下中国的文化。表格中列举了三个要点,写作时注意不要漏写。平时注意多多积累句型、短语。细心检查避免疏漏。以图表展示的作文要以“读”为主,首先要认真读懂图表中的要求,对所给信息加以分析、推断、筛选、概括,去粗取精;在写作时目的要明确,要注意内容的准确性和严肃性。

【点睛】

写作中注意语义通顺,符合逻辑关系,上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。如but, so, then 等。可以适当使用高分句子。本篇文章写的好的句子有:Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world.中华文明是世界上最古老、最悠久的文明之一。China is a nation of etiquette(礼仪),中国是一个礼仪之邦。

4.临近毕业,学校在学习小组内开展了初中阶段自评和组评活动,假设你是 Moonlight 小组的组长,请根据下面表格中的信息和提示,为你的组员 Tommy 进行综合素质的评价,写一份素质报告.

要求:1、表达清楚、语法正确、上下文连贯;2、要点必须包括所有相关信息,并作适当发挥;3、词数:100 词左右;4、不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等

Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight.

【答案】Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight. He is clever and he is good at all his lessons. He is so generous that he shares everything with his friends.He likes reading because he thinks he can get much knowledge and learn more about the world by reading. And reading has a good effect on children’s growth. At home, he can help his parents do some housework. At school, he gets on well with his classmates. On the way to school, he obeys the traffic rules. He crosses the road when the light is green. Our school presented him with Award for Best Student this year. However, Tommy is stressed when the exam comes. And he doesn’t have enough sleep.

I think he should go over what he has learned before exams. It’s better for him to manage his time wisely so that he can have enough time to rest.

【解析】

这篇作文要求我们按照表格里的内容介绍一下Tommy的情况,为Tommy写一篇综合素质的评价报告。在表格中有非常详细的关于Tommy各方面的内容,我们需要用正确的英语把这些内容有条理的表达出来。表格中涉及的内容较多,写作时要注意表达的条理性。这篇作文应主要使用第三人称来写。在最后要给Tommy提一些建议,这一部分应该用第一人称。同时注意表达的准确性,尤其是表格中的第五项和第六项内容。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较优秀的范文。这篇作文内容完整,包含了表格中的所有内容,没有遗漏要点。表达准确,注意了被动形式的使用,如He was rewarded by our school this year.。写作时注意了条理性,使文章具有层次感,条理清楚。短文注意到了长短句的结合,并恰当的使用了一些连词,使文章表达的连贯。如He is always ready to help others.、He not only likes reading detective novels but also likes watching programs about sports news.、He is good at running. He won the first place in our school sports meeting this year.等。

5.近来,美国总统特朗普的外孙女由于说一口流利的中文而成为“网红”。你的美国朋友Sam 看过相关报道之后也很想学好中文,但是不知道该怎样做。假如你是大明,请你根据以下提示写一封邮件给他,提一些关于如何学好汉语的建议。

要点提示 :

1.课堂上认真听讲,做好笔记;

2.不要害怕犯错误,与同学们用中文交流;

3.课下经常阅读中文杂志、报纸等,在网上看一些中文语言类节目;

4.经常用中文给外国笔友写电子邮件等。

注意 :

1.词数80-100;

2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

3.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息;

4.开头和结尾已给出,不计人总词数。

Dear Sam ,

I'm happy to hear from you. I know you want to learn Chinese well. Here are some suggestions. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________

In a word,if you have good ways of learning Chinese ,you will learn it well.

Yours

Daming 【答案】Dear Sam,

I'm happy to hear from you.I know you want to learn Chinese well.Here are some suggestions. First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class. Second, it's a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese. And don't be afraid of making mistakes. Third, you'd better read Chinese magazines or newspapers after class. You can also watch Chinese programmes on the Internet. I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation. Lastly, you can write emails to me or other Chinese friends in Chinese.

In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it well.

