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2011 年 6 月

预测作文 1. Competition or Cooperation

1.竞争和合作是生活中不可缺少的组成部分

2.我倾向于支持

3.我的观点

预测作文 2. Should Grads Be Paid Higher Than Non-Grads？

1.普遍认为大学生应该比非大学生挣得多

2.分析这种心理产生的原因

3.我认为

预测作文 3. Should the Young People Isolate Themselves from the Outer World

1.目前，“宅”文化很流行

2．有人赞成，有人反对

3.我的看法

预测作文 4. On Low-Carbon Life

1.低碳生活的概念受到人们越来越多的关注

2.低碳生活的意义

3.低碳生活要求我们如何做

预测作文 5. On Cultural Exchange

1.如今，各国文化交流越来越频繁

2.有人支持，有人质疑

3.我的看法

预测作文 6. Should Every Household Purchase a Car

1.随着经济的发展，几乎每个家庭都梦想拥有一辆属于自己的汽车

2．但是，也因此带来了很多问题

3.我的看法

预测作文7. On Enrolling in Kindergarten

1.目前存在幼儿园入学比较困难的情况

2.造成这一状况的原因

3.我的看法

预测作文8. On the Freshers’Inability to Adjust to College Life

1.大一新生普遍表现出不适应大学生活的现象

2.分析造成这一现象的原因

3.我的建议

预测作文9. On Product Placement

1.植入式广告受到人们极大关注

2.有人言辞激烈地批评，有人大加赞赏

3.我的看法

预测作文10. On the Quality of Construction

1.近年来，建筑质量问题饱受诟病

2.分析其原因

3.我的建议

预测作文11. Civil Servant Craze

1.公务员热持续升温

2.公务员热的原因

3.我的观点

预测作文12. High Housing Price

1.房价的上涨超出人们的购买力

2.解决高房价的方法

3.我对未来的展望

预测作文13. Internet Privacy Protection

1.目前网络安全的状况

2.保证网络安全的措施

3.我的观点

预测作文14. Empty-Nest Families

1.空巢老人的现象日益增多

2.分析造成这一现象的原因

3.我的建议

预测作文15. More and More People Go V egetarian

1.有些人认为素食让人更加健康

2.有些人认为素食不能保证营养均衡

3.我的看法

预测作文16. Cultivate the Virtue of Honesty

1.“诚信”融入大学生活

2.年轻人开始重视诚信

3.我的看法

预测作文17. First Day On University Campus — More Relatives than Freshmen

1.大学新生报到，家人越来越重视

2.分析这种现象的原因

3.我的看法

预测作文18. Job Satisfaction

1.工作满意度对个人很重要

2.工作满意度包含哪些因素

3.工作满意度如何实现

预测作文19. The Etiquette Course

1.有些人建议大学开始礼仪课

2.有些人认为没有必要

3.我的看法

预测作文20. A Letter Applying for a Bank Loan

1.个人情况介绍

2.申请贷款的原因、数额及用途

3.如何保证专款专用以及你的还款打算

预测作文21. How to Increase Y our Working Experience in the University

1.大学期间，大学生有必要获得一些经验

2.获得工作经验的途径

3.结论

预测作文22. The Ideal Assistant in My Mind

1.大学生的全面成长离不开辅导员的工作

2.合格的辅导员应具备的职业素质

预测作文 23. Traveling Craze

1.旅游热的出现

2.出现的原因和造成的结果

3.我的观点

①In the past years, traveling has become a new fashion. ①开篇点题：旅游近几年已经Especially on every Labor Day, National Day and Spring 成为一个时尚。

Festival holidays, numerous people ②swarm into the scenic ② swarm into “涌入”和spots around the country. scenic spots “名胜，风景区”

The traveling craze can be attributed to the following 为高分表达

reasons. ③Firstly, the people ’s living conditions have been ③运用 Firstly ， Secondly improved so greatly that many people can afford traveling. ③结构分两个方面阐述了旅游热Secondly, the higher requirement for quality of life makes also 出现的原因

traveling one of the most important amusement among the

average people. ④ But 一词笔锋一转，接着阐

④ But, the traveling craze causes many problems, such 述了旅游热带来的问题

as the higher prices, the over-crowed scenic spots, the lower

quality of services, etc. ⑤用 As for me “对我来说”

⑤ As for me, I think people should be fully aware of 引出了自己的观点。

the disadvantages behind the traveling craze. Reasonable

plans should be made before taking a trip.

