考研英语写作

考研英语写作

高分范文展示：

The global economy, who is sleeping over that stretcher, like a helpless-sick wreck, is being practiced emergency treatment by worldwide banking systems, which are trying their best to save the market intensively by cooperation. Conspicuously, that’s a horrible depiction related to/concerning the economic downturn around the world.

Several factors weigh heavily for this round of economic recession, yet, there are two kernels suspended on the top of the list which should never be overlooked. First of all, the economic slide in business cycle, as the case of economic crisis(the Great Depression happening between 1929-1933 for example), would make its comeback every 10-30 years on the average, so would this time. Furthermore, the overestimation of economic prosperity has resulted in a great multitude of foams/bubbles in the securities and the realties. A case in point is one of my father’s colleagues, who made use of installment policy to speculate in real estate industry, thus, only spending 30% of totally-needed funds in possessing 3 apartments, with the aggregate price over RMB 2 million.

Actually, it is not the Day of Judgment. What we are glad to see is the keyword –“cooperation”. If the drastic measures would be taken immediately, just as laying down the associative-effective discipline, delivering the moderate outlook of consumption and ensuring our investing manners more rational, we will surely get through this tough period before long.

好句写法：把句子拉长→加修饰：

(1) n. + who/which/that… 加从句

e.g. Many people who consider the quantity of one’s belongings as a unique criterion to judge one’s social ranking, thus, may take seriously the lifestyle of chasing for luxuries.

那些把一个人拥有财产的数量当作评判其社会地位的唯一标准的人们，会很重视追逐奢侈品的生活方式。

(2) n./句子结尾+ v.-ed(en) (被动) / v.-ing (主动) 加分

词（定语后置）

e.g. youngsters, ranging from/who range from 20 to

30 years old

e.g. A recent finding has provided the first concrete clue that 24 percent more or less of young white collars, ranging from 25 to 30-year olds, are hardly/barely sure of what to keep and what to get rid of, compared with that of 5 percent one decade ago.

研究发现，和十年前的5%相比，现在有近24%的年轻白领表示不清楚自己想要什么。

(3) n. + with + n.(修饰语) 加限定词

e.g. A pretty girl → a girl with an angel-like face and a fairy-like figure

e.g. Nowadays, a lot of riches like buying luxurious autos to show/display their success and existence.当今，很多有钱人喜欢通过买豪车来显示自己的成功和存在。→These days, an overwhelming number of people, with money bulging out of their pockets, are switching their expenditure into purchasing limousines/luxurious vehicles, (which are) defined as the typical marks of one’s attainment.

句型模仿：

07 阅读text3最后一段：

From the middle-class family perspective, much of this, understandably, looks far less like an opportunity to exercise more financial responsibility, and a good deal more like a frightening acceleration of the wholescale shift of financial risk onto their already overburdened shoulders.

* Looks far less like… a good deal more like… 看起来不像是……而更像是……

模仿→05大作文：养老足球赛

From our conscientious and clear-minded perspective, much of this behavior, undoubtedly, looks far less like an opportunity to practice more reasonable distribution of elder-caring responsibility, but a good deal more like a threatening acceleration of the wholescale moral degeneration as to the issue of China’s traditional virtue – respecting the elders. 依据我们的良知，毫无疑问，大多数这种行为并不能提供合理分配赡养老人义务的机会，相反，它更像是一种加剧中华传统美德“尊老爱幼”走向大规模衰败的危险行为

大作文——开头what、中间why/effect、结尾how

What——虚开头（首段首句）

(1) 坊间流传多年的所谓经典套话

As can be seen in the picture given above…

→ As is vividly illustrated in the cartoon given above…

e.g. 悲观乐观

It is hardly/barely difficult for us to figure out in the left half picture given above that a person, down-hearted and long-faced, is root in his chamber and regretting his unhappy bygones. However, in the right one, another man, passion-sufficient and energy-continuous, is climbing upon a ladder to reach to his shining blue print.

(2) 直接描述

e.g. 1 2002年作文：美国女孩穿着中国传统服饰

There is a beautiful American girl, who is standing over there in a Chinese traditional costume, smiling just like a flower.

