《初中英语写作》PPT课件
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初中英语作文写作课(精编版) PPT课件(共17张)
Most students think that the Internet is very useful in our life. First of all, we can learn a lot from the Internet. We can also listen to music and enjoy movies for fun. Besides, the Internet makes our life more convenient. However, some other students feel differently. There are lots of unhealthy pictures or movies on the Internet. They make students lose interest in their study.
In my opinion, we should stay away from the unhealthy websites and make good use of the Internet. Only in this way, it can help us students a lot.
Outline (提纲)
Ending Linking words (连接词)
Outline Retell (提纲)
Beginning
Different people have different ideas about …. First of all learn… from listen to…, enjoy … …also…
Enfferent students have different ideas about the Internet. Most students think that the Internet is very useful in our life. First of all, we can learn a lot from the Internet. We can also listen to music and enjoy movies for fun. Besides, our life becomes more convenient with the Internet. However, some other students feel differently. There are lots of unhealthy pictures or movies on the Internet. They make students lose interest in their study. In my opinion, we should stay away from the unhealthy websites and make good use of the Internet. Only in this way, it can help us students a lot.
初中英语作文 PPT课件 图文
谢谢！ 学妹给我打电话，说她又换工作了，这次是销售。电话里，她絮絮叨叨说着一年多来工作上的不如意，她说工作一点都不开心，找不到半点成就感。 末了，她问我：学姐，为什么想 找一份 自己热 爱的工 作这么 难呢？ 我问她上一份工作干了多久，她 说不到 三个月 ，做的 还是行 政助理 的工作 ，工作 内容枯 燥乏味 不说， 还特别 容易得 罪人， 实在不 是自己 的理想 型。 我又问了她前几份工作辞职的原 因，结 果都是 大同小 异，不 是因为 工作乏 味，就 是同事 不好相 处，再 者就是 薪水太 低，发 展前景 堪忧。 粗略估计，这姑娘毕业不到一年 ，工作 却已经 换了四 五份， 还跨了 三个行 业。 但即使如此频繁的跳槽，她也仍 然没有 找不到 自己满 意的工 作。 2 我问她，心目中理想型的工作是 什么样 子的。 她说， 姐，你 知道苏 明玉吗 ？就是 《都挺 好》电 视剧里 的女老 大，我 就喜欢 她样子 的工作 ，有挑 战有成 就感， 有钱有 权，生 活自由 ，如果 给我那 样的工 作，我 会投入 我全部 的热情 。 听她说完，我尴尬的笑了笑。 其实每一个人都向往这样的成功 ，但这 姑娘却 本末倒 置了， 并不是 有了钱 有了权 有了成 就以后 才全力 以赴的 工作， 而是全 力以赴 工作， 投入了 自己的 全部以 后，才 有了地 位名望 钱财。 你要先投入，才会有收获，当你 真正投 入做一 件事后 ，会明 白两件 事：首 先你会 明白， 把一件 事认认 真真做 好，所 获得的 收益远 大于同 时做很 多事； 你会明白，有人风风火火做各种 事仍未 有回报 ，是因 为他们 从未投 入过。 从“做 了”到 “做” ，正如 “知道 ”到“ 懂得” 的距离 。 3 之前单位有一个姑娘，工作特别 拼命， 只要说 起她的 名字， 大家都 会赞不 绝口： 这姑娘 工作拼 命的程 度，连 男人们
初中英语写作课课件(精品)
Pre-writing
What should a best friend be like? A best friend should be…… can……
same
different
A: ………..should be the same, ………........... B: ………... isn’t necessary ………....... C: I don’t care …………..
While-writing
Who is your best friend? Introduce 3b your best friend by comparing you two .
My best friend Me
………
……..
While-writing
My Best Friend
Beginning 1.Who is your best friend? 2.Is your friend similar to you or Body part different? Describe your best friend. 3.What do you think a best friend Ending should be like?
3a
Wang Lingling Liu Lili tall tall library, and always She often goes to the school talks much hair about the things she reads. long straight short straight hair likes reading popular outgoing serious like sports Interests popular outgoing funny Personalities (more details)
初中英语写作技巧 完整版课件PPT
Do you know how to get on with our parents?
Let me tell you something about it. First, we can find a good time to talk with our parents. For example, when we are eating dinner, going out for a walk or watching TV.Second, we can tell them something we are interested in or ask them about their lives when they were young. Third, we can listen to them carefully and watch them quietly. Next, we can share our thoughts and feelings with them. At last, we should be honest. Our parents will trust us more.
Remember：
We must pay attention to our handwriting, it can help us get a high grade.
作文框架：
标题
开头： Hi, I am _____. I am 14. I am a good student.
Do you know _____________________________?
书写(卷面)：隐藏的评分标准！
书写注意事项
Talk about it in your group.