预测作文24. Shopping On the Internet

1. 现在流行网上购物

2. 网上的购物的利与弊

3. 我的观点

① Nowadays， with the rapid development of computer ①开篇点题：网上购物成为technology， shopping on the Internet is becoming a fashion，一种时尚，尤其是在年轻人especially among young people。中。

Shopping on the Internet makes our life more convenient ② Besides 一词表示递进，进and comfortable. ②Besides, goods sold on the Internet are 一步说明网上购物的优点。often cheaper than those in shops.

③ But there are still some disadvantages. Some people are cheated since the seller and the buyer do not make a face-to-face deal. The quality of the goods can not be ensured.

④Furthermore , the goods may be damaged during the delivery.

⑤To the best of my knowledge, shopping on the Internet

is a trend. More and more people will ⑥be accustomed to it. It will be popular in the near future. And at the same time we should take some measures to make it perfect.

预测作文25. Should Private Cars Be Encouraged in China

1.小汽车进入中国家庭后给人们带来了舒适和方便③用 But 一转折，引出了网上购物的弊端

④Furthermore 表示递进，进一步说明网上购物的弊端⑤To the best of my knowledge 引出了自己的观点。

⑥be accustomed to “习惯于”属于高分表达

2.私家车也给人们带来不便

3.我的看法

① Should private cars be encouraged in China？This is a controversial question. There are many reasons to encourage people to own cars. First, a car allows a person to move around freely. Second, a car is a comfortable traveling vehicle, especially in the winter or in bad weather.

However, there are also many arguments against it. ②Firstly, with the increase of private cars, the roads are becoming more and more crowed. ②Secondly, the ③poisonous gas greatly pollutes the atmosphere and does harm to people’s health.

④In my opinion , we must weigh every factor carefully before making decisions about buying private cars. Though the number of private cars keeps on increasing, popularization of luxurious things like cars will have to wait. ⑤After all, I don't think it is wise to encourage private cars in China.

预测作文26. My Opinion on Fever of Bizarre Pets

1.饲养另类宠物的人越来越多

2.人们对此褒贬不一

3.你的评论① 以问句的形式开篇，能够激发读者的阅读兴趣；controversial “引起争论的，有争议的”为亮点词汇。

②用 Firstly ， Secondly 结构分两个层次阐述了私家车给人们带来不便。

③poisonous “有毒的”为高

分词汇

④In my opinion 引出了自己的观点； weigh “称量；衡量”

为亮点词汇。

⑤给出结论

预测作文27. College Graduates ’New Career Path as Village Officials

1.“村官”已成为大学生就业热选

2.大学生做“村官”的积极意义及存在问题

3.你如何看待这一现象

①The ever-growing rate of college

enrollment has led to a huge army of graduates while vacancies are getting slashed under the current financial crisis. ②In the shrinking job market, some graduates open a new path and prefer to work as rural officials.

③Supporters have their own reasons to

claim that it's a good idea. First, it eases the employment pressure in a tough job climate. Second, college graduates can bring fresh ideas, technology and enthusiasm to the villages.

