哈尔滨书面表达英语作文汇编中考英语专项训练含答案解析

一、中考英语书面表达汇编

1．（·广东中考模拟）近年，有一些地区提出把游泳纳入中考的体育考试，并在学生中做

了一次问卷调查。下面是一个学校的调查结果，请你根据调查情况写一篇英语短文阐明调

查结果及表达自己的观点。

赞成的学生人数占：57%不赞成的学生人数占：43%

理由：

1. 强身健体，预防疾病

2. 训练求生技能

3. 休闲娱乐，放松身心理由：

1. 害怕水

2. 有危险性

3. 气温低时容易感冒

你的观点与理由？

要求：

1. 词数80左右。（文章的开头已给出，不计入词数）

2. 不得透露学校，姓名等个人信息，否则不予评分。

In recently years, some districts are planning to include swimming in the examination of physical education. And they made a survey about it in some schools, Here’s the result from one school.

【答案】例文In recently years, some districts are planning to include swimming in the examination of physical education. And they made a survey about it in some schools. Here’s the result from one school.

About 57 per cent students like to have swimming lessons at school. Because it can help build up our body and guide against （prevent） illness. Besides, swimming is a survival skill when we face some natural disasters. It is also a good choice to go swimming lo relax ourselves when we are free.

However, 43 percent students are against this plan for some reasons. First, some of them are afraid of getting in the water. Second, it may be dangerous because we may drown. Then, when it is cold, we may catch a cold.

In my opinion, it’s a good idea lo have swimming lesson s. I can improve my health, and relax myself after classes as well.

（In my opinion, it’s not a good way to have swimming lessons at school. Because it’s expensive

to build a swimming pool, and sometimes it’s difficult to keep the water clean because there are many students at school.）

【解析】

【详解】

本文是一篇材料作文，根据所给材料，阐明关于“把游泳纳入中考体育考试”的两种不同观点，而且最后还要表达出自己的观点，所以文章主要用一般现在时。文章分为三个部分，第一部分，首先引出本文话题，并用Here’s the result from one school.起到承上启下的作用，引出调查结果；第二部分分别阐述两种不同观点About 57 per cent students like to have swimming lessons at school. Because….; However, 43 percent students are against thi s plan for some reasons.最后提出自己的观点并进行总结In my opinion…。注意阐明观点列举理由时，要注意条理性，比如用到表示次序先后的词first, second, then；或者句型It can…… It also can…..,besides…..等；本文内容完整，写作条理清晰，语言表达准确，是一篇不错的文章。

2．（·天津中考模拟）书面表达

校园安全问题越来越受到重视，为了确保学生的安全，学校制订了一些规章制度。请根据提示内容，以“School safety”为题写一篇100词左右的英语短文。

提示：

1. 遵守校规，按时到校、离校；

2. 不接受陌生人的物品；

3. 结伴同行，天黑前到家；

4. 遇到麻烦及时告知家长和老师。

School safety

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________

【答案】School safety

More and more people pay special attention to the school safety nowadays. Here are some rules to keep us safe.

First, as students, we should follow the school rules, such as not being late for school and leaving school early. Second, we s houldn’t go with strangers and we shouldn’t accept things from strangers. Third, it’s better for us to have partners on the way home and to school and we must get home before dark. Fourth, if we are in trouble, don’t forget to tell our parents or teachers as soon as possible.

I think these rules are good for us. We must obey them.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇话题作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下校园安全。所提供的材料中列举了为了确保学生的安全，学校制订了一些规章制度。主要从1. 遵守校规，按时到校、离校；2. 不接受陌生人的物品；3. 结伴同行，天黑前到家；4. 遇到麻烦及时告知家长和老师。这四个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。本文是提建议，因此用shouldn’t或should来写。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。

【高分句型一】

Second, we shouldn’t go with strangers and we shouldn’t accept things from strangers. 第二，我们不应该和陌生人一起去，也不应该接受陌生人的东西。

本句话是由and连接的并列句。

【高分句型二】

I think these rules are good for us. 我认为这些规则对我们有好处。

句子these rules are good for us.是一个宾语从句。

3．（·黑龙江中考模拟）假如你是 Lin lei，与朋友Mary约好一起去历史博物馆，但因故不能赴约。请给她写封电子邮件，内容包括：

（1）表示歉意；（2）说明原因；（3）另约时间。

【答案】Dear Mary,

I’m very sorry to say that I cannot go to the history museum with you on Saturday morning. I have to go to see my friend in the hospital that morning. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.

