高三英语作文公开课 PPT课件(共23张)
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高三英语一轮复习作文专题----概要公开课课件(共21张)
Reason/ Benefit 1
Reason/ Benefit 2
Reason/ Benefit 3
Step 3: Extract (提取) different information in each paragraph.
• Pay attention:
• Find as much information as possible but integrate (合并) repeated pieces of information.
Criteria for a good summary
• 理解准确，涵盖全部要点。
Contents (内容)
• 能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇。 • 完全使用自己的语言。
Language skills (语言)
• 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使 所完成的概要结构紧凑。
Structure (结构)
• Para. 3:
Besides, physical education helps to develop character and the mutual respect required to succeed in an adult environment.
• Para. 4:
Finally, the pursuit for national sporting achievement begins in schools.
• In the UK, Physical Education (PE) is compulsory in state schools until the age of 16 – that is, sports are compulsory for as long as education is compulsory. Every year, more and more parents complain to their children’s schools about PE. They believe that their children shouldn’t have to participate in physical activity if they don’t want to. Supporters of PE, however, believe that it is a crucial element of all-round schooling and our society’s well-being. They insist PE in schools remains one of the few places by which the youth can be forced to participate in aerobic (有氧的) exercise.
高中英语写作公开课ppt课件
Yours, Li Hua
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Ⅱ.Pre-writing (team work)
Task 1: Decide the person and tense
Task 2: Decide the structure Task 3: Write down the key words
and sentence patterns
优秀 □ 良好 □ 合格 □ 需努力 □
评价者建议： 被评价者反馈及打算：
评价者签名：
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sample
Dear Peter,
How are you doing?
I’m writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to your city for a conference, and I’ve asked him to bring you the Chinese painting you’ve asked for before.
感知典型范例 ——段落层面
I think, for us children, we should often go home and stay together with our parents though we are busy. Our society should organize all kinds of activities for the seniors to help them live happily. We can build a harmonious society only when all of us care for the aged.
Body
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Ⅱ.Pre-writing (team work)
Task 1: Decide the person and tense
Task 2: Decide the structure Task 3: Write down the key words
and sentence patterns
优秀 □ 良好 □ 合格 □ 需努力 □
评价者建议： 被评价者反馈及打算：
评价者签名：
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sample
Dear Peter,
How are you doing?
I’m writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to your city for a conference, and I’ve asked him to bring you the Chinese painting you’ve asked for before.
感知典型范例 ——段落层面
I think, for us children, we should often go home and stay together with our parents though we are busy. Our society should organize all kinds of activities for the seniors to help them live happily. We can build a harmonious society only when all of us care for the aged.
Body
_________________________________________
高中英语作文—求助信写作共PPTPPT优质公开课
Signature
六.写作训练 假设你是高中生李华，就读于光明中
学。你在英语学习中遇到了很多问题， 希望得到你的外教Miss Bruce的帮助。 请给Miss Bruce写一封信。内容包括 以下要点：
课文中生词太多，难记； 课文太长，难背； 希望Miss Bruce介绍一些英语学习 方法。 注意： 1.词数100左右 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Introduce the purpose of writing the letter and your problems
Faced with___, I have to ask for your help. Would you like to ____? In the meanwhile, I beg you to ___ so that/ in order that ____. Also, I would like you to ____.
I am writing to you to ask for some/ your help. Would you like to ____? In the meanwhile, I beg you to ___ so that/ in order that ____.
助原因和事情经过时应恰当使用过去 结构的倒装用法使用准确，强调了词典的重要，为本文增加了得分点。
求助信 一任务呈现 假设你是李华，留学期间寄宿在 Mr.Brown家里，回国后你发现你有一 本英语字典落在他家了。请参照以下 要点给Mr.Brown写一封信。内容如下：
一本英语词典忘记带回国,词典是美 国老师送的，非常珍贵；
词典很可能落在卧室的书架上； 邮资自付。
注意： 1.词数100左右(信的开头和结尾已给 出，不计入总词数）； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3.参考词汇：邮资postage Dear Mr.Brown, _____________________________ ______________________________ ___________________
六.写作训练 假设你是高中生李华，就读于光明中
学。你在英语学习中遇到了很多问题， 希望得到你的外教Miss Bruce的帮助。 请给Miss Bruce写一封信。内容包括 以下要点：
课文中生词太多，难记； 课文太长，难背； 希望Miss Bruce介绍一些英语学习 方法。 注意： 1.词数100左右 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Introduce the purpose of writing the letter and your problems
Faced with___, I have to ask for your help. Would you like to ____? In the meanwhile, I beg you to ___ so that/ in order that ____. Also, I would like you to ____.
