习思四级十套题作文范文

模拟试题一(日记：注意格式和时态)

May 14th, 2008 Sunday

Today is Mother’s Day. In the morning, I got up at 7 o’clock, I sent my mum some beautiful flowers, and said “Happy Mother’s day” to her. Mum was very happy. In the afternoon, our family went to the park. We had fun there and took a lot of photos. In the evening, we had a big dinner in a restaurant. Today is a really happy day. （66words）

(简评：此文以时间为序，表述清晰、有条理；时态正确；最后用一句话概括全文，简明扼要)

模拟试题二(描述人物)

In my family, my mother is the busiest one. After working, she takes on most of the housework. For example, she cooks meals and washes clothes for us every day. My father helps her sometimes, such as sweeping the floor, emptying the trash. But I do few household chores, even hardly make my bed or set my desk, as my mother does all for me. She says I should pay all my attention to study.

(简评：此文主要用了第三人称单数来讲述，人称和动词形式一致；通过妈妈的“勤”和我的“懒”对比突出中心，此处用“But”作为转折过渡)

模拟试题三(调查报告)

We did a survey of the radio stations, supermarkets and cinemas in our city and this is the result. All the cinemas are good, but Dianguang Cinema is the best service. The most popular supermarket is Pricesmart, because it has the best quality things. As for the radio stations, most people think Beijing Music FM 97.4 is the best because it plays the most interesting music.

（简评：现状的调查结果要用一般现在时来表述; 此文用了形容词的最高级进行不用方面的比较；过渡方面用了but, because, as for…等词，显得上下文条理清晰、内容连贯。）

模拟试题四（描述日程表）

Mr. Black will go to Beijing by plane at ten thirty on Monday morning. Then he will visit the Great Wall and go to Wangfujing Street to do some shopping from Tuesday to Wednesday. He is going to fly to Hainan Island at eight forty on Thursday morning. He will go to visit Tianyahaijiao on Friday. At 4:50 on Saturday afternoon, he will fly back to Beijing. Then he will fly back home at 3:20 on Sunday afternoon.

（简评：此文用了将来时will/be going to结构，按时间顺序把Mr Black一周的日程表有条理的描述出来）

模拟试题五（写近期的生活与感受）

My Recent Life

It is Friday today. I’m excited. The summer holiday is coming soon. Several days ago, I was very tired because I did a lot of exercises. Now I’m having exams. Some of my classmates are nervous about the exams, but I’m very happy. In a few days, I’m going to have a good rest during the holiday. I will go sightseeing. At the same time, I’m also going to visit my friends and relatives. I am sure I will have a happy holiday.

(简评：此文用三种不用时态正确的描述现在、过去和将来的生活和感受；虽然需要用相对多的时态，但条理却非常清晰；结束语也是文章的一个亮点)

模拟试题六（通知）

Notice

There is going to be a speech about basic law on our school sports playground on Friday

evening. The speech will be given by Mr. Yang. He is from Beijing. It will begin at 7:30 p.m. . Everyone must be there on time. Please take your own chairs there and keep quiet during the speech. Please bring your notebooks with you and take notes. You are supposed to talk with your classmates and give your own opinions after the speech.

(简评：此文用了将来时讲述通知的事情；然后用祈使句和情态动词must/be supposed to来讲述相应的要求，表达方式相对丰富，这样避免了表达的单一枯燥。)

模拟试题七（看图描述某人过去一天的活动）

Li Ming’s mother is very busy on Saturday. She has so many things to do.At 7:00 in the morning,she gets up. Then she makes breakfast for the whole family. She often does some shopping in the supermarket at 9:30 a.m.. After lunch, at two o’clock she does some cleaning in the room. At night, she helps the grandmother make the bed. What a busy day she has!

（简评：本文人称和动词的形式一致；以时间为序进行描述；最后的感叹句使人眼前一亮感觉）

模拟试题八（编写商店里服务员和顾客的对话）

Salesman: What can I do for you, sir?

Mr. Li: I’m looking for a pair of shoes.

Salesman: What color do you want?

Mr. Li: Black.

Salesman: Then, what size?

Mr. Li: Size 26.

Salesman: What about these shoes? They sell very well.

Mr. Li: May I try them on?

Salesman: Sure.

Mr. Li: Well, they look very nice on me. How much are they?

Salesman: Ninety-eight yuan.

Mr.Li: OK, I’ll take them. Thanks.

Salesman: You’re welcome.

(简评：对话用的是口头用语，相对书面语简单多了，且常用省略句；此文主要用问答形式把所有要点表达出来)

模拟试题九（请假条）

Dear Ms. Li,

I’m very sorry that I can not take part in this weekend’s activity. My mother is ill in bed , while my father is away on business, and he won’t be back until next Monday. So I have to stay at home and take care of my mother. Please excuse my absence.

(简评：请假条格式正确；用so连接讲出请假的前因后果；且文章显得真诚有礼)

模拟试题十（看图讲述一天所见所闻）

I got up at 7 o’clock this morning. On the way to school, I saw a purse and picked it up. There was much money in it. So I waited there for 15 minutes. But no one came for it. I had to give it to a policeman. Then I was late for class. But I thought that the owner of the purse would be very happy when he got his purse back.

(简评：此文的亮点是它的条理性和动词过去时的正确使用)