Shall we go on Sunday morning? If i t’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8: 30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best I should be available any time after school next week.

Yours,

Lin Lei

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇书信作文，根据材料中的相关信息向Mary解释一下你不能赴约的原因。主要从表示歉意；说明原因；另约时间这三个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人

称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。

【高分句型一】

I’m very sorry to say that I cannot go to the history museum with you on Saturday morning. 很抱歉，我星期六早上不能和你一起去历史博物馆了。

句子that I cannot go to the history museum with you on Saturday morning.是由that引导的宾语从句。

【高分句型二】

If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8: 30 outside the school gate. 如果方便的话，我们8:30在校门外见面。

If it’s convenient for you是由if引导的条件状语从句。

4．（·黑龙江中考模拟）假如你是吴浩，你的父母打算春节期间带你和妹妹去北京。你们准备坐飞机去，请你给旅行社写封电子邮件，咨询有关航班，酒店和旅游景点的情况。留下你的电话，以便旅行社和你联系。

Dear Sir or Madam,

_______________________________________________________________________________ _____________

Best wishes!

Wu Hao

【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m writing to ask for your help about my family trip. My family is planning a trip to Bei jing during the Spring Festival. We decide to travel by air, so we would like to know about flights to Beijing. Also, can you order three rooms in a good hotel? We want to know some information about places of interest in Beijing. You can contact me. My phone number is 8618399. Thanks for your help.

Best wishes!

Wu Hao

【解析】

【详解】

本文属于应用文体，向旅行社询问去北京的航班、酒店以及旅游景点。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如ask for help, decide to do, by air,

would like to do, order, places of interests以及thanks for等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

5．（·安徽中考模拟）书面表达

某英文杂志社正面向九年级毕业生征文，请从以下要点中选择一至两个方面，并结合具体事例，用英语写一篇题为"Thank you，my teacher!"的短文参加此次活动．要点如下：

（1）严格要求

（2）耐心指导

（3）热情鼓励；

注意：（1）词数80～100；

（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯

（3）文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称．

（4）…

注意：（1）词数80-100；

（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯

（3）文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称

【答案】Thank you，my teacher!

Leaving you-lovely junior school life，I have som any words from my heart to say．I still remember that you became our English teacher three years ago．You always work hard and treat us well．You are strict with us in studyand also take care of us kindly．It is easy and interesting for us to learn English well because your class is very interesting and lively．（严格要求）【高分句型一】

During my school life，we can get along well with each other．When I failed in an exam，you encouraged me to keep trying．【高分句型一】When I had trouble in life，you told me to be brave．（耐心指导）

Because of your help and encouragement，many students，including me，are more and more interested in English and make much progress，too．You have given me so much．（热情鼓励）

Thank you again for what you've done for us!All the best to you!（表示感谢）

【解析】

【分析】

本文是一篇抒情记叙文。

【详解】

英语作文一般分为三个部分

第一部分：开篇点题，交代写作目的——感谢老师为我做的一切。

第二部分：交代感谢英语老师的原因

老师是一个认真工作的人。

老师对我严格要求。

在我考试失利时鼓励我。

第三部分：再次点题，对老师表示由衷的谢意。

高分句型一：

It is easy and interesting for us to learn English well because your class is very interesting and lively．因为你的课非常生动有趣，对我们来说学好英语很简单有趣．

句中"because your class is very interesting and lively"为原因状语从句，主句为"itis+形容词+for sb to do sth对某人来说做某事…"结构．

高分句型二：

When I failed in an exam，you encouraged me to keep trying．当我考试失败的时候，你鼓励我不断努力．

句中"When I failed in an exam"为条件状语从句，主句"you encouraged me to keep trying"中有短语"encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事"、"keep doing sth一直做某事"．

