雅思写作语料库--自然资源减少的原因和解决办法
World’s natural resources such as oil，forests and fresh water are consumed at an ever-increasing rate, what are the causes and how to solve it? 世界的自然资源例如石油，森林，淡水在日益减少，原因何在，如何解决?
解析：at an ever-increasing rate v以愈来愈快的速度
如何打造高分作文：
盖楼房：图纸：谋篇布局+ 思路拓展
原料：精准词汇+ 学术句型
分析问题解决问题话题布局图：
首段：背景介绍(个性开篇) + 问题影响(对于国家，企业，个人)+写作目的(清晰表达)
二段：问题原因的展开：(客观上+ 主观上)(社会原因+ 家庭原因+ 个人原因)
三段：解决策略的展开：(政府做;媒体做;企业做;家庭做;个人做)
尾段：再次亮明观点+ 总结理由(强调协调努力)
【名师点评】：托福写作是经常提问是否……是解决问题的最佳的途径，这就和雅思写作的分析问题及解决问题相似了。
例如：The best way to learn about a foreign country is to read newspapers and magazines from that country?Do you agree or disagree?(托福题库) 假如给我一套模板：
首段：背景介绍+写作目的
Never has …… in our community been as severe as it now is. …… is soaring at an alarming rate, for reasons which are not easily explained. This essay will attempt to discover some of the reasons and explore some possible solutions.
填空词汇：
1. energy crisis n能源危机
2. various depletion of natural resources n 各种各样能源的消耗
二段：三个原因的展开：
One the of most contributing factors of …… could be attributed to …… By that I mean, ……Still, …… often exert great negative influence on ……, because……Last, …… is also the root cause of ……，……
三段：解决策略的展开：
Considering the seriousness of the issue, it is imperative to implement some practical solutions. First，the government should give priority
to ……. More precisely, to enact relevant legislations to……. Further, much emphasis should be put on strengthening publicity, for it will aid us in fostering……. Last, …… must take every step necessary to ……
尾段：总结全文：强调协同努力;
Only when the government, society and every family join hands in resolving the issue will we ……
点评：政府做;媒体做;企业做;个人做……
出题背景：中国在建设节约型社会的背景下。
【名师思路拓展】：
1. 需求增加——满足需求——依赖高科技产品和利用自然能源
2. 意识缺乏——宣传教育——提高环保和节能意识
3. 利用不合理——资源浪费——合理布局
点评：水污染;森林砍伐;
【原创语料库】
1. almost uses up the world fuel resources v 几乎用尽了世界的燃料资源
2. …… lead to energy crisis v导致能源危机
3. consume the energies and resources v 消耗能源和资源
点评：主语就是各种交通工具和现代化建筑。
回答Wendy 提问：为何建筑消耗木料，因为每个房子的装饰都是需要做吊顶的。
4. Alarmingly，we, human beings, are now facing a series of
resource-related problems such as water scarcity or various depletion of natural recourses although our economy keeps on increasing. 具有讽刺意味的是，尽管我们的经济在不断攀升，但是，我们人类却面对着一系列和能源相关的问题例如水源短缺以及自然资源的消耗。
【名师点评】：个性开篇;首段亮剑。
5. Ironically, the history of the development of economic development is also a history of man’s increasing destruction of nature. 具有讽刺意味的是，经济发展的历史也是人类不断破坏自然的历史。
解析：Ironically adv 具有讽刺意味的是……
6. Alarmingly，the depletion of natural resources has long been a problem of great concern and complaint in many cities around the globe. 在世界上，很多国家抱怨和关注的问题之一就是自然资源的消耗。
【名师点评】：切题的开篇句
7. To avoid an oil shortage，more productions must harness natural energy such as solar energy，wind energy and tidal energy .为避免油料的短缺,更多的生产应该利用自然能源例如太阳能，风能和潮汐能。
解析：荷兰的风车发电。
解析：harness v 利用(尤其指的自然能源)
解释：harness：control and use a natural force to produce electrical power, etc 控制及利用(自然界的力量)以产生电能等:
例证：harness a river, a waterfall, the sun's rays as a source of energy 利用河水﹑瀑布﹑太阳光作为能源.
