新疆维吾尔自治区英语学业水平测试作文点拨(2017年1月)

高二英语学业水平测试作文点拨

（一）

请根据下列提示要点，以―The Ways to Keep Healthy‖ 为题，写一篇短文。

提示：1. 人人都想保持健康。

2．饮食要健康：多吃水果、蔬菜，因为它们富含纤维素和维生素；少吃黄油、奶酪、咖啡和巧克力，因为它们含糖和脂肪太多，糖和脂肪使你迅速变胖。

3．有良好的生活习惯：定期锻炼，充足的睡眠，不要过度劳累，不抽烟等等。

要求：1. 短文须包括上述所有要点，可以适当增加细节,使短文连贯。2．词数约100左右。

The Ways to Keep Healthy

Everyone hopes to be in good\poor health. But how? Here are some ways to keep healthy\fit.

First, you need a healthy diet. It is better to eat fresh fruit and vegetables because they have a lot of fiber and vitamins. Don’t eat the food which contains too much sugar and fat, like butter, cheese, coffee and chocolate. Fat and sugar make people put on weight easily.

In the second place, good living habits are of great importance. Y ou should do regular exercise to build up your body. Besides, enough rest is necessary for your health. You need 8 hours’ sleep a night and don’t work too hard. Smoking is a bad habit, so never smoke.

In a word,\All in all\ Generally speaking, healthy food and good living habits are good ways to keep healthy.

（二）

假定由你负责接待一个外国旅游团。请你拟定一篇发言稿向游客介绍南京。要点如下：

1. 南京位于中国东南部，是江苏省省会，人口约500万。

2. 南京有2400多年历史，曾有10个朝代在此建都。

3. 南京很美，有许多名胜，如玄武湖、鸡鸣寺、石头城等，还有许多现代化的工厂和高大的楼房。

词数：100左右。

Ladies and gentlemen,

Welcome to our city.

I’d like to tell you something about our city. Nanjing, the capital of Jiangsu Province, lies in \locates at the southeast of China. It has a population of 5 million or so. The city has a history of more than 2,400 years, and was once the capitals

of ten dynasties. It is a extremely beautiful city with a lot of places of interest, such as the Xuanwu Lake, the Jiming Temple and the Stone City. It also has many modern factories and high buildings.

I’m sure you will have a good time here.

Thank you.

（六）

假设你是李华，你的美国笔友George来信询问你家乡的家庭旅馆的情况, 打算今年暑假在这种旅馆住一段时间。请你给他回信介绍, 具体内容如下:

参考词汇: 家庭旅馆household hotel。

Dear George,

Very glad to have received your letter. Now I’d like to tell you about household hotels in my hometown.

The household hotel is nice to stay in. Not only can you learn about China clearly, but also you can feel at home as well by dining with the family for only 20 yuan a day. Of course you can cook by yourself if the menu doesn’t satisfy you.

It is really cheap to live in a single room for 100 yuan a\per day and a double room for 80 yuan each. Y ou can bathe and swim in the sea, climb the hill and do unpaid

jobs in the greenhouse if you’d like to.

I’m lo oking forward to your coming.

Yours,

Li Hua

（七）

假如你是李华，在美国留学。你母亲今天下午要从国内来看你，但你凑巧要去做个讲座，故给你的朋友Peter留下字条请他下午三点半去机场接你母亲。因Peter未见过你母亲，请根据下表在字条中描述你母亲的特征以便他辨认。

注意：1. 开头已给出，不计入总词数；2. 词数：100左右。

Sunday

Peter,

I am very glad that my mother is coming this afternoon by air. But I have to give a lecture and have no time to meet her. I am writing to ask you to meet my mother at the airport at 3:30 for me. As you have never seen her before, I will say something about her to help you recognize her. She is around sixty years old, fat and short, with a long face and gray hair. I have been told she is dressed in a white blouse and brown trousers and she will take a yellow suitcase with her.

I will be grateful to you for your help.

Yours,

Li Hua

（八）

为增加师生对中国航天的了解，你校将举行一次讲座。假设你是学校的广播员，请根据下面的表格提示的内容，写一份英语广播稿，通知全校师生。讲座主题中国航天(China Spaceflight)

主讲人：北京大学李博教授

时间：1月5日，星期四下午2：30

地点：学校报告厅

讲座内容：介绍中国航天发展的背景、简要历程，神舟系列飞船的发展概况以及中国航天员的情况。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 要点齐全，符合英语口语特点；

3. 广播稿的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；

4. 参考词汇：背景background 航天员astronaut 过程process

Dear teachers and schoolmates,

May I have your attention please? I have an announcement to make. In order to help us learn more about China Spaceflight, Professor Li Bo from Peking University will give us a lecture. He will talk about the background of the development of China Spaceflight as well as its process. Besides, astronauts and something about the series of Shenzhou Spaceships will also be introduced. The lecture will be held on Thursday, the fifth of January and it will begin at 2:30 pm in the Lecture Hall of our school.

