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1.多才多艺成功的典范（Only through the mastery and integration of multiple skills can a person really have profound influence and acquire real success）
Natalie Botman, who is a film actor, a play actor, an editor, and also phD in psychology in Harvard. Her adept acting skills and her mastery in psychology gained her a great advantage in casting the Oscar winning film the black swan, in this film, she play two characters of the same person and acquired great success, which push her to the throne of Oscar best leading actress.(娜塔莉伯曼多才多艺演好黑天鹅)
2.给员工更多的自由时间，有更松散的时间表（loose schedule）
20 percent time of google. The google company gives the employees 20 percent time to do the things they enjoys. They trust their employees and they can use the freetime to do anything they like. Many of the innovative products of google company comes from those free time. Two software engineers from google developed a search engine for survivors and their relatives in last year Japan’s great earthquake. Gmail and Google news also came from 20 percent time.
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运动休息的重要性
1.Children or students can get stronger and healthier through sports and other activities.
Doing exercise at childhood will not only benefit the children immediately but also benefit them in their later life. “Exercise an hour every day and work efficiently for 50 years” is an activity promoting in China. Experts have found that the working efficiency has a great relationship with the average hours spent on sports every day. (运动可以锻炼身体，不仅锻炼当前的身体，还为以后的工作做准备)
2.Exercise can help the students control their weight as overweight is a big problem in
China now. According China Statics bureau, 1/6 of the children in China has the problem of overweight, and among those who are overweight, 70% of them have less than 1 hour time of exercise a day.（运动能控制超重现象，在中国很多孩子超重都是因为缺乏运动）
3.Sports can offer the students a chance to communicate and have social interaction with
others. As in many sports, like basketball and football, children need to cooperate with each other to achieve the victory, in this process not only the body condition of the students are improved but also students’ teamwork spirit and social skills are also cultivated, which are very crucial for their future adult life.（运动是交流和锻炼teamwork的绝佳机会）
4.北欧国家（高度发达的社会制度才是人民幸福的关键）（high developed civilization is the
true key of ）
A characteristic of the Nordic welfare model is that everyone has the right to receive
welfare benefits. Everyone has the right to accommodation, employment, education and health care in the Nordic countries. The aim of the welfare model is to give everyone a minimum basis on which to live, and thus to provide security. However, there are factors that can create challenges for the Nordic welfare model in the next few years, both in relation to the cost and the legitimacy of the model. Examples of such factors are the increasing proportion of elderly people in the population, the increasing number of people of employable age who, for various reasons, are not in employment, early withdrawal from the labour market, increasing inequalities in society, and marginalization of high risk groups. These factors are
common for all the Nordic countries. Kids received free education and family are awarded for having a baby, and they enjoy the best medical care in the world, my English teacher once went to Norway to have her second baby.
5.现代科技的副作用
More than once I turned on my computer to check school library for resources, but ended up watching Youtube videos. In this case, computer as a representative of modern technology plays an adverse role in learning information. We do acquire more information with the
convenient tool, yet most of them are irrelevant and in the end procrastinating would lower our learning.
modern technology gives students an illusion that information and real knowledge is easy to learn – just by clicking mouse or watching videos.
we are now living in an age of revolution with no previous human experience that could be referred to.
interpersonal alienation. With the development of communication technology,
people in fact become alienated with friends and relatives since they could be so easily accessed via phone or email.
the abusive use of technology. Although it brings much convenience, it essentially changes human – we are no longer the master of tools, but instead the slaves of devices.
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Expand one’s horizons 作为万能理由的第一条，expand one’s horizons 绝对是不二之选。究其本意，单数的horizon 是“地平线、海平线”的意思，但复数的horizons 却指人们的“眼界、视野”，其英文注释为： the limit of your ideas, knowledge and experience. 略举一例：World history is a course of study that will broaden your horizons. 先看一个具体话题：（第10题）Should the government help to build more museums and theaters?下面以表格的形式给出其中一条主干理由：enrich citizens’ cultural life（丰富公民的文化生活） 再来看一个抽象话题：（第3题）Describe the most important decision in your life. 面对此类抽象话题，最佳策略是将其具体化，变成一个日常生活话题，然后套用我们的万能理由。 请看思路：I think I made the most important decision of my life by choosing to go to an overseas university after graduation from high school in China.而其中的一条主干理由就是：it will broaden my horizons. 参见下表： 作为主干理由的broaden my horizons，之下又有made friends, travelled a lot, visited various museums等三条分支理由，思路极易展开。
托福写作开头的11种示例
托福写作开头的11种示例 采用不同的句子开头是使句子多样化的手段之一。我们造句及写作的时候不应该总是用“subject-verb-object” 的结构顺序，而应该尽量用不同的方式展开一个句子。不同的句子开头既可以美化句子，同时也能使句子与句子之间自然过度，衔接自然，以免过于依赖过渡词。在TWE 考试中主考官对句子结构的多样化也非常的重视，看看常见的句子开头的方法! 托福作文句子的开头可以采用以下的任何一种方式： 1. 用副词开头，常见的情形有： (1) 副词修饰全句 Luckily, he didn't know my phone number; otherwise, he would bother me. Incredibly, Helena got straight A in her school report this semester. Interestingly, cats and dogs can hardly get along well in a house.