8. To develop and popularize cleaner cars could effectively ease the excessive consumption of fuels. 研发和普及环保汽车可以有效地缓解过度的燃料消耗。
【名师点评】：有效例证
9. The public should also be encourage to take public transit 应该鼓励公众乘坐公共交通工具。
点评：环保类能源类话题的万能解决策略之一。
10. raise the environmental awareness amongst the general public v 提高公众的环保意识。
【名师点评】：环保类能源类话题的万能解决策略之一
11. Also, efforts should be made by experts to explore and popularize new eco-friendly fuels and energies. 专家努力去研发和普及新型的环保的燃料和能源。
12. To illustrate, to research and tap fuel-cell-driven cars could effectively ease the energy crisis triggered by public transport. 研发电瓶驱动汽车可以有效地缓解由公共交通带来的能源危机。
解析：fuel-cell-driven cars n电瓶驱动的汽车
解析：fuel 燃料;cell 电池; drive v开车
【名师点评】：写作亮点;一针见血;一定可用。
13. It is the duty of everyone of us to cultivate energy preservation awareness. For example, fostering water-wise lifestyle, leading a simple lifestyle should be advocated amongst the general public. 人人有责，培养节能的意识。例如，培养节水的生活方式以及简单生活应该在大众中得以推广。解析：amongst the general public 在大众中
解析：among = amongst 在……之中(三者以上)
14. New types of fuel will definitely be found and then, substitute some highly polluted fuels. 新的燃料一定会被找到，代替高度污染的燃料。
点评：研发新能源是环境保护的万能解决方法
15. New type of fuel is characteristic of low-consumption and
eco-friendliness. 新能源具有低消耗和环保的特征。
解析：is characteristic of …… v具有……的特征
16. Obviously，man depends on nature for survival and development. 显而易见，人类的生存和发展依赖于自然。
【名师点评】：强调节能的重要性。
17. There are still many problems in energy protection in recent years. 近年来，能源保护仍面临着许多的问题。
18. The fact is that the depletion of various natural resources has deteriorated beyond people’s imagination. 事实上，能源消耗的的程度远远超乎人们的想象。
解析：deteriorate v 恶化
19. Those who destroy the environment indiscriminately should be penalized severely. 任何肆无忌惮地破坏自然的人都应该会受到严厉的惩罚。解析：discriminate v区分
解析：indiscriminately adv不加选择地
20. It is high time that we reversed this trend and got people to adopt a simpler life style and cherished our planet’s limited resources. 我们要逆转这种趋势，让人们适应一种更加简单的生活方式，珍惜我们的星球上有限的自然资源。这件事情已经迫在眉睫。
【名师点评】：虚拟语气;尾段总结;写作亮剑。
解析：I t is high time that we …… 是我们做……的时候了(强调本该做，但是没有做)
21. One of the most distributing issues concerning our environment is the shortage of fresh water. 如今，最困扰人们的问题之一就是淡水资源的缺乏。
【名师点评】：淡水短缺如果换成资源短缺，就是对全文背景的概况。
22. It is universally accepted that fresh water is crucial to human life and our daily life. 正如我们所知，淡水对于人的生命和日常生活是至关重要的。解析：is crucial to …… 对……是至关重要
解析：it is universally accepted that …… 人们普遍接受的是……
23. Water pollution is known to be the major factor that has caused the scarcity. 水污染被认为是造成水缺乏的主要原因。
解析：…… is known to be the major factor that has caused …… 是引起……的主要的根源(谈及原因的句型)
24. The government is urged to take feasible measures to ease the scarcity of natural resources. 政府被要求采取可行的措施来缓解资源短缺的
问题。
25. The public should also be educated to cultivate a water-wise life style and to treasure other natural resources. 应该教育公众养成节水的生活方式，珍惜其他自然资源。
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nutritionists, too much intake of sugar, calorie and fat is undoubtedly health-threatening, for fast food, in most cases, is low in nutritional value. People differ greatly in their views as to how to foster wholesome dietary habit. As I see it, educating the public about the dangers of unhealthy eating, regulating baneful sales and food advertisements to children and lowering the price of healthy foods should be used together to help people keep fit. 