提纲类作文的要点都给了出来，在写作的时候需要使用合适的连接词把这些要点连接成一个整体．同时注意使用高级词汇和句式让文章更有亮点．

6．（·丹江口市习家店中学中考模拟）初级写作

今天环境变得越来越糟糕，环境问题影响着人们的工作、学习、生活等，而我们的工作、生活、生产等又使环境污染越来越严重……如何保护我们的环境呢？

请以“How to protect / save our environment / world?”为题写一篇短文。

提示：存在问题：1.水污染越来越严重；2.砍伐森林严重；3.大气污染严重；4.白色垃圾等 .要求：如何改善/保护环境？至少3-4个方面，80-100词。

【答案】The environmental pollution is more and more serious today. We have no clean water to drink because of water pollution．And when trees are cut down，some animals disappear．There is more and more dirty smoke in the air．People's health has been greatly affected by air，noise and water pollution． Many people died of diseases．In order to live a better life，it's time for us to protect our world．

Firstly，we shouldn't throw away rubbish everywhere．And we should recycle，reduce and reuse things，for this saves money and reduces pollution．Use things for as long as possible．Don't use plastic bags．Also，we must plant more trees and stop people cutting them．We hope our world is more and more beautiful．

【解析】

【详解】

写作思路：先仔细审题，这是写好文章的前提．按照要求把所要表达的内容一一呈现出来，一定要确定好文章的重点，做到主次分明．短文可用一些短语和句式，增加文章的色彩．

本篇文章首先以The environmental pollution is more and more serious today.做到开篇点题，指出环境问题变得越来越严重，然后按照题目要求逐一列出现在所存在的问题。提出问题之后接着提出解决问题的办法，其中用到firstly,….Also…等使文章清晰明了，最后提出自己的期望We hope our world is more and more beautiful．文章做到内容完整，思路清晰，词语运用正确，是一篇很不错的文章。

7．（·山东中考模拟）书面表达

下图描述了李明和家人去年五一假期（May Day Holiday）外出旅游的经历。请根据图片提示，用英语写一篇100词左右的短文。

要求：1. 完整叙述图片内容，可适当发挥；

2. 结合自己的实际情况陈述个人观点或给出建议。

【答案】Last May Day holiday, Li Ming and his family went to Qingdao seaside. They paid a visit to Qingdao by bus. There are many places of interest in Qingdao. They went to the beach, visited the Museum. But there were many people on the beach. What you see at the seaside is not the scenery, but the numerous shaking heads. At the seaside, people don't pay attention to hygiene. There's rubbish everywhere. In my opinion, when traveling, people should not only pay attention to safety, but also pay attention to hygiene and not throw rubbish everywhere. We should avoid the rush hour and choose some unknown places.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇看图作文，根据图片的内容介绍一下李明和家人去年五一假期（May Day Holiday）外出旅游的经历。主要是要完整叙述图片内容、结合自己的实际情况陈述个人观点或给出建议。时态为一般过去时，人称为第三人称。在陈述个人观点或给出建议时用一般现在时来写。注意作文中必须包含图片上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。

【高分句型一】

What you see at the seaside is not the scenery, but the numerous shaking heads. 你在海边看到的不是风景，而是无数晃动的头。句子What you see at the seaside做主语。

【高分句型二】

In my opinion, when traveling, people should not only pay attention to safety, but also pay attention to hygiene and not throw rubbish everywhere. 在我看来，旅行时，人们不仅要注意安全，还要注意卫生，不要到处乱扔垃圾。该句话运用了not only…but also…。

8．（·北京中考模拟）环境保护人人有责，如果我们每一个人都能珍爱美丽地球保护自然资源，相信我们的家园会越来越美好。

某英文网站正在开展以“Going Green”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈我们面临的主要环境问题是什么，为改善环境我们能做什么，以及你的期望。

提示词语： pollution, protect, save, recycle, take action

提示问题：● What are the main environmental problems we have?● What can we do in our daily life? ● What’s your wish?

Now there are many environmental

problems._______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________

【答案】例文

Now there are many environmental problems. Such as air pollution, water pollution and so on.

I believe that there are many things we can do in our daily life, we can save energy by go to school by bike or on foot. We can use less water by turning off the tap while we brush our teeth, and taking shorter showers. When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins.