修饰全句常用的副词有： obviously undoubtedly apparently fortunately clearly unfortunately incredibly luckily unluckily surprisingly frighteningly 这些副词大多数表示说话人对全句的看法，在意思上相等与“It is … 形容词that …” 。e.g: Obviously, he is nervous about the test. =It is obvious that he is nervous about the test. Unfortunately, he tripped over and fell in the mud. =It is unfortunate that he tripped over and fell in the mud. (2) 强调副词 Hurriedly, the man drew me a scratch map to show me the direction. Dangerously, the drunkard sped down the street. Slowly and gently, snowflakes were drifting down from the sky. (3) 副词表示某一地域或某一领域 Geographically, Canada is the biggest country in the world. Financially, she is independent, but emotionally she is dependent. 2. 用插入语开头，表示说话人的态度，或使句子的意思更加准确： Strangely enough, Jennifer does not enjoy sunshine and beach.
托福写作技巧(总结)
把教授如何反驳文章中三个分论点挺清楚，例子都是阅读文章里的所以不用记，听力里主要是在讲阅读文章中的例子有哪些缺陷或不严谨的地方，从而无法成为有效的论据，甚至成为别的观点的论据。 有自己的写作模式、写作套路。 先不限时写几篇，写完一篇就立刻打印出来逐字逐句修改（电脑上改容易偷懒），把过于简单的词和句子一一替换，注意别用太难的词和没把握的词，能用到6级词汇就差不多了，心情好了再拽两个托福词汇上去也就足够了。我觉得最好用的就是形容词和副词，可以记几个托福水平的精彩形容词和副词，选择自己看着顺眼的，在平凡的名词前加好看的形容词，在平淡的句子里随处放置抢眼的副词，这样文章一下子就丰富起来了。 插入语，句式变换，每段第一句试着倒装、或用被动语态 多用具体的详细的例子，别停留在就事论事上，可以试着延伸到生活的其他方面 注意线性思维，“总分总” 托福作文写五段，第一段是中心思想段，二三四是支持段落，最后是总结段落 无论是综合写作还是独立写作，考生追求的基本目标是把想说的意思用书面英语表达清楚，让阅卷人读懂和明白。从语言角度来说，有两大标准，即准确性和多样化。能够达到词词准确，又使用到不同的词句来表达相同、相似的意思，从语言角度来说已经符合托福考试的高分要求。 仿写。只看不写，永远不能将输入语言化成输出语言。尽量仿写整句，保持原句结构，替换内容！ In a word, it is rather superficial to simply say that.........+观点：In a word, it is rather superficial to simply say that parents are the best teachers。用一句话说，简单地认为父母是最好的老师是相当肤浅的。 综合写作部分的评分标准： 1、内容的完整性和准确性。简单地说，就是文章是否有将讲座中的关键信息点完整、准确地提 取出来，并和阅读材料中的相关内容有效地一一对应。如果讲座中的信息点有缺失，那么会有一定程度 的扣分；如果只写了有关阅读材料的观点，得1分。 文章的组织机构，词汇和语法的正确性和准确性。高分的作文需要做到条理清晰，结构连贯，用词 恰当，能够准确地表达讲座中的观点与阅读材料中的观点是如何相互联系的，只要作文中的错误不至于 使内容表述出现误解，一些偶尔出现的语言错误，如单词拼写、单复数问题等，不会对作文成绩产生很 大影响，当然，错误肯定是越少越好的。 独立写作部分的评分标准： 1、有效回应题目，阐明文章主题。一般来说，独立写作完全跑题的情况很少，但是很多考生在 展开讨论时所采用的论据，比较容易出现跟主题关联性不大的情况，即局部答非所问的现象，从而影响 了得分。2、逻辑条理清楚，论证充分展开。这一点的关键在于文章论证的展开，是否提供了大量的细节和例子来支持观点，而非泛泛而谈地说理。3、内容连贯一致，衔接自然流畅。达到内容连贯一致的文章通常全文围绕中心论点展开，而不会论据自相矛盾，也不会重复论证，有时候通过一些表示因果、先后、递进的关系连词可以起到粘合剂的作用。4、遣词造句地道，语言驾驭娴熟。托福考试终究是语言考试，最终还是要考查考生的语言运用能力，但是要注意的是，并不是要求考生通篇都用难词偏语长句，而是要会变化着用一些美国人常用的语句把自己的想法表达清楚，所以建议考生尽量多阅读和模仿英文原版材料，这样写出来的文章才能够原汁原味。