新东方托福作文内容整理

新东方内容整理

7．11：

Writing:

A.托福写作主要是注重daily affairs,而不是political issues.

注重的是examples,而不是critical thinking and reasoning.

是低级写作，而不是高级写作。

注重vocabulary和sentence structure.

B. score5：

a．Effectively address the topic and task.

b. well organized:

Structure: Introduction

Body1

Body2

Body3

Conclusion

C. unity(切题)，progression(层次)，coherence(连贯，承接词)

Firstly, . Theoretically speaking,

. For instance,

. Moreover, .

Briefly, .

d．Word choice, syntactic variety

词汇的转换：

E.g. 好：good better best nice(低级)

Excellent, perfect, （中级）

Outstanding, brilliant, fantastic, awesome, remarkable,

impressive, extraordinary, fabulous （高级）词组的转换：由低级结构向高级结构转化。

陈强调了由adj.+n.向n.+of+n.的转化。

E.g. A man of wisdom

An individual of intelligence

A man of respect

A book of deep philosophy

A magazine of good sales

A flower of beauty

Patriotism is the tree of liberty refreshed from time to time with the blood of tyrants and patriots. Thomas Jefferson

It was the best of time, it was the worst of time; it was the age of wisdom, it was the age of foolishness; it was the epoch of belief, it was the epoch of incredulity; it was the season of light, it was the season of darkness; it was the spring of hope, it was the winter of despair. We have everything before us, we have nothing before us; we are all going direct to the heaven, we are all going direct to the other way.

句子结构的转换：

Sentence: 今天天不好

On this cloudy day rises my gloomy mind. 倒装

It is the cloudy day that breeds my gloomy mind.强调

The cloudy day does contribute to my mind of gloom.强调

The cloudy day is the reason to my gloomy mind.主系表

There is the gloomy mind of mine from this cloudy.

There be

To be honest, the cloudy day actually stimulates my nostalgia, cultivates my gloom over those unfortunate, and cultivates my pity for the suffering of mankind. 主谓宾+ 平行结构

下面着重讲了强调句的使用条件和方法：

使用条件：出现介词短语时，介词短语提前。

E.g. In the temple lives a monk;

In the monk’s heart hides a girl of beauty;

From the eyes of the girl rises a true meaning of romance.

Go, come, lie, sit, stand, jump, rise, fly, appear, emerge, float

E.g.In the classroom sit 101 students.

From the eyes of the students rises the hope of life.

In this society appears a public admiration to the celebrities.

C(B.点好长啊，都绕不过来了。)

背景综述式的开头：

With the growth of social education jumps out a topic of interest, which concentrates on the effectiveness of university education to the students. To be honest, the scale of my judgment will definitely incline toward the benefits of such education. In other words, such a system will stimulate their PI, enlarge their HR and create the priceless basis for their FD. The following examples and reasons will be in favor of my side.

同时陈强调了连接词的重要性。Effectively就是这样体现的。

the scale of my judgment will definitely incline toward the benefits of the latter.（个人认为这句虽然是模板，但很摆，还是放上来。替代第二板块的。）

又show名人名言了：

For our children, for our family, for our homeland, we march! For duty sake, for honor sake, for glory, we march!

D.下午主要讲的就是logical thinking。还有就是很流氓地把一个话题往很多个题目上去扯。a．按人性分类：

Humor, smart, honest, independent, strong mind, confident, brave, diligent, experience, responsibility, morality, cooperation, communicative, logical, creativity, kind, generous, optimistic

貌似陈对humour还特别感兴趣：

Humour----more communication---exchange of ideas--- deeper thinking----better understanding----…..

b.按微观，中观，宏观分类：

微观：对自己：Independence

Interest

Experience

Knowledge

Morality

中观：对朋友，对同事，对家人：

Cooperation

Communication

Friendship

Family

宏观：对社会，对国家，对自然，对地球，对生态，对历史发展

进程。

Contribution

Social duty

c．对于事物的评价（non-living）

3e+cs

Economy

Efficiency

Environment

Convenience

Safety

d.最后一点：凡出现Best, most, always, only, unique, necessary这些绝对化的词语时，一般disagree。

Too much: agree. negative consequences: 对象

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D. TOPIC SENTENCE:

a.模板式：

The point of pinnacle importance for my preference focuses on________________. With the first point stands the second demonstrating_________________________. Impressive as the above points are, the third enjoys the same value, stating that __________________________________.

Of the top value comes my first point, which highlights .

b.递进，顶真，倒装，对比。

Rather than / instead of / however : 使用插入的形式，使语言更具有变化。

E.g.: First of all, personal interest, rather than a dispensable luxury, is the

best teacher of both life and career.

E.g.: MJ is fat; he, however ,climbs the tree quickly.