【二段】 Granted, one effective way to promote a healthy diet is to educate people about the potential risks of unhealthy diet. Modern people might opt for healthier meals and snacks if they are taught that fast foods are high in salt, fat and sugar. To illustrate, I myself changed my unwholesome eating habits after watching television programs on how to preserve health. Also, while it is of great significance to educate adult eater, schoolchildren should be main target for education because they are not only in their formative years but also the regular eaters of fast foods. 【三段】 In addition to education, other ways to promote healthy eating are not far to seek. First, methods should be adopted to strictly censor those
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小、
，例如色情和
delete/eliminate/excise v. 删除evaluate v. 评价、评估 the evaluation on 对……的评价或评估 be ?ooded (or ?lled/awash/saturated/inundated) with... 充斥着 excessive and gratuitous violent and pornographic contents 过多的、无端的暴力与色情内容 at the expense/cost of 以……为代价 media hype 媒体炒作advertising hype 广告炒作 hype n. 炒作，大肆吹捧 v. 对 ……大肆宣传，吹捧commercial(s) n. 商业广告public service advertising 公益广告 evoke (or stimulate) impulse buying 刺激冲动性购物shopaholic(s) n. 购物狂promotion n. 促销 marketing tool 市场营销手段 induce sb. to do sth. 诱导或引诱某人做某事 target audience 目标受众sensationalise (or sensationalize 美式拼写) /exaggerate v. 耸人听闻地夸大某事，大肆渲染 over-report...to hook viewers and maximise pro ?ts 为了利益最大化，从而过度报道……来吸引公众的眼球 道德规范（尤指职业的） 良好的/较强的/无懈可击的职业道德adj. 无所不在的，普遍存在的……的流行或盛行对……有着深远的影响 揭露社会问题 监督非常详尽地报道…… 如实的描述、报道adj. 有新闻价值的，有报道价值的adj. 最新的，及时的adj. 客观公正的adj. 不客观的，有偏见的 adj. 可信的，可靠的 adj. 令人误导的，不如实报道的，曲解的adj. 虚假的adj. 欺骗性的 adj. 信息量大的，增长见闻的adj. 娱乐性的，令人愉快的 v. & n. 审查n. 审查制度 对……实施审查 v. 影响，左右 (e.g. sway sb./sb. be swayed by... 影响某人或者某人受到影响)
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小组学习和自己学习各有优势，选择应该由个人做出，我过去常常一个人学习，虽然可以独立思考，但是未能感知小组讨论和交流的乐趣，因此，有机会，我更加渴望小组学习。 点评：主题观点是模仿雅思考官男女分校的范文 【原创语料库】 1. group study 小组学习 2. to study with a group of fellow classmates 和同龄人一起学习 拓展：a group of fellow classmates = peers 同龄人 3. focus on self-improvement 专注于自我提高 4. zero in on academic study = concentrate on learning专注学习(写作亮点) 5. a great many self-leaner 很多的自学者 6. achieve academic success 取得学习的成功 7. enhance the efficiency of learning 提高学习效率 8. face-to-face communication could …… 面对面交流可以…… 9. positive interaction w ith …… 和…… 积极的互动
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如何从根本上提升雅思写作水平之 逻辑篇 写作老师经验分享, 如何从根本上提升雅思写作水平之逻 辑篇，今天给大家带来如何从根本上提升雅思写作水平之逻辑篇,希望可以帮助到大家，下面就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。 写作老师经验分享如何从根本上提升雅思写作水平之逻辑篇 我们来拿一个真题和一个类似于真题的题进行说明： 20XX0328 Some people say that communication by using computers and phones will have side effects on young people’s writing and reading skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 改编题： Some people say that the use of using computers and phones will have side effects on young people’s communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
请各位同学想一想，这两个问题是一样的么?劳烦各位思考个3分钟，然后继续往下翻~如果你觉得并没有很大差别，那估计真的碰到这个题目的话，6.5分是很勉强的。 ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ 我们先来说改编题： side effects: 1. face-to-face communication减少，感情可能变淡 positive effects: 1. be able to contact people without geographical limitation; in the past, it may be impossible to say Hi to a foreign friend. 2. be able to contact friends or partners quickly, no need to wait for responses; in the past, writing letters really wastes a lot of time and sometimes letters may be lost. 我们再来说真题： side effects: 1. writing abilities会下降，因为写信的频率降低了，handwriting当然变差
