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1、Making a request 提出要求或者请求的信

2、Making suggestions 提出建议的信

3、Making an apology 道歉信

4、Making a complaint 抱怨信

5、Thank-you letters 感谢信

从写作特点上来看，特别提醒G类同学注意以下“三大纪律”：

纪律一

书信和A类议论文最大的区别在于，书信是允许考生在主体段对情节进行合理联想的。换句话说，A类的图表题是看学生有没有能力读大学，而G类的书信是看学生有没有能力在英语国家顺利地生活。只要书信的情节符合生活常识，考官是可以允许学生进行适当联想来让书信的情节更充实的(当然即使是联想也不能跑题，特别应该参考原题里面给的三条参考信息)。而且正是因为书信允许有一部分合理的想象，所以即使我们遇到一些想不出的生词，也往往可以适当修改情节用一些其他比较简单的词汇来替换。

纪律二

书信的用词我们应该追求稳妥，一方面不需要使用过大的词汇，另一方面也一定不能过于口语化，甚至俚语化(slangy)。参加移民类考试对的同学多数都有工作经验，有不少还有些商业英语信函的经历，但请注意：雅思的书信考试完全没有必要像商业公文那么正式(这点从《剑8》的书信体现得尤其明显)，即使是比较正式的话题，只要保证不用太口语化的词汇就已经很好了。另一个极端是有些考生工作中常年用email和英语国家人士进行沟通，而email往往对语法和用词要求得并不严格，导致这些考生对英文书信产生某些误解，书信里时不时地出现guy，wanna，gonna这种非常口语化的词汇，甚至爆出一些粗口，实在令人触目惊心。希望大家能够形成正确的书信用词观念，避免两个极端。

纪律三

写书信切记“福尔摩斯”式的倾向。有些同学工作经验丰富，思维也很严密，但是在合理虚构情节的时候却走向了另一个极端：主体段的正文部分过于追求逻辑的完美，最后写出来的书信也确实精彩，却导致考试时间不够用，这种情况同样令人惋惜。考试是在时间允许的前提下尽可能写好，但并不是追求完美，这一点也提醒广大G类考生注意。

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根据背景分析,这封书信是写给朋友请求帮助在自己出差期间照管孩子的,显而易见，这是一封私人信件，由于对方是挚友,写信的语气可以比较轻松和随意,在说明详细内容时,措辞不必讲究但要礼貌。再来看一个例子: ０９.02.07 Your ｆrｉenｄs have beｅn out on hｏlｉdａy and ask you to stａy ａt their hoｕsｅ. Hoｗever, tｈerｅ is a prｏｂlem with a piecｅ oｆ eｑｕipｍe ｎｔ in thｅｋiｔｃｈeｎ． Wｒｉtｅ a letteｒ to them． In ｙouｒｌetter, ｙou shouｌd: 1. Ｄｅscriｂe youｒfeeling at ｔheir ｈome 2． Descｒibe what the problem iｓ３. Ｄｅsｃribe what action you havｅｄone to solve thｅｐｒｏblem 这是一封抱怨信,写信人在朋友度假期间帮朋友看管房屋，在信中向朋友说明厨房用具的问题,这并非商务场合和正式交涉，切不可义正词严。 09.0９.05 Yｏu are livinｇｉｎ an Englisｈ－ｓpeaking coｕntry ａnd the resｔaurａnt n ｅar ｙｏu is maｋing a ｌｏt ｏf noisｅｅｖｅryday. Wｒite a lettｅｒｔo tｈe ｒestａuｒanｔ oｗｎｅｒ. In yｏur letter, you shoｕlｄ. 1. sａy ｈoｗ you ａre ｄisturbeｄ by noｉse 2. giｖe some suggｅstｉons ｔo fix ｔhe ｐroｂlｅm 3. ｔelｌ tｈｅｏwner furｔher acｔion wilｌｂe ｔakｅn iｆｔｈis pｒob ｌeｍremaｉｎs unsｏｌved.