I am writing to you to ask for some/ your help. Would you like to ____? In the meanwhile, I beg you to ___ so that/ in order that ____.
助原因和事情经过时应恰当使用过去 结构的倒装用法使用准确，强调了词典的重要，为本文增加了得分点。
求助信 一任务呈现 假设你是李华，留学期间寄宿在 Mr.Brown家里，回国后你发现你有一 本英语字典落在他家了。请参照以下 要点给Mr.Brown写一封信。内容如下：
一本英语词典忘记带回国,词典是美 国老师送的，非常珍贵；
词典很可能落在卧室的书架上； 邮资自付。
注意： 1.词数100左右(信的开头和结尾已给 出，不计入总词数）； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3.参考词汇：邮资postage Dear Mr.Brown, _____________________________ ______________________________ ___________________
高三教师会议公开课课件-My-recipe-for-Success(共30张PPT)
3. Another quality that helps me succeed is the ability to do and think about things in new and different ways.
Another quality that helps me succeed is the ability to think _c_re_a_t_iv_e_l_y___. Another quality that helps me succeed is _c_r_e_a_ti_v_it_y__.
Succeed in 2015 Gaokao
A recipe for success in 2015 Gaokao
Task 1 Specific aim
My aim is to _____Im__p_ro__ve__m__y_E_n_g_l_is_h_____ in the next nine months to be well prepared for my Gaokao.
What is the missing piece?
My recipe for success in making a cupcake Specific Aim orange cheesecakes Essential Ingredients
Detailed Steps
Special Attention
Take notes while watching
Q1. What are the 8 qualities mentioned in it?
Q2. Which is the top one among the 8qualities?
No.1
How to present the qualities you need to develop in the recipe?
Another quality that helps me succeed is the ability to think _c_re_a_t_iv_e_l_y___. Another quality that helps me succeed is _c_r_e_a_ti_v_it_y__.
Succeed in 2015 Gaokao
A recipe for success in 2015 Gaokao
Task 1 Specific aim
My aim is to _____Im__p_ro__ve__m__y_E_n_g_l_is_h_____ in the next nine months to be well prepared for my Gaokao.
What is the missing piece?
My recipe for success in making a cupcake Specific Aim orange cheesecakes Essential Ingredients
Detailed Steps
Special Attention
Take notes while watching
Q1. What are the 8 qualities mentioned in it?
Q2. Which is the top one among the 8qualities?
No.1
How to present the qualities you need to develop in the recipe?
高考英语作文(ppt课件)
only good rewriting. 3. When in doubt, refer to
Rule No. 1 and 2.
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Five Steps:
Analyze the writing task. Organize it. Draft. Revise. Edit.
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8. 使用倒装句、感叹句
1. How I wish
I would
read and reply your email as soon
as I received it. (我多么希望)
2. not only… but also…引起的倒装
Not only can I earn money by myself, but also it will broaden my horizons. (我不仅能独立赚钱)
The Beauty of Writing
学习交流课件
1
Why is writing so tough?
Input
Output
学习交流课件
2
高考作文高分卷的特点
外在美：第一印象很重要！书写清 楚，字母匀称，词、行间距适当， 卷面整洁。
结构美：有合理的段落层次，多为 3段式，条理清晰；每段有每段的 主题。
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8. 进行举例说明
例如，比如: for instance; for example; like; such as that is to say, namely, actually, and so on, believe it or not,
to tell you the truth, for this reason
Rule No. 1 and 2.
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Five Steps:
Analyze the writing task. Organize it. Draft. Revise. Edit.
学习交流课件
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8. 使用倒装句、感叹句
1. How I wish
I would
read and reply your email as soon
as I received it. (我多么希望)
2. not only… but also…引起的倒装
Not only can I earn money by myself, but also it will broaden my horizons. (我不仅能独立赚钱)
The Beauty of Writing
学习交流课件
1
Why is writing so tough?