I hope everyone can take action. Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference. Let’s work together to make a better place to live.

【解析】

【详解】

题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，写作时要把我们面临的主要环境问题是什么，为改善环境我们能做什么，以及你的期望全部包括。

例文点评：例文采用的是三段式；用第一人称来叙述为改善环境我们能做什么；时态采用的是一般现在时，描述建议时，描写具体，条理清晰。

高分亮点：

短语：save energy；brush our teeth；put it into different bins；take action；make a big difference。

句型：When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins；Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference。

【点睛】

首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如save energy；brush our teeth；put it into different bins；take

action；make a big difference。以及状语从句等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

9．（·湖北中考模拟）书面表达

近年来，越来越多的中学将一些电子产品例如电脑、手机，甚至iPad 等引入了课堂。在提高教学质量的同时也使得教育更加多样化。但人们对此的看法褒贬不一。请根据以下表格，在英语课上和同学谈谈你的看法。

要点：

要求：1.语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺； 2.短文必须包括所给要点，可适当发挥；

3.词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。

Nowadays, more and more electronic products are introduced into class．We can get our homework on the mobile phone and hand it in by computer.____________________________【答案】Nowadays, more and more electronic products are introduced into class．We can get our homework on the mobile phone and hand it in by computer.It save some people and protect the environment. Students can watch videos on the computer.Therefore they are active in class. Some people think students shouldn’t use computers in https://www.360docs.net/doc/c115793525.html,puters are too expensive.It is easy for students to fall into the games.

I think students should use iPad in class.The teachers don’t allow students to play games in class.It is good for students to use iPad in class.

【解析】

【详解】

根据题意近年来，越来越多的中学将一些电子产品例如电脑、手机，甚至iPad 等引入了课堂。在提高教学质量的同时也使得教育更加多样化。但人们对此的看法褒贬不一。请根据以下表格，在英语课上和同学谈谈你的看法。我们所要做的首先是应用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。写作前先结合要表达的事情确定句子的人称时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。

【点睛】

这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如Some people think students shouldn’t use computers in https://www.360docs.net/doc/c115793525.html,puters are too expensive.It is easy for students to fall into the games. The teachers don’t allow students to play games in class.这些重点短语和句型，使文

章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

10．（·山东中考模拟）为了宣传和弘扬中华优秀传统文化, 某双语杂志将举办征文活动来介绍中国的经典故事, “程门立雪（Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully）”是其中一个选题。请你根据下面的内容提示, 用英语写一篇短文参加此活动。

内容提示：

1. 杨时去拜见老师程颐一老师在睡觉一杨时在雪地等一老师醒来发现杨时在门口

2. 通过介绍这个故事, 发表你的看法或者观点。

要求：

1. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯：词数：100左右.

2. 不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称、老师和同学的真实姓名。

【答案】Long long ago, there was a man called Yangshi. Once he went to visit his teacher, Chengyi. Unfortunately, Mr. Cheng was sleeping in the room. He didn’t wake up the teacher. So he stood in front of the gate. At that moment, there were snowflakes flying over his head and it was very cold. But yangshi still stood in the snow until Mr. Cheng woke up. When the teacher woke up, the snow was very deep. Yangshi was like a snowman standing at the gate. Finally, the teacher was moved deeply.

After reading the story, I think we should respect our teacher. We should study hard.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇材料作文，主要介绍中国的经典故事, “程门立雪（Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully）”。目的是宣传和弘扬中华优秀传统文化。时态为一般过去时，灵活运用动词的过去式。作文要包含材料上的所有信息，通过介绍这个故事，发表看法或者观点。写作时，避免汉语式英语。注意固定搭配及主谓一致的问题，例如:There was/ were...注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，具有条理性。

11．（·山东中考模拟）环保话题是人们最关心的话题之一，请以Change for a better China 为主题，结合自己家乡的变化写一篇英语短文。

注意事项：

1.短文应包括表格中的所有提示内容，条理清楚，作适当发挥。

2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名,词数不少于80。

Change for a better China

____________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________【答案】We all know it is becoming more and more important to protect our environment well. But some people don’t care about it .They th row litter into the river and even worse factories also put waste into the river, the river is full of rubbish. The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days. Factories that burn coal also pollute the air with a lot of black smoke. We hardly ever see blue skies anymore.