Third , rural areas provide them with a lot of opportunities to exercise themselves in a hard environment. However , the problems should never be ignored. ④For one thing,

① 本文开篇指出了“村官热” 的两大背景条件。

②shrinking 现在分词结构表示正在发生

的动作，形象生动地强调了就业形势严峻。

③ 第二段从三方面说明了大学生做“村官”的好处。积极意义并以However 转折说明存在问题。

④总分结构，但连词与上段不同：For

one thing， For another，。句式丰富，文章生动不呆板。

⑤confine to “只限于”

⑥ start at grass-roots levels“从基层做起”

⑦enroll for “报名参加”是亮点短语⑧

明确自己的观点：这是解决大学生就

their assigned jobs are initially ⑤ confined to 业问题的一条新途径。

paperwork and assistance. For another, some

choose to ⑥ start at grass-roots levels

merely because of the priority when they ⑦

enroll for postgraduate studies and civil

servants.

⑧I’m in favor of college graduates

working as village officials. It is perceived as a

new career path for the graduates.

预测作文 28. A Brief Introduction to a T ourist Attraction

你的角色：导游

你的听众：一队外国游客

你的讲解需包括：欢迎词，日程安排表，景点（例如：风景名胜或历史遗址）的描述。

你的讲解应该生动有趣；日程安排应该清晰明了

My dear friends, ① 简洁的欢迎词，表达要热情

① Welcome to Beijing ! ② It ’s really a great pleasure to 洋溢

have this opportunity to be your tour guide and show you ② 导游常用的礼貌性表达，around this splendid city. show you around 是“导游”的

③ The schedule for today is as follows: First, at 8:00 简单表达。

a.m., we’ll start out for the Badaling Great Wall; after lunch, at ③ 介绍日程安排表，schedule 2:00 p.m., we will visit the nearby Great-Wall-of-China 和 as follows 必不可少

Museum as well as the Great Wall National Theater, ④④ 非限定性定语从句，使表达from which you can get a full view of it. 简洁； full view “全景”。

⑤ The Great Wall, as the very symbol of ancient ⑤ engineering “ 工程”；Chinese engineering, spectacularly winds its way for more spectacularly 的形容词形式与than 5000 kilometers. It is regarded as one of the few world 下文的magnificent 及②中的wonders that are said to be visible from the moon. What we splendid 为近义词，均可用于will visit today is the Badaling Great Wall. It is located at 描述景物或建筑的壮观和宏Yanqing County, more than 70 kilometers northwest from the 伟； wind its way “蜿蜒曲折”；center of Beijing City. Among all the sections of the Great wonder “奇迹”； significance Wall, Badaling is considered most impressive for its “意义”； World Cultural magnificent view and historical significance. And in 1987, it Heritage “世界文化遗产”；became “World Cultural Heritage”by the United Nations, charm “魅力”。

which again proved its charm. ⑥导游词结束时的常用礼貌用

⑥ Thank you for listening. I hope you enjoy yourselves 于和祝愿。

today.

预测作文28. The Distribution of T ravel Coupons

1. 目前各大城市纷纷掀起一股发旅游券的风潮

2. 出现这种现象的原因

3. 评价这一举措

① Recently, free travel coupons are ① 开门见山，点名主题。用被动句式进constantly distributed to urban residents in any 行了客观表述。

cities in China like Hangzhou and Nanjing.

② A principal factor ③contributing to the phenomenon is the global economic slump which has made a great impact on

Chinese city tourism industry. Besides, the number of people who travel to another city has greatly decreased due to the shortening of the weeklong holidays of May Day and National Day. Therefore , the offer of coupons becomes part of

a municipal plan to spur consumption.

④From my point of view, ⑤in the short run, travel coupons are effective tools to

⑥boost tourism and drive favorable consumer behavior ⑦amid a sluggish economy. But the benefits are quite limited and only ⑧restricted to certain places. In the long run, it is more practical for the

government to ⑨endeavor to increase people’s income than to focus on the one-off stimulus.

