中考英语作文话题(八)建议劝告

八、个人观点建议（提建议、劝告等）本话题所涉及语言知识

（一）例文审题

假设你是某中学生英语杂志V oice of Students栏目的编辑Mary, 请你针对Tony 的来信谈谈你的看法并提出建议。

Dear Mary,

I am a middle school student. Our teacher always asks us to work in groups. One student in our group always doesn’t finish his work on time, though he has promised us that he would. The other three of us feel unhappy about it. What should we do? Shall we go on working with him?

人称：你/你们---第二人称

时态：一般现在时

内容：回答问题，看法, 建议

（三）单句翻译/造句成文

11.你最好找出他没完成任务的原因。

12. 如果他真麻烦，作为组员，分担困难是你的责任。

13. 向老师求助是一个很好的主意。

14. 老师是一个能帮助你和他更好沟通的人。

to cooperate with partners. __________, you should go on working with him _________ you are a team, ______________. Here is some advice for you.

_______, you should ask him ______ he couldn’t finish the work. ___ he is in trouble, you should help him out. ________ you can tell him you are willing to work with him.

____________________, you can ask your teacher for help.

I hope ______my advice will help you with your problem.

If he is really in trouble, you should help each other as a team.

It is a good idea to ask your teacher for help.

He is the person who can help you communicate with the students better.

（六）主题升华

1 I can understand how you feel and that you really hope to do a good job.

Although it was wrong for him to break his promise, you’d better…

I’m looking forward to hearing your good news.

If he is really in trouble, it is really your duty to share the difficulty with him.

_______________

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例文三

青少年吸烟问题在我国是个严重的问题。据统计，12-15岁的中学生约有35%以上的吸烟。一些学生只是好奇，而一些学生已经逐渐上瘾。请你对此谈谈看法同时说说吸烟的危害，并对那些吸烟的学生提出你的建议。

提示语：smoking, serious problem, among teenagers, It is reported, students from 12 to 15, curious(好奇的), used to, difficult, give up, harmful, pollute

Smoking is a serious problem among teenagers in China. It is reported that 35% students from 12 to 15 smoke. Some are just curious about it when they see others smoking. Unfortunately, others fall into the habit. And it is difficult to give up.

I think it is not right for the students to smoke. Smoking is bad for people’s health. Many smokers died of lung cancer. It also harms people’s mental development, especially for teenagers. Smoking pollutes the air around us, and it can even cause fire. Every year, some

people die from the fire caused by smoking and at the same time many buildings are destroyed by the fire.

I hope those students who smoke should give up smoking as soon as possible, it is not only good for yourself but also for your family and people around you. You should put your heart into studies, and play ball games with your friends to make yourself a happy and healthy teenager.

例文四

（朝阳201201）假设你叫张华，是美国中学生鲍勃的朋友。你收到了他的电子邮件，请

I’m glad to hear from you.

I used to have the same problem. Cheer up! I’d like to give you some advice.

First, stop watching TV and go to bed earlier. Watching TV too much is bad not only for your eyes but also for you r study. Second, you’d better get up on time and have breakfast. Breakfast is the most important meal of the day. Finally, you should understand your parents. All parents love their children. If you listen to them, I’m sure you will become healthier and wo n’t often feel tired.

I think it’s important for everyone to keep healthy and good living habits help a lot.

I hope what I said can help you.

例文五：

在日常生活中，我们可能会遇到一些令人烦恼的事情需要得到朋友的帮助。假如你叫李明，是中学生张华的QQ聊友，昨天你收到了他的一个电子邮件。请写一封不少于60个词的回复，针对他的问题谈谈你的看法，并提出你的建议。信的开头和结尾已给出，其词数不计入所完成的回信内。

Hi! Li Ming,

I happened to see a cell phone on my way home after school today. So I was very happy to pick it up. To my surprise, it was an iPhone4. I put it into my pocket. Now it is lying on the table in my bedroom. I haven’t told my parents about it. I don’t know if I should return it to its owner. What do you think of it? Can you give me some advice?

Yours，

Hi! Zhang Hua,

I’m glad to get your message. Now an iPhone4 is so popular that everyone wants

to have one. If this happens to me, I will probably have the same idea as you. But what do you feel about if you lose anything?

I think the owner must be very worried at the moment. So you should return it to its owner at once. You’d better check its phone numbers and choose one of them to call back. In this way, maybe you can find its owner. The owner will be sure to thank you for your kindness. If you don’t have time, you can ask your parents or your teachers for help.

Do you agree with me?

Yours，