I think everyone in our hometown should play a part in cleaning it up. We should write to the government ,they should close down the factories. Trees are very helpful and important for the environment .We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more

healthy .Now, Our hometown has started to face the problem, I believe we can make our country a better place if we keep trying.

【解析】

【详解】

环保话题是人们最关心的话题之一，请以Change for a better China为主题，结合自己家乡的变化写一篇英语短文。要求中已经给出了部分提示，动笔先应先认真阅读提示，确定写作内容。写作中注意表达观点时的常用句式，注意在表达不同观点时，连词的使用。内容上应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。

【点睛】

本文紧扣要求对家乡做了简单介绍，内容完整，用了表格中的信息。2. 句式丰富。表述灵活。衔接自然，顺畅。文中用到了一些好的句型：The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days.；We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more healthy.给文中增色不少。

12．（·江苏中考模拟）假设你是Beth,前段时间曾向英语校刊投送一篇题为My English Teacher Miss Zhang的短诗。近日，又至毕业季，师生们忙着互致临别赠言。为此，编辑部策划开“A Letter to My Teacher”专栏，邀请你以信件的形式重新投稿。短诗如下：

My English Teacher Miss Zhang

There is a teacher, Miss Zhang,

Who is friendly, patient and helpful.

Always encouraging us to try,

She leads us to a world of "why".

We all respect and admire her.

注意事项：

1.稿件内容须根据短诗展开合理想象，不得抄写短诗原文：

2.要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合情境。

3.词数在70个左右，稿件的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数：

4.稿件必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。

【答案】Dear Editorial Office,

I am writing to recommend as The Most Popular Teacher．She is Miss Zhang.

She is my English teacher． She is in her forties． Her small round glasses make her look smart． She often works to high standards and is willing to work extra hours． She is kind and helpful， too． She always helps us with our study． She loves jogging， so she looks healthy． To my surprise， she has donated blood many times since 2001． She has also decided to donate her body for medical research after her death． I really love her and I want to be a teacher like her in the future． I think Miss Zhang is the most suitable person to be the Most Popular Teacher．

I hope that you agree with me．

Yours sincerely，

Beth,【解析】

【详解】

本文是一篇给材料作文。根据编辑部策划开“A Letter to My Teacher”专栏，邀请你以信件的形式重新投稿。文章时态用一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称。本文所给材料比较详细，考生要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并可适当发挥。在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

【点睛】

点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

13．（·湖南中考模拟）假如你是李华，请你根据以下提示用英语写一封保护大象的倡议

书。

提示：陆地上最大的哺乳动物，可以活到80岁。目前数量在减少，因为：

1）人们砍伐森林，大象渐渐失去家园；

2）人们捕杀大象，获取象牙。

3）应如何保护它们（不少于三条）。

要求：1）恰当运用比较级和最高级；2）80词左右。倡议书的结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：哺乳动物mammal; 象牙ivory

Dear classmates

I believe everyone's contribution （贡献） can make a big difference.

Yours,

Lihua 【答案】Dear classmates,

Elephants are the largest mammals on the land and they can live up to be eighty years. But now the number of the elephants is decreasing because of the following reasons. Firstly, people cut down trees in the forest, so elephants are losing their homes. Secondly, people also kill elephants for their ivory.

As a result, we need to do something to help them. First, we should plant more trees to build the homes for elephants. Second, we can put up post on the street to tell people that it is against the law to kill elephants. Or we can also hold some activities in some public places to spread the idea of protecting the elephants.

I believe everyone's contribution （贡献） can make a big difference.