②三方面论述旅游券热现象产生的原

因。

③contributing to ，economic slump ，made

a great impact on， due to，spur consumption “刺激消费”都是高分表达

④引出自己的观点

⑤ in the short run ， in the long run 明确作者观点

⑥“刺激旅游业”

⑦“在经济萧条时期”

⑧“局限于”

⑨endeavor to do sth. one-off stimulus “一次性的刺激”为高分词汇。

预测作文29. Accidents Concerning Campus Security

1.目前校园安全事故常有发生

2.这种现象造成的恶劣影响

3.应该如何杜绝这种现象

预测作文30. Power Supply All Night

1.很多大学生希望寝室能通宵通电

2.但有些人认为不应该这么做

3.我的看法

预测作文31. The Popularity of Self-Drive T ourism

1.随着私家车越来越多，人们开始选择自驾游的方式外出旅行

2.自驾游的利与弊

3.我的观点

①With the rapid economic development, more and more Chinese households own private cars. Self-Drive tourism has gained popularity among those private car owners.

②There are many advantages of self-drive tourism. Firstly , self-drive tourists

can enjoy the full freedom of route . They are free to choose the destination and the departure time according to their own schedule instead of

① 开门见山，指出随着私家车越来越

多，人们开始越来越多地选择自驾游的方式

外出旅行。其中， households “家庭”； gain popularity “变得流行”属于高分表达，增添

了文采。

②直接说明自驾游的好处。这一部分

的结构为：“ There are many advantages of Firstly Secondly ”。 enjoy the full freedom “享有完全的自由”； hurry after “匆忙追赶”；save the trouble of “免去的

hurrying after the guide from one place to another. Secondly , tourists in their own cars feel

more comfortable and convenient because they can avoid the crowed people and save the trouble of booking tickets for an outing. ③

However , self-drive tourism has disadvantages too, such as the driver may be not familiar with the route, and driving itself sometimes is a little tiring.

④ As for me, I prefer self-drive tourism because this way of traveling is more challenging and gives me more pleasures of sightseeing .

麻烦”，这些都属于高分表达。

③ 由“ However ”转折引出自驾游的弊端，并用“ such as ”结构引导具体的弊端，

避免了重复使用同一结构。

④ 明确表明自己的观点。 challenging “有挑战性的” 和 pleasures of sightseeing “ 旅游的乐趣”为高分表达，增添了文采。 预测作文 32. An Opening Speech

假设你的学校要召开运动会，你作为学生会的发言人在开幕式上发言，请写一份开幕词，包括以下内容：

1. 表明自己的身份和发言的主题内容

2. 对到场的领导和老师给予的支持表示感谢，并阐述体育运动的益处

3. 预祝此次运动会取得圆满成功

① Ladies and gentlemen ,

② Good morning! I am Li Ming. It ’s my great honor to be the spokesman of the Students ’Union to

extend our heartfelt

welcome to all of you. ③ As the important organizer of th

the 18 sports meeting, we have been busy preparing for two months and looking forward to the opening. ④ At the happy moment, we are more than glad to see so many people join this significant activity. We are

very grateful to the college leaders and faculty members who have given us enormous help. Special thanks also go to our schoolmates for your enthusiastic participation.

⑤ Sports can not only help us build a strong body, but also promote friendship. I hope everyone can enjoy the excitement and happiness through sports.

⑥ At last, let ’s give best wishes to this sports

meeting. Wish it a great success and good luck to all of the athletes and spectators.

