高中英语改错专题训练和答案

The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and worse years in my life. At the first, I thought I knew everything but could make decisions by myself. Besides, my parents didn’t seem to think so. They always t ell me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home for college. At last, I will be on their own, but I still want to have my parents to turn whenever I need help.

I was reading an article in a book while I came across a word I didn’t know. “Dad, what is the meaning of the word”My dad, as he usual did after work, was watching his most favorite show. “You have the dictionary, don’t you”he shot back. He didn’t even look up my face. I went back my room, and there on my study table is that dictionary. I looked it up and found it’s exact meaning. Ten year have passed and I still use that dictionary, along with the lesson I received earlier in life from my old man: to be independent.

Dear Sir,

I've learned a teaching assistant for foreign teachers is wanted in your school. I'm writing to apply to the position.

First of all, I had graduated from Anhui University one month ago. Having exposed to foreign teachers since a young age, I can communicate with others in fluently English, What's more, years of experiences of being monitor makes me a brilliant organizer, who will help a lot to keep the class in order. The most important factor is that I love kids, and I'm confident of my patience and care will undoubtedly, win his trust.

All in all, I think my enthusiasm and full sense of responsibility will make me a qualifying teaching assistant. I'd appreciate you if you could take my application into consideration.

Best wishes.

Yours sincerely,

、

Li Hun

【解析】1.句意为我想要应聘这个职位。apply for 为固定搭配，表示申请。故将to改为for。

2.句意为我一个月前从大学毕业。这里考查的是时态问题。从a month ago 可知，毕业应该是过去时，应该用一般过去时。故将had去掉。

3.句意为从小的时候开始我就接触了外国老师。考察explose用法，暴露与作者之间应该是被动语态。故在having后面添加been。

4.句意为我能和他人用流利的英语交流。fluently为副词，不能修饰名词。故将fluently改为

fluent。

5.句意为当班长的多年经历让我成为一个很好的组织者。experience没有复数形式。故将experiences改为experience。

6.句意为这会对保持班级秩序有很大帮助。该句为非限制性定语从句，而且此处的关系代词应该是指的是作者是一个很好的组织者，为一件事，不能用who。故将who 改为which。

7.句意为我的耐心和关怀会毫无疑问的赢得他们的信任，对此我很有信心。be confident of 后面加名词。be confident that 引导从句。故将of改为that。

8.由文意可知，作者是想当助教。因此赢得的信任应该是一群学生，而不是一个人。故将his 改为their。

9.句意为我认为我的热情和责任感，会让我成为一名合格的助教。考查形容词。qualified为符合资格的。故将qualifying改为qualified。

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10.句意为如果你将我的申请列入考虑范围内的话，我将非常感谢。考察appreciate用法。would appreciate it ...为固定搭配表示感谢。故将you改为it。

One night I was going to work on my usually bus route. Upon our arrive at the terminal, I noticed that I was the only passenger left on the bus. I looked around and saw a mobile phone in a chair that must have been left behind by the passenger. I give it to the conductor.

Two day later, the conductor told me that the passenger was very much happy that I returned the mobile phone. The passenger was trying to get her name, so she wanted to post on Facebook about what had happened as a sort of appreciation. I thought it was unnecessary. What was important was when I saw the smile on her face, I was happy.

46.第1处【答案】usually 改为usual

【解析】用形容词修饰名词。

第2处【答案】arrive改为arrival

【解析】Upon one’s arrival是固定用法，意思是某人到来时。

第3处【答案】on改为in

【解析】句意：我发现我是汽车里唯一剩下的乘客，on改为in。

第4处【答案】the改为a

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【解析】泛指“一位乘客”，所以用不定冠词。

第5处【答案】give改为gave

【解析】发生在过去的事情，所以用一般过去式。

第6处【答案】day改为days

【解析】Day是可数名词，且被“two” 修饰，所以用名词复数。

第7处【答案】去掉much

【解析】“非常高兴”，直接说very happy，所以去掉much。

第8处【答案】her改为my

【解析】句意：这名乘客想要知道我的名字，所以her改为my。

第9处【答案】so改为because

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【解析】句意：因为她想要张贴在脸书上。表示原因，所以so改为because。

第10处【答案】when前加that

The blue whale is certainly the largest animals on the planet today. Just the heart of a blue whale can weight as many as a family car. You might think that such a big animal would need to eat another big animals to surviving. Surprising, the blue whale feeds on some of the smaller ocean animals.

