英语作文2--记叙文

二、记叙文

1．记人

A．写作结构指导

记叙你所喜欢、感激或难忘的人物，可在开篇点题之后，抓住人物的性格特征展开记叙，通过具体事例说明其性格特征，也可从该人物的优秀品质对你的影响这个角度来写。文章可用强调句型构成排比句式增强描述性，以突出人物特征。

B．常用句型

When asked who impresses me/I love/respect most, I will respond without any hesitation．．．

如果被问及给我印象最深/我最热爱/最尊敬的人是谁，我会毫不犹豫地回答．．．．．．

I admire him for his positive outlook towards life. 我敬佩他对人生的积极态度。

It seems that nothing is impossible for him. 对他来说，似乎没什么是不能做到的。

As a man of enthusiasm, he has a power to fan the sparks of wisdom in us.

他热情四射，并有一种能够激发我们智慧火花的力量。

He really has a great influence on me. 他的确对我有很大的影响。

I love．．．because．．．我爱．．．．．．因为．．．．．．

He has set a good example for us. 他给我们树立了—个良好的榜样。

Whenever I meet with difficulties, he gives me courage and determination to overcome them.

每当我碰到困难，他总是给我战胜困难的勇气和决心。

He practises what he preaches. 他总是身体力行。

His deeds inspire me to make continuous efforts to fulfill my dream.

他的事迹激励我不断努力去实现梦想。

The reason why I admire him is that．．．我之所以敬佩他是因为．．．．．．

He is really a man worthy of our respect. 他的确是一个值得我们尊敬的人。

He is held in high esteem because．．．他受人尊敬是因为．．．．．．

He is a hardworking person who has been devoted to．．．heart and soul.

他工作勤奋，全心全意地投入到．．．．．．

It is you who enlighten my mind；it is you who tap my potential in．．．; and it is you who lead me to．．．

是你启迪了我的智慧，是你发掘了我．．．．．．方面的潜力，是你指引我走向．．．．．．

C．全国高考学生习作点评

(2008年湖南卷)

请从下列人物中选择你最喜欢的一位，用英语写一篇120词左右的短文。

要求根据所给信息作适当发挥，且需包括以下三部分内容：

范文

My favourite person among the three is Helen Keller, an ordinary but great woman. She lost her sight when she was three in an accident. But she overcame a lot of unimaginable difficulties to learn languages, and eventually she mastered 8 different languages and finished her book Three Days to See. I like Helen Keller for her optimism and perseverance. Disabled as she was, she didn't lose hope for life. Instead, she was eager to learn. Despite all the difficulties, she didn't give up halfway. The book she wrote is the best proof of her unrelenting efforts. The story of Helen Keller has a great influence on me. Whenever I want to quit because of the failure or frustration, the image of Helen Keller will flash into my mind. I seem to hear her saying, "A little more effort, and you will achieve your goal." Inspired by Helen Keller, I come to realize the meaning of the saying "Nothing is impossible for a person with perseverance".

D．实战演练以“People I Love Most”为题，写一篇不少于120字的记叙文。

If asked who I love most, I will tell you without a moment's delay that my parents are dearest to me.

I love my parents most, for it is my parents who create a sweet home for me. It is not as magnificent as a palace, but it is bright, clean and tidy. Mother and father think more of others than themselves. In our home, not a single complaint can you hear. It is full of love, warmth and harmony, which is the source of all my confidence, wisdom and strength.

I love my parents, for it is my parents who teach me to take the first step. With their help, I learnt to walk and speak and stepped into the gate of knowledge. With their enlightenment, I look at the world with great curiosity and develop my interest in history, music and sports. They stick to the principle that example is better than precept and they practise what they preach. They tell me that we are important when we are lending our helping hands. Under their influence, I know what makes an all-round person and I know the importance of honesty, generosity, enthusiasm and perseverance.

I love my parents, for they encourage me to steer my ship with hope, leaving fears behind. When I make progress, they give me warm praise; when I meet with difficulties, they offer me courage and determination? Without their love and encouragement, how can I grow healthily?

I am very lucky to have my parents. I owe all my success to them and I want to tell them how much I love them and how much I am grateful to them.