Yours,

Daming 【解析】

【详解】

这篇作文要求我们以大明的身份给Sam写一封信,告诉他如何学好汉语,题目中从四个方面提出了建议。通过审题可知,这是要求写一封建议信,内容应包括以下几个方面:首先应和Sam先做一个交流,然后引出写信的目的;接下来给出具体的建议,依据题目中给出的这四条,用正确的英语表达出来,还应注意补充一些内容,使文章更加充实;最后写一个适当的结尾,如希望建议对你有帮助等。文章应使用一般现在时,根据表达需要使用恰当的人称。写作时应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同,不能按照汉语的思维逐词翻译,写汉语式的英语。应从句子的整体结构考虑,写完整的句子。如可以较常见的主谓宾结构或

主系表结构为主,简单句的句型可以使文章叙述清楚、简洁。为提升文章档次,可以穿插使用并列句或复合句以及其他一些复杂句式。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分,使文章意思连贯,表达流畅。

【点睛】

这是一篇优秀的作文,短文作者根据题目要求给Sam写了一封信,对他的汉语学习提出了一些好的建议。首先短文内容完整,包括了题目中要求的所有信息。文章主要分成三个部分:第一段是与Sam之间的问候以及引出Sam学习汉语这一话题,并介绍写信的目的;第二段中是提出的具体的建议,这是这篇文章的主体,所在篇幅最大。这一段中使用了First,Second,Third,lastly等词,叙述条理、有层次;最后一段用一句话对整篇文章做了总结。其次短文使用了正确的时态和人称,句式结构符合英语的表达习惯。语法规范、准确,用词得体。文章中的语句以简单句结构为主,也使用了并列句和复合句,调整了文章的结构。文章中使用了较为丰富的短语和句型,如First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class.、Second, it's a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese、I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation、In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it well.等等。

6.书面表达

假如你是李明,你的英国笔友Jack来信询问你的家乡是否有雾霾天气,情况如何。请你按照以下提示给他回一封e-mail。

内容如下:

1. 由于大气污染程度十分严重,去年已发生数次雾霾天气;

2. 人们已经意识到雾霾天气的危害,正在采取各种措施减少其发生;

3. 你在日常生活中打算为此做些什么。

参考词汇:雾霾haze

注意:

1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;

2. 语言通顺,句子连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;

3. 词数80左右,信件的开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

Dear Jack,

I’m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the haze.

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ Yours,

Li Ming

【答案】Dear Jack,

I’m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the haze.

The hazy weather has occurred a lot of times in my hometown since last year. It was bad for our daily life. More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze. A great number of people have to stay at home .

People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway.

As for me, I will go to school by bike or on foot. In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the environment. Would you like to tell me some good ideas? I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours,

Li Ming

【解析】

【详解】

这篇作文要求我们以李明的身份给自己的英国笔友写信,告诉他关于家乡雾霾的情况。题目中列出了三个要点,我们应根据这些要点提示,来组织语言,充实内容。首先介绍去年家乡的雾霾情况严重;然后介绍为减少雾霾人们采取了一些措施;最后介绍一下你自己在日常生活中应该怎么做。因此文章应主要分成三段,一个内容一段。文章内容中叙述的情况不一,时态不能统一,根据表达的需要使用正确的时态,注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时,应注意英语句式表达习惯和汉语是不同的,不能逐词翻译,应从句子的整体考虑,写完整的句子,利用简单句的基本句型,使用恰当的词汇和短语。为提升文章档次,可以穿插使用并列句和复合句;语句之间使用恰当的连接成分,使文意连贯,表达流畅。

【点睛】

这是一篇优秀的作文,短文中作者根据题目要求介绍了自己家乡治理雾霾的情况,并结合自身的实际情况,讲述了自己日常生活中是如何做的。首先短文内容完整,包含了题目中要求的所有信息,没有遗漏要点;且文章结构清晰,分成了三段,每一段的中心明确,意思表达清楚、明了。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称,作者根据表达需要使用了一般过去时、一般将来时态和一般将来时态,动词形式变化准确,语法规范。短文中语言得体,句式表达符合英语的习惯。句子结构以简单句为主,也使用了一些并列句和复合句,长短句结合,使文章富有节奏。短文中较好的句式有More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze、People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. 、The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway、In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the environment.等。

