英语改错及答案

(一)Last week my parents and I took a two-days trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan、As everyone knows, it’s famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals、The weather was fine、 It was about noon we arrived at the foot of the mountain、The three of them were very excited、 As we climbed the mountain,we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories、 On the way up I was busy taking picture since the scenery was so beautiful、 The time passes quickly、Evening came down、 We spent the night in a hotel at the top of the mountain、The food was expensive and the service was good、 I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow、（二）Many teachers worry about the effects of television with young people、According to studies, many children spend more time watching televisionthan they spend in school、 Because so much viewing, children may notbe develop the habit of read and the ability to enjoy themselves、 No one worriesmuch about the radio program young people listen to, although radios can bevery noise、 Teachers also wonder about the effects of television commercials、On one year the average child will see 25,000 television commercials, allplanned and written by grown-ups to make children to want things that they don't real need、（三）I’m the captain of our school team so with my fellow players we’ve won several games、 There will an important game next month、But one of the best player in our team told me just then that he wouldn’tplay basketball once more、 His parents asked him to spend in more timepreparing for the college entrance examination、 I feel sorry to him、But his parents think go to college is more important than playing sportsand college was the only place for a smart boy like his son、 So my friend had no choice、 He wanted to make their parents happy、(四)When I first learned to write English, I ran into many difficulties 、The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese andtried to translate anything into English、 My teacher advised meto keep my diary、 I followed her advice and should put down 100words or so each day、Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paperas I was learning to express me in simple English 、One day I wrotea little story and showed to my teacher 、She liked it very much andreads it to the class 、All said the story was a good one、 Their wordwere a great encouragement to me、（五）Dear Ralph,I’m a newcomer here of a small town、 I would describe myself asshy and quietly、 Before my classmates, it seems always difficult for meto do things as well them、 I'm sure they will laugh to me and see me asa fool、 So I feel happy every day、Besides, I have few friends、I don't know that they don't like to talk with me、 Sometimes, we talkedto each other very well in class, but after class we become stranger atonce、 I am trying to improve the situation since it doesn’tseem to work、 Can you tell me about what I should do?Yours,（六）On Thursday I will have to decide what I want myself to do over a weekend、I am thinking of making a trip to London, and visit the British Museumand some parks、 But I have spent lot my money, so I cannot even goout of town、 I may go to a film, or a concert、 Yes, a concert can be very excited、You can watch your stars while enjoying your favorite music、 So then, a concert cost so much、 I may just listen to music, I have some records giving to meas birthday gifts、 If I listen to my own records, there are no need to spend money、All right、 That’s how I' m going to do、（七）Dear Susan,I’m very glad to hear about you are coming to visit me the next Friday、 Unfortunately,I won’t be able to meet you at the airport although I have classes in the afternoon、You won’t find difficult to get to the city center、 The airport bus leaves every30 minute and will take you rightly to the Friendship Hotel、 My class willbe over by then or I will pick you up there、 I will take you together toa hot-pot restaurant for dinner and we’ll talk with our plan for the weekendover dinner、 Having a pleasant trip and see you Friday、Yours,Zhang Ming(八)You can find all kinds information in just a few minute on the Internet、It’s like going to a huge library without have to walk around to find your books、Recently even though, many people have been discussing the dangers of the Internet、They have been reports in America about people trying to steal personInformations for bad purposes、 Finding information on the Net is easily、 But not all information are good to society、 For example, you can find such informationlike how to kill people、The problem will become more serious in the future、（九）Nowadays millions of people of all age take pleasure in a hobby whichis both interested and fun、And every year more and more people starta stamp collection of your own and discover an interest which caneven last lifetime 、 Starting your collection of stamps are easy becausethey are nowhere、 Holiday and birthday postcards from relatives and lettersfrom friends can all provide you for stamps from all over the world、 So once you’ve started collecting seriously, you will probably want to join in theStamp Collectors’Club which exist to add more stamps to your collection、（十）Though a great progress has been made in science these years, there are still many people live in poor conditions、 They make their livesby collecting and selling used thing、 Their children cannot go to schoolbecause they have not enough money to send their children to there、Why you think so many people still suffer from poverty now?The answer lies on the population explosion、 A presidentof a developing country once said; “It is us who are to blame forthe poverty because we used to ‘produce’ child without limit、”Although this few words sound simple enough, they haveclear pointed out one of the causes of the population explosion、（1）第一行：two-days 改为two-day 第二行：mountain 前加a第三行：noon后加when 第四行：them改为us第五行：visiting 改为visited 第六行：pictures；passed第七行：去down 第八行：and改为but 第九行：去at（2）第一行：with改为on 第二行：many改为some 第三行：because of第四行：删去 be；read改为reading 第五行：programs第六行：noisy第七行：On改为In 第八行：去掉want前得to；real改为really(3)第一行：so改为and 第二行：will后加be第三行：player 改为players；then改为now 第四行：once改为any；删去in第五行：to改为for 第六行：go改为going；第七行：was改为is第八行：their改为his(4)第一行：write后加in 第二行：去掉第一个in 第三行：anything改为everything第四行：my改为a；去掉should 第五行：talk改为talking 第六行：me改为myself 第七行：showed 后加it 第八行：reads改为read；word改为words(5)第一行：of改为from 第二行：quietly改为quiet 第三行：well 后加as；to改为at第四行：happy改为unhappy/sad 第五行：that改为why；talked改为talk第六行：stranger改为strangers 第七行：since改为but 第八行：去掉about(6)第一行：划掉myself ；a 改为the 第二行：visit 改为visiting 第三行：my 前加of第四行：excited 改为exciting 第五行：So改为But第六行：cost改为costs；giving改为given 第七行：are改为is第八行：how改为what （7）第一行：去掉about；去掉the 第二行：although改为because / as第三行：find 后加it 第四行：minute 改为minutes；rightly 改为right第五行：or 改为and ；去掉together；第六行：with 改为about第七行：Having 改为Have（8）第一行：kinds 改为kinds of ；minute改为minutes 第二行：have改为having 第三行：去掉even 第四行：They改为There ；person改为personal第五行：informations改为information；easily改为easy第六行：are改为is 第七行：what改为how（9）第一行：age改为ages 第二行：interested改为interesting第三行：your改为their；what改为which/that第四行：lifetime前加a；are改为 is 第五行：nowhere改为everywhere第六行：for改为with；So改为But 第七行：去掉in第八行：exist改为exists（10）第一行：去掉a 第二行：live改为living 第三行：thing改为things第四行：去掉第二个to 第五行：在you前加do 第六行：on改为in第七行：us改为we 第八行：child改为children 第九行：tthis----these第十行：clear改为clearly。