A blue whale can live between 80 and 90 years. Unfortunately, it is believe that there were only 10,000 to 25,000 alive. They were hunted for in the 1900s but hundreds of thousands of them were killed. Let’s hope number of whales on the planet starts to increase in the coming years.

The blue whale is certainly the largest animals on the planet today. Just the heart of a blue

animal

whale can weight as many as a family car. You might think that such a big animal would need to much

eat another big animals to surviving. Surprising, the blue whale feeds on some of the smaller other survive Surprisingly

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ocean animals.

A blue whale can live between 80 and 90 years. Unfortunately, it is believe that there were

believed are

only 10,000 to 25,000 alive. They were hunted for in the 1900s but hundreds of thousands of them

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were killed. Let’s hope ∧number of whales on the planet starts to increase in the coming years.

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When my twentieth birthdays came, I was not at home. In order to celebrate such important day with my parents, I wrote him a letter, in which I thanked them for having raised me for twenty years, and expressed my love for them. Later my mother tell me when they read the letter, tears were filled her eyes. And my father appeared very cool. Before that, he read it alone careful, and then he put it away into a desk drawer. I can imagine the scene clearly because I know father. Being a man with little words, he prefers show his love for me in a silent way.

61. birthdays 改为birthday 62. such 后加an 改为them

64. tell改为told 65. 去掉were 66. And 改为

But 67. Before 改为After 68. careful 改为carefully

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69. little 改为few 70. prefers 后加to

My parents live in the country. They keep a dog calling Ah Fu. One day my parent went to work in the fields taking my little sister and Ah Fu along. While they working, my sister walked to the river nearby. Ah Fu follows her there. She was trying to pick a flower while she fell into the river. Ah Fu barked and jumped to the water immediately. When my parents heard of Ah Fu barking, they ran to the river. They saw Ah Fu swimming towards the bank carrying his little sister. My parents praised Ah Fu warm. It was our brave Ah Fu who had saved my little sister.

1. calling 改为called

2. parent改为parents

3. they后加were

4. the改为a

5. follows改为followed

6. while改为when

7. to改为into

8. 去掉heard 后面的of

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9. his改为my

10. warm改为warmly

Last summer, to my delight, I got a chance to go to the United Kingdom. I was eager to see how England was like. Although my parents objected to my decision at first, but finally they were persuaded. It was the first time that I have travelled abroad alone. Felt excited, I boarded the plane. Suddenly, however, I found my luggages gone and felt helplessly. It was on that moment that the airhostess came to my assistance. After helping me find it back, she suggested that I attached a label to my suitcase on my next journey. I was thankfully to the kind lady for his help! What unforgettable trip!

Last summer, to my delight, I got a chance to go to the United Kingdom. I was eager to see how

what England was like. Although my parents objected to my decision at first, but finally they

were persuaded. It was the first time that I have

had travelled abroad alone.

Felt

Feeling excited, I

boarded the plane. Suddenly, however, I found my luggages

luggage gone and felt helplessly. It was

on

at

that moment that the airhostess came to my assistance. After helping me find it back, she

suggested that I attached

attach a label to my suitcase on my next journey. I was

thankfully

thankful to the

kind lady for his

her help! What

∧

an unforgettable trip!

Nowadays, as the development of high technology, smart phone is very popular to high school student. Smart phone once is forbidden. But now it has become a very common tool for students.

A lot of students keep his eyes on smart phones all the time. Teachers are annoying about this situation, so they feel most students ignore them when they are giving lessons. Some teachers think it is time to let the students hand to hand in their smart phones.

I don’t think it is good idea. Even for the teach ers, they used their phones so much, let alone the students. The teachers should improve their teaching methods to catch the students’ interest.

Nowadays,

as

with the development of high technology, smart phone is very popular

to

with/among high school students. Smart phone once

is

was forbidden. But now it has become a

very common tools

tool for students. A lot of students keep

his

their eyes on smart phones all the time.

Teachers are annoying

annoyed about this situation,

so

because/as they feel that most students ignore

them when they are giving lessons. Some teachers think it is time to let the students to hand in their smart phones.