Yours,

Lihua 【解析】

【详解】

本文是一封倡议书,倡议大家保护大象。文章共分为三个方面的内容，首先描述大象想在所处的现状，然后说明出现这种状况的原因，最后为了保护的大象我们应该如何去做。时态主要为一般现在时。提出倡议时可以使用We can/ We should/ Let’s/We’d better的表示建议的句子。写作时注意不要使用太复杂的句型，以免出现语法错误，为使句子具有连贯性，可以适当使用连词。本篇文章内容完整，符合材料要求，Elephants are the largest

mammals …,及First, we should plant more trees 也使用到了比较级和最高级；Firstly,…. Secondly,…等词的使用使文章具有层次性，条理清晰。并且一些连词的使用，比如so, or, but等也使文章具有连贯性，是一篇不错的文章。

14．（·天津中考模拟）书面表达

以“我是…… 的一员”为题，写一篇80-100字的短文，标点符号不占格。提示：你可以作为任意兴趣小组或社团的一员，或者作为家庭、班级、社区的一员，写出你的经历、感受等。内容可以包括以下几方面：

Are you glad to be a member of...?

What do you do in it?

How do you feel as such a member?

I’m a member of... （请将题目自行补充完整，已给的单词不计入总词数）

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________

【答案】I’m a Member of the Singing and Dancing Club

Hello, everyone! I’m very glad I'm a member of the Singing and Dancing Club. I have been in this club for 2 years. I’m an actor in the club. Many students in our school have joined the club, so I also have made a lot of friends.We have many activities on campus.Each week,we have two times of training. I sing and dance with my classmates on weekends. Though I am very tired, but I am always happy when I dance.All the members in the club are just brothers and sisters. I like this club very much.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇给材料作文。要求以“我是…… 的一员”为题，写一篇短文。首先考生需要把题目补充完整，然后根据所给出的材料提示，动笔写作。文章时态主要用一般现在时和现在完成时，人称主要用第一人称。在写作时，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。

【点睛】

首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；同时注意语句要通顺，词汇书写无误，不要出现语法错误。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

15．（·天津中考模拟）请你根据以下内容提示，以“The Story of Lingling”为题，为社区宣传专栏写一篇短文，介绍在玲玲身上发生的一件事。

（1）上周晚饭后玲玲和妈妈一起出去散步，在社区的门口看见一个钱包；

（2）玲玲把钱包捡起，发现钱包里有身份证和一些钱；

（3）玲玲和妈妈把钱包交给保安，保安把这个消息发到小区的微信群中；

（4）失主看到消息后，过来取回钱包并对玲玲和妈妈表示感谢；

（5）你觉得……

参考词汇：社区 community 身份证 ID card 保安 guard 微信群 Wechat group 失主owner

要求：

（1）词数：80～100个。

（2）短文的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。

（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。

The Story of Lingling

Last

week___________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________

【答案】The Story of Lingling

Last Friday, Lingling went out for a walk with her mother after supper. She saw a wallet at the door of the community. Lingling picked up her wallet and found that there were ID cards and some money in it. Lingling and her mother handed the wallet to the security guard, who sent the news to the microphone group in the community. When the owner saw the news, he came to fetch her wallet and thanked Lingling and her mother. .I think Li Hua did a good deed.We should learn from her.

【解析】

【详解】

本文是一篇给材料作文。根据以下内容提示，以“The Story of Lingling”为题，为社区宣传专栏写一篇短文，介绍在玲玲身上发生的一件事。文章时态用一般过去时，人称主要为第三人称。本文所给材料比较详细，考生要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并可适当发挥。在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

【点睛】

点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每

个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

16．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达

以下是你校校刊YOUTH中YOUR VOICE栏目的征稿内容，请根据提示，用英语写一篇短文，表达你的想法。

Hi,

I’m David, the editor of YOUTH. We all know the exchange students are going back to the US soon. We would like to give them some traditional Chinese things as gifts, such as Chinese paintings, silk, tea …Today I would like to collect some ideas. In your article, you should:

? recommend two traditional Chinese things

? show your reasons why you recommend them

Looking forward to hearing from you.

David

注意事项：

1. 对所有要点逐一陈述，适当发挥。

2. 要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合情境；

3. 词数在90个左右，感谢信的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；

4. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am glad to share my opinion with you.____________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,

I am glad to share my opinion with you. I would like to recommend Chinese paintings as a gift because Chinese paintings have a long history. What’s more, they are quite different from the ones in the US. Foreign friends can learn more about Chinese art from them.

The second gift I want to recommend is silk scarves. Silk is a symbol of our great culture and popular among Chinese people. It feels very soft and comfortable. Why not buy them some silk scarves?