The more…,the more…, and thus / consequently / therefore / thereby the more….:使用递进和顶真。

E.g.:Conspicuously, the more knowledge we have, the more experiences we enjoy, and thus better solutions we will reach.

因果关系：

Give rise to / give birth to / breed / cultivate…表示结果发生。

Be born out of: 源自于：creativity is directly born out of education.

Through __________burgeons / engenders____________. 倒装。

使：enable / qualify sb. for doing sth. / stimulate / inspire.

不使：prevent / keep from / discourage from

c.自由式（语法）：利用各种各样的句型和词汇进行支撑。

常用句型有：强调、倒装、插入语。

E.g. conspicuously, it is the sports that strengthens the souls, inspires the ambitions, and motivates the success.

Meanwhile, through the sports activities rise the evolution of mind and the precious opportunity of success.

Moreover, the cooperation mind, to be frank, is always stimulated from the sports approach.

F. REASONING:

黄金句式：承接词+主语+插入语+主句+延伸修饰词

使用注意事项：a. 插入语要简洁，不宜过长。

b. 延伸修饰词要长。

c. 插入语、主句、延伸修饰词作为连接始发站到终点站的三个中间站。

E.g. To be honest, family education, a source of mental resources, can always equip the youth with comfort and confidence, which transform them from the ones of ignorance into the winner of life.

下划线部分实际已经完成了主逻辑链的建立：family educatio n → mental resource → offer comfort and confidence → winner

第一层次说理：因果/ 让步/ 条件（正面or 反面）用来充实黄金句式

因果关系：

In general, since the various subjects is the source of knowledge for students to learn, they, therefore, may be inspired from the different angles, which directly enables them to provide the optimum solutions in both academic and social circumstances.

用于因果关系的词语：Thereby, therefore, consequently, hence, thus

让步关系：

Frankly, despite a deeper and specialization from focusing on one subject, however, the comprehensive study, with its rich knowledge, will provide students with a wide inspiration, which enables them to provide the optimum solutions in both academic and social circumstances.

用于让步关系的词语：however / nevertheless / nonetheless

条件从句：

条件从句→虚拟语气→倒装（过去，将来）

Honestly, were students to be imprisoned by only one subject, they, for the lack of knowledge, would not give the extraordinary solution in various conditions. However, it is the comprehensive study that equips them with wide inspiration, changing them into the successful winners during the social competition.

（Comprehensive study, however, equips students with wide inspiration, which changes them into the successful winners during the social competition.）

第二层说理：模板

Life is like a big swing, dangling between the depth of happiness and sadness.

E.g. cooperation and competition / wisdom and ignorance / freedom and slavery / traditions and creativity

Education is one of the key words of our time. A man without wisdom, many of us believe, is an unfortunate victim of adverse circumstances, deprived of one of the greatest twenty-first century opportunities.

（however, it is university education that ……….,v.ing………………….）最后还是要

回到话题上来。

第三层说理：比较、定义

比较：个人认为也不是什么实力型。也就是把黄金句式里的插入语变成compared with一系列的东西，然后把主句里加个比较级。其他不变。

Honestly, teachers, compared with parents, will be more professional in the academic community, which

.

这是另一种方式：用在逻辑链非常强大的时候，或者觉得例子没什么可写的时候，用这个足以撑门面了。

Honestly, teachers, compared with parents, will be more professional in the academic community. Specifically, on one hand, they may equip the students the classical knowledge in order to make them more comprehensive; on the other hand, teachers, through the attractive instruction, can stimulate the thinking and creative solution.

定义：个人认为也不是什么实力型。也就是把黄金句式力的插入语变成了对对象的介绍，其他都不变。但是下面这个句子在最后使用了一个同位语，来替代非限制性定语从句，比较有新意。Teachers, a group people of life experience, will donate their optimistic outlook toward life to the students, a consequence that will benefit them in the rest pages of life.

我记得陈熙老师还有一句很重要的话：那就是时时刻刻回扣题目，千万别写得忘乎所以，离题万里。

G.一种非常强大的开头模式：

Have you ever enjoyed the happiness from pursuing the personal hobby? Have you ever benefited from the mental education from your parents? Have you ever been surprised by the rich experience from the social practice? Had you not possessed such experiences, you would have never acknowledged that in the near future, the university education will become a dispensable luxury.

动词积累：

Suffer from /tolerate / be angry with / be surprised by / Be tired of

Hope / Dream of / Imagine / Expect / Wish

H. 补充D. logical thinking的第四点：

打架原则：即三个角度分别从被打者，打者和围观者出发，三个body进行讨论。

使用条件：论述的双方都有利益牵扯进事件中。

E.g. 你同意媒体过分关注名人的隐私生活么？

Body1: 从名人的角度（被打）

Body2: 从媒体的角度（打）

Body3: 从观众（大众）的角度（围观）

分别叙述事件的危害。

7.17

I.EXAMPLES

a. string mode(顶真模式)

Our minds determine our behaviors;

Our behaviors determine our habits;

Our habits determine our personalities;

And our personalities determine our destinies.

