v-ing分词与写作

写作中如何巧用现在分词

写作时，分词的使用能使文章的质量发生根本性变化，一篇内容平平的文章可能因分词的正确使用而变得精彩。在下列句式中，我们常可用分词代替。

用分词短语改写下列句子

定语从句

1.The boy who is sitting under the tree is my classmates

2.All the windows that face south have been repaired.

3.Most of the workers who work in the company are from Canada.

4.Charlie, who has lived in Paris for years, decided to return to London.

时间状语从句

1.Don’t laugh while you are having dinner.

2.When we see from space, we can see the beautiful city.

3. After he heard a strong sound, he went out of the room for a look.

4.While he was reading the book, he nodded from time to time.

5.After we were shown the lab, we were taken to see the library.

6. Since I have visited Mo Mountain many times, I am familiar with it.

原因状语从句

1.As the girl was seriously ill, she was taken to hospital immediately.

, she was taken to hospital immediately.

2.As I don’t know wha t to do, I had to turn to my father for help.

I had to turn to my father for help.

3.Because I do not know his address, I can’t send this book to him.

, I can’t send this book to him.

4.Because I have lived here for years, I almost know every place quite well.

I almost know every place quite well.

5.As we were too excited, we couldn’t go to sleep that night

, we cou ldn’t go to sleep that night.

想想As it was raining hard, we had to stay at home. 可变为

Raining hard, we had to stay at home. ？？？

条件,让步状语从句

1.If you work hard, you’ll succeed.

, you’ll succeed.

2.If you use your head, you will find a way.

you will find a way.

3.the tree are grown on that hill, they will grow much taller.

they will grow much taller.

4.Though I admit what he has said, I stil l doubt he didn’t do his best.

, I still doubt he didn’t do his best.

注：unless 和once 不可省略

3．Once you lose this chance you can’t easily find it.

you can’t easily find it.

并列句

1.She stood by the window and watched the sunsets.

She stood by the window,

2.The glass fell to the ground and broken into pieces.

The glass fell to the

ground, .

3.His father died and this left the family even worse off.

His father died ,

4.Four people entered the room and looked around in a curious way.

Four people entered the room

5.He ran out of the house and left the door open.

He ran out of the house,

6.I stood by the door and didn’t dared to say a word.

I stood by the door, .

宾语从句

1.I found he was lying.

2.I heard that a bird was singing in the tree.

3.He felt something was touching him with its tongue.

【练一练】

一.看例句，用现在分词改写下列句子。

Example: He talked to me for two hours. He tried to persuade me to change my mind. ---------- He talked to me for two hours, trying to persuade me to change my mind. 1.Day and night the giant arms of cranes move about. They load and unload cargo. _____________________________________________________________________ 2.She spent all her days studying. She didn’t even take time off on Sundays.

_____________________________________________________________________ 3.I slipped out of the village in the dark. I headed for the city of Xi’an.

_____________________________________________________________________ 4.He placed two tables together. He spread all the papers out on them.

_____________________________________________________________________

5.The peasants adopted this method. They raised the average yield by 40 percent.

_____________________________________________________________________ 6. Her husband died in 1998. He left her with nothing but 5 children.

_____________________________________________________________________

二. 用非谓语结构美化句子

1.因为在这国家又没有朋友，她觉得要想找到工作是不可能的。

Because she has no friend in the country, she found it impossible to find a job.

_________________________________,. she found it impossible to find a job. 2.发现学生下午昏昏欲睡的样子，老师竭尽所能来激发(arouse)他们的兴趣。The teacher found students sleepy in the afternoon and did everything he could to arouse their interest.

3. 他们是来自于几个国家的游客。

They are visitors who come from several countries.

三: 实战演练：

根据下列信息点编一个funny故事, 注意非谓语和复合句的运用。

1. beggar, lie , asking for money

2. Mr. Li, hurry, pay no attention to

3. angry, stick out，trip over(绊倒)

3. disabled, give money, a 100 -yuan note

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Make an ending