I believe the exchange students will like the two gifts and always remember the moments with us.【解析】

【详解】

本文主要是向别人分享想法，推荐礼物。第一句话点题，随后引出文章的两个主题，一· recommend two traditional Chinese things。例如：I would like to recommend Chinese paintings as a gift because Chinese paintings have a long history. 以及The second gift I want to recommend is silk scarves.二· show your reasons why you recommend them。理由一：because Chinese paintings have a long history. What’s more, they are quite different from the ones in the

US. 理由二：Silk is a symbol of our great culture and popular among Chinese people. It feels very soft and comfortable.最后用I believe the exchange students will like the two gifts and always remember the moments with us总结全篇。文章干净利落，层次分明。

17．（·吉林省实验中考模拟）（B）《朗读者》第五期节目中，主持人在开场白中说道：“我们的一生，会经历很多的第一次，难忘而又宝贵，它意味着我们的成长。”请谈谈你人生中最难忘的“第一次”，或许是第一次做家务、第一次旅行、第一次成功……并说说你从中学到了什么或有哪些收获。不少于80词。（文中不得出现真实的人名和校名）

【答案】The First Cooking

Last weekend, my parents went out and only I stayed at home. So I had to cook a meal for myself. First I washed the cabbages and then cooked it. But I didn't know how to cook them I put too much salt into the cabbages. So they tasted too salty. I had to throw them away. But I didn't lose my heart. This weekend, I asked my mother to teach me how to cook. She taught me how much salt I should use. Wow, the cabbages tasted good. My mother praised me and I felt very happy. Now I know that if I try hard, I will succeed.

【解析】

【分析】

本文为材料作文，需要写出第一次做某事，人生中有许多第一次，可以挑选一件让自己感觉深刻，并且从中学到了许多东西的事件来写，这样的话，贴近生活实际，学生有话可说。

【详解】

本文写了我的第一次做饭，先交代背景知识，因为父母不在家，所以我不得不自己动手，动手做的过程中，由于没有经验，理所当然地失败了。但是，我不能气馁，要从失败中找原因，从哪里跌倒，就从哪里起来，所以，第二周，我让妈妈教我做菜，获得了成功，而且知道了，只要不放弃，就能获得成功。

【点睛】

本篇作文贴近实际，每个人都有第一次，挑选一件自己有话可说的来写即可。但是需要注意文章逻辑，语篇顺序，注意连接词的使用和长短句结合。这样的话，文章符合英文造句习惯，更容易获得高分。

18．（·徐州市西苑中学中考模拟）书面表达

一日之计在于晨。同学们，沐浴在晨光中，行走在上学路上，当我们有充足的时间安排一天的学习生活时，你会发现每天早起一点点会给我们带来许多好处。请你以“ It’s good to get up early”为题，写一篇90词左右短文。

要求：

1. 包含所给信息，并适当发挥。

2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写整洁。

3. 词数90词左右。开头已给，不计入总词数。

It’s good to get up early

Getting up early is a good habit. It’s good for us in many ways.

______________________________________________________________________________【答案】It’s good to get up early

Getting up early is a good habit. It’s good for us in many ways. Firstly ,we can have enough time to plan a day better .Secondly,,doing exercise is good for our health .Also, breathing the fresh air is good to our bodies and our moods, and it can help remember important things easily. Thirdly, having breakfast can help protect our stomachs ,make us have good health ,and have more energy to do all kinds of things better.

In a word, the morning is the key of a day. Everyone should get up early every day.

【解析】

【详解】

本文是一篇话题作文。要求以“ It’s good to get up early”为题，写一篇90词左右短文。文章时态用一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称。本文所给材料比较详细，考生要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并可适当发挥。在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

【点睛】

19．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达。

29.假如你是李华，你最近认识的美国笔友David给你发了一封电子邮件，向了解你进初三以来在学习和生活方面的一些变化、收获和感受。请根据下面的提示及你的实际写封回信。

提示：less free time，much homework，more pressure，get into a good high school

more exercise，lose weight join the English Comer，improve English a lot

colorful and meaningful，learn more knowledge

注意：1）词数80左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；

2）回复须包括所有药店，可适当发挥，使全文连贯、通顺；

3）文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

Dear David，

Thank you so much for your mail. I'm happy to tell you about how my life has changed recently.