雅思写作小作文必备语料库
雅思写作小作文必备语料库 动态图形词汇 上升 -rise, increase, grow, climb, jump，go up, an upward trend shoot up (informal)，ascend -rocket, soar, swell, surge, skyrocket, mushroom, escalate, on the rise，on the increase 相关单词用法 下降 -drop, decrease, go down, decline, fall, descend, sink, dip, an downward trend., -plummet, Plunge, slump, dive, nosedive 相关单词用法 不变、平稳等 -keep/remain/stay stable/steady/unchanged/constant（不变） -maintain the same level -experience a stable trend, -level off at（上升或下降之后）/ level out at（上升之后）/ -hover at/ stabilize at/ reached a plateau at 波动 fluctuate/rise and fall, vary, undulating; be volatile/ variable; 高点、低点： ?reach the highest point，reach(arrive at/hit) a peak(summit) at+数字(用hit 时动作较剧烈)，peak at+数字 ?reach/fall to/arrive at/hit the bottom/the lowest point at数字，bottom out at数字，(用hit时动作较剧烈) 其他点 ?起始点： n. starting point v. start/begin/end at ?交叉点： It is worth/deserves mentioning that 1）.A和B在...处拥有相同数值 A and B share the same amount/number in 2）.A在...处超过B A outstrip/overtake/outnumber/go beyond B in... ?表示达到了多少数量的及物动词或词组 Reach/arrive at/ amount to / hit/ register/ stand at
雅思写作语料库父母角色差异的原因及未来作用
In some countries，the role of a mother differs in some ways from the role of a father. Why do you think these differences exist? How might parental roles develop in the future? 在一些国家，父母在教育孩子中扮演的角色，和很多方面，是不同的，为何存在这种差异，在未来父母的角色会有哪些变化? 【名师点评】 新题出现，恒热教育，谈及父母对于孩子成长中影响差异的原因，展望父母在孩子未来成长中作用的不同，不属分析问题解决问题话题，考察头脑风暴，写作有一定难度。 预测题目中的寒门贵子还是将门虎子，是否所有的父母都应该学习育儿课程，和本场考试都有交集。 【思路拓展】 男性比较理性和阳刚，女性比较感性和温柔，因此，他们对于孩子成长的影响自然不同，一般而言，孩子会从爸爸身上学到坚毅和勇敢，会从妈妈身上学会善良和孝道。骨血相连，血浓于水，无论父母，对于孩子的教育和引导都是积极的善意的。爸爸努力赚钱，是为孩子赢一个成长环境，妈妈努力育儿，是让孩子明辨是非、行为规范。 教育这个词的本源是说将一个人从一种蒙昧的无知的状态中引导出来，教育应该涉及道德教育、性格培养、学术教育等。
教育不能颠覆：道德教育和性格培养应该优先于学术成长，先重品质和品行，后重成绩和选择。如果可以畅想未来，父爱如山，为人父，应该树立标杆，让孩子学会志存高远，不懈奋斗。母爱如水，为人母，应该树立标杆，让孩子学会海纳百川，清澈纯净。 【范文赏析】 【首段】背景介绍+ 写作目的 Parents are the initial teachers of their children, thereby, their speeches and behaviors, to a larger extent, exert a subtle influence on children’s character-training and future development. The impacts that parents impose on their kids might differ greatly due to various reasons. This essay aims to explore where the differences lie in and how parental roles will change in the future. 【解析】 1. Their speeches and behaviors, to a larger extent, exert a subtle influence on children’s character-training and future development. 父母的言行举止，在很大程度上，对于孩子的性格培养和未来发展有潜移默化的影响。
雅思写作必背短语以及精彩句型
雅思写作核心语料库 Part 1 1 offer a sense of job satisfaction and security 带来工作的满意感和安全感2lay a solid professional working experience 积累扎实的工作经验 3 reduce/cut down expenditure 削减支出 4increase/generate job opportunities 创造就业机会 6promote talent introduction and exchange 促进人才的引进与交流 7keep skills fresh and up-to-date 保证技术的不落伍 9lay a solid foundation for 奠定坚实的基础 10 pave the way for the future/development 为未来铺平了道路 11foster a sense of competition and cooperation 培养合作感与竞争感 12cultivate the spirit of team working 培养团队合作精神 13master interpersonal skills 掌握人及关系技巧 14widen one’s knowledge 拓宽知识面 15enrich one’s social and life experience 丰富社会与人生经历 16enlarge one’s view/broaden one’s horizon 拓宽视野 17realize the value of life 实现人生价值 18surmount /overcome / win over /master difficulties 克服困难 19grasp good communication skills 掌握人际交流技巧 20remove misunderstanding and discrimination 消除误解与歧视 21keep balance between work and family 保持事业与家庭的平衡 22raise the standard of living提高生活水平 25enrich people’s spiritual life 丰富人们的精神生活 26promote social skills and competence 提高社交技巧与能力 27strengthen the family ties促进家庭团结 28cultivate a strong sense of responsibility 培养强烈的责任感 29bring joys and comforts to sb带来愉悦与舒适 30usher in a brand-new life-style引入全新的生活方式 31relieve the pressure of 缓解压力 32maintain the community stability 保持社会的稳定
