中考英语作文高分技巧和例题
2020年中考英语提示作文高分技巧和经典例题
一、高分技巧
1.认真审题，确定时态人称，同时关注体裁格式
提示类作文要认真审题，切中题意。看到考题后先不要急于动笔，要仔细看清题目要求的内容，根据提纲或短文提供的资料和信息来审题。审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。要在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面，确定短文的中心思想。
2.找全信息点，紧扣主题，突出重点
要充分发挥自己的组织能力，把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出。根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写作时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题。文章结构清晰，重点句型出彩可使文章在得分上提高一个档次。
3.成文时表述正确，文字流畅
要注意以下内容：
（1）内容要点；
（2）运用词汇和结构的数量；
（3）运用语法结构和词汇的准确性；
（4）上下文的连贯性。
二、写作模板
【参考提纲】
第一段：点明主旨，引入正文。
第二段：展开记叙具体事件或描述具体事物。
第三段：总结全文，前呼后应。
【参考模板】
Recently, what amazes us most is（题目中所描述的现象），it is true that____（自己的观点或看法）.
There are many reasons explaining ___（题目中所描述的现象），The main reason is ___（出现这种现象的原因一），What is more,____ （原因二）. Thirdly，____（原因三）.As a result，____（总结）. Considering all there,____ （自己的观点）. For one thing,____ (措施一)，for another,____ （措施二）. In conclusion ____ （结论）.
三、经典例题
经典例题1
(中考真题改编）书包伴我学习，伴我成长，某英文报以“My Schoolbag”为题，举办中学生征文活动。请根据下表信息，写一篇短文。内容包括：书包的外形特征、内部结构以及用途。
提示：
（1）短文应包括图表中所有信息，条理清楚，行文连贯，段落分明；（2）短文中不能出现真实人名地名；
（3）词数不少于80，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My Schoolbag
I have a choolbag....
【高分范文】
My Schoolbag
I have a schoolbag. It is used for carrying the school things such as books, pens and so on. It looks like a luggage which alwaysaccompanies me n the world of knowledge
My schoolbag is always by my side. love my schoolbag so much because of its inner structure. My schoolbag is not onlybeautiful. but the function is all good. It has eight pockets. and eachhas its own purpose. The biggest bag can be used to put books, penslunch boxes and other things. Inside the big bag there is a smallerone, which is used to put some private things. such as money. mealcards and so on. The outboard of schoolbag still has a transparentsmall bag. and can put a few easy things in it. It is so convenientOther small bags can also contain a lot of things. I can put my keys,notes and other small things in them according to my own habits.
This is my schoolbag, and what's yours like?
【高分词汇】
structure n.结构，构造，建筑物v.组织，构成，建造
purpose n.目的，用途意志v.决心，企图，打算
private adj.私人的，私有的
【高分短语】
not only…but（also）…不但……而且……
such as例如
be used to习惯于……
according to…根据……，由……得知
【高分句子】
（1）Inside the big bag there is a smaller one, which is used to put some private things, such as money, meal cards and so on.在大包的内侧有一个小包，用来放一些私人物品.例如钱、饭卡等。
（2）Other small bags can also contain a lot of things. I can put my keys, notes and other small things in them according to my own habits.其他包里面也可以放很多东西。我可以根据自己的习惯来放钥匙、便签等小物件
经典例题2
(中考真题改编）你校将开设一些特色课程，学生可根据兴趣进行选择。请根据以下内容提示为学校英文网页写一篇短文，介绍这些课程的特色和用途，提出你建议增设的课程并说明理由。
注意:
（1）参考词汇：模型制作model making；
（2）80词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
（3）不得透露任何真实信息。
Special courses
Students in our school are free to choose some courses occording to their interest.......
【高分范文】
Special courses
Students in our school are free to choose some courses according to their interest. These courses will help students relax themselves after school. There are many courses for them to choose,such as Enguish drama, football, model making and so on. Here is more information.
If you want to improve your oral English. English drama may be the first choice. It is a good chance to practice not only oral English, but also performing skills, If you are interested in football, take the football course. It can stregthen the body and enhance the sense of teamwork. What about model making? You will enjoy yourself in the science world and increase your interest in studying science.
I hold the view that a painting course can be added. because students like drawing so much. I hope these courses would be
helpful and each student would enjoy a bright and colorful school life here!
【高分词汇】
oral adj.口头的，口述的n.口试
strengthen v.加强，巩固；变强，变坚挺
enhance v.提高，加强，增加
sense n.感觉，功能，观念，道理，理智v.感觉到，检测
【高分短语】
acording to根据……
I hold the view that……我认为，我觉得（等问于I think……）
be interested in对……感兴趣
【高分句子】
（1）It is a good chance to practice not only oral English, but also performing skills.