① 礼貌的称呼

② 开门见山，说明自己的身份和发言的主

要内容。 It ’s my honor to 和 extend our

heartfelt welcome to “向 表示诚挚的欢迎”均

为高分表达

③指出学生会为这次运动会的召开所付出 的 努 力 并 期 待 着 运 动 会 的 开 幕 。 busy

preparing for “忙于”；look forward to “期

待”等表达绘声绘色④对到场的观众表示热烈欢迎并向那些帮助运动会顺利召开的领导、老师和同学表示感谢。为了避免重复使用同一结构，分

别用上 we are very grateful to

和 special

thanks also go to 两个句式，使得语言句

式多样化。

⑤ 阐 述 体 育 运 动 的 益处 。 not only but also 结构增添了文采。

⑥ 预祝运动会取得圆满成功。

一、阐述对立观点型

1. 标题

在四级考试中，我们常常会遇到要我们就两种对立的观点表明自己态度的题目。

[ 例 ] Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists ？

如何看待大学校园成为旅游热点？

1）名校校园正成为旅游热点？

2）校园是否应对游客开放，人们看法不同

3）我认为

阐述对立观点型作文的标题往往以问句的形式出现，而且题目往往可以改写为两种对立的

观点或做法。如上述标题就可以改写为：The University Campus Should Be Open to Tourists 。

2.中文提纲

阐述对立观点型作文的中文提纲则往往是这样的：

1）有（些）人认为

2）也有（些）人认为

3）我的看法 /观点

3. 篇章结构

第一段引言：引出讨论的主题（X ），提出两种对立的观点（ A 和 B），可略提理由第二段正文：表明自己的看法，阐述理由

第三段结论：总结全文，重申自己的观点

这种篇章结构的重点放在表达自己的观点上，更能充分地阐述自己的观点，使自己的观点更充实、更有说服力。

4. 写作模板 1

①People’s views / ideas/ opinion on X vary from person to person. Some people think that ②. They hold this opinion because③. However, others hold/ don't believe that④, for ⑤.

⑥As to me, I am in favor of the first/ second idea. The following are the reasons of/ for my choice / personal inclination. First,⑦ while it is true that, it doesn't mean that. Second, ⑧. Furthermore, ⑨

.

⑩Therefore / In conclusion / From the foregoing,

.

写作模板 2

①When asked about X, different people will offer different opinions. Some people say/ think/ believe / take it for granted that②. While others hold that

③.

④As far as I am concerned, I agree with the first/ second view. The reasons are as follows. First, ⑤ there is an element of truth that ,but ⑥ it doesn't follow that . Therefore, ⑦ the first view doesn't hold water/ can not bear much analysis/ can not stand up to close ①引出主题

②观点 A

③支持观点 A 的理由

④观点 B

⑤支持观点 B 的理由

⑥我的观点

⑦理由一

⑧理由二

⑨理由三

⑩结论

①引出主题

②观点 A

③观点 B

④我的观点

⑤略提反对的观点的正确性

⑥批驳反对的观点

⑦ 小结：指出反对的观点经不起分析 / 检验

⑧结论

examination.

In conclusion,⑧.

二、说明利弊型

1.出题形式

形式 1：说明 X 的利弊

题目： Advantages and Disadvantages of X或Positive and Negative Aspects of X 1） X （带来）的好处

2） X 可能（给）带来的问题/弊端

3）我对 X 的体会或我怎样对待X

[例 1] 题目：The Two-day Weekend

1）双休日给大学生带来的好处

2）双休日可能给大学生带来的问题

3）我应当怎样过好双休日

形式 2：说明 X 的利或弊

题目： Advantages/ Disadvantages / Harmfulness of X

1)X 的现状

2）产生这一现状的原因

3)X 的好处或弊端

[ 例 2]题目： Harmfulness of Fake Commodities

1）目前社会上有不少假冒伪劣商品。为什么会有这些现象？

2）举例说明假冒伪劣商品对消费者个人、社会等的危害

从以上的例子可见，这种题型主要有两种出题形式。

2.篇章结构

形式 1：

第一段引言：说明X 的现状，指出其具有两面性

第二段说明 X 带来的好处

第三段说明 X 可能带来的问题/ 弊端

第四段阐述自己对X 的看法或怎样对待X

在这一结构中，第一段和第二段可以合并为一段。

形式 2：

第一段引言：说明X 的现状，指出其带来的巨大危害/ 好处

第二段分析问题产生的原因

第三段说明弊端或好处到底是什么

第四段总结或提出建议

3.写作模板 1

①Nowadays ， X has / have become / play(s) an

important part/ role in (X is/ are popular/ common around us).②Like everything else, X has / have both advantages and disadvantages/ positive and negative aspects/ favorable and unfavorable aspects.