→ Sweet and graceful, a deliciously pretty American girl is heading towards us,dancing with swinging locks in a Chinese traditional costume.

e.g. 2 2010年作文：文化“火锅”，既美味又营养

Tasteful and nutritious, those dishes and cooking ingredients in a Chinese traditional hot-pot, including Shakespeare, Buddhism, Western humanitarianism, Chinese Kung Fu, etc. , are integrated with each other greatly to invite a whole-new mechanism for human thoughts/sensations.

e.g. 2012年作文：悲观乐观

Positively and optimistically, the man in the right side of the picture considers a little water in the bottle as a God-blessed present, yet in the left side is the other one who could merely condemn the nearly empty bottle as a totally broken hope.

What——[描述+宽泛、宏观的点评]（首段第二句）

It is a striking morning call/a typical wake-up call to send us a significant information that 主题has been in the spotlight in current society 主题has aroused wide concern at any corner of our social consensus.

e.g. 家庭成员关系

It is a striking wake-up call to send us a significant information that the way to get along properly with family members has been in the spotlight in current society.

* 首段第二句和第二段首句应该有一定层次感，首段第二句提出一个观点/现象，第二段首句再将其具体化/细节化，

直击中心。

Why/Effect——实开头：（主题句）+ 原因/影响（内部：自身/ 外部：社会、媒体）+ 例子

(1) 主题句：

Among the topic concerning 主题（抽象）, as the depiction/picture shows, the most cardinal tip is related to the issue of 主旨中心思想（具体）.

e.g. 家庭关系

Among the topic concerning family members’ inter-holding relationship, as the depiction shows, the most cardinal tip is related to the issue of raising elders.

e.g. 出国留学人数/考研人数/公务员人数

Among the topic concerning pursuing knowledge abroad, as the depiction shows, the most cardinal tip is related to the issue of whether you have made an elaborate preparation to face the new studying atmosphere and life style in foreign countries.

(2) 引出原因

Several factors could weigh heavily for the happening of ____, yet, suspended at the top of the list are the following two aspects. To begin with, _____. Additionally, _____.

e.g. 中国传统文化/美德的缺失

Several factors could weigh heavily for the depressing state of Chinese traditional virtue about respecting and raising seniors, yet suspended at the top of the list are the following two aspects.

(3) 引出影响

It is hardly necessary for me to cite all the evidence of the revolutionary influences (that) the 现象gives rise to. To begin with, … Apart from… ,

* 表示导致的短语：Contribute to Result

in/trigger/induce/spell/invite

* 表示原因：inducement/incentive

e.g. 人人考公务员

It is hardly necessary for me to cite all the evidence of the revolutionary influences (which) the craze for every specific citizen to strive for an opportunity to work in an authority result in. To begin with, … Apart from … ,

* Apart from用法：Apart from (mentioned above), …(new information) = Besides, …

e.g. Apart from a series of fortunate events（前文已提及）, Google could owe its success to the brilliance of its founders, Sergey Brin and Larry Page.

* 表示归因于：owe/ascribe/attribute… to …

(4) 举例子

A good case blowing my mind now is 人/物,

who/which …

e.g. 慈善/真正的成功

A good case blowing my mind now is a world well-known man, whose name is Bill Gates, committing himself to charity industry after his retirement. Consequently, the high social ladder and the vast esteem are bestowed to this great notability without any beyond-expectation.

* 例子不能单独提出，例子前面要有一个论点，或者在例子后面要有一个点评和结论，这样才是一个完整的举例（名人名言也同理）。

How——提出建议（Suggestion）：规则、思想、行为(1) 制定规则：

Lay down/Establish the effective/reliable/available/practical regulations to …呼应主题.

e.g. Lay down the available/reliable regulations to

protect the rights of elders. （敬老）

e.g. Lay down the drastic measures to protect the

environment in which we live. （保护环境）

e.g. Lay down the self-reminding discipline to

cultivate our habits concerning studying as well as living. （留学）

(2) 改变思想：

Deliver the moderate 主题词outlook to guide us both physically and mentally.

e.g. Deliver the moderate

success/life/material/world/knowledge/energy

outlook to guide us both physically and mentally.

成功观/生活观/物质观/世界观/知识观/能源观

(3) 规范行为：

Exert/Implement/Practice the rational 主题词manners to live in a much more harmonious/compatible atmosphere/circumstance.

e.g. Exert the rational

energy-consuming/success-attaining manners to live in a much more compatible circumstance. (4) 补充说明方法：名人名言（适用于最后一段提完建

议之后）

万能套话：

As a classic saying goes, a journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.