这是最典型的顶真的模式，文学性很强。但是不适用于应试写作，因为它体现不出语法。

Our minds determine our behaviors, which, in turn, contribute to our habits. Such a priceless element breeds our personalities, an essential factor that decides the rest pages of life.

For instance, in a group-working experiment, the teacher should award all the members the same evaluation on their performance. Only in this way can students without the achievements but with the efforts feel comforted and respected. Under such situation, they might regain the confidence and enthusiasm toward their work and project, boosting the efficiency and power. Ultimately, in the future, such students, because of the mental health, will become the strong winners of competition.

The first point focuses on a wiser education strategy. Honestly, the more a teacher knows the students, the better way he/she will take in the education, and therefore a more outstanding result both the teacher and student may enjoy. Fortunately, asking questions by students themselves is a good way to reach this result. For instance, letting students give questions will expose their specific character to the lecturers, who will change or modify the education mode to suit their requirements. In this condition, students will find the knowledge more accessible to themselves, a consequence that contributes to the extraordinary academic performance. Therefore, the students will be boosted from such educational pattern.

Summary: 注意上面段落中划线部分，都是在顶真中常用的连接方式。

, which

, doing

, a consequence that

Therefore, in this way, in this condition, under such circumstances,

被动语态

There be

Ultimately

b. branch mode(发散模式)

branch mode 中最经典的就是强调句的平行结构的使用。非常壮观。

For instance, it is the parents who inspire us the importance of responsibility for the growth of the whole environment; it is the parents who remind us of the value of knowledge to both our life and career; it is also the parents who fill the children’s soul with bravery, which will enables them to become the winner of social competition. （it is____________; it is_______________; it is_________________）

It is the social practice that equips us with enough experience and makes us more professional, that cultivates the independence of the thought and the strength of spirit, that provides the financial support for our further study and development, and that establishes the strong friendship between each other, a real source of happiness in the rest pages of life. ( it is___that______________,that__________,that____________________________)

Summary: 使用branch mode的时候，一定要注意①动词的选择②句子的长短（越来越长，越来越长）。

d.branch + string mode

It is parents who instruct me to develop the capability of communication, which not only helps us establish the friendship but also enables us to get information in a higher efficiency; at the same time, it is also the parents who guide me to the real meaning of honesty, a virtue of mankind that provides me with the trust from others in the rest pages of life.

用于点较少的情况。而且string的部分只能做一层展开，不要加两个裙摆哦。

E.g. It is parents that__________________________,which___________________________,a consequence that_______________________________.(×)

e.parallel mode(平行模式)

A→1

B→2

C→3

What is more, D→4.

Parallel mode的关键是找到分类的标准。( 人性，数量，社会的各个方面，学科etc. )

E.g.

Take the Discovery Channel as an example: the program of biology will disclose the mystery of life evolution; the episodes of economy can provide us with the pattern of economic market and enough experience to manage the national finance, the part of art may present us a world of beauty and guide us into the palace of music and painting; what is more, the scenes of history could show us the progress of whole human civilization, playing an essential role to the human heritage of global cultures.

f.Parallel + string mode.

我自己写一写试一试：

Take the Discovery Channel as an example: the program of biology will disclose the mystery of life evolution, which cultivates our interest to the unknown past; the part of art may present us a world of beauty and guide us into the palace of music and painting, a consequence that broadens our horizon and provides us with endless optimism and courage in the rest pages of our life.

g.statistics mode(数据模式)

陈老师没写下来，我自己写写试试。(写得很纠结，为啥看CX写就那么轻松呢)

A survey conducted by China Education, a professional magazine, showed

that over 50% of the education experts acknowledge that relaxing atmosphere, to some extent, increases the teaching efficiency. Meanwhile, more than 90% of students hold the same opinion as such environment will enable them to participate in the teaching process more, which breeds their interests and enthusiasm to academic education. Fortunately, letting students ask questions themselves definitely contributes to lively teaching atmosphere.

先是某领域专家学者发言，再是大众发言。说服力就很强了。

Obviously, following the curriculum to attend the class will help students to perform better in academic field. According to a recent survey conducted by the Education Department of Peking University among ten top universities in China, ninety percent of undergraduate students attend the classes according to the requirements. The result of the survey also indicates that their academic results boost a lot after enhancing the self-regulation. Researchers of campus at academic behavior believe that these benefits mainly result from the universities’ strict requirements on the fixed curriculum. In universities where the school administration pays less attention to student s’obeisance to the regulation, the currency of such improvement drops dramatically.

