丁往道《英语写作手册(中文版)》考研真题详解(图画作文)【圣才出品】

◆图画作文题1 [英语一2006研]Directions:Study the following photos carefully and write an essay of 160-200 words in which you should1) describe the photos briefly,2) interpret the social phenomenon reflected by them, and3) give your point of view.You should write 160-200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)把崇拜写在脸上花300元做“小贝头”注：Beckham（贝克汉姆），英国足球明星。

【审题构思】题目提供了两幅图片，共同反映某种社会现象。

上图是一个年轻人，脸上印着BECKHAM，图下标注一行文字“把崇拜写在脸上”；下图是一位理发师在为一个年轻人做发型，图下标注一行文字“花300元做个‘小贝头’”。

由图片及注文可知，这两幅图展示的是年轻球迷对英国球星贝克汉姆的崇拜现象。

由此我们可以连想到当前社会上许多年轻人为崇拜偶像、明星做出很多伤害自己、伤害家人，并影响他人生活的狂热追星现象，并提炼出图画旨在表现的主题：盲目的偶像崇拜现象。

对于这种反映社会问题的写作，我们应在文中对这一现象加以描述，说明其普遍性或严重性，揭示其危害，并给出合理化建议。

【参考范文】（1）The photos present a rather ridiculous sight for us. In the left photo, a man tattooed the name of Beckham on his face to show his adoration for the superfootball star. While the right photo demonstrates that a man spent 300yuan on hair cutting in order to have the same hair style as Beckham’s. （2）However, the cases of two men are just the tip of the iceberg as thousands of youngsters who are worshiping their idols in crazy ways.（3）There should have been nothing wrong for the young generation to have their own models. However, their blind worship could bring a lot of harm. （4）Firstly, many time of youngsters are spent on following their idols instead of on their study now, which, consequently, makes bad effects on their school activities accordingly. What’s more, the young crazy fans tend to run wild. Some girls even say that their idols are more important than their parents, which is absurd and hurtful. Secondly, the young star followers spend much money on watching the shows given by their idols, （5）which aggravates their families’ economic burden. Thirdly, the crazy activities of the young fans often disturb other people’s daily life. It is quite often that passionate fans gather at an airport, a street or a shopping mall to see their stars passing by. The chaos caused by such a crowd of fans will really bother other people’s life.（6）As far as I am concerned, fans should show admiration to their superstars in reasonable ways and learn their good qualities, （7）otherwise, their blind worship will become crazy and cause a lot of problems for themselves, their families and even society.【行文点评】（1）The photos present...sight 描述图片常用表达。

（2）引用俗语“the tip of the iceberg”冰山一角。

（3）there should have been nothing wrong...However,...常用表达，表示提出文章观点。

（4）用firstly, secondly, thirdly阐述追星危害，要点明确。

（5）用which引导的非限制性定语从句表明追星的危害。

（6）as far as I am concerned就盲目追星现象提出建议。

（7）用otherwise连接前后文，总结全文。

【闪光词汇】ridiculous[] adj. 荒谬的；荒唐的，愚蠢的adoration [] n. 崇拜，爱慕the tip of the iceberg冰山一角worship [] n. 爱慕；崇拜run wild胡闹；难以管教aggravate [] v. 加重，使恶化chaos [] n. 混乱，紊乱【经典句型】①The photos present a rather ridiculous sight for us.②The cases of those two men are just the tip of the iceberg.③There should have been nothing wrong for…题2 [英语一2007研]Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly,2) explain its intended meaning, and then3) support your view with an example/examples.You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)【审题构思】图画中是一足球比赛的场面，面对球员，守门员想到的是球门如此之大，自身如此渺小，担心自己拦不住球；而球员想到的却是球门如此之小，守门员如此高大，忧心自己踢不进球。

显然，面对挑战，双方想到的都是困难重重，缺乏自信。

因此图片的中心可以定位在“自信”，或“客观认识自我”等方面。

行文应该包括四大要素：图片描述、寓意、分析、评论。

文章首段应是图画描述，图画描述至少两句，但不宜过多。

第二段应该分析图片背后的问题，提出观点。

第三段应适当举例论证，总结要点。

【参考范文】（1）This cartoon presents a very sharp conflict between two rivals, the goalkeeper and the ball striker of a football game. The former worries that he is toosmall to block the ball, while the striker thinks the goalkeeper is so large constructed that he is incapable of kicking the ball in. （2）In fact, both of them are just normally sized. They minimize themselves and exaggerate the opponent just because they are lack of self-confidence.（3）Obviously, the meaning of the picture is to highlight the significance of self-confidence in our daily life. （4）People have witnessed the increasing intensity of competitions like job searching over the past few years. Nowadays, people are shouldering various pressures, mainly including the heavy financial burden to support old parents and kids. （5）We must keep self-confident and optimistic when we are facing challenges. Only in this way, can we have the chance to survive and succeed. Imagine, what will happen if we always exaggerate our rivals or challenges and underestimate our own ability? Yes, we will become self-doubting and fail to fulfill even a simple task.（6）A case in point is the Anti-Japanese War. In spite of being confronted with the most ferocious enemies, our party did not lose confidence, but made careful fighting strategies and finally drove the enemies out of our country. Therefore, do not lose our confidence no matter how challenging the task is and （7）do remember the old saying: our only enemy is ourselves.【行文点评】（1）开篇大体描述图片内容。