千里之行，始于足下

应用：提完建议之后

Yet, it is very probable to say without any exaggeration that depending on the lack of 主题词, many citizens/youths would have immersed in such an extreme condition for a long time. Does it have opportunities for us to make a change ? / Is it

possible to make a change? Actually, as a classic saying goes, “a journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step”. We will surely handle/optimize/refrain from … as long as the above mentioned proposals would be implemented immediately.

e.g. 养老

Yet, it is very probable to say that depending on the lack of social consensus, many citizens/youths would have immersed in such a moral-disastrous condition for a long time. Is is possible to make a change? Actually, as a classic saying goes, “a journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step”. We will surely refrain from abandoning ourselves to the slump of morality as long as the above mentioned proposals would be implemented immediately.

e.g. 奢侈浪费

Yet, it is very probable to say without any exaggeration that depending on the lack of available legal supervision, many citizens/youths would have immersed in such a materialism-oriented era for a long time. Does it have opportunities for us to make a change?

Actually, as a classic saying goes, “a journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step”. We will surely build a thrifty lifestyle as long as the above mentioned proposals would be implemented immediately.

特别讲解：主体段落的展开（第二段）

(1) 单向话题：要么褒，要么贬

原因展开：

The factors contributing to a big rise / a conspicuous slide / a shocking aggravation in …

are vastly complex. Some attribute it to …. Others place the blame on / Others place the high value on …. Still the rest complain of/ attach importance to …

e.g. 为什么很多年轻人最终会抽烟

The factors contributing to a big rise in teenager smoking are vastly complex. Some attribute it to juveniles themselves, who cannot resist temptation from their roommates producing the second-hand cigarettes (that are) harmful to our health. Others place the blame on the neglectful parents who tolerate or even stimulate their kids to indulge in clove cigarettes. Still the rest complain of the dramatic increase in tobaccos’ advertisements as well as imports, which enable

kids to approach 555, Marlboro and Parliament easily.

(2) 双向话题

e.g. 中国传统风俗习惯的改变是好还是坏

According to my humble perspective, every sword is double-edged. This kind of cultural shift is both positive and negative. To begin with, it goes without denying that the new-changed customs and habits have distinct advantages. On one hand, they abort the superstition and the ignorance of traditional Chinese culture to keep in accordance with the fast rhythm of modernization. On the other hand, they eliminate “culture gap” to provide more opportunities for communication as well as interaction among people of different nations, races, colors and religions, thus, making our world more harmonious. Although / While bidding farewell to the bygones enjoys considerable merits, it still have their own drawbacks when the following point is taken into account. A good case coming to my mind now is the comic composition of the Postgraduate English Exams, 2005, which describes the eclipse of one of the Chinese virtues –raising seniors. After all, lots of old traditions stand for the essence of our nation’s main-stream virtue. So, to discard one nation’s classic cultural legacy may be considered as a kind of betrayal to some extent.

* 举例子的时候，要实现从手段到效果的跨越（我们要怎么做来达到什么效果）

小作文——Simplified（简明扼要）字数：100-120

* 大作文的套话和模板不能用在小作文中！

* 小作文写作时必须覆盖每个题目要求的要点

(1)Letter——邮件、信件：生活化/接地气

a) 邀请信

学术邀请（充满敬意）：

开头：正式邀请（含参会时间和主题）

主体：介绍会议安排

结尾：希望得到正式回复，并确认

Dear Professor ___,

It is my great honor to extend you our sincere invitation of an academic forum held on 具体时间in/at 地点,which focuses on the topic of 主题

The forum mentioned above will be arranged as followings. Firstly at 8 a.m. will start the opening of the forum, which includes a brief presentation with regard to the prospects as well as plights(that) the 主题involves. Afterwards, there will be another

arrangement, including ___. Then at around 时间, 另一个安排.

I really hope you can make it. If it is possible, I

would like to ask you for sending me your bank account, and I’ll pay you 40 percent of the total lecture fees as the deposit. Reply, if you please before 最后期限.

落款范文：

Dear Professor Liu,

It is my great honor to extend you my sincere invitation of an academic forum held on Jan. 1 in The Nation’s Theatre, which focuses on the topic of Chinese traditional culture.

The forum mentioned above will be arranged as followings. Firstly at 8 a.m. will start the opening of the forum, which involves a brief presentation with regard to the prospects as well as plights that the promotion of Chinese culture may encounter.

Afterwards, there will be another arrangement concerning a micro-movie of the cultural relic exhibition, which will last 15 minutes. Then at 9 to

11 o’clock, you would be highly expected to

present us a lecture named “World Needs China”.