J. 开头和结尾的一些模板句

这是CX讲的第三种开头模式了（不知道是正经讲的，还是看到电影随机讲的，看着办吧）

I have always believed the merit of traditions to social evolution. However, after

a review of the history from science to economy, from material to spirit, I truly discover the source of such progress. In other words, it is the creative thought, rather than the traditional beliefs, that dramatically stimulate the cultural evolution and global progress. All such findings strengthen my favor toward the creative education in universities.

这个具体在哪些领域使用，我就不清楚了。

Introduction:

a.If it were up to me to make decision, I would prefer that ___________will enjoy

the priority to become my best choice.

b.Despite numerous responses people may have on the topic

concerning______________, I, given the chance to make a decision, would take _________as my optimum choice.

c.The topic regarding ______________has been the focus of attention in recent

years and any speech on it would surely make the top headlines in all major newspapers. To agree or disagree will be a matter of balancing the pros and cons. If anyone considers the following perspectives, he/she would__(agree/disagree)___________ the title statement I do.

d.Positive/negative as the replies may be when people meet with the issue

regarding ____________, I, not seeing eye to eye with them, firmly believe that the scale of judgment would incline toward ________with numerous reasons hereupon listed.

e.With regard to my inclination come three reasons hereupon listed.

f.Three examples are listed as follows for my choice.

g.With respect to my response hereupon come three perspectives.

Conclusion:

a.There are two side of every coin, and the flip side for my preference reflects

that_______________. With all the above factors contemplated, however , the pros of ___________overweigh the cons. Therefore, I have full confidence in myself to reach this conclusion that______________.

b.___________does/do have good reasons, but little did we realize that_________.

However, in light of all the above factors, the pros of ___________.rather than the cons, are in the dominant place, thus boosting my confidence to reach this conclusion in favor of /against___________________.

c.Since the only thing predictable about life is its unpredictability, something

opposite to my response does draw people’s attention:________________. With

all the elements in comparison, however , reach the positives of_________(rather than the negatives,) in the dominant place, and the conclusion in favor of/against____________.

7.18

开始integrated writing 的讲解了。

K. 一些基本原则：

a. no grammar / word choice

b. no remark such as “correct / mistaken / incorrect / right”. No personal opinions shall be added.

c. Grammar mistakes are tolerate

d.

L. Introduction:

Introduction 包括五个点，即听力，阅读，主题，驳斥，点。

Introduction 基本模式：听力在哪个主题上驳斥了阅读，并且给出了涉及①②③这三个方面的驳斥性的依据。

关于驳斥的词语：refute / object / rail / against / question / challenge / case doubt on / attack / rebut / overthrow / weaken

模板：

a.利用倒装句的形式。

On the topic of comes the lecture’s challenge against the reading passage. Meanwhile, the lecture also provides the contradictory evidence concerning , , and .

b. 利用伴随，doing..

The speaker refutes the position of the passage on the topic of , offering the opposite proofs about , , and .

c.利用强调句

It is the speaker who casts doubt on the validity of the passage on the topic of

, and who provides the different evidence concerning , , and .

d．利用插入语

The passage, on the topic of , has been effectively attacked by the speaker, who provides the contradictory proofs concerning , , and .

M. 阅读和听力技巧

阅读记什么：a. Topic

b.三个分观点的topic sentence,原因和结果。

听力记什么：重点记动词，名词，形容词。然后形成logic chain.最后再选择正确的逻辑关系进行连接。速记技巧：汉字，拼音，勾叉，符号，简写。

N. Body:

a.尽量在小作文的body中把句子写短。

b.基本模式：

Body:

Topic sentence

阅读，然而听力。

因此，听力有效地驳斥了阅读。

c. Firstly, the hydrogen is not easy to be manufacture

d. Different from the content from the passage that the hydrogen is accessible to the society because of its rich raw materials, the lecture gives the alternative explanation that the produce procedure is of high difficulty. On one hand, the hydrogen must be got in pure liquid state; on the other hand, the extremely low temperature is needed for the hydrogen storag

e. Unfortunately, the present technology is not advanced enough for such requirements, the accessibility is very unrealistic. From this case, the lecture weakens the passage position.

Secondly, According to the speaker, Such information challenges the effectiveness of the passage that . Thirdly, the reading material assumes that

. The professor, however, questions such an opinion, stating that

. This is another case where the content from the reading material is totally unwarranted / groundless / improper / inappropriate.

d. 三段的结构需不同。

e. 如果听力完全没有听懂时怎么写：

Thirdly, 阅读结果取反. According to the passage,

阅读过程

. However, the speaker, with the strong and alternative evidence, casts serious doubt on the position and validity of the passage. Meanwhile, such a challenge has proved that what the passage assumes is totally inappropriate. Moreover, were the passage to accumulate enough practical evidence as the speaker does, it would ultimately find what the speaker believes is of high possibility and credence. This is another part where the speaker holds the different view against the passage.

dramatically enormously tremendously substantially extremely considerably