Input
Output
学习交流课件
2
高考作文高分卷的特点
外在美：第一印象很重要！书写清 楚，字母匀称，词、行间距适当， 卷面整洁。
结构美：有合理的段落层次，多为 3段式，条理清晰；每段有每段的 主题。
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8. 进行举例说明
例如，比如: for instance; for example; like; such as that is to say, namely, actually, and so on, believe it or not,
to tell you the truth, for this reason
高考英语作文讲解 ppt课件(完美版)
As he is seriously ill,
Seeing from the space, the earth looks like a ball. (Seen)
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学生英语作文中10种常见错误剖析
• 7、分数与百分数作主语
• In our class, 20% sthdents are girls,but three fifths students are
• and
to
well
All the best,
•
Li Hua
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实例写作
(2010 全国Ⅱ) 假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Peter曾表示希望来中国教书。 你校现需招聘外教，请给他写封信，告诉招聘信息。内容主要包括：
1．教授课程：英语口语、英语写作、今日美国、今日英国等 2．授课对象：高中生（至少三年英语基础） 3．工作量：
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• 提炼文章要点 • 理解每个要点的含义，然后讨论每个要点的正
确表达方式。 • 形成文章。
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•范文
Dear Peter, I remember you told me you were interested in teaching in China.
①Our school is looking for a native-speaker to teach some courses to senior high students.
9、连词出错
that
Although he tried, but he still couldn’t keep up with the others.
My suggestion is we try for a second time.
Seeing from the space, the earth looks like a ball. (Seen)
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学生英语作文中10种常见错误剖析
• 7、分数与百分数作主语
• In our class, 20% sthdents are girls,but three fifths students are
• and
to
well
All the best,
•
Li Hua
2022/3/22
实例写作
(2010 全国Ⅱ) 假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Peter曾表示希望来中国教书。 你校现需招聘外教，请给他写封信，告诉招聘信息。内容主要包括：
1．教授课程：英语口语、英语写作、今日美国、今日英国等 2．授课对象：高中生（至少三年英语基础） 3．工作量：
2022/3/22
• 提炼文章要点 • 理解每个要点的含义，然后讨论每个要点的正
确表达方式。 • 形成文章。
2022/3/22
•范文
Dear Peter, I remember you told me you were interested in teaching in China.
①Our school is looking for a native-speaker to teach some courses to senior high students.
9、连词出错
that
Although he tried, but he still couldn’t keep up with the others.
My suggestion is we try for a second time.
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一个好的段落要有丰富的句式
1.感叹句 2.倒装句 3.强调句 4.省略句 5.With 结构 6.定语从句 7.各种名词性从句 8.各种状语从句
利用不同的句式来表达同一个意思，能增加文章的文采
1.感叹句 e.g. How disappointed he was! 2.强调句 e.g. It was the young boy that helped the old man. 3.倒装句 e.g. Only in this way can we solve the problem. 4.省略句 e.g. Come to me if necessary 5.定语从句 e.g. The book which was borrowed from the library has been returned. 6.名词性从句 e.g. That’s what I should do.
3.If you work hard, you will make rapid progress.(祈使句+and） Work hard and you will make a rapid progress. 4.I won’t believe what he says. (no matter what状语从句） No matter what he says, I won’t believe. 5.They sang and laughed as they went back to school.(使用V-ing 形式） Singing and laughing, they went back to school
Ladies and gentlemen,
Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our village! ①This village Is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people .It used to be poor. ② However, it has changed a lot since 1978③ and has been developing very fast. People here ④live a much better life than before. Now It is taking on a new look.
英语书面表达
English Composition Writing
一.
Writing skills
ቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱ
How to improve your writing
主要特点
记叙为主 稍加议论 旁带说明
What makes a good essay? A topic paragraph Some supporting paragraphs
as long as suppose take for example
as follows
总结：in short in conclusion in a word in brief on the whole
用适当的连接词填空
1.He was tired, so he went to bed. 2.He made a promise, but he didn’t keep it 3.I agree to the plan. To begin with the building of the factory will provide people with different jobs, Secondly it can save a lot of money, Finally it won’t do much harm to the environment
A concluding paragraph
正确使用有关连接词
顺序：first then later in the end eventually since then to start with 转折：but yet however while nevertheless on the contrary 递进：what’s more in addition furthermore 因果：because as since as a result owing to thanks to 让步：though even if even though as 条件：if unless on condition that 列举：for example such as in spite of despite
Practice 怎样使用丰富的句式和高级词汇
1.To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.(使用名词性 从句） What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things. 2.Though I’m weak, I’ll make the effort.( 使用倒装句 ) Weak as I am, I’ll make the effort.
6.We all think he is a great man. (think highly of) We all think highly of him
书面表达例1
In the past, the school here was Welcome to our village! ①This very small⑤. ⑥ Now it has been village is very small. It has nearly rebuilt. ⑦The newly built teaching 100 families and about 500 people. building has 4 stories⑧. It is the It used to be very poor②. It has most beautiful building in the changed a lot since1978③. village. All the school-age children People here are ④richer than before can study here .⑨ They enjoy Now it is taking on a new look. free education in it. ⑩Thank you.