I really hope you can make it. If it is possible, I

would like to ask you for sending me your bank account, and I’ll pay you 40 percent of the total lecture fees as the deposit. Reply, if you please before next weekend.

Li Ming,

The Supervisor of XXX b) 申请信

学校组织社团评优，要写申请。你是学校创新社（Innovation Agency）的负责人，请你代表你们社参与评优，写一封申请信。

范文：

Dear Sir or Madame,

I am the Director of Innovation Agency who

writes this letter to apply for the prize –“Most Improved Organization Award”. The reasons for which we consider our group as a qualified candidate are as followings.

Firstly, we specialize in private tools’ rebuilding and spare no efforts to enhance the living standard for our schoolmates who are physically challenged（残疾的）. For instance, we rebuilt the building to make it accessible/easy to wheelchairs.

Furthermore, there is a whole-new positive

motivation as well as atmosphere inside the organization that every member enjoys not only the process of innovative undertakings（创业）but the exalted experiences to change our lifestyle.

Really hope you, a majestic judge, be touched by the efforts we have made. If you have any requirement or need any further narration, please do not hesitate to call me via12345678.

Yours faithfully,

Li Ming c) 回复投诉信（对别人投诉的回复和安抚）：承担责任，尝试挽回

有人投诉你负责的勤工助学中心某学生表现糟糕，部分原文：

I will not use your temporary staff any more

for their disastrous performance.

范文：

Dear Sir,

In response to your letter of complaint about our temporary administration assistant you received from my organization, I would like to apologize. We really care about our clients and that is why we will try to give some explanation about what happened.

Actually, every candidate would obtain his or her qualification only if passing our strict and systematic training.I promise the person you received last week was not an exception.

Unfortunately, his family coincided with some catastrophic affairs these days so that he has made a lot of misunderstandings due to absence of mind. It is very irrational that we still send him to work for you.

Knowing that this case is exceptional, I would like to give you some kind of compensation.

Next week, if you please, I will send you another skilled free of charge. Really hope you reconsider this recommendation.

Yours faithfully,

Li Ming

The Director of Department d) 销售信（空格处填入产品名）

Last year, we achieved a 215% increase in the sales of our ______. We believe that this happy state of affairs be attributed to two causes.

First, we managed to avoid passing on any part of our increased manufacturing costs to our majestic clients. Second, we believe our designs and colors are the most attractive that we have

ever produced. And so we are happy to be able to tell you that our new season’s ____ are, if anything, more persuasive than last year’s and our prices will compare very favorably with those of any of our competitors. We believe that your will agree that our samples prove the truth of our claims.

We look forward for you to favor us an order.

e) 现场笔录证明

You’ve come across a serious crash last night when a taxi heavily knocked down a passerby.

Now the police asked you to offer a certificate of witness involving following points:

1. T he time and place

2. T he process of this emergency

Witness on a Crash

This report includes a the brief descriptions of the witnesses on the spot of an accident, which pertain either to the time of the submitted testimony or to the time of the events concerning which I testified.

It was 时间in a 星期night, 日期, when I was about to enjoy my late snack at the corner of XXX Road alongside XXX Street. Abruptly, a taxi heavily bumped into a youngster walking on the pavement from his back. The young was knocked away immediately and rolling to the curbside for about 2 yards, with coma and serious bleeding. What’s the worst, the taxi ran away without any stop! I could only remember that the last two numbers of the car’s license plate are XX. Then, I made a first aid to the young and phoned ambulance at once.

That is all I witnessed in the scene.

Signature: Li Ming

(2)Notice——通知、告示

a) 失物招领（Lost and Found）：信息要有所保留，不能全部透露

Case: You’ve picked up an ED（电子辞典）

1. T ime and place

2. T he feature of this electronic dictionary （留一个最大特征来核实对方身份）

3. Y our information for contact

Lost and Found

To whom it may concern,

On the evening of 日期, I found an ED (electronic dictionary) In the English-reading room on the third floor of the new library in the East district of our university.

The ED can be generally described as follows.

First, it is brand new and metallic gray / chocolate black in color. Furthermore, this portable ED is as big as a piece of moon cake and as thin as a regular magazine. What’s more, there is a well-known cartoon image (which is…) adhered to / attached its back. Here is the question, could you please tell me who it is? If you could, definitely, you must be the person who it belongs to.

The owner of this ED may contact me via the phone number 12345678. Please make an appointment in advance through short message.

Sincerely yours,

Li Ming