语言亮点

Useful phrases：

an all-round person全面发展的人 steer my ship with hope怀揣希望，乘风破浪

owe all my success to them把我所有的成功归功于他们

Useful sentences：

In our home, not a single complaint can you hear. It is full of love, warmth and harmony, which is the source of all my confidence, wisdom and strength. 在我家里，听不到任何抱怨。它充满了爱、温馨与和谐，这些是我自信、智慧和力量的源泉。

With their enlightenment, I look at the world with great curiosity and develop interesting a variety of things．

在他们的启迪之下，我带着好奇的眼睛看世界，并形成了各种各样的爱好。

They stick to the principle that example is better than precept and they practice what they preach. 他们信守“榜样的力量是无穷的”这个原则并凡事以身作则。

二、记叙文

2．叙事

A．写作结构指导

叙事型作文要牢记六要素，即人物、时间、地点、事件、过程及结果。事件过程的叙述要有情节性，要娓娓道来，要通过多种句式使叙述生动。

B．常用句型

I still clearly remember the day when．．．我仍然清晰地记得那天．．．．．．

Vivid memories come flooding back to the day when．．．

．．．．．．的生动记忆如潮水般涌来。

Never will I forget．．．我永远也不会忘记．．．．．．

I will cherish the memories and make them rooted in my heart．

我会珍藏这些记忆，让它们永留心间。

C．全国高考学生习作点评(2008年江西卷)

学校计划举行英语作文竞赛，主题为"We Need Advice from Older Generations"。

请根据下列要求写一篇作文：

你遇到了困难或问题，不知该怎么办。你去请教一位长辈，后来问题得到了解决。

要求写清楚下面三点：

(1) 当时面临的困难或问题是什么? (2) 你获得的指教是什么? (3 )结果如何?

注意：作文总词数为100左右

范文

There are times when you meet with difficulties or find it hard to make a choice. It is the time when the advice of the older generations is of great value.

Take my own experience as an example. At the end of Senior Two, I had to make a decision whether to major in arts or science. Being good at science subjects, I intended to choose physics as my major. However, my best friend Lily chose geography, saying there would be more chances for us to be admitted into a key university because of relatively fewer examinees in this subject. Then I was at a loss which to choose.

Seeing I was hesitant, my father had a talk with me. He suggested that I should choose according to my own interest and ability, regardless of others' thoughts. He told me my interest will inspire me to tap my potential fully and my ability will give me more confidence to overcome difficulties.

With my father's help, I firmly chose physics and Lily, finally understood me and respected my choice. From this experience, I realize that older generations, having rich experience, can help us young men make sensible decisions.

D．实战演练

以“An Unforgettable Traditional Festival”为题，写一篇不少于120词的作文。

范文

As soon as I see the title, it produces an extraordinary sequence of mental images. Vivid memories come flooding back to the Spring Festival ten years ago?

Everyone was fully occupied to welcome the most important festival in China. My mother

shuttled between markets, buying food, fruits, gifts and so on. Tired as she was, she neither complained, nor asked us for help. It seemed that she had inexhaustible energy. Father, a man who seldom stepped into the kitchen, should claim he would cook delicious fish for us! To fulfill his promise, he practised cooking secretly at night when we fell asleep. My brother and I didn't want to sit still. We spent a whole afternoon cleaning the house thoroughly. Not a single dirty corner escaped our eyes. When Mum came back, she was surprised and satisfied, saying that we children had grown up and were considerate to parents. On New Year's Eve, the whole family sat around the table, making dumplings. It was the first time for us children to make dumplings, so we did not have enough experience to be good at it. All the good humour reawoke in my mind as I recalled the funny arguments we had that night about who made genuine dumplings.

Time flies! Ten years has already passed before I know it, but the warmth and good feelings remain in my heart and will be there forever?

B．语言亮点

Useful phrases：

welcome the most important festival 迎接最重要的节日

shuttle between 穿梭在……之间

inexhaustible energy 无限的精力

be surprised and satisfied 感到惊喜和满足

Useful phrases：

As soon as I see the title, it produces an extraordinary sequence of mental images. Vivid memories come flooding back to the Spring Festival ten years ago.

一看到这个作文题目，我的脑海里就浮现出了一连串的图像。记忆如潮水般回到十年前的春节。

Tired as she was, she neither complained, nor asked us for help.