I don’t think it is ∧

a good idea. Even for the teachers, they

used

use their phones so much, let

alone the students. The teachers should improve their teaching methods to catch the students’ interest.

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Dear Sir,

I’m Xiaoli, a student of Senior 3. I am writing to ask y ourself for some advice. Since I entered Senior 3, my parents and teachers have kept asking me to board（寄宿）in the school. They say it will be very much convenient for me to ask question whenever and wherever. However, they think boarding will make this possible to make full use my night time, and that I can also develop the ability to look after myself.

However, in my opinion, stay at home in the evening allow me more time to work at my lessons. At a same time, I can learn which I think I’m not good at. I really don’t know how to deal with the disagreement. Can you help me out

Yours,

Xiaoli

71. yourself改为you 72. 去掉much 73. question改为questions

74. However改为Besides 75. this改为it 76. use 后面加of

77. stay改为staying 78. allow改为allows 79. a 改为the

80. which改为what

As a Senior Two student, my favorite sport is football. I was a member of our school football

team. We practice for three times a week and often watch football match on TV or on the Internet together. Play football not only makes us grow tall and strong but also give us a sense of fair play and team spirit. We must keep in minds that we play for the team instead ourselves. Also, sports teach us the important of obeying the rules in a match. Each player must listen to the captain, which is the leader of the team. And they must not break the rules too often if we want to win the game.

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As a Senior Two student, my favorite sport is football. I was

am a member of our school

football team. We practice for three times a week and often watch football

match

matches on TV or on

the Internet together.

Play

Playing football not only makes us grow tall and strong but also

give

gives us

a sense of fair play and team spirit. We must keep in minds

mind that we play for the team instead

∧

of ourselves. Also, sports teach us the

important

importance of obeying the rules in a match. Each player

must listen to the captain, which

who is the leader of the team. And

they

we must not break the rules

too often if we want to win the game.

The winter holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain knowledges that we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.

71.【答案】第1处how改为what

第2处chose改为choose

第3处take改为taking

第4处but改为and;

第5处about后加the

第6处your改为our

第7处knowledges改为knowledge

第8处删除can或can改为should

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第9处thought改为think

第10处many改为much

As the saying goes, chances favored the prepared mind. I learned this from one of my experience.

I was not chosen as member of the volleyball team of our school. Because of this, I decided to give up play volleyball. Luckily, my best friend stopped me but pointed out that it was my laziness and poor preparation which led to my failure. After that, I practiced playing volleyball on every day. When another tryout arrived, I was full prepared and tried my best. As a result, I was selected and became an important player on our school team.

From this, I am firmly convincing that, no matter when chances arrive, we were able to seize them as long as we get well prepared.

As the saying goes, chances favored the prepared mind. I learned this from one of my

favor

experience.

experiences

I was not chosen as ∧member of the volleyball team of our school. Because of this, I

%

a

decided to give up play volleyball. Luckily, my best friend stopped me but pointed out that it was

playing and

my laziness and poor preparation which led to my failure. After that, I practiced playing volleyball

that

on every day. When another tryout arrived, I was full prepared and tried my best. As a result, I was

去掉on fully

selected and became an important player on our school team.

From this, I am firmly convincing that, no matter when chances arrive, we were able to seize

convinced are them as long as we get well prepared.

It’s not easy for us to accept the fact which we are going to leave our beloved school. However, we are looked forward to our future life. Last night, my friends and I walk around our school talking about the funny things that had been happened in the past three years. Suddenly, I got an idea. I said to him we should make a deal that we could get together here four years late. My friends were so exciting about it, and they agreed with me. I started to think about what I would become in the future. I may becoming a teacher, or a doctor. I think deal will help us keep in touch to each other.

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51. which-that 52. looked-looking 53. walk-walked

54. had been happened去掉been 55. him- them 56. late-later

57. exciting-excited 58. becoming-become 59. deal 前加the

60. to-with

One neighbor of my is aunty Anabel. Everyone in the neighborhood knows her for the “queen of the neighborhood”. You may ask what. Well, it’s because she used to cooking for t he entire neighborhood whenever there was festival. I remember the day that Mr. Carter celeberated his 90th birthday. In order to make sure everyone knew about it, he made Mrs. Carter bake small cookies. Then he walked around and give every house one cookie. Believe it or not, but it was an invitation. As soon as my aunty heard the news, she got all neighbor together and started a huge barbecue party for him. There wasn’t one person who willing stayed home that day.