7.共享单车自从2016年在江阴投入使用以来,给人们带来了诸多便利,受到人们的追捧,改变了人们的出行方式,但同时也遇到了一些挑战,是国民素质的“照妖镜”,请你根据表格中信息的提示,给21世纪英文报写一篇关于共享单车看法的稿件。

参考词汇:公共自行车public bicycles

注意事项:1.短文须包括表格中所有提示内容,要求语句通顺,意思连贯。

2.表格中“你的观点”一栏用2-3句话展开合理想象,做适当发挥。

3.词数在90个左右,文章的开头部分已给出,不计入总词数。

Public bicycles are becoming more and more popular in our daily life.

【答案】Public bicycles are becoming more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared. Public bicycles have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that it’s easy for us to get around on public bicycles. Also, Riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What’s more, using public bicycles costs so little t hat we can afford it. But there are some problems too. Some people can’t return public bicycles in time. Sometimes because public bicycles take up too much of the road, they are in our way. I think we should encourage more people to use public bicycles. Af ter all, it’s a way of living a green life.

【解析】这是一篇材料作文,要求给英文报社写一篇投稿,介绍对共享单车看法。作文应包括4个主要内容,一个是社会现状,第二个优点,第三是存在的问题,最后发表个人的观点。动笔前要认真审题,深入挖掘题材内涵,不可遗漏要点,并适当发挥。要注意上下文的连贯,将这些内容有机的连接起来,不要逐句翻译。使用一些好的句型和短语,注意正确的时态和语态以及谓语动词的形式,还需要注意英语表达和汉语习惯的不同,让整篇短文表达流畅。

8.俗话说,国有国法,家有家规。家规是中华民族传统文化的重要组成部分。我们的国家主席习近平多次强调良好家风家规的重要性。假如你是李华,请你根据以下表格内的要点提示,并结合你的家庭实际情况,给你的英国笔友Sam写一封信,向他介绍一下你的家规,并向他展示一个温情智慧的中国家庭。

要点提示:

写作要求:

1.文章须包括所给内容要求,可适当发挥,使行文流畅、通顺;

2.省略号部分请各用2-3句话作适当发挥;

3.词数90左右。文章的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

Dear Sam,

Haven’t written to you for a long time! As you know, family rules are an important part of our Chinese traditional culture. Today I’m writing to tell you something about my family rules.

There are many rules that we have to follow.

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________

What about you? Do you have any family rules? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon!

Yours,

Li Hua 【答案】Dear Sam,

Haven’t wri tten to you for a long time! As you know, family rules are an important part of you Chinese traditional culture. Today I’m writing to tell you something about my family rules.

There are many rules that we have to follow. First, you should respect the old and love the young. You are also supposed to be kind to other. Next, it’s a good habit to be honest and keep your words. What’s more, you should keep studying , go to bed and get up on time. You mustn’t stay up too late.

In my opinion, every family must kee p rules and children shouldn’t develop bad habits, like telling lies and be rude to others. We should be strict with ourselves.

The family rules also make a great difference to me. I learn to think about others’ feelings and Chinese traditional culture.

W hat about you? Do you have any family rules? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon! Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【详解】

本文属于材料作文,向山姆介绍你的家规并向他展示一个温情的中国家庭。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑,可适当增加内容。

亮点说明:这是一篇优秀的作文,很好的完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态、主谓一致,特别使用一些亮点词句,如be supposed to, be kind to, keep your words, what’s more, in one’s opinion, develop bad habits, be rude to, be strict with, make a difference to以及it is a good habit to be honest中it作形式主语。增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯。

【点睛】

写作时可以从以下几个方面做起:

认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求,抓住要点,词数符合要求。

构思提纲。有了提纲,我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的,而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥,因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。一切都准备就绪,就可以动笔写作了,在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词,使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外,还要检查语法结构是否合理,有无重复、啰嗦的语言,大小写是否正确,格式是否正确,词数是否符合要求等。

9.你是一位九年级的学生李明,你用英语写一封邮件给你的笔友Amy,感谢她对你关心,并告诉她目前你在全力以赴为中考而学习,并与她交流一下目前的学习和生活情况。要点如下:

(1). 虽然你大部分功课你都学得比较好,但是你对自己不满意。你认为自己学习上还要多花工夫。

(2). 你的父母对你严格要求,但是也很关心你。(举例说明,适当发挥2—3句)……(3). 老师很乐意帮助你们。他们希望你们实现自己的理想。他们说(适当发挥2—3句)……

注意:

(1). 要求语句通顺,意思连贯。

(2). 第2要点和第3要点要用2—3句话作适当发挥。

(3). 词数90个左右,邮件开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。

Hello!