虽然很疲劳，但她并不抱怨，也不要求我们帮助她。

All the good humour reawoke in my mind as I recalled the funny arguments we had that night about who made genuine dumplings．

当我回忆起我们那晚就谁包的饺子最正宗进行有趣的争诊时，所有令人发笑的场景在我脑海里重现。

Time flies! Ten years has already passed before I know it, but the warmth and good feelings remain in my heart and will be there forever．

时光飞逝!不知不觉十年过去了，但美好温馨的回忆依然没有消逝并将永远留在心间。

二、记叙文3．叙事言情

A．写作结构指导

第一段：引出记叙的主体事件。

第二段：事件和故事的叙述要有情节性，要通过多种句式使叙述生动。千万不要用说明或议论的套路，比如first, second, last but not least等表示层次的连接词就不适合在叙述

中出现。

第三段：用一到两句话总结此事给自己留下的深刻印象或对自己产生的影响。

B．常用句型

The unforgettable experience makes me convinced that．．．这次难忘的经历使我深信……

I really benefit a lot from the experience, which inspires me to．．．

这次经历的确使我受益匪浅，它激励我……

I think it is my duty to be actively involved in it and do my part．

我认为我有责任积极参与，尽自己的一份力。

I cannot look on, doing nothing．我不能袖手旁观，什么也不做。

To ensure its success, we made a detailed plan．为确保成功，我们制定了一个详细的计划。

C. 全国高考学生习作点评(2009年北京卷) 假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为响应绿化祖国的号召，你班4月12日去郊区植树，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍植树活动的全过程，给某英文杂志的“绿色行动”专栏写一篇以"Green Action in Our Class"为题的英文稿件。注意：词数不少于600 提示词：郊区suburbs

范文April 12 is unforgettable because our class carried out a meaningful activity on that day.

In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees as arranged, talking and laughing all the way. Despite the cold wind, nobody let out a complaint. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately. Everyone was actively involved in it, with some carrying and planting young trees, some digging and some watering trees. In no time, lines of trees came into view. After getting the work done, we put up a board which said "Take Care of the Trees", reminding people to do their part for the protection of the environment. Before leaving, we took some photos so as to cherish the good memories.

Seeing the lines of trees, we felt relieved and we all had a sense of achievement. We strongly felt if everyone contributed a little to beautifying the environment, we would have a better city and better life.

D．实战演练以《难忘的献血活动》为题，写一篇不少于120字的作文。

范文

On May 12th, 2008, the biggest earthquake in Chinese history hit Wenchuan, causing billions of dollars' worth of damage: buildings collapsed; homes disappeared; people were injured or killed. The whole nation was shocked at such a disaster. While feeling sorry for the victims, everyone felt a strong need to respond actively. As students living a peaceful life, we thought it our duty to lend our helping hands. After a heated discussion, we decided to urge more students to take part in the blood donation campaign.

To hit the original target of 300 bags of blood at the weekend, we made a considered plan. Before the day of donation, we got in touch with Xinhua hospital, persuading them to make our school a place to donate. Students were familiar with the environment and they had no trouble finding the place. Then we made and sent out leaflets, getting people well informed of some general knowledge of blood donation. On the day of donation, we were all in place with some students helping with the organization work and others keeping order. After each donation, we offered juice, milk and cookies just in time so that the donors could go about their daily activities soon. Each of us did his part conscientiously, making sure every donor's experience was a positive one. With combined efforts of all the students, teachers and medical workers, the campaign was a great success? Though there were still some shortcomings in the organization, we were relieved to see a large number of people full of love and devoted to charity. We firmly believe, charity, the act of spreading love and care, will be rooted in people’s heart.

b．语言亮点

Useful phrases：

billions of dollars’ worth of damage 几十亿美元的财产损失

urge more students to take part in the blood donation campaign

号召更多学生参与献血活动

hit the original target 达到预期目标 get in touch with 和．．．．．．取得联系

get people well informed of some general knowledge of blood donation

让人们清楚了解献血的基本常识

go about one's daily activities 进行日常活动

Useful sentences：

We were all in place with some students helping with the organization work and others keeping order. 我们都各就各位，有些帮忙组织工作，有些维持秩序。

Each of us did his part conscientiously, making sure every donor's experience was a positive one. 我们每个人尽心尽职，确保每个献血者的经历是愉快的。

With combined efforts of all the students, teachers and medical workers, the campaign was a great success. 在所有学生、老师和医务人员的共同努力之下，此次活动圆满成功。

Though there were still some shortcomings in the organization, we were relieved to see a large number of people full of love and devoted to charity. We firmly believe, charity, the act of spreading love and care, will be rooted in people's heart.

虽然在组织工作方面仍有不足，但我们欣慰地看到这么多富有爱心的人投入慈善。我们深信，慈善这个传播爱的活动，将扎根于人们的心间。

二、记叙文

1．以" The Day I lam Looking forward to"为题写一篇作文，你的作文必须包括：a．你为什么盼望这天；b．这一天的具体情况。

When I see the topic, I cannot help imagining the first day I go to work. I'm so looking forward to the day.