1、规范书写，字母饱满圆润，格式正确。 作文答题纸一般为单线，我们应将单线作为
Let me tell you something about it. First, we can find a good time to talk with our parents. For example, when we are eating dinner, going out for a walk or watching TV.Second, we can tell them something we are interested in or ask them about their lives when they were young. Third, we can listen to them carefully and watch them quietly. Next, we can share our thoughts and feelings with them. At last, we should be honest. Our parents will trust us more.
Remember：
We must pay attention to our handwriting, it can help us get a high grade.
作文框架：
标题
开头： Hi, I am _____. I am 14. I am a good student.
Do you know _____________________________?
书写(卷面)：隐藏的评分标准！
书写注意事项
Talk about it in your group.
1、规范书写，字母饱满圆润，格式正确。 作文答题纸一般为单线，我们应将单线作为
初中英语作文写作课PPT教学课件15【优质课】
Topic
On the Internet
Beginning
Beginning Different people have different ideas about ….
Body
正文
Key sentence1
Most students…
First of all learn… from …also… listen to…, enjoy … Besides make…more convenient
Body
正文ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้
Key sentence1
Most students…
First of all learn… from …also… listen to…, enjoy … Besides make…more convenient
Supporting sentences
Key sentence2 unhealthy …, make … lose …
Write a topic composition ——by using an outline and linking words
Free talk
WWheactacnan…we do on the Internet? WThheartebadreth…ings are there on the Internet? HInowmdyooypoinuiuosne, wthee sInhtoeurnldet…in .a right way?
from the Internet. We can also listen to music and enjoy movies for fun.
Besides, our life becomes more convenient with the Internet. However, some
On the Internet
Beginning
Beginning Different people have different ideas about ….
Body
正文
Key sentence1
Most students…
First of all learn… from …also… listen to…, enjoy … Besides make…more convenient
Body
正文ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้
Key sentence1
Most students…
First of all learn… from …also… listen to…, enjoy … Besides make…more convenient
Supporting sentences
Key sentence2 unhealthy …, make … lose …
Write a topic composition ——by using an outline and linking words
Free talk
WWheactacnan…we do on the Internet? WThheartebadreth…ings are there on the Internet? HInowmdyooypoinuiuosne, wthee sInhtoeurnldet…in .a right way?
from the Internet. We can also listen to music and enjoy movies for fun.
Besides, our life becomes more convenient with the Internet. However, some
初中英语写作公开课(九年级) PPT课件 图文
• In the past, my hometown was very small and poor. The roads were narrow. The people couldn’t get enough food.
• But now, the roads were so wide, and there are more and more kinds of food to satisfy people’s needs. And now, each family has telephones, TVs, computers and so on.
Brainstorming
(头脑风暴)
education transportation
house
roads
Living condition
building
changes
Next, draw up an outline.
Example:
Outline提纲
Title题目: Great changes in my Hometown
Brainstorm for the body (正文)
Working tools Living condition
education
changes
a. Changes in living conditions. b. Changes in working tools. C. Changes in education.
The Changes in My Hometown
• I am Li Ming, today I have interviewed my grandmother. She has lived in my hometown for more than seventy years. She has seen the changes in my hometown herself.
• But now, the roads were so wide, and there are more and more kinds of food to satisfy people’s needs. And now, each family has telephones, TVs, computers and so on.
Brainstorming
(头脑风暴)
education transportation
house
roads
Living condition
building
changes
Next, draw up an outline.
Example:
Outline提纲
Title题目: Great changes in my Hometown
Brainstorm for the body (正文)
Working tools Living condition
education
changes
a. Changes in living conditions. b. Changes in working tools. C. Changes in education.
The Changes in My Hometown
• I am Li Ming, today I have interviewed my grandmother. She has lived in my hometown for more than seventy years. She has seen the changes in my hometown herself.
初中英语作文写作课(共15张PPT)【优秀课件】
Different students have different ideas about the Internet. Most students
think that the Internet is very useful in our life. First of all, we can learn a lot
Topic
On the Internet
Beginning
Beginning Different people have different ideas about ….
Body
正文
Key sentence1
Most students…
First of all learn… from …also… listen to…, enjoy … Besides make…more convenient
Most students think that the Internet is very useful in our life. First of all, we can learn a lot from the Internet. We can also listen to music and enjoy movies for fun. Besides, the Internet makes our life more convenient. However, some other students feel differently. There are lots of unhealthy pictures or movies on the Internet. They make students lose interest in their study.
初三英语作文教学(共32张PPT)
Model from you(I)
Model from you(II)
My Lifestyle As we all know, everyone has his own lifestyle and me, too. I often have two pieces of bread which covered with blueberry jam and a glass of milk for breakfast. For lunch, I have vegetables,meat and apples. “An apple a day keeps the doctor away.” And for supper, I usually have fish ,eggs and rice. Sweets and cakes are my favourite snakes. In order to protect my teeth, I brush them twice a day. I sleep about seven hours on average a day. Generally speaking, I usually running in the morning and sometimes play basketball after school. When I have some spare time I will listen to music and read books. How fantastic my Lifestyle is! （2016黄浦一模 120words in total）
It’s helpful to talk with our teachers because they will give us good suggestions.