Dear Amy, thank you for caring.

Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination.

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________

How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours

Li Ming

【答案】例文Hello!

Dear Amy, thank you for caring.

Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination. I have got good results in most of my subjects, but I am not happy with myself. I think I must spend more time on my studies.

My parents are really strict with me. However, they care for me as well. Once upon a time, I failed in my physics exam and felt stressed and sad. They had a close communication with me and helped me solve my problems and cheer up again.

My teachers are also ready to help us. They hope that we can realize our dreams. They tell us to try our best and not to give up. Life is always full of ups and downs. It's important not to be afraid of any kind of difficulty.

How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours

Li Ming

【解析】

【详解】

本文属于材料作文,告诉艾米目前你在全力以赴为中考而学习,并与她交流一下目前的学习和生活情况。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑,可适当增加内容。

亮点说明:这是一篇优秀的作文,很好的完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态、主谓一致,特别使用一些亮点词句,如get good results, spend+时间

+on sth, be strict with, however, care for, as well, once upon a time, help sb do, cheer up, be ready to, tell sb to do, try one’s best to do, be full of以及it is adj to do sth等,增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯。

【点睛】

写作时可以从以下几个方面做起:

认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求,抓住要点,词数符合要求。

构思提纲。有了提纲,我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给

出的话题是开放的,而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥,因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。一切都准备就绪,就可以动笔写作了,在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词,使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外,还要检查语法结构是否合理,有无重复、啰嗦的语言,大小写是否正确,格式是否正确,词数是否符合要求等。

10.书面表达

为感受母爱情深,弘扬知恩图报,某英语网站正在举办以"My Mother"为主题的征文活动,请根据下列思维导图所提供的信息,写一篇短文,介绍你的母亲和你之间的故事。

参考词汇:give much to…,It's my turn to…,try my best to…

提示:

1)短文内容须包括所给内容,含母亲曾为你所做的事和你将为母亲所做的事各一件,并阐述原因;

2)请注意短文结构层次、时态运用和卷面整洁度;

3)词数80个左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;

4)文中不得出现学校和个人的相关信息。

My Mother

We need love.We also need to show love.The person I love most is my

mother.___.

【答案】My mother

We need love.We also need to show love.The person I love most is my mother.My mother is 41 years old.She is of medium build with long black hair.She is quiet.She is a history teacher in a middle school.She likes dancing.She can cook delicious food.

She did a lot for me when I was a child.She bought whatever I needed for my study,even though she didn't have much money.She sent me from piano lessons to dancing lessons at the weekend.She cooked delicious and healthy food for me.

When I grow up,I will do what I can to make my mother happy.I will find a good job after I graduate from college.I'll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still

young.I'll take her to wonderful sights around China.Most importantly,I will stay with her when I have free time.That's what she wants most,I think.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇给材料作文。为感受母爱情深,弘扬知恩图报,要求以"My Mother"为主题写一篇短文介绍你的母亲和你之间的故事,参加某英语网站正在举办的征文活动。在写作时,注意文章文体、人称和时态;注意连句成篇,保持文章的连贯性,要层次清楚,要点分明,中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯;尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,最好不要写太长的复合句;尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词,确保正确率;词汇、句式要丰富多样,可以为文章增色添彩。

【点睛】

首先认真审题,看清题目中的要求和要点;然后根据提示内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作,在写作过程中,要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡,必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词,使文章过渡平稳,自然流畅;同时注意语句要通顺,词汇书写无误,不要出现语法错误。最后要细心复核检查,确保正确无误。

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