(完整版)雅思写作常用句型
雅思写作常用句型分类总结 雅思写作是否有规律可循，答案是肯定的。至少从语言上来讲，雅思考试的写作可以通过一些句型的替换来实现个人观点的陈述，完成论述过程。熟练掌握运用这些表达方式可以大大节约在考场上的时间，也可以使自己的文章能够流畅自如，从而获得高分。下面就将这些句型做一个分类总结： 一．首段的句型 第一句：描述背景： 1. Along with the rapid development the society, remarkable changes have taken place in… 随着社会的快速发展，……已发生了显著的变化。 2. The ….is a subject matte r in recent years. …是近年来的一个课题。 3. In recent years, China has experienced an alarming increase in… / In recent years, much more attention than ever before has been paid to …. 最近几年来，中国……有了惊人的增长。 /近几年来，….吸引了众多关注。 4. One of the pressing problem facing our nation (China) today is…and… 我们国家(中国)如今面临的紧迫问题之一是…… 第二句：改写题目/介绍两个对立论点 1.There is much controversy over whether…/There is an ongoing debate about … 对于是否…很有争论 2.S ome people think that… Others argue that the opposite is true. There is probably some truth to both arguments, but I think… 有的人认为应该……另一些人持相反意见。也许双方的观点都有一定道理，但是…… 3.It is widely held/acknowledged that….(改写题目)。Such people think that…（介 绍对方观点） 第三句：提出个人观点/引出接下来要讨论的内容 1.表示只赞同一方观点： My personal view is that … is of benefits to sb./sth. As far as I know, its benefits are far more obvious than its downsides. Although…, I am of the view that they do more harm than good. My personal view is that its benefits cannot justify its harmful effects.我 个人观点是它的好处不能抵消它的负面影响。
雅思写作语料库--孩子宽管还是严管
Some people think children should obey rules and do what the teachers want them to do, others think controlled children are not prepared for children’s adult life in the future. Discuss both sides and give your opinion? 有人认为孩子应该听从老师的，有人认为管理过严格 的孩子不能为成人生活做好准备，你的观点? 【名师点评】 2010年经典旧题，教育目的为恒热提问角度。该题目考察的孩子们是应该宽松管理还是严格管理 【思路拓展】 支持孩子们要严格管理 1. 从小的时候，就要教会孩子们明辨是非，行为规范。(对比反证，细节展开) 2. 老师们都是精通专业知识，懂得教育的常识，所以，老师的建议和指导对于孩子的成长是有积极的影响。 【原创语料库】 1. strict education and guidance n.严格的教育和指导 2. make preparations for = be well-prepared for = ready oneself for sth v.为……做好准备 3. make a clear distinction between right and wrong v.明辨是非
4. how to behave well v.行为规范 5. excel in specialized knowledge v.精通专业知识 6. know the common sense of education v.了解教育的常识7. strict education n.严格的教育 8. exert a positive impact on ……对于……有积极影 响9. proper guidance from educators n.教育者的恰当的指 10. Spare the rod and spoil the child 孩子不打不成器(节省了棍子，宠坏了孩导 子)
雅思写作语料库
A routine of exercise and diet designed to make the body appear muscular. Training routines usually reduce fat levels and, if performed properly, can improve flexibility, particularly of the shoulders, hips, and trunk. When combined with aerobic fitness training, body building can be beneficial to health. A form of exercise and competitive sport in which the primary aim of participants is to develop muscularity and body mass, and to produce symmetry and harmony between different body parts. Well-trained body-builders are characterized by having lean and muscular bodies with enhanced muscular strength and power. Good nutrition can help prevent disease and promote health. Good nutrition helps individuals achieve general health and well-being. There are six categories of nutrients that the body needs to acquire from food: protein, carbohydrates, fat, fibers, vitamins and minerals, and water.