One neighbor of

my

mine is aunty Anabel. Everyone in the neighborhood knows her

for

as the

“queen of the neighborhood”. You may ask what

why. Well, it’s because she used to

cooking

cook for the

entire neighborhood whenever there was ∧

a festival. I remember the day

that

when Mr Carter

celeberated his 90th birthday. In order to make sure everyone knew about it, he made Mrs Carter

bake small cookies. Then he walked around and give

gave every house one cookie. Believe it or not,

but it was an invitation. As soon as my aunty heard the news, she got all neighbor

neighbors together and

started a huge barbecue party for him. There wasn’t one person who

willing

willingly stayed home that

day.

One morning, a blind boy sat on a square with a hat by her feet. He held up a sign which was said: “I am blind, please help me.” There was only a few coins in the hat. A man was walking by. He took the sign, turning it around, and wrote something on it. He put the sign back so that everyone walked by would see the new words. Surprising, soon a lot more people were giving money to the blind boy. That afternoon, the man who had changed the sign came to see what things were. The boy recognized his footstep and asked: “Are you the one who changed my sign this morning How did you write” The man said: “Today is a beautiful day and I cannot see it.”

One morning, a blind boy sat on a square with a hat by her

his feet. He held up a sign which

was said: “I am blind, please help me.” There was

were only a few coins in the hat. A man was

walking by. He took the sign, turning

turned it around, and wrote something on it. He put the sign back

so that everyone

∧

who walked by would see the new words.

Surprising

Surprisingly, soon a lot more

people were giving money to the blind boy. That afternoon, the man who had changed the sign

came to see what

how things were. The boy recognized his

footstep

footsteps and asked: “Are you the one

who changed my sign this morning How

What did you write” The man said: “Today is a beautiful day

and

but I cannot see it.”

Dear Harry,

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I have good news for you that there will be a international music camp in our city this summer The camp is openly to students from all over the world who is interested in playing musical instruments. I know you are a music lover, so why not to join the camp together with us

At the camp, campers are giving classes by experts in the moring and in the afternoon they do a couple of hour of practice. In the evening, there is a music exchange concert that campers can give performances and plays different kinds of music from their own counties.

I’m sure you will have a lot of funs there. I’m looking forward your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】→an

→open

→are

join→to去掉

→given

`

→hours

→where

→play

→fun

后加to

Dear Editor,

I’ m writing to tell you a problem that troubled me for a long time. It is t he relationship among my mother and me. I’m a student and Mother is an university teacher, who is too busy with her work that she has little time to talk to me. I love her and I do well in my studies, but I still felt afraid of her because she is much too strict with me. I don’t know why to communicate with her. Maybe it’s because of we’ve seldom sat down and exchanged our feelings and thoughts. I hope we can know much about each other and understand each other better. What can we do Looking forward to hear from you.

Best wishes!

Yours sincerely,

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Xiao Hua 51. troubled 前面加has 52. among→between 53. an→a 54. too→so 55. felt →feel

56. why→how 57. of 去掉58. much→more 59. we→I 60. hear→hearing

I can still remember clearly the day after I had my first exam. I didn’t pass them. I was so scaring that I even don’t want to go to school any more. My parents looked at my test paper and

said. “My children, we’re very glad you has finished half of it. You can do better next time. We never expect you to do the best at a very beginning. We hope you can make progress gradual.” What they said made me to feel I could do things well.

From then, I concentrated more on my studies. Now I’m always filling with confidence in my studies because I know my parents are always behind me.

I can still remember clearly the day after I had my first exam. I didn’t pass them. I was so scaring that I even

scared it

don’t want to go to school any more. My parents looked at my t est paper and said. “My children, we’re very glad

didn’t child you has finished half of it. You can do better next time. We never expect you to do the best at a very beginning. We

have

the

hope you can make progress gradual.” What they said made me to feel I could do things well.

gradually 删除to

From then, I concentrated more on m y studies. Now I’m always filling with confidence in my studies because I

加on filled

know my parents are always behind me.