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“Technology is connecting us in ways never seen before in human history. How will that change our societies，our relationships，ourselves？”

That’s the question that interests Michael Wesch. The last time commu nication technology had such a wide ranging impact was 500 years ago with the invention of the printing press. Being able to print texts instead of writing them by hand transformed the world. It changed the way people could communicate with each other. Suddenly，many copies of books could be made quickly and easily. As more books became available，so ideas spread much more rapidly. But what will be the impact of digital technology，which is the most powerful connecting tool we have ever seen？

Michael Wesch argues that communication is fundamental to our relationships and so it follows that a change in the way we communicate will change those relationships. Wesch explores digital communication in his work. In particular，Wesch and his students look at social networking and other interactive Internet tools. A well-known example of such an application is YouTube. When people create and share personal videos on YouTube，anyone anywhere can watch it. Wesch says that this leads to some people feeling a sort of deep connection with the entire world. But it’s not a real relationship―it’s not the same connection as you feel with a member of your family. In fact，it’s a relationship without any real responsibility which you can turn off at any moment.

Wesch isn’t interested in what new media were originally designed for but in how it can be used in other ways. For example，he describes how people organize social protests such as gathering signatures for online petition（请愿）via Facebook. He says that he tries to make sure his students end up in control of technology，not vice verse. Wesch believes it’s crucial for people to be able to operate in the new environment of digital media and to use it for the greatest possible impact. He also believes that technology can help us see relationships and global connections in positive ways.

Now，we are connected by using digital technology which has a deep influence in our daily life. For example，social networking and Internet tools like YouTube change our relationships from a real one to a one without any responsibility. Researchers want people to control the technology，instead of being controlled，and use it in positive new ways.

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学生习作1

Nowadays，technology greatly influences our daily life，just like printing once sped up the spread of ideas. Michael Wesch has been working on it for a long time. In his discovery，online communicate can have a wide connection to others，but is fragile too. He wishes people to use technology properly to improve our lifes，not being the slaves of them. （61 words,16分）

学生习作2

Michael Wesch wonders how communications will be in the future because technology now plays a great role in human’s life，which is similar to the influence of the printing press invented 500 years ago. He says that communicating on Internet isn’t a real relationship and it will change our connections. He also argues that human shouldn’t be controlled by technology，which is supposed to benefit human’s connection. （68 words, 21分）

学生习作3

Technology is comprehensively changing the world，especially the ways of commutation which are fundamental to our relationship. Five hundred years ago，the invention of the printing press made it possible to spread ideas quickly and easily. Currently，social networking and other interactive Internet tools are widely accepted. People can feel much more about the world，although it’s not a real relationship. And it is believed that new media will lead the world to a positive way. （74 words, 23分）

学生习作4

Never has anything else altered the way people connect so entirely as 500-year-old printing press and modern digital technology have done. Michael Wesch is convinced that social networking has an enormous effect on social relationships but is doubtful that those relationships are just unreal and shallow. He also puts an emphasis on individuals’ control over the technology and advocates that we’re supposed to take advantage of it both to the fullest and in positive brand-new ways. （74 words, 22分）

学生习作5

Digital technology is the strongest connecting tool up to now，the affect of which interests Michael Wesch. In his opinion，digital technology will change people’s relationships. It’ll strengthen people’s connection with the whole world though the relationship is without any real responsibility. He also believes that now media has a great possibility and ways to use it are beyond imagination. It’ll have a positive impact，too.