Anyone who’s interested in the topic is welcome to attend the lecture. Don’t forget to be on time.

That’s all. Thanks for your attention.

（十）

身体语言是与人交流的一种方法，然而，并非所有的人都可以用一种身体语言交流，有着不同文化背景的人们对彼此的手势很可能会产生误会。比如：

即使在同一个国家的不同地区也会有不同的身体语言。因此，如果你外出旅游，了解当地的身体语言是非常重要的。

Body language is a way of communication. However, not everybody can use the same body language to communicate with others. People from different cultures may misunderstand the gestures they use. For example, we nod at somebody in the eye to show that we are listening to him attentively, while in some districts, it means hostility. People may have different body language even if they live in the same country. Therefore it is very important for you to have a good understanding of the body language there.

（十二）

假设你是李华，应英国笔友Peter的要求，写一封英文信介绍你学校的基本情况，内容必须包括下面图中的相关信息。

要求：⒈描述各建筑物的位置和功能；⒉可适当增加细节，以便行文连贯；⒊开头语已为你写好；⒋词数100左右。

Dear Peter,

Thank you for your last letter asking about my school.

My school has a long history of over 100 years. As you walk through the school gate, you will see that on either side stands a teaching building, of which every classroom is equipped with modern computers and TV sets. Theses equipments give great help to our classes. There is a big library in the middle of the school. In the library there are various books both for us students and our teachers. The library is open from 8:00 a.m. t 7:00 p.m. every weekday. There is a large playground behind the library. Every afternoon when the classes are over, we play sports there to relax ourselves.

All of us like our school very much.

Best wishes for you.

Yours ever,

LLi Hua

（十三）

请根据下表所给数据，以―How People Spent Their Holidays‖为题，为某英文报社写一篇100词左右的短文，说说近年来人们休假方式的变化。

要求：1. 条理清楚，语意连贯；

2. 通过数据，简单说明变化及可能的原因；

3. 拼写正确，书写规范。

注意：文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

The way people spent their holidays has changed a great deal in the past few years.

In 2001, 20% of the people spent their holiday at home, but in 2008 the number came down to 4%. It seemed that people has more choice than before.

Besides, the number of the people who went to the seaside and went camping remained nearly the same. It is the true nature that attracts people and they want to enjoy the real world around them.

A great number of people spent their holidays travelling abroad. Comparing with the 13% in 2001, we can see the rate in 2008 was doubled. It shows that people are richer than before and can afford the journey to foreign countries.

（十四）

假如你是一位足球爱好者，请你根据下列要点提示，以―My favorite sport ‖ 为题写一篇110词左右的短文。

1 踢足球是你的最大爱好；

2 一次偶然的机会让你爱上了踢球；在回家路上捡到一个足球，然后就和朋友们一起玩，从此深深地爱上了踢球；

3 经常和同学一起训练和比赛；

4 最喜欢的足球明星是英国的贝克汉姆；最大的愿望是成为一名职业足球运动员。

参考词汇：偶然by chance 职业运动员a professional football player

My favorite sport

Playing football is my favorite. I fell in love with it by chance. One day, I found a football on my way home.

I was so curious about the little round ball that I began to play it with my friends. From then on, football became part of my life. I often play football with my classmates after class. We often train ourselves, and sometimes we compete in football games in order to improve our skills. Among all the football stars, I admire Beckham most. It is not his handsome appearance but

his skills that impress me a lot. My greatest dream is to become a professional football player in the future.

假如你叫李华，你的英国朋友Mike 来中国学习汉语。由于听说能力有限，Mike 无法正常与同学进行交流，为此他很苦恼。Mike 给你发来一封email，向你请教如何提高汉语听说能力。请根据下面的提示，给他回一封

内容要点：1。提出两条建议：

（1）在课内外要多说汉语，应尽可能与同学交流，不要担心犯错误；

（2）看电视时，注意节目主持人的发言，以便提高听力水平。

2祝愿他学习取得进步。

Dear Mike,

I have received your email and I understand your problem.

Here is my advice for improving your Chinese. Firstly, speak Chinese more, both in and out of class. Try your best to communicate with your classmates in Chinese. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes because making mistakes is quite natural for Chinese beginners. I think the more you speak, the better you Chinese will be . Secondly, pay more attention to TV presenter in order to your listening when you are watching TV at home. I’m sure you will make great progress as time goes on. In conclusion, I wish you every success with your studies.

Looking forward to your reply soon.