As we all know, working is so different from learning in the school where we receive knowledge passively. While working, we should learn new skills by ourselves and it's certain that we will face more challenges. Besides, working means independence. We can earn a living on our own instead of asking our parents for money. In the near future, we can even support our parents. So I'm looking forward to the day when I go to work.

I hope I will be employed by a multinational computer company. On the first day, I will be dressed up formally, stepping into the company full of vigour and enthusiasm. And I will greet everyone I meet in the company with a gentle smile. Of course, all my colleagues will give me a big smile or a hug in return. I will be inspired by the efficiency of our group and then devoted to work wholeheartedly.

Of course, I should work harder from now, or my wonderful imagination will go in vain. Vm sure as long as I go all out, the day I'm looking forward to will come!

2．教师节来临之际，以“感谢师恩”为话题，记叙老师对你的帮助，并表达你的感激之情。

Teaching is one of the most glorious and respectable careers. I admire teachers for their devotion and strong sense of responsibility. On Teachers' Day, I'd like to express my innermost appreciation to all my teachers who offered me selfless love when I was in need.

I still remember how my teachers pulled me through the most difficult time when I did a bad job in the model test for the National College Entrance Examination. I was totally depressed, thinking I was finished, and almost gave up making any efforts. Then it was my teachers who noticed my bad mood and came to my rescue. Patiently, my English teacher helped me to analyze my mistakes and figure out where I should attach the greatest importance to. She encouraged me to carry on without thinking too much of the temporary defeat. My maths teacher gave me a precious gift一a collection of typical mistakes we students tend to make in exams. She told me not to care too much about the test results but to seek fun in learning. My class sponsor helped me reflect on all my strengths and weaknesses, assuring me that I would definitely fulfill my dream and attain my goal as long as I rebuilt self-confidence and made continuous efforts. None of them regarded me as being hopeless, nor did they turn a blind eye to my regression. Thanks to their timely help and affectionate love, I was stirred up to study even harder and made some progress.

Many a time, I still cannot help looking back on the days with bitter and sweet memories. The images of my teachers flooded into my mind, vivid and lifelike. Perhaps I'll never have a chance to repay all that I have received from them. But I'll live up to their expectations and try to be a useful person worthy of their devotion.

3．人人都渴望幸福。但有时我们忙于学业或工作而忽视了生活中点点滴滴的幸福。你认为幸福是什么? 请结合生活中的事例阐述你对幸福的理解。

Everyone is eager for happiness while their understanding towards it varies from individual to individual. Some people think that happiness is hard to get. But as far as I am concerned,

happiness lies everywhere in life.

Happiness is the loving care from our parents. Every night, when Mum comes in quietly with a cup of hot tea, saying "Take it easy" or "Go to bed early", I find I have nothing to complain, nothing to fear and nothing to worry. My heart is full of warmth of happiness.

Happiness comes from the support of our friends. When I am in failure and frustration, my friends always stay with me and cheer me up. They hold my hand and tell me that everything will be OK. Their encouragement gives me strength to go on, and makes me feel I am the happiest person in the world.

Happiness is that our love is spreading and felt. Last summer, I acted as an volunteer to take care of a girl from Wenchuan. I tried every means to help her regain confidence in life. Seeing smiles light up her face, I felt on top of the world.

To sum up, happiness belongs to people with a grateful heart. Happiness is in the heart of those who are willing to care for others. Be a person with gratitude, we will find ourselves surrounded by happiness.

4．以" The Most Unforgettable People"为题，记录世博期间“小白菜”们的感人事迹。

Since the Shanghai World Expo was held, millions of people had poured into the Expo area. I went there six times. Not only were the venues of different style impressed me deeply, but I was also touched by the group of volunteers who are nicknamed "Pak Choi cabbages".

They are young, lively and full of energy. They were in every corner of the area, greeting visitors from all over the world. With a broad smile and a pleasant voice, they made people feel welcome. Whatever trouble visitors had, they would appear just in time to extend a helping hand. They explained patiently how to go to a particular venue, how long it took to wait to get in, what visitors could see and where to eat. They are devoted, responsible and enjoying serving people whole?heartedly. They were the first to arrive and the last to leave. They stuck to their posts regardless of the burning heat. On the hot summer days, they walked back and forth, with sweat dripping down from their faces. However, they never made any complaints, nor did they lose their enthusiasm.

These "Pak Choi cabbages" added colour to the 2010 Shanghai Expo. They brought happiness, warmth and convenience to people. They illustrated personally that a better city and a better life depend on the efforts of each individual. Inspired by their selfless deeds, I am determined to do my part for a more harmonious society.

