2013年12月四六级作文和翻译range finders

2013年12月四六级翻译range finders

1.弄懂并熟悉原文

2.内容方面，不漏点，忠实于原文，意译太多不好

3.语言，措词

4.语法（最后参考）

评分标准

本题满分为15分，成绩分为六个档次：13-15分、10-12分、7-9分、4-6分、1-3分、0分

13-15分：译文准确表达了原文的意思，用词贴切，行文流畅，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错误。

10-12分：译文基本上表达了原文的意思，文字较连贯，但有少量语言错误。

7-9分：译文勉强表达了原文的意思，文字勉强连贯，语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。

4-6分：译文仅表达了一小部分原文的意思，连贯性差，有相当多的严重语言错误。

1-3分：除个别词语或句子，绝大部分文字没有表达原文的意思。

0分：未作答，或只有孤立的词，或译文与原文毫不相干。2013年12月四级翻译range finders

许多人喜欢中餐。在中国，烹饪不仅被视为一种技能，而且也被视为一种艺术。精心准备的中餐既可口又好看。烹饪技艺和配料在中国各地差别很大。但好的烹饪都有一个共同点，总是要考虑到颜色、味道、口感和营养（nutrition）。由于食物对健康至关重要，好的厨师总是努力在谷物、肉类和蔬菜之间取得平衡，所以中餐既味美又健康。

2013年12月四级翻译RANGE FINDERS

一．15分

Many people enjoy Chinese food. Cooking is looked upon as an art as well as a skill in China. A carefully prepared Chinese dish is not only delicious to eat but also beautiful to look at. Cooking techniques and ingredients vary widely across the country . But good cooking does have something in common. It always takes into account color, flavor, taste and nutrition. As food is vital to health, good cooks always strive to strike a balance between grains, meats and vegetables, so Chinese dishes are both delicious and healthy.

二．14分

Many people enjoy Chinese food. In China. Cooking is not only viewed as a skill but also regarded as a form of art. Chinese food, A carefully prepared Chinese dinner

can be both tasty and good looking. While cooking skills and the ingredients differ largely from place to place in China, fine cooking always has something in common, that is the consideration of color, flavor, taste and nutrition. Since food is vital to the health, a fine cook is trying to achieve a balance between cereals, meat and vegetables. Therefore, the Chinese food is both delicious and healthy.

三．11分

Many people like Chinese food. In China, cooking is regarded not only as a kind of skill but also as a kind of art. Chinese food, which is prepared carefully, is both delicious and good-looking. Cooking skills and ingredients differ greatly from place to place in China. However, good cooking shares one thing in common: color, taste, feel and nutrition are always under consideration, Since food is of vital importance to healthy, good cooks are always trying to be balanced with grain, meat and vegetables. As a result, Chinese food is delicious and healthy.

四．8分

Many people like Chinese food. In China, cooking is not only regarded as a kind of skill, but also art. Well-prepared Chinese dishes taste good besides look good.

There is big different in cooking skills and ingredients between different between parts of China. But one thing which is common in good dishes is that they all consider about the color, the tasting and the nutrition. As food is so important to healthy, good cookers always try to make a balance between corn, meat and vegetables. As a result, Chinese dishes are delicious and healthy.

五．5分

Many people like Chinese food. Cooking is not only a skill but also it is a kind of art. It is delicious and beautiful that Chinese meals are careful prepared. It is differently in cooking and materials beside in Chinese. But, good meals have a common point which color taste and nutrition are though about. Then a good cooker is always trying their best to balance it from meat vegetables and so on. Therefore, Chinese food is delicious and healthy.

六．2分

Many people like Chinese food. In China, not only a technolege make food, and also an artist. Good food is eated fine and seem’s fine. How make food and make the food need what is different in different place in China. But make good food just only think the food’s color taste, feel make people and nutrition. Food is important for healthy, so good

people that make food is use more power for better on meat and vagitable, so Chinese food is taste good and more health.