Yours,

LLiHua

绿卷子

检测（一）

假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Eric来信询问你家乡是否有雾霾（smog）天气，情况如何。请按

下面提示写一封电子邮件：

1、感谢他的关心；

2、简要介绍本地雾霾情况及给人们生活带来的危害；

3、人们已认识到雾霾天气的危害，正采取各种举措减少其发生。

注意：1、字数150左中；2、开头结尾已经给出，不计入文字总数。

Dear Eric,

I’ m glad to receive your letter, thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the smog.

Since the winter last year, the smog has occurred a lot of times. It has done great harm to our daily life. A great number of people have to stay at home for fear of the poisonous air caused by the smog. Smog –related disease get more and more people to hospital. What’s worse , many traffic accidents happened and many flights have to be put off.

Fortunately, people have realized the great harm caused by the smog and the importance of protecting the environment. Effective measures are being taken to reduce the smog weather. People are supposed not to go to work by car.

According to me

protect the environment as possible as they can. Would you like to tell me some good ideas? I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

检测（二）

许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力,为了更好地发现及解决同学们中存在的心理压力

问题,你们班特意开展了一次以"Less Pressure, Better Life"为主题的英语演讲比赛,请你准备发言稿,谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法,与同学分享,内容包括:

●同学们中普遍存在的压力：学习很努力，成绩不理想；作业太多没时间玩。

●我的压力：成绩好但与同学相处有困难；与父母缺乏沟通(communicate with…)。

●缓解压力的方法：至少两项。

注意: 1、文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。

2、字数：100字左右。格式已为你写好，但不计入总词数。

3、可适当增加细节，使行文连贯，不要逐条翻译。

Less Pressure, Better Life

Hello, boys and girls!

Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Students in our class are under too much pressure.

Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students study very hard but they are still poor in their studies. They often worry about their exams. Others think they have so much homework to do that they have no time to play.

I’m always under pressure, too. I’m good at every subject, but it’s hard for me to get on well with my classmates. I hardly communicate with my parents, too. I really feel tired sometimes.

But how to solve the problem? I think a conversation with parents or teachers is helpful and taking exercise can make us relaxed when we’re under pressure.

That’s all. Thank you!

检测（三）

假如你是李明，上周你班同学就―毕业前我们该为学校做些什么?‖进行了讨论。请你根据下表提示，将同学们的建议用英语写一封信告诉你的笔友David，并谈谈你的想法及理由。

注意: 1. 词数不少于80，信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；

2. 要点完整、层次清楚、语法正确、上下文连贯；

3. 信中不得使用真实的人名、校名。

Dear David,

The

students in our class have different suggestions.

Some students think that we can collect money to buy some books for the school library or

can

study hard and make our school feel proud of us.

In my opinion, we don't have to spend money. We can do something meaningful without money.

For example, we can do some voluntary work to beautify the school's environment or try to get better

results in the coming exams so that our school will be proud of us.

(In my opinion, we can collect our pocket money to buy some books for our school library. We

can buy some detective stories and English novels. They don't cost much but they are useful. The

younger students will like them. I hope every student in our school can do so. ) I'd like to know your idea. Could you give me some advice?

Best wishes!

Li Ming

检测（四）

目前，有些学校考试频繁，学生和家长对此有不同看法。某中学生英文报―读者来信‖

专栏正在就此问题展开讨论。现在，假如你是这些学校的一位高二学生，请你用英语向该

报投一篇稿件，以亲身经历谈谈你对这种做法的意见。

注意:

(1)意见可参考上述要点,并适当增加细节,以使行文连贯；

(2)词数:100,开头已写好,不计入总词数,只需接着写.

Dear editor,

In our school we nearly have two examinations each week.Our teachers often tell us it is very important to have various kinds of examinations. But I don't quite agree with them.

In my opinion,it is necessary to have an examination sometimes. Because it can help us know whether we have mastered what the teachers have taught us. However,too many examinations do us no good in any case. With two examinations each week,we have to be busy preparing for them everyday. How can we find any time to see a good film,do some sports or just rest? On the other hand,I don't think that is the only way to improve our studies.

Dear editor,don't you agree with me?

A reader

检测（五）

假设你是李明，刚从学校安排的―澳大利亚行‖返回北京。请给在澳大利亚时借住的家庭写一封信，信的内容主要包括：

1．你已安全返回北京

2．感谢他们的热情接待

1）去机场迎接

2）Jenny陪伴游览名胜古迹

3．希望他们有时间来北京游览

Dear Mr and Mrs Johnson,

I’m writing to tell you that I had a safe journey back to Beijing. Thanks to your hospitality, I had a wonderful time in Australia. It was my first time that I had gone abroad and I was naturally a bit nervous when I first arrived. When I saw you at the airport, however, I knew from your warm smile of welcome that everything would be all right. With Jenny’s help, I visited so many

come to visit Beijing and I can return your kindness.

