雅思写作考试笔记宝典
一、雅思写作炼段法则：分类思维写TS话题句及SI拓展句
注意：先写核心句，再写修饰句。先说重点，再说辅助
1 人群
Car is very convenient
●for businessmen:
●for the old
●for students
●for white collar
2 组成
Car is very convenient.
●The speed is very fast
●The space is huge to load the goods
●There are a lot of functions such as GPS….
3 微观宏观
The discount of the air ticket is should be encouraged
●For individual: student/businessmen/travelers/
●For the company: ladder up the fame
●For the nation: promote the economy
4 why/how/what
Parent should teach kids to become good members of the society
Why: first teacher/long time together
How: set up example/taking out to experience more
What: respecting the old/ diligence/good manners
二、争议类几种串联TS法则
几种问法
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Ambition is positive. ?
Discuss both sides and give your own idea？
万能对应模板：
On the one hand, 正面观点(TS+SI自己的话拓展)
Among the numerous advantages of 话题stands out 好处1名词---TS ………Besides 好处1 follows 好处2---TS …….
Accompanied what has been mentioned comes along 好处3---TS ……
First, ….
Second..
third
On the other hand, 反面观点(TS+SI自己的话拓展)
To begin with, 话题(sometimes) offers us/the public …坏处1
In addition, the society also witnesses a great deal of/number of 坏处2 by 话题Besides,
Furthermore……
In conclusion, 个人观点
1基本同意or不同意----针对agree or not
Generally, although…反面存在，I agree or disagree that….
We should limit the car, do you agree or not?
Although the car has some negative effects, I still believe its advantages outweigh
its disadvantages and I do not agree that we should limit them. What we should do is….
2 选择一边，倾向一边generally, I believe ….. ----针对both sides
Some people think …art. Other….. public facilities. Discuss the both sides…
In conclusion, although art has its advantages, I still believe that the basic facilities
are more important and I think the government should pay more attention on it.
3 结合：----针对both sides
talent or nurture后天?
In conclusion, I think both of them are important but nurture has higher position for me.
+建议
补充连接TS 模板可以替换上面倒装句
强调句模板
?It is 好处1 that 话题offers 对象
?It is also 好处2 that 对象will obtain from 话题
三、文章结构3种争议类2 报告类1
Intro ---both sides / agree or not agree….(表明自己观点同意或否)
正
反
Con. 选择一边尽管反面存在，我依然坚持。。。。
Intro -----both sides
正
反
Con. 两者结合
报告类10%
Intro
问题1
问题2
Con 重申，建议，预见
四、争议类和报告类的开头
争议类：
1背景分析引入争议：几个基本句型
比较
Nothing is more controversial/heated than the d ebate whether …..or……..
倒装
Never has the society witnessed such a d ebate whether…….
拟人
Heated debate recently greeted whether the government should explore the …. or
go on to use the….
The society is no stranger to the debate whether….
2两派分析
Ideas on this issue keep at constant variance./people have different ideas on this issue 3 个人观点（大致在结尾）
报告类必须：
1引出话题或现象
比较
Nothing is more controversial/heated than the fact that…/t he topic about….
倒装
Never has the society witnessed such a fact/phenomenon that…../the issue about…
拟人
Intensive concern recently greeted the fact/phenomenon that…..
The society is no stranger to the fact that…./the issue about…..
2 本文旨在。。。
剑桥7 test 3 The article is intended to explore the factors of the job satisfaction and Reveal how realistic it is.
五、争议类和报告类结尾
争议类
1重申提出观点
In this sense/All in all / in conclusion,……
选择一边法：补（尽管反面存在….）+选择一边
两者结合法
2建议suggestion等
报告类：
1 重申问题
2提出未来预见或建议
词汇整理
教育类
?Finalize a decent job/promising job
?Lay down a solid foundation for our future development
?开拓眼界丰富知识
?Broaden insight and enrich knowledge
?必修课选修课
?Compulsory course and optional course
?旁听
?audit the course audience
?多才多艺
?Be well rounded/comprehensive/straight A student/ versatile
?Exam – oriented system / quality –oriented system
?理论知识实践知识
?Theoretical knowledge/ practical knowledge
?人际交往能力
?Interpersonal/interactive abilities/capabilities
?公司实习
?Have the Company internship
?适应社会
?be well fit/match the upcoming competition /apply to the society
政策类
?取其精华去其糟粕
?Accepting the good/essence and rejecting the bad/dross.
?Material and spiritual
?Mental and physical
?对外开放
open up to the outside world.
?先进技术
?state-of-the-art concept and technology
?双刃剑？
?Two blade sword
环境类
?三废？
The emission of the exhausted air
The discharge of the waste/stagnant
water 、noise
可饮用水
Potable water
?威胁生命？
?Endanger/threaten/jeopardize the sustaining life ?Raw sewage 未处理的污水
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