七．0分

Most people like China. In the China, ones ※ But, good ※ think in color ※ and nutrition, ※ good dogtor※

2013年12月四六级作文range finders

1.审题仔细，黑体字非题目。

2.不要求题目，不强调三段论（几段都可以，只要符合题目要求）。

3.不看模板，看内容。内容明确、全面（不谈impact，不太切题，

没有此部分，即使语言再好，考虑不超过10分。）看学生自己写的句子，从中看出学生的写作水平。

4.高分作文要素：

内容与形式兼顾

言之有物（平时学习中注意阅读量，积累丰富的知识）

句式变化丰富

细节（平时学习中注意习得语言的正确性，避免As we all

known……这样的错误。

评分标准

2分—条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。

5分—基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。

8分—基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误

11分—切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。

14分—切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。

注：白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想，则给0分

对评分标准的解读

2分—一塌糊涂：句子没对的，语言支离破碎，没有一句能看懂，抄写directions或阅读文章

5分—糊里糊涂：不知所云，用汉语可能还能明白，

有几个句子对，大部分句子写错（结构、语法）

8分—马马虎虎：强调信息的表达，还能用英文看懂，汉式英语味道浓，语言错误相当多，且有严重错误

11分—清清楚楚：模板化作文，平淡顺畅，通顺达

意。1、思想表达清楚，事儿说出来了；2、平淡，句式变

化少，动词短语和用词不及14分段的复杂；3、连贯顺畅，可能套路了一些；4、少量语言错误，强调表达的正确性。

14分—漂漂亮亮：语言地道流畅，用词丰富，句式

变化多，短语动词用得恰如其分。1、紧扣主题与要点（内

容上）；2、用词不一定很复杂，但非常流畅（动词短语用

得好或学术词汇用得好）；3、句子有一定复杂性（不一定

花哨，但重复的句式少）；4、逻辑上很连贯，一环扣一环；

5、基本上无语言错误，允许有一两处，性质不严重，三、

四个语言错误一定不是14分段

CET-4 Writing

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on learning and then explain why education doesn’t simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

14分

This picture is actually a mirror of the growing impact the Internet has on people’s process of learning.There’s no denying that the Inte rnet does make learning more convenient. However, we shouldn’t overlook the fact that this easy access to obtain information can make people think that education is no longer necessary and that one can be equally well-educated just using the Internet.

Those holding this view tend to misunderstand the real sense of education, which lies in the following. Firstly, obtaining information doesn’t necessarily lead to obtaining truth.We find the Internet conveninet and useful because we are well-educated and capable of telling ringt from wrong. We should owe this capability to education. Secondly through education one learns not only to obtain the truth, but to think .Thinking makes us innovative and creative. Furthmore, it is thinking that help us learn about morality. From my point of view, creativity and morality are what the society needs to grow healthier.

To conclude, education doesn’t simply mean obtaining information. Education can never be replaced by Internet learning.

11分

Nowdays, we can hardly live a single day without internet, for we can search almost all the information on the internet. Just as the picture shows, some students even think that learning how to use internet is equal to receiving all the education he needs.

However, education will never simply mean learning to obtain information.There are several reasons for it.Firstly,education inculdes not only gaining more knowledge but also improving comperhensive skills.Secondly,information provided on the internet consists of positive and negative parts ,and it’s difficult for you to make sure what you absorbed is useful .What’s more ,education can be compared to a building while information makes the basis ,necessary but uncomplete.We should aborb more things form our daily life and practical experience.

So it’s natural for us draw a conclusion that learning to obtain information is only one part of education. We’d better use internet searching for information as a tool to gain better education rather than fully depend on it.

Form this picture,we can know moreand more and more people begin to using internet to learning . Some people hold on mind that once a learn how to use Internet,it’s all the education I really need?For this we can find that Internet have influence to our life,education and job.People have a few patience to learning because they can know everything from internet.

But I firmly believe that we must in school even the Internet is fast and good.I trust that people can get a amout of information in Internet,in other words,education doesn’t simply mean learning to obtain

information in Internet.Some reasons about it.Firtly,student’s can learn how to get along with strangers when the learning in school.It can help the grow health. The more inportant is student can commuication with their friends and can learn how to cooperation and compitetion.

Form these reasons,we can kown education doesn’t mean learning to obtain information.

With the devlopment of the Internet, it is growing more and more people dely on it.Just like this picture, some students ,teachers, are educated to how to obtain information.There is no doubt for learning on the Internet help us share our success with each other.But if use most of our time on Internet,not only can it cause us want not learning,but also it isn’t good for education,especially for students.Some students even use obtain information or answer when take examination.

TO sum up,I cling to believe that aducation doesn’t simply mean learning to obtain information.You think, where is the information come form?If we only how to obtain ,it’s is bad for devepment and the information can’t grow .Once you know how to use Google or Baidu, maybe you will think the teacher have just taught you are not available.So it is bad for education from teacher.