③ Generally, the advantages can be listed as follows. ①引出主题,指出X的现状

②指出X具有两面性

③列举X的好处

④好处一

⑤好处二

⑥好处三

Firstly,④. Secondly, ⑤. Furthermore, ⑥⑦指出X的坏处.⑧坏处一

⑦But every coin has two sides. The disadvantages/ ⑨坏处二

negative aspects can not be ignored. For one thing, ⑩我对 X 的看法或 / 和我的对⑧. For another, ⑨. 策

⑩Through above analysis, I believe that the advantage /

positive aspects outweigh the disadvantages/ negative aspects.

Therefore,. As to me, I will. I’m confident that

.

写作模板 2

①Nowadays, the phenomenon of X is rather common. ①引出主题 ,指出 X 的现状

② It has brought great benefits/ harm to . ②指出 X 已带来巨大的好处 /

③Why is X so common/ prevailing around us? First, 危害

④. Second, ⑤. ③指出导致现状的原因

⑥Undoubtedly, X is very beneficial / harmful ④原因 1

to . First, ⑦Besides,⑧. Most ⑤原因 2

important of all/ Worst of all, ⑨. ⑥指出 X 的好处 /坏处⑩ From what we have discussed above, we believe that ⑦好处 / 坏处 1 . We should . ⑧好处 / 坏处 2

⑨好处 / 坏处 3

⑩总结，提出建议

三、解释原因或理由型

1.出题形式

[例 1] 题目： Bicycle—An Important Means of T ransport in China

1.为什么自行车在中国这样普及

2.和汽车的比较

3.自行车在中国的前途

[例 2] My Most Favorite Program

1. 我最喜爱的电视（或无线电）节目是

2.这类节目的内容或特点

3.我喜欢它的原因

从以上例子可见，解释原因或理由型的作文主要有两种出题形式；

形式 1：

1.原因一

2.原因二

3.结论

形式 2 ：

1.为什么 X 这样普及 / 受欢迎或我喜欢 / 选择的 X 是

2.说明 X 的内容或特点 / 优点

3.我对 X 的前途 / 前景的预测或我喜欢 / 选择 X 的理由

X 代表讨论的主题，上面两个例子中的X 分别代表自行车和电视节目2.篇章结构

形式 1：

第一段第二段第三段引言：指出X 的现状或我喜欢/ 选择的 X 是什么

原因一；原因二

结论（重申我喜欢/ 选择 X 的合理性或预测X 的前途/ 前景）

形式 2：

第一段第二段第三段引言：指出自己喜欢/ 选择的 X 是什么或说明X 的现状及其原因说明 X 的内容或特点/ 优点

我喜欢 / 选择 X的理由或对X 的前景 / 前途的预测

3.写作模板

模板一

① Among , X play(s) an important role/ part in (X is/ are ①指出 X 的现状（我very popular/ common around us.) Among , my favorite / ideal X 喜欢 / 选择的 X 是什么）is / are ② There are many factors / causes that may account for / ② 指出导致这一现状或contribute to/ be responsible for the reason why , but in 看法 /选择的原因general, they come down to two major ones. For one thing, ③ 原因一

③.For another,④. ④ 原因二

⑤ Compared with/ to , X has / have some unmatchable ⑤指出 X 的特点或优点advantages. The unique features / advantages may (also) account for ⑥特点 / 优点一

/ be responsible for (the reason) why / why it is/ they are so ⑦特点 / 优点二popular. First, ⑥. Second/ Besides/ Furthermore, ⑦. ⑧特点 / 优点三

About all/ Most important of all, ⑧. ⑨我对 X 的看法或前景From the foregoing/ the above discussion, ⑨. 预测

模板二

① Among , my favorite / ideal X is/ are.①指出我喜欢/ 选择的

②The unique features/ advantages may contribute to/ be X 是什么

responsible for the reason why / why I like it best/ choose X ②指出 X 的特点 / 优点as my favorite / ideal . Firstly, ③. Secondly, ③特点 / 优点一