这不仅是一个练习口语的好机会，还是一个练习表演技巧的好机会。（2）It can strengthen the body and enhance the sense of teamwork.
它能强身健体，增强团队意识。
（3）I hold the view that a painting course can be added, because students like drawing so much.
我认为可以增加一门画画课，因为学生非常喜欢画画。
四、高分集训
（一）
近来，中国掀起了一场共享单车（shared bikes）热潮，共享单车使人们的出行更方便，方式也更环保。但同时，随着共享单车的流行，越来越多的问题也暴露出来，某英文报以"Shared Bikes"为题，举办中学生征文活动。请根据下面的图表信息，写一篇英语短文。内容包括：共享单车的优点和缺点，以及你的看法。
提示：
1.短文应包括图表中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯；
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3.词数不少于80，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Shared Bikes
Recently, riding shared bikes to schools, workplaces or to go sightseeing has become more and more popular. ____________
（二）
学会自我保护是青少年需要具备的意识和能力。请根据以下学校安全教育周收集的自我保护小贴士，并结合自己的观点，以“How Can We Protect Ourselves?”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文，谈谈在生活中青少年应该怎样自我保护。
要求：句子结构准确，要点齐全，内容合理，篇章结构连贯。
（三）
假如你是李华，上周六上午，你们班全体同学在特殊教育学校做了一次志愿者活动。请根据下表中提供的信息，用英语给你的笔友Sandy 写一封信。
注意：
1.文中须包含要点提示中的所有信息，可适当发挥,以使行文连贯；
2.词数不少于80(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；
3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Sandy,
Last Saturday morning, our class went to the Special Education School to have a volunteer activity.
......
Yours,
Li Hua
（四）
本卷完形填空A)最后指出：“If you have talent and hard work for your dream, and you’ll succeed.”你同意文中这个观点吗？对此观点你有何看法？请根据下面的提示写一篇英语短文谈谈你的看法,阐述理
由,并举例说明。
写作要点:
1. Your opinion (agree or disagree...);
2. Reasons (clever, work hard; bad memory, ask for help...);
3. An example (yourself/ a person around you/ a famous
person/...)
要求：
1、短文应包括所有的写作要点，条理清楚,行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2、如举自己或身边人作为例子，不能出现真实的人名或地名；
3、词数不少于80个。
【参考范文】
（一）
Shared Bikes
Recently, riding shared bikes to schools, workplaces or to go sightseeing has become more and more popular. Riding shared bikes provides us with a completely new way of going outside. It makes it much more convenient for people to go out. We can help protect the environment by riding bikes. In some ways, it can also help us save money.
However, the shared bikes also result in some problems such as illegal parking. Some people even keep the bikes for their own.
What’s more, some of the bikes are damaged on purpose by people.
To solve these problems, I think it’s necessary to make some rules about how to use shared bikes. Everyone is supposed to follow the rules.
（二）
One Possible Version:
How Can We Protect Ourselves?
Self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers. But how can we protect ourselves? Here are some of my suggestions.
First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially online. Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Also, we ought to eat healthily and safely. Besides, we shouldn’t crowd each other when we go upstairs or downstairs at school. Last but not least, summer is coming. We must remember it’s dangerous to swim alone.
In short, everyone needs to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger.
（三）
One possible version:
Last Saturday morning, our class went to the Special Education School to have a volunteer activity. My classmates and I took a lot of presents to them, such as books, snacks and toys. The school is clean and tidy. Some students are blind. Others are deaf. Some students can’t speak or read or write. It is difficult for them to do everyday things. But they followed the t eacher to do things carefully. After arriving there, some of us began playing games with them. Some of us taught them to learn paper cutting .We also performed wonderful programs，such as singing, dancing. We also asked them to join us and they were very happy. All of us were happy because we did something good to others. In my opinion, we should spend more time helping them. Helping others is Chinese people’s virtue.
Do you have anything special to tell me? I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
（四）
Possible Version One:
I agree with the opinion. Many famous persons have talents. And they work hard for their dreams. And they succeed at last.
My classmate Li Hai is very clever and he studies hard every day. He has a good memory and he remembers very quickly. He can write down what our teacher said in class. After class, he reviews what he has learnt in time. So he is always the first place on every exam in our class.
So let's try our best to study hard and use rightly our abilities and talent. Work hard for our dreams.
Possible Version Two:
I disagree with it. We all know, not everyone who has telent can succeed. Only a very small number of people make it to the top.
My classmate Li Hai is not very clever, but he studies hard every day. He has a bad memory, so he has to remember things again and again. He has to write down what our teachers have said in class. And after class, he has to ask teachers or classmates for help again and review them for a long time. But he can also get good grades on every exam, too.
So let's try our best to work hard for our dreams.