雅思教育类范文教育类 学生参与决定课程

雅思教育类范文教育类学生参与决定课程

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Some people think that students should take courses that are decided by the government. Others think students should be allowed to focus on subjects that they prefer. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

7分范文

Education has been viewed as one of the most essential elements of individual and social development. One topic now under debate is who should make the decisions on what students study.

Academically, students will gain benefits if the curriculum can be devised by the government. Learners need foundations before they acquire more advanced knowledge. Without

opportunities to learn the basics, student would find it difficult to further their studies or lose interest in their studies altogether.

In terms of meeting the demand of the job market, it would be more efficient if the government plan and arrange the courses for school and university. Students’own selections of courses may be random. Most of them do not really know what the job market expects from them, so some guidance from the government is a necessity.

However, this does not mean that the official curriculum is always productive. Educators should be aware of the fact that individuals have different characters and abilities. If all the students in a certain field take the same courses, their potential may not be fully developed. Accordingly, many talented students may feel frustrated with learning and the nation will not get the talent it needs for its advancement.

My own opinion is that s tudents in primary and secondary schools should take courses that the governments choose for them because they do not really have the capacity to find out courses that will serve their purposes. On the university level, though, students should be allowed to participate in the decision-making process of designing the curriculum as only in this way can their academic potential be fully explored.

考官解析

本文对双方观点进行分析，并且在结尾段给出结论。文章先写出政府确定的课程能帮助学生打好基础并且更加系统的学习，然后鞋如果学生确定可能则能更好的发挥潜力。结尾的结论对于不同年龄的学生进行区分，提出对于中小学生课程应该由政府决定。大学生有了一定的专业基础和较强的判断力，完全可以参与课程决定的过程。

重点词汇

View```as``` 把···看作···= regard```as```/ think of ```as```

Element = factor 元素

Curriculum 课程的总称，集合名词，所以不能加a

Devise 设计设置

Foundation 基础

Further 推进固定搭配further their studies Altogether 完全地彻底地

Demand 需求固定搭配meet the demand of ```

Selection = option 选择

Random 随意的

Guidance 指导原型guide

Necessity 必须的事物

Productive 高效的

Aware 意识到的固定搭配be aware of Accordingly 相应地＝consequently

Participate in 参与

Frustrated 沮丧的be frustrated with

重点句子

Without opportunities to learn the basics, student would find it difficult to further their studies or lose interest in their studies altogether.

only in this way can their academic potential be fully explored.

My own opinion is that students in primary and secondary schools should take courses that the governments choose for them because they do not really have the capacity to find out courses that will serve their purposes.