④.Finally/ Above all, ⑤. ④特点 / 优点二

⑥ There are many factors / reasons which may account for my ⑤特点 / 优点三preference/ choice of X. The most important reason/ factor is that ⑥说明我喜欢 / 选择 X

⑦. Besides, ⑧. Therefore/ From the foregoing/ 的理由

above discussion, ⑨. ⑦ 理由一

⑧ 理由二

⑨结论：重申我喜欢/

选择 X 的合理性或对X

的前景进行预测

四、解决问题型

1.出题形式

[例 1] How I Finance My College Education

1.上大学的费用（ tuition and fees ）可以通过各种途径解决

2. 哪种途径适合于我（说明理由）

[例 2] How to Succeed in a Job Interview ？

1.面试在求职过程中的作用

2. 取得面试成功的因素：仪表、举止、谈吐、能力、专业知识、自信、实事求是

从以上的例子可见，解决问题型作文题主要有三种出题形式：

1）问题——解决途径型

2）问题——解决途径——说明理由型

3）问题——原因——解决途径型

2．篇章结构

1）问题——解决途径型：

第一段引言：提出需要解决的问题或遇到的困难

第二段正文：说明问题/ 困难的不同方面及如何解决

第三段结论：展望问题/ 困难解决的前景

2）问题——解决途径——说明理由型

第一段引言：提出需要解决的问题或遇到的困难

第二段正文：说明问题/ 困难的不同方面及如何解决

第三段说明理由

3）问题——原因——解决途径型

第一段引言：指出出现的问题或提出一种错误的观念

第二段说明出现这一问题的原因或指出这一错误观念的原因第

三段提出解决问题的各种途径

第四段结论：表达我对问题能被妥善解决的信心或预测采取这些措施后的后果

3.写作模板

1）问题——解决途径型：

① Nowadays ，X become / becomes more and more . ①指出 X 的现状或重要

②However, is not an easy task. ③ During the course of 性

, I / We met a lot of difficulties, such as how to and ②③指出所遇到的问题/ how to , and so on. 困难

④ But fortunately I ’ve found my own ways to tackle these ④指出自己找到了问题Problems / overcome these difficulties. ⑤ As to , . / 困难的解决途径

⑥As to , . ⑦ To , . ⑤问题 / 困难一及其解

⑧ So long as , I ’m confident that . 决途径

⑥问题 / 困难二及其解

决途径

⑦问题 / 困难三及其解

决途径

⑧展望问题/困难解决

的前景

2）问题——解决途径——说明理由型

① Nowadays/ With, we/ many people/ students are facing / have to face (with problem of).

②There are several different ways/ channels to tackle/ solve the problem. First, ③. Second, ④.⑤Besides/ Furthermore,.

⑥ As to me, I prefer/ choose to. ⑦The reasons are as follows. For one thing,⑧. For another, ⑨. ⑩ And above all/ Most important of all,. 11. Therefore,.

3）问题——原因——解决途径型

①Nowadays,，which has aroused close social attention / great concern. It is widely assumed that. They think because. Actually / In fact / As

a matter of fact,.

②There are several / many factors that / which may contribute to / be responsible for/ have led to. To begin with,③. Besides, ④. Last but not least, ⑤.

⑥We can resort to various ways / There are different ways to tackle the problem / cope with the situation. Firstly, ⑦Secondly,⑧. Finally/ Lastly,⑨.

⑩ With, I believe. Only in this way can we

五、解释现象型

1.出题形式

现象——评价

[例] It Pays to Be Honest

1)当前社会上出现了一些不诚实的现象

2）诚实利人利已，做人应该诚实

2.篇章结构

第一段引言：描写现象，引出评价①指出需解决的问题

②指出问题有多种解决途径

③途径一

④途径二

⑤途径三

⑥表明哪种途径适合我

⑦例举理由

⑧理由一

⑨理由二

⑩理由三

11.重申自己的选择的合理性

① 指出需解决的问题（的现状）或提出错误的观念并指出问题（的现状）

② 指出导致这一现状有多种原因

③原因一

④原因二

⑤原因三

⑥指出有多种解决途径

⑦途径一

⑧途径二

⑨途径三

⑩ 结论（表达对问题能被妥善解决的信心或预测采取这些措施后的结果）

第二段正文：说明现象产生的原因第三段结论：观点和依据

3.写作模板

模板 1

As is known to all,①，② People seem to get accustomed to ②. In fact,③.

