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物品的描述

一、大小长短

(一)常用句型：

①某物 + is + 数词 + 名量词 + 形容词。如：

This rope is 100 meters long. 绳子100米长。

②某物 + is + 数词 + 名量词 + in length /width / height。如：

This cloth is 1.5 metres in width and 30 metres in length.

这块布料1.5米宽，30米长。

③ The length /width / height of +某物 is +数词 + 名量词。如：

The length of this rope is 100 meters. 绳子100米长。

④ This/It is a 基数词-名量词(单数)-形容词 +某物。

This is a 20-metre-long plastic pipe. 这是一根二十米长的塑料管子。

(二)常用词汇：①形容词：long, wide, high, tall, deep. ②名词：length, width, height, depth。

二、面积体积

(一)表示体积的句型：

①某物 + is + 数词 + (度量词) + by +数词 + (度量词) + by + 数词 + 度量词。某物长…宽…高…。

The box is 50 by 40 by 30 centimetres.

这个箱子50厘米长40厘米宽30厘米高。

②某物 is + 数词 + cubic + 度量词。某物…立方…。

The bank is 20 cubic metres. 水箱20立方米大。

③ The volume of + 某物is ... cubic +度量词。某物的容量(体积)是…。

The volume of this containeris two cubic metres.

这个容器的容量是两立方米。

表示面积的句型：

①某物+ is + 数词 + square + 度量词。某物…平方…。

The board is 10 square metres这块木版10平方米大。

②The area of某物is + 数词 + square + 度量词。某物的面积是…平方…。

The area of the external walls is 60 square metres.

外墙的面积为60平方米。

?常用词汇：①形容词：square平方的, cubic立方的。②度量词：metre(m)米, centimetre(cm) 厘米, millimeter(mm)毫米, foot英尺, inch英寸。③volume体积, area 面积。

三、形状颜色

(一)常用句型：①某物 + is + adj. /n. 某物…。

②某物 is + adj. in shape/colour。某物在形状上/颜色上是…。

My lost suitcase is silver in colour. 我丢失的手提箱是银白色的。

③The shape/colour of + 某物is …。某物的形状/颜色是…。

The shape of the toy + is dumb-bell shape. 玩具的形状是哑铃形的。

④ In shape, 某物+ is like …。某物形如…。

In shape, the

(二)常用表形状的词汇：①形容词：round圆的，global球形的，正方形的，triangular 三角形的，quadrate长方形的。②词组： bullet shape弹头形，diamond shape菱形，dumb-bell shape哑铃形，line shape线形。

(三)表示颜色的形容词有：pink粉红色的，brown褐色的，camel驼色的，green绿色的，blue蓝色的，red红色的，purple紫色的，orange桔红色的，violet紫色的，white 白色的，gray灰色的，golden金黄色的silver银白色的，yellow黄色的。

【注意】多个形容词作定语的排列顺序：性质(描绘)类→大小类→形状类→新旧类→颜色类→出处类→材料类→用途类。如：

a pair of beautiful German leather boots一双漂亮的德国皮靴子

a large famous medical school一所著名的大医科学校

四、材料质地

(一)常用句型：某物 + be made of + 原材料。

(二)常用词：①名词： steel钢，iron铁，copper铜，plastic塑料，leather皮革，wood木头, straw麦杆，nylon尼龙，cloth布料, stone石料，glass玻璃, cotton棉花，metal金属，brick砖，bamboo竹。②形容词：woolen毛纺的，wooden木制的, plastic 塑胶的。

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