Now, the more science the more quickly, people start learning how to use Internet.That is know they need .But there were traditional education.Student think “isn’t that all the education I really need”?I want

to talking in myself thinking.

Traditional education can know knowledge of student .But tradition education learn in hige, example math, Chinese,ede.I can’t chose like knowledge .Many student think that all education I not need.

Some people of them is not so like learning on internet .We study at can help more feel reel to learn.But,we can relaxing know many knowning many knowledge in the Internet.Now,there are phone hige power,can quickly know news.We have problem in the learn that use Google.This is my opinion.Are you opinion?

CET-6 Writing

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark“The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it.” You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you will do make your life more meaningful. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

14分

Whether in the past or present, human beings constantly have the sense of urgency that life is so transient that it just passes away in a blink of an eye. Therefore, to make full use of life

we should spend it for something that will outlast it.

However, what are those things that can outlive our limited lives? In my view, they are contributions to science, culture and charitable affairs. Issac Newton, for example, laid the foundation of Mechanics in Physics, which is remembered forever. Mozart, an outstanding musician, composed symphonies that never die. Mother Teresa helped thousands of poverty-stricken people in India. She is remembered as a caring and loving hero. Their accomplishments are the extension of their lives.

As for me, I will make my life meaningful by doing the following. Firstly, as a student majoring in Physics, I will keep pursuing truth in this field. Secondly, I will work as a volunteer and spend my spare time giving a helping hand to the needy, making them feel loved.

In brief, we shall consider carefully what we can do, and then devote ourselves to what leads us to a meaningful life.

11分

“The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it.”I totally agree with this motto. Just as a famous saying goes like this, “The meaningfulness of life doesn’t depend on how much you get, but how much you contribute to the society!”

Take Bill Gates for example, he creates a big fortune, makes our life more convenient and creats thousands of job opportunities at the same time. He uses his bucks to help people in need. We can see his value

in his charity and donation.

As for me, I’ll live a meaningful life in two simple ways. First, I’ll study hard to broaden my horizons and enhance my ability, which enable me to help more people in the future. And secondly, I’ll spare my idle time to do some voluntary work, applying the theory into practice. When I help them, I’ll feel a sense of achievement!

Life is short and we need to spend it in a meaningful way. We don’t want to waste our life and gain nothing at the end of our life, do we?

8分

The remark, which says “The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it.”, provides us with a method to live a meaningful life.

It is really necessary for us to understand how to achieve a good life. We could easily learn from the famous people who ask themselves how could they live a meaningful life. For example, Qian Xuesen, a well-known scientist, he devotes his whole life to our country. Although there were many difficilties before he came back to our country, he insisted coming back to our country and develop the technology of our country. For him, it must be a meaningful liffe.

As a college student, what we could do? I should learn from him. But it is not enough. I should spend every minutes to do what I major,

finish my study well and try my best to contribute to our own country. I think it nust make our life more meaningful and encourage us to do better. Time is limited. But we should make unlimited meanings in our life.

5分

It is important for us to value our life, not only we can donate our life time to anything what we want to do, but also we should enlarge it for long. On the one hand, we can achieve ourselves valur, on the other hand, it is likely to change our world in a day! What makes life meaningful is that to spend it for something will outlast it! In the past time, many figures set examples for us in order to build a new nation.

As far as I am concerned, although I am not able to change world like Jobs, but I can change myself to make my family happier than before. Being a figure, it addict many people to achieve it, is not my life aim. What I want to do is that be a good student, a nice daughter and a trust friend.

Meaningful life is a title which is aim to different people. Do what you want to is the great use of life and trust yourself it can outlast your life.

2分

Many people used to say that life is hard and you didn’t to do maybe was late. We should spend it for somethin that will outlast it, you

could feel good.

I consider that spend time to do that will outlast thing maybe not bad. It not make you successed but increased your confidence. The outlast thing usualy was very hard to accomplished for yourself, but, you did and cxplained your belief successful, everyong usually have some regret things that to did but now, spend it for things that will outlast it, you are hero.

For example, the Olympic champion Deng Yaping, when she was young, she was failed in table tennis because of her height. She not give up, instead of she was more hard in table tennis. Finally become a great player in the world.

So, make greatest use of life is to it for something that will outlast. You did, you deserve. To make my life nore meaningful, I thought of play exercises is not bad, because is good for your health and it was important for me.