上海高考英语优秀作文汇编(15-18分左右)

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In contrast to the commonly held belief that the most efficient way of learning English is to reside in an English-speaking country for a certain period of time, I maintain that the critical part lies in learners themselves rather than varied academic approaches or favorable environment.

Try to imagine a man living abroad but narrowly surviving with his broken English or body gestures merely. What if a man living in china usually attends English corners and is bound up in communicating with the foreigners he or she encountered in a restaurant or a pub? Just as Arthur Schopenhauer said ‘ordinary people merely think how they shall spend their time, a man of talent tries to use it.’ The more time we spend learning, the more skilled we’ll be; the more diligent we are, the better consequence we’ll gain. Our future is up to ourselves.

Of course, indispensable as our subjective efforts are, an immersive language learning environment may contribute to our improvement, bettering our command of English, but remember that, what really matters is ourselves. (181 words)

话题归属：英语学习，学习方法

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Dear anyone concerned,

I’m thrilled to know that our school is recruiting volunteers for the open day, and there’s nothing I want to do other than sign up for the society activities representative.

As the leader of school’s art society, I’m sure I can call on my society members to join in the activity, showing how diverse, meaningful and high-quality the extracurricular courses in our school are. With our extraordinary painting and curving skills presented, chances are that the parents coming to visit will have more knowledge of our comprehensive abilities rather than just the academic performance.

I intend to draw a painting on the scene, giving the visitors immersive experience and teaching anyone who would like to test the water as well. Of course, I’ll graphically give a picture of the usual class and the achievement we’ve got.

I’m looking forward to your favorable reply and wish you a lovely day.

话题分类：志愿者；学校生活

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I'm more than thrilled to know a new activity room will be set up in our school, in hope of students’ better involvement , I'd like to put forward my humble opinions.

If I were the school board, I would favor the design both economical and effective, consequently, several desks, chairs and yoga mats may be a good option, which are convenient tools for students to do whatever they like. From my perspective, DIY projects can not only bring happiness and a sense of fulfillment to students but also enable us to acquire some knowledge out of school curriculum.

Serving as a platform where students exchange what they recently have been exposed to , this

room can widen their horizon and enrich their school life, contributing to social interactions as well.

Tender exercises are exceedingly effective ways of releasing stress, especially to senior three students who are afraid of being injured as the college entrance examination is approaching. It is also quite easy for students to put aside or collect the Yoga mats. Obviously, they outshine those heavy, rude and expensive professional sports equipment, creating an agreeable experience for students.

I genuinely hope my suggestions are feasible and useful so that they can give you some inspirations. I also hope that the activity room will be a success, improving student welfare, and wish you a good day.

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父母的言传身教在孩子的成长过程中往往起到重要的作用。请结合自身的经历，描述一件印象深刻的事例，并谈谈感受。

During the process of children’s growth, parents tend to be the instructors exerting enormous influences on their kids’ personality formation, via setting an example themselves.

As is commonly acknowledged, kids are born with self-centered recognition, consequently, little kids are anything but considerate. Fifteen years ago, my parents took me to call on my grandparents living in countryside far from where we lived. No sooner had I got off the car than I was attacked by the branch-like hands of my grandparents. What a behindhand place it was, I thought. A sense of sickness and annoyance developed, thus, I deliberately ignored whatever my grandparents said to me, merely playing with my fingers. At that moment, I was too young to understand my parents’ respect and care for my grandparents，their patience with their deaf ears and slow movement. Despite my irritating attitude, my parents shared the stories between them and their parents with me instead of accusation. Gradually, I felt a kind of love in this simple and poor-equipped house, warm and sweet.

A few years later, I totally bears a heartfelt gratitude every time I pay a visit to my grandparents’. It is my parents’ model that shed light on the attention among three generations and build up my frlial piety, giving me a vivid lesson.