雅思大作文方法-新东方老师整理推荐(全).
一.思大作文的15大考察内容 考察频率最高专题： ? 1. 教育：儿童，中学，大学教育体制和方法 ? 2. 科技发展对生活的影响 ? 3.文化的组成因素和保护 ? 4.生活方式的转变和社会观念 ? 5. 全球化及其影响 ? 6. 环境问题和环境保护 ?7. 政府投资 考察次重点专题： ? 1. 艺术的价值 ? 2.媒体的作用 ? 3.广告的影响 ? 4.动物的保护和动物实验 ? 5.城乡差距和城市化 ? 6.犯罪 ?7.弱势群体：妇女的权利，妇女参军 ?8.体育 雅思写作错误检查表（10条） 1.使用了正确的语法结构：时态语态，主谓一致，从句，用词准确(名词，动词，形容 词的形式)，介词，冠词 2.句式有变化 3.使用了一定量的词汇 4. 拼写没有错误 5. 观点明确，语意精准不模糊 6. 每段主题句都表明了该段中心思想，所有拓展句支持句都紧扣主题 7. 大量的过渡性词语(逻辑连接词)，使句子间和段落间都具有逻辑性和条理性 8. 提供了足够的细节，例子或论据 9. 每一段话都得到充分展开 10. 每一段话都紧扣文章主题 如何应用： a.1347当做检查项目，其他当做考前提醒 b.时间紧，就改第一段和每段的前两句话 三.大作文首段基本写作策略---三步走 1.转述背景，扩展题目(setting/ background information )：把题目所提供的背景再用自 己的话拓展转述同义替换一下 题目：It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sports or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to be a good sports person or musician. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 考官写的开头段： The relative importance of natural talent and training is a frequent topic of discussion when people try to explain different levels of ability in, for example, sports, art or music. 2. 说明意图(statement of purposes)：
雅思写作语料库--平衡工作和生活的问题解决
Currently many people fail to balance the work with the other parts of lives, what are the reasons and how to solve it? 现在，人们很难平衡工作和生活的其他部分，讨论其原因再提出解决方法。 解读题目： 除了工作以外的生活的其他部分： 1. 发展和培养爱好 2. 自主学习 3. 扩大交友圈 4. 家庭聚餐和家庭旅行 5. 健康管理(企业家健康管理很差) 原因分析： 1. 工作狂的现象可以被归结为工作压力大和激励的竞争，多数情况下，一个人想要事业中取得成功就要比别人努力，因此，很多人没有选择只能全心工作。 2. 现代年轻人更加有雄心，如果一个人想在专业上训练有素，想在事业发展中出类拔萃，他就要专注于工作，因此，一个人在工作中花费的时间多，一个可以分配给家庭生活，健康管理和个人爱好的时间就少。
1. 企业应该帮助职员缓解压力，建立理性的工作制度，提倡健康的工作方式。 2. 对于每一个职员来说，他们应该清晰认识到，事业的成功不是人生唯一的目的，去努力工作是为了去创造和享受更加美好的人生。无论多么繁忙，一个人应该记住家庭生活和健康管理也是重要的，他不该把没有完成的工作带回家，他也应该有规律地运动。 【原创语料库】： 1. So fierce is the competition that a lot of young adults have no choice but to fully apply themselves to career development. 竞争激励，很多年轻人没有选择只能专注发展事业。 2. It is conceivable that if a new employee slackens his or her efforts at self-improvement, he or she is doomed to be eliminated by the hot competition. 可以想象，如果新职员放松在工作上的努力，他们注定会被激励的竞争淘汰。 3. Modern young workers are more enterprising and ambitious in comparison with the counterparts of the past. 比之过去，现在的很多年轻人更加富有进取心和雄心。 点评：counterparts n 对应的人或者是物