Best wishes,

Li Ming

检测（六）

随着外国游客日益增多，未来科技馆决定选拔部分中学生在假期为他们提供英语讲解任务。科技馆需要应征者提交英文自荐信。假如你叫袁新，你有能力并希望成为一名讲解员。请按要求写一封自荐信。

要求：

1. 必须写出三点及以上的自荐理由；

2. 词数：80-120词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

参考要点：

1. 擅长英语（英语水平，沟通能力......）；

2. 热爱科学（科学知识，创新能力......）；

3. ......

Dear sir,

I’m a junior student from Chongqing Xinhua School. I’d like to become one of your guides. I’ve learned English for 6 years. I spend a lot of my free time listening to English news and watching English movies, so I’m good at English. That is to say, it’s not difficut for me to talk

with people in English.

ideas often come out of my mind, which has encouraged me a lot.With these ideas, I have made some small inventions to make my life more comfortable.

In addition, I feel like making friends with different people,

no matter where they come from.

I’m sure that I will get along well with them.

Thank you!

Yours,

Yuan Xin

模拟（一）

that it’s useless to read.

But I think reading is of great importance in our life because we can get knowledge through reading. It can not only help open up a new whole the world to us but also make us wiser. And at the same time, we can improve our skills or get great fun from reading.

So, I’m going to pay more for books, magazines and other kinds o f reading materials. And I will also spend more time in reading every day.

模拟（二）

某中学生英语学习报正在开展以―My Opinions about School Rules‖为主题的英语征文活动。下表为某学校的部分校规，请你依此写一篇征文。

1. Come to school before 7：30 a.m..

2. Wear school uniforms every day.

3. Have lunch at school dining hall.

4. Don’t take mobile phones to school.

5. Don’t eat snacks at school.

内容：1.介绍两条你赞同的校规及一条你反对的校规，并陈述理由；

2.提出你对校规制定的建议。

注意：1.文中不能出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；

2.语言通顺，意思连贯，调理清楚，书写规范；

3.词数80左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

Each school has rules for the students. Some are good for us, I think, but others are not.

We are required to wear school uniforms every day. It helps us have an easy life, so we can put all our effort into study. Many students like eating snacks at school, but I don’t think it’s a good habit. It’s bad for our health.

However, as for mobile phones, we students have quite different ideas. We are not allowed

phones to contact our parents if we have problems. So I think the rule can be changed a little like ―Don’t use mobile phones in class.‖

Anyway, school rules are necessary for us to make fewer mistakes. But it would be better for teachers to listen to students’ opi nions. So the rules can be accepted by all the students.

模拟（三）

Good morning, everyone!

A recent survey shows that most of the school students eat an unhealt hy breakfast. Why don’t they have breakfast? Some students who get up too late choose to miss breakfast,for they have no time to eat breakfast. Others go to school without breakfast, because their parents are too busy to prepare the breakfast for them. Some girls eat nothing in the morning in order to keep slim. And some boys likes eating the food from the stands on their way to school. In their

opinion\view, it’s more convenient.

As a result, most of them are not in good health. They feel tired and sleepy in class, so they can’t do well in their studies. Some even fail in the exams.

As a matter of fact, having no breakfast is bad for our health. So what should we do? It’s important for us to have enough sleep and get up early so that we can have time to enjoy a wonderful breakfast. What’s more, we can have some fruit and milk at school if possible. Hope we have a healthy lifestyle. Thank you for listening!

模拟（四）

越来越多汽车进入我们的家庭生活，改善了我们的生活，但同时也带来了很多问题，如塞车和车祸，给家庭和社会带来极大的危害。作为中学生，我们应该怎样做呢？

请写一篇有关交通安全的短文(80字左右)

内容包含：

1. 遵守交通规则，如走人行道/过斑马线。

2. 别在街道上或马路上玩耍和踢球。

3. 劝父母不能酒后驾车。

你可以适当增加内容，让短文通顺，过渡自然。

参考词汇：sidewalk 人行道 zebra-crossing 斑马线

注：第一段已给出，不计入总数

Traffic safety is everybody's business. We must obey the rules. For example\instance ,we must walk on walk side .when we cross zebra – crossing ,stop and look right and left ,then go across fast. Don’t play football on the road .we can tell our parents not to drink before driv ing, not to run through red lights, not to talk and laugh while driving etc.

We can say cars are coming into our life, but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody's business can we be safe on the roads and walking on sidewalks.

Normally, we students will go to school on foot or by car, which is convenient for us. More and more cars will come to the street, so\therefore\thus the road will become more and more crowded. Traffic accidents will end our lives so we must obey the traffic rules, which is vital\of great importance. If you want to cross the street, please cross the sidewalk or zebra-crossing. Not only can’t you play on the road, but also shouldn’t play ball. What’ more, try to persuade you parents out of driving after drinking, for it is dangerous(for it is of great danger). Follow my words\suggestions and you will avoid(be out of ) trouble.

Life is priceless\precious. I hope my words will be kept in your mind.