5．以" My ideal University"为题，写一篇作文。

With my high school life drawing to a close, I begin to consider some questions. Which university will I go to? Which university is best suited to my need? While thinking about these questions, many prestigious universities, at home and abroad, flash into my mind: Fudan University, Jiao Tong University, University of Cambridge, University of Oxford ... Gradually, a clear image of my ideal university emerges.

It is a place full of vigour and vitality, with a full view of green all year round. Here, students read aloud on campus. Here, students talk freely and happily under the sun or in the shade. Here, students take active part in physical exercise.

It is a place boasting the vast number of books in the spacious library, by access of which I will enrich myself and broaden my horizons day by day. I, as well as other creative young men,

will be free from unnecessary pressure, read for enjoyment earnestly.

It is a place where I will get to know some great teachers: mild, scholarly and knowledgeable, who are always ready to share with us what they know about the world. They never force us to learn, but give us opportunities for reflection and research. Their inspirational teaching style makes the courses an exciting voyage into the unknown.

Such is my ideal university, and I hope some day I will be there to enjoy the rich resources and embrace the challenges.

6．以" A Classmate Touching Our Class"为题，记叙一位令你感动的同学。

As the National College Entrance Examination is drawing near, most students in our class bury themselves in a sea of exercises, quite indifferent to the class affairs. In order to reverse the trend, a class meeting based on the theme "A classmate touching our class" is to be held next week. The moment I saw the title, a girl's image flashed into my mind.

To be frank, she is not as outstanding as you can imagine. Plain-looking, she never stands out among us. Yet what she has done over the past three years has deeply impressed us. She always follows the golden policy that unity and cooperation are the source of strength. However busy she is, she is willing to help those who turn to her for help. In spite of her poor health, never has she excused herself from the social practice or class activities. If my memory serves, every time our teacher needs help, she is the first to stand up. I still can vividly recall how she helped her deskmate pull through when that girl had her leg broken. Every morning, she waited at the door of her deskmate and accompanied her to school in the wheelchair. After school, she sent her home. At noon, she bought lunch for her. During the break, she helped her to the lavatory…She did all these things naturally without thinking about personal benefits or loss. She has won our admiration through her unselfish deeds.

Thinking of the girl, I feel warm and inspired as well. I decide I should take her as my example and try to be a person spreading love, care and warmth to others.

7．假设2008年2月12日是你父亲的生日，下面三幅图描绘的是你给父亲买完礼物后乘坐地铁回家时经历的一件事。请根据图示，用英语写一篇日记记叙这件事，并谈谈自己的感受。

参考词汇：地铁(列车) – subway train

12 February, 2008

It was my Dad's birthday. In the afternoon, I went to the shopping mall in the city centre and selected a gift for him. Dad took great trouble to bring me up. I should show how I am appreciative of his caring love.

After buying a gift, I took the subway train home. Seated quietly there, I imagined how my Dad would respond on seeing the present. I was lost in thought when an old lady with two heavy bags got on the train and stood in front of me. She leaned against a bar, looking tired and weak. Without any hesitation, I offered my seat to her. The old lady thanked me with a relieved smile on her face, saying that I was considerate.

I was happy to be a responsible young man in the old lady's eyes. I got a sense of achievement for being a person of learning to show gratitude to people I love.

8．假如你是李辉，参加了7月25日至30日在山东烟台由英语辅导报社举办的全国中学生英语夏令营(NESCMSS)活动。请根据所给提示，用英语写一篇100—140词的报导，以便刊登在《英语通》上。

提示：a．来自全国各地的100多名中学生参加了活动；

b．有来自国内外的30多名英语教学专家；

c．营员们必须用英语交流；

d．举办了一系列活动：(1)第二届全国中学生英语辩论赛；(2)第三届全国中学生英语演讲比赛；(3)参观了名胜古迹；(4)举办了英语晚会。

As a lucky student, I attended the NESCMSS held in the beautiful seaside city of Yantai from July 25 to 30，which was sponsored by the English Coaching Paper Office. Over 100 students all over the country and 30 English teaching experts at home and abroad took part in the activity. All the campers were required to speak English.

During the four days, a series of English activities were held including the "Second National English Debate for Senior High School Students" and the "Third National English Speech Competition for Senior High School Students". We also visited some places of interest. Besides, a colourful English evening was held. The camp provided us with a valuable opportunity to speak English, make friends and exchange learning experience. I found my English much improved at the end of the camp. Never in my life shall I forget the impressive days in Yantai.