The reason of ④lies in several aspects. Firstly, ⑤. Secondly, ⑥. Thirdly,⑦. Finally, ⑧.

As a matter of fact,⑨. On the one hand, ⑩. On the other hand, 11..Therefore, 12.. ①摆明现象

②讲明事实

③说明发生的实质变化

④承上启下，解释现象的原因

⑤原因一⑥ 原因二

⑦原因三⑧ 原因四

⑨自己的态度

⑩理由一

11.理由二

12.得出结论

模板 2

Nowadays, ①. For one thing, ②. For another, ③. It is obvious that ④.

Many remarkable factors contribute to ⑤. First of all, ⑥. In addition, ⑦. Thirdly, ⑧. As to me/ To my thought, ⑨. As we know, ⑩. Besides, 11. . In a word, 12. . .

六、图表型①摆明现象

②支持这一道理的一方面

③另一方面

④说明现象具有典型的一方

面

⑤表明原因，引出下文

⑥产生这一现象的原因

⑦原因二⑧ 原因三

⑨作者的态度

⑩支持自己观点理由一

11.支持理由二

12.得出结论

1.注意事项

1）弄清题意：通过叙述图表中的内容和数字变化来分析原因，发表议

论第一段描述图表，得出结论

第二段紧扣主题句，根据图表分析原因，论证结论

第三段发表议论，提出解决措施

2）掌握技巧：

运用描述图表的规范用语，适当引用图表，言之有据；

整体观看图表，找寻发展趋势和规律；

从细节处抓典型，即图表中所给数值的极值，或者是曲线突然发生变化的地方，这往往是文章的核心。

2.写作模板

It is obvious in the graphic / table that the rate / number of

①has undergone dramatic changes. It has gone up / fallen/ dropped considerably in recent years. At the point of②, reaches its peak value of.

What is the reason for this change? Mainly three reasons behind the situation are reflected in the graphic / table. First of all,③. More importantly,④.Most important of all,⑤.

From the above discussions, ⑥ we have enough reasons to predict. The trend described in the graphic / table will continue for quite a long time ( ⑦ if necessary measures are not taken). ① 描述对象

② 某一点的数值

③ 原因一

④ 原因二

⑤ 原因三

⑥ 陈述自己的推测

⑦ 给人以警示

3.真题范文

1.下图为 1990 年、 1995 年、 2000 年某校大学生使用计算机的情况，请描述其变化

2.请说明发生这些变化的原因（可以从计算机的用途、价格或社会发展方面加以说明）

3.你认为目前大学生在计算机使用中有什么困难或问题

hours/ week

20

18

16

14

12

10

8

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year

Student Use of Computers

Students are using computers more and more nowadays. From this chart we can find that the average number of hours a student spends on the computer per week has increased sharply, from less than 2 hours in 1990 to almost 4 hours in 1995, and while in 2000, the number soared to 20.

Obviously, computers are gaining an increasing popularity. Several reasons account for this. First, computers facilitate us in many aspects of life. Also, the fast development of modern e-tech enlarges our demands for using computers. For example, we can easily contact friends in remote places through the Internet. Besides, the price of computers is getting lower and lower and most families can afford one.

However, problems arise. The most serious one is that many students are spending their time playing PC games, thus ignoring their studies. In addition, laws concerning on-line crimes are not so mature that many students are cheated into porn websites. Therefore, guidance must be

provided to help students use computers in a proper way.本文是英语四级写作技巧，希望给您带来学习帮助