高考英语作文之提纲式作文

提纲式作文：

Directions:

Women make a great contribution to the progress of modern society. But there are still some people who don’t agree with it.

There has been a discussion recently on the issue in a newspaper. Write an essay to the newspaper based on the following outline.

1. Role of women in modern society

2. Prejudices and discrimination against women

3. My comment

You should write about 200 words within 40 minutes.

Women play an important part in modern society. Now many women are going into professions, such as medicine, law and engineering. They comprise a large part of the workers in offices and

factories. Many jobs they are engaged in are in line with their special capabilities of their sex. In addition, some of are working up to important positions which used to be held mainly by men. There are even some businesses which are run completely by women. It is obvious that women are making an outstanding contribution to the progress of modern society.

There are, however, still some people who assert that men are superior to women in many ways. In the first place, many jobs men do can hardly be done by women, who are physically not strong enough. They believe that women are the weaker sex –both physically and emotionally. Thus, women are naturally suited, much more so than men, to the performance of domestic duties. According to them, a woman’s place is within the protective environment of the home. Secondly, most of the world-famous scientists and statesmen are found to be males. Finally, the whole society seems to have always been dominated by men only. In their opinion, men should enjoy more rights than do women.

Personally, I’m firmly standing on the side of those women right defenders. Since both men and women are equally important in human activities, they should be on an equal footing. (242 words)

（1）提纲式作文

Road Accidents

Outline:

1.Losses caused by road accidents

2.Suggested ways to reduce road accidents

3.My comments

最近5年来道路事故的数目不断上升，尤其在城市中。每当发生交通事故，有关的人员不是受伤就是死亡。它们对国家和受害者的家庭造成了巨大的损失。因此，迫在眉睫的是，我们应该采取措施来减少交通事故并确保道路安全。

我想有几个方法可以降低事故率。首先，政府应该采取有力措施来改善道路状况。例如：应该投资更多的钱来建造新的公路，许多又老又窄城市街道应加宽或重建。其次，地方当局应该用各种可能的方法来教育人民遵守交通规则。最后，行人穿过繁华街道时应小心谨慎。

我认为，以上所提到的几个方面是避免交通事故所必需的。随着车辆不断的增加，城市道路正变得越来越拥挤。但是假如每个人各尽其责并遵守交通规则，道路将会变得更安全。我相信，交通状况将会改善，尽管我们还有许多的困难要克服。

Road Accidents

In the past five years the number of road accidents has been on the rise in big cities. Whenever they happen, the people involved are either injured or killed. They cause great losses both to the co untry and to victims’ families. Therefore, it is urgent that we do something to reduce traffic accidents and make our roads safe.

There are several ways I think to cut down to accident rate. In the first place, the government should take effective measures to improve road conditions. For example, more funds ought to be invested in building new highways and many of the old narrow streets in cities widened or reconstructed. Secondly, local authorities should educate people in every possible way to comply with traffic regulations. Finally, pedestrians should be very careful whenever crossing busy streets.

In my opinion, the above mentioned ways are essential to avoid traffic accidents. With the number of cars continuing to rise, the roads in cities are getting more and more crowded. But if everyone does his part and observes traffic rules, the road will be safer to all of us. I trust traffic conditions will be improving though we still have a long way to go. (200 words)

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Directions:

Title: Only Stricter Traffic Laws Can Prevent Accidents

Your composition should be based on the Outline given below:

1. Every day, thousands of people die from traffic accidents in the world.

2. a. Drivers pay no attention to their driving behavior.

b. the whole society indulgent towards the peace breaker, too much traffic in both the city and the countryside.

3. make laws and regulations to prevent accidents.

Only Stricter Traffic Laws Can Prevent Accidents

Though the possibility of living a long and happy life is greater than ever before, every day we cites the incredible slaughter of men, women and children on the roads. Man versus the motorcar! It is a never-ending battle which man is losing. Thousands of people in the world are killed or horribly mutilated each year and we are quietly sitting back and letting it happen.

It has been rightly said that when a man is sitting behind a steering wheel, his car becomes the extension of his personality. There is no doubt that the motorcar often brings out a man’s very worst qualities. People who are normally quiet and pleasant may become unrecognizable when they are behind a steering wheel. They are ill-mannered and aggressive, willful as two-year olds and utterly selfish.

The surprising thing is that society smiles so benignly on the motorist and seems to condone his behavior. Everything is done for his convenience. Cities are allowed to become almost uninhabitable because of heavy traffic; the countryside is desecrated by road networks; and the mass annual slaughter becomes nothing more than a statistic, to be conveniently forgotten.

It is high time a world code were created to reduce this senseless waste of human life. With regard to driving, laws of some countries are notoriously lax and even the strictest are not strict enough. A code which was universally accepted could only have dramatically beneficial effect on the accident rate.

译文

只有制定更严格的法律才能防止事故发生

尽管现在幸福和长寿比以前更容易得到，但每天却有很多人丧身车轮。人和车的冲突永无止境，人却是受害者。世界上每年都有成千上万的人死于车祸, 我们再也不能坐视不管。有一种说法我认为是对的，每当人们手握方向盘的时候，他们的个性就显露出来了。勿容置疑汽车将人们的恶性显露出来。平时安静的人一开车马上变得让人认不出。他们变得具有攻击性，极度自私，像两岁孩子一样任性。

令人惊奇的是人们对于肇事者的态度十分纵容。为他们提供了各种便利条件。由于严重的交通拥挤，城市几乎变得不适合认居住。乡村也被各种公路网所污染。大量的交通死亡人数也只不过是一些数字，被人们所遗忘。

我们必须要建立一种世界制度来制止这种对生命的扼杀。一些国家关于驾驶的法律太松懈，甚至最严酷的法律也是那么无力。被普遍接受的世界制度对于降低事故率只会有利。