【答案】Dear David，

Thank you so much for your mail. I'm happy to tell you about how my life has changed recently. In the past , I had a lot of free time. In my free time , I used to take more exercise to lose weight. My life has changed a lot since I got into a good high school. I have more pressure . I have much homework to do every day . I have less free time to do leisure activities. In my spare time , I join in the English corner to practice my spoken English. This improves my English a lot . I learn more knowledge . My life is busy but it is colorful and meaningful.

Best wishes，

Li Hua

【解析】

【分析】

本文是一篇材料作文。

【详解】

根据题干“假如你是李华，你最近认识的美国笔友David给你发了一封电子邮件，向了解你进初三以来在学习和生活方面的一些变化、收获和感受。”要求可知，本文用现在完成时、一般现在时和一般过去时，人称是第一人称。

英语作文一般分为三个部分：

第一部分：开篇点题——介绍我进初三以来在学习和生活方面的一些变化、收获和感受。第二部分：文章主体——根据提示内容，依次介绍我进初三以来在学习和生活方面的一些变化、收获和感受。

这里要分为三个小节：

小节1：过去我的学习和生活是什么样的——有肯多课余时间做自己喜欢的事情。用一般

过去时。

小节2：进初三以来在学习和生活方面发生了变化。用现在完成时。

小节3：介绍现在的生活状态——忙碌的学习。用一般现在时。

第三部分：总结全文——我的生活很忙但是很有意义。

20．（·北京中考模拟）年2月20日，中央宣传部授予北京榜样优秀群体“时代楷模”称号。时代楷模充分体现“爱国、敬业、诚信、友善”的价值准则。

某网站正在开展以“向时代楷模学习”为主题的英语征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈生活中你该怎么做，以及这样做的意义。

提示词语：pick up, rubbish, study, honest, important

提示问题：● What should you do in your daily life? ● Why do you do so?

As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models.

【答案】例文

As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models. First, we can protect the environment. For example, we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on. Second, we shall respect people around us. Respect others to start from small things. Third, behave well. We should be kind to others, warm-hearted to everyone, and generous to our friends. By doing so, our world will become more and more beautiful.

【解析】

【详解】

题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，但写作时要按照应用文格式写，写作时承接短文开头，具体写出怎样做以及这样做的意义。

例文点评：例文采用的是一段式，人称用的是第一人称复数形式，时态主要用的是一般现在时，描述具体怎么做时，描写细致，条理清晰。

高分亮点：

短语：protect the environment；pick up the rubbish；behave well；be kind to sb；more and more beautiful。

句型：By doing so, our world will become more and more beautiful；we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on。

21．（·黑龙江中考模拟）话题作文：根据汉语提示和要求写一篇短文。（A和B两篇，可任选一篇）

现在有许多新的购物方式，网上购物就是其中的一种。越来越多的人熟悉和喜欢网购，但是网购有利有弊，请根据下面提供的信息用英语以“Online shopping”为题写一篇短文，描述网购的优点和缺点，并谈谈自己的看法。

优点：1、可以在任何时候购物；2、只需要一台电脑和鼠标；3、方便比较同类产品的价格，可以省钱；

4、无论何时何地都可以收到所购物品。

缺点：1、网上付款有时不安全；2、看不到实物，也不能试穿衣服。

注意：1、语意连贯，表达准确；2、词数80－100。字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合

乎逻辑，可适当发挥。

【答案】Online shopping

There are many new ways of shopping, and online shopping is one of them.

Online shopping has several advantages. First, you can shop at any time. Second, to shop on the Internet you only need a computer and mouse. Third, you can compare the prices of the same product and save money. You can also receive it anywhere in the world at any time!

But shopping on the Internet also has some disadva ntages. Paying over the Internet isn’t always safe. You can’t see the product or try the clothes on.

I think our life is changing because of online shopping. One day no one will go to the shops any more, because you’ll be able to buy almost anything on the Internet.

【解析】本文属于材料作文，要表达网络购物的利与弊。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运

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