专题4.4 Writing--八年级英语人教版(下册)培优讲义含答案

Unit4 Why don’t you talk to your parents?

课时4 Writing 谈论问题和提建议

话题分析

本单元的写作任务是要求会写关于提建议的短文。写这类短文时，首先应该掌握常用的提建议的句型，根据一定的情景，明确提建议的方法，在根据所提供的具体信息进行合理的发挥，是句子通顺流畅、意思完整。

词汇积累

（一）问题类短语

1. 对某人生气be angry with sb

2. 与某人吵架get into a fight with sb

3. 不能与同学和睦相处not get on with classmates

4. 给某人施压give sb pressure

5. 与同学竞争compete with classmates

6. 太多的作业too much homework

（二）建议类短语

1. 与父母交流communicate with parents

2. 早点睡觉go to sleep earlier

3. 给某人写信write to sb

4. 主动提出帮助offer to help

5. 给某人打电话call sb up

6. 归还某物return sth

7. 给某人道歉say sorry to sb

8. 根据某人的看法in one’s opinion

句子积累

（一）佳句欣赏与模仿

1. You should call him so that you can say you’re sorry. 【so that 为的是；以便】

你应该在课堂上认真听讲，以便你能取得好成绩。

You should listen to the teachers carefully in class so that you can get good grades.

2. My problem is that I can’t get on with my family. 【my problem is that...我的问题是……】

我的问题是我没有时间做我自己喜欢的事情。

My problem is that I don’t have time to do what I love to do.

3. The tired children don’t get home until after 7：00 p. m. 【not... until...直到……才……】

学生们直到晚上10：30才睡觉。学*科网

Students didn’t go to bed until 10:30 p.m.

（二）根据提示词，用不同的句型表达生活中存在的以下问题。

1. 【not sleep well 】

My problem is that I can’t sleep well.

2. 【not get along well with my classmates】

I can’t get along well with my classmates.

3. 【not get good grades 】

I am sorry to tell you that I can’t get good grades.

4. 【have too much homework】

My biggest problem is that I have too much homework.

5. 【have a fight with my best friend】

I am really sad that I have a fight with my best friend.

（三）完成下列提建议的句子（每空一词）

1. You should just be yourself.

2. Why don’t you talk to your parents?

3. What/How about calling him up and saying sorry to him?

4. Why not do some sports to keep healthy?

5. Why don’t you talk about these feelings?

（一）

（2018﹒山东省青岛）现在，中学生在校内能保证一定时间的运动量，但在校外普遍缺少运动甚至不

运动。请就此现象写一篇短文，谈谈你的看法。内容包括：

1. 缺少运动甚至不运动的原因；

2. 缺少运动甚至不运动对学生的影响；

3. 针对这种现象提出合理的改善建议。

要求：1. 词数：80—100（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；

2. 文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。

参考词汇：be short of 缺少

Many students are short of exercise in their spare time now ________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________

【佳作展示】

Many students are short of exercise in their spare time now. They think doing exercise can affect their studies. Therefore they have less time to study. Doing sports is good for their health. A person who takes exercises regularly will keep fit. In the school, students are forced to take exercise in the PE class, they need to join certain activities. In this way, students l ive in a healthy lifestyle, they won’t get sick easily. But after they leaving school, no one forces them to do so, so they are lazy to take exercise so that their bodies get weaker.

I think students should take exercise every day outside the school. In a word, exercise is helpful, important and absolutely necessary.

（二）

你将代表学校参加市中学生英语演讲比赛，演讲的题目是＂Learning to get along with our parents＂。请你用英语写一篇演讲稿，内容要点如下。

现象经常跟父母发火，甚至几天不讲话。

原因

1. 父母过分关注分数；

2. 我们……

措施

（不少于三点）

1. 我们应该和父母沟通；

2. 我们……

3. 我们……

要求：1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；

2. 必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；

3. 词数：80词左右（演讲稿的开头语结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。

Learning to get along with our parents

Ladies and gentlemen,

Good morning. Today my topic is ＂Learning to get along with our parents＂.

These days, most of us feel it is hard to get along with our parents. ___________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all for my speech. Thank you!

【佳作展示】

Learning to get along with our parents

Ladies and gentlemen,

Good morning. Today my topic is ＂Learning to get along with our parents＂.

These days, most of us feel it is hard to get along with our parents. We easily get angry with our parents and even we don’t talk to them for days.

I think the causes are as follows. First, our parents only care about our marks and it makes us stressed. Second, we wouldn’t like to communicate with them.

It’s time for us to change. First, we can communicate with them by sharing our joys and worries with them. Then, we can help do some housework to show our love for them. Finally, we should keep a balance between our school work and hobbies so that they won’t worried about us.

That’s all for my speech.Thank you!

（一）

假如你是Han Mei，下面是你的笔友Alice 给你发来的一封e-mail，请根据e-mail 的内容，给她写一封回信，与她交流看法。(提示语：listen to, mother’s love, care about, communicate with, get along with, smile )要求60—80词。

Dear Han Mei,

I’m afraid I’ve got a big problem recently. My mother talks too much to me. She always tells me, “Be careful while crossing the street.” “Put on more clothes” “Did you do a good job at school?” and so on. I’m annoyed. What shall I do?

Yours,

Alice ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________

（二）

假如你是Han Mei，下面是一封你的笔友Alice 给你发来的e-mail，请你根据e-mail的内容给她写一封回信，与她交流看法，并帮她排忧解难。

提示词语：listen to, mother’s love, care about, communicate with, get along with, smile

要求：1. 语句通顺，书写工整；

2. 可用所给提示词语，也可以适当发挥；

3. 词数在60-80左右。

Dear Han Mei,

I’m afraid I’ve got a big problem recently. My mother talks too much to me. She always tells me, be careful while crossing the street, put on more clothes, did you do a good job at school and so on. I’m annoyed(烦恼). What shall I do?

Yours,

Alice ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________

（一）

【佳作展示】

Dear Alice,

As a teenager, I met the same problem as you. But now I can get along better with my mother. Here are some

advice for you.

Your mothe r talks much, because she cares about you. Maybe it’s not a good way, but it shows your mother’s love. So I think you should listen to her. If your opinions are different from your mother’s, you can communicate with her, and tell her what you’re thinking about. If your mother doesn’t take your advice, just keep silent and give her a smile. I hope what I say here can help you a lot.

Yours,

Han Mei

（二）

【思路导航】

本文必须先弄懂所给的英语短文的大概意思，所写的电子邮件要符合邮件的格式，要与爱丽丝交流自己的观点，并帮她排忧解难。所写的句子要符合语法。

【佳作展示】

Dear Alice,

As a teenager, I met the same problem as you. But now I can get along better with my mother. Here are some ideas for you.

Your mother talks much, because she cares about you. Maybe it’s not a good way, but it shows your mother’s love. So I think you should listen to her. If your opinions are different from your mother’s, you can communicate with her, and tell her what you are thinking about.

If your mother doesn’t take your advice, just keep silent and give her a smile.

I hope what I say here can help you a lot.

Yours,

Han Mei 【名师点评】

短文用了一些短语和句式，如：But now I can get along better with my mother. So I think you should listen to her. If your opinions are different from your mother’s, you can communicate with her, and tell her what you are thinking about.用了连词if，that，what引导的从句，增加了文章的亮点。