Model from you(II)
My Lifestyle As we all know, everyone has his own lifestyle and me, too. I often have two pieces of bread which covered with blueberry jam and a glass of milk for breakfast. For lunch, I have vegetables,meat and apples. “An apple a day keeps the doctor away.” And for supper, I usually have fish ,eggs and rice. Sweets and cakes are my favourite snakes. In order to protect my teeth, I brush them twice a day. I sleep about seven hours on average a day. Generally speaking, I usually running in the morning and sometimes play basketball after school. When I have some spare time I will listen to music and read books. How fantastic my Lifestyle is! （2016黄浦一模 120words in total）
It’s helpful to talk with our teachers because they will give us good suggestions.
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三类一般作文
一类优秀作文
We are very glad that Li Hua has We are very glad that Li Hua has
made great progress. Before the made great progress. But he used to
activity, he often quarreled with be impolite and even often quarreled
he played computer games for a playing computer games. After this
very long time. But now, he can activity, Li Hua has changed a lot. He
make good friends with others.
中考英语书面表达综述
❖ 5、中考书面表达答题步骤
步骤1: 认真审题。内容包括：
❖ 文字信息 ❖ 表格、图标信息
步骤2: 巧妙构思。
❖ 利用列提纲确定写作中心、组织/筛检材料。
步骤3: 信息转换
❖ 以词及点： ❖ 连词成句： ❖ 连句成文：
步骤4: 检查修改。 步骤5: 规范抄写。
中考英语书面表达综述
other students, and never said
with others. He threw litter about
sorry to others. He always threw and made our classroom dirty. After
trash in the classroom. Sometimes, class, he usually lost himself in
others. But in what ways? First of all, we should respect others. Everyone has their own ways to do things, so we should understand each other. Besides, it’s important for us to communicate with each other and share happiness and sadness. What’s more, we should be kind to others and offer necessary help to those who are in trouble. ❖ In my opinion, we should treat others in an honest way. Only in this way can we get along well.
gets on well with others and is ready
Also, he is very active in taking
to help them. He also takes good
part in a lot of activities, such as care of the environment. He takes an
❖ 6、案例分析
例题：你班进行了一次综合实践活动。通过活动， 同学们收获很大，尤其是李华同学进步最快。请 你根据表格内容写一篇关于李华的短文。词数80 个左右。
过去的表现 经常与别人吵架 乱扔垃圾 沉溺于电脑游戏
现在的表现 与别人相处融洽 爱护环境 积极参加各种活动
中考英语书面表达综述
❖ 参考作文对比，注意划线部分。
❖ 1、题型目的
测试考生的笔头运用，即语法知识、词汇知识掌 握的程度及遣词造句和用英语进行思维的能力。
❖ 2、新课标要求：
能根据写作要求，收集准备素材；能独立起草短 文短信等；能使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑 关系；能简单描述人物或事件；能根据所给图示 或表格写出简单的段落或操作说明。
中考英语书面表达综述
注意：1、词数 80 – 100 ❖ 2、可适当发挥，以使行文连贯； ❖ 3、文中请勿提及你真实的姓名和学校
One possible version
How to get on well with others ❖ As we know, students should learn to get on well with
2012年安徽省中考英语试题中的书面表达
❖ 英语课堂上，老师要求学生就“与人相处”的话题展开讨论。 请根据以下你所在的小组讨论结果，以“How to get on well with others”为题，写一篇英语短文。 Suggestions：Learn to share Respect (尊重) others Communicate with each other … My suggestion
《初中英语写作》PPT的写作（简单句类 型）
❖ 二、句子的写作（简单句和 复合句）
❖ 三、段落的写作：主题与拓 展
❖ 四、文章的结构：开头、主 体和结尾
❖ 五、应用文：书信、电子邮 件
❖ 六、应用文：发言稿、通知
❖ 七、记叙文：写人、叙事 ❖ 八、说明文：介绍人物、事
物的说明文 ❖ 九、议论文 ❖ 十、图表、图画作文 ❖ 十一、提示性作文 ❖ 十二、（半）开放式作文 ❖ 十三、体验中考高分写作
（1） ❖ 十四、体验中考高分写作
（2）
前言
❖ 发展学生的英语语言技能，培养学生良好的 英语交际能力。
❖ 听、说、读、写密切联系，相互渗透，互为 基础。
中考英语书面表达综述
playing basketball, visiting the
❖ 3、题型特点
（1）指导性/辅助性写作(guided writing)
❖有必要的说明, 对写作的目的、对象、时间、地点、内 容等情景给予简要的提示
（2）足够的发挥余地
❖ 4、教学现状
布置写作任务→学生个人写作→教师批改→背诵 范文
词汇贫乏、搭配不当、句型误用、语法不通、信 息不全、条理紊乱、谋篇布局不合理