雅思G类小作文范文雅思书信写作给老朋友写信.doc

雅思G类小作文范文雅思书信写作给老朋友写信本期雅思培训类作文专栏要介绍的一道题目与朋友有关，当你从多年未见面的朋友那里游玩回来，可以写一封感谢信，当然不用十分直白得表达自己的感激之情。我们可以通过描述一件在一起旅行途中发生的美好的回忆来表达出自己的喜悦，同时也可以邀请对方来自己家做客。这类信件在国外还是比较常见的，老外也非常喜欢各种旅行，尤其是现在airbnb; couch surfing等服务的出现，和新朋友认识的途径不仅仅是青年旅社了。 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.请花二十分钟完成此项任务 You have recently been to stay with an old friend for a few days. You haven’t seen each other for a long time and was happy to meet him/her. 你最近去拜访了一位老朋友。你们互相之间有很长一段时间没有见面了，十分高兴见到了他/她。 Now write a letter to this friend. In your letter: 现在请写一封信给这位朋友。在信里面： say how you felt about the visit 表达出你对这次拜访的感受 refer to something enjoyable that you did while staying with him/her 提一些那次你们在一起的愉悦的事情 invite your friend to visit you 邀请你的朋友来你这里做客 Write at least 150 words.不低于一百五十个词参考范文（建议对着题目要求先写自己练习一遍，然后再参考范文学习）： Dear Sarah, 亲爱的Sarah, It’s been an incredible experience to have met you in Goa after a long hiatus, probably after half a decade. The week we spent together seems to have vanished in no time. I am writing to thank you for an amazing time and your hospitality during the trip and would like to invite you to my house. 很长时间未联系了，大概有五年时间了吧，这次和你在Goa见面真是一次很棒的经历。我们在一起的一周时间似乎瞬间就过完了。我来信想表达对你的感谢，感谢这美好的时光，感谢在旅行的时候受到你的款待，我也想请你来我家做客。 The whole week was absolutely awesome. In particular, the trip to the George Town

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1.如果你认为我能帮上任何忙的话，请尽管告诉我，我会尽力的。 If you think that I can be of any help, please let me know and I’ll certainly do what I can. 2.然而，如果你们能够给我调换一台相机或者是退还我钱的话，怎么方便就怎么做，我将十分的满意。 I would, however, be perfectly satisfied if you would kindly replace the camera or refund my money, whichever is more convenient. 3.我希望看到你们进行及时的调查并随时告知我事情的进展如何。 I would like to see a timely investigation conducted and would like to be informed of the progress. 4.我希望你们联系一下我买车的汽车经销商，对你们的错误做出解释。 I would like you to contact the auto dealer where I bought the car, explaining your error. 5.我希望这些建议能够在你做决定时有所裨益。 I hope you find these suggestions useful in helping you make your decision. 6.同时，如果此问题不能得以迅速解决，我希望您能允许我搬入另外一个房间。 Meanwhile, if the problem cannot be solved quickly, I would like you to allow me to move to another room. 7.您能否就我的课程和考试事项给我一些建议，特别是针对我目前的状况是否能够给予我一些特别的关照?

雅思出国留学申请信范文

给系里秘书索要申请材料信件示例：简洁型： Dear Sir or Madam: I am an undergraduate student in the Department of XXX, XXX University. I am very interested in the Ph.D. program in your institution, and I wish to pursue a doctoral degree in XXX major. My desired date of entrance is Fall, 2005. I have taken Toefl Test(08/08/2005, 647) and will take GRE Test on Oct, 2005. I do believe that the doctorate-oriented study at your institution will be of great help to me. I hope my solid background can meet your requirements of entrance as a doctoral graduate. Would you please send me the Application Forms, Financial Support Forms, the detailed introductions of faculty and research, and other relevant materials needed for application? Thank you very much for your kind assistance. My mailing address is My email address is Yours sincerely XXX 复杂型： Dear Sir or Madam: I am very sorry to trouble you, but I really need your help. I am a graduate student majoring in XXX major in the Department of XXX, XXX University. I wish to pursue a doctoral degree in XXX at your university. My desired date of entrance is Fall, 2005. I am writing this letter to introduce myself and request necessary materials about the application and financial supports. Born on Jan. 1, 2000, I entered XXX University in 2001 and achieved my degree of B.S. in June, 2003. Due to my outstanding performance in undergraduate study, I was admitted to the Graduate School of XXX University at the Department of XXX without examination. I will obtain my degree of M.S in June, 2005. I learn from my advisor, Professor Yu Minhong, that your university is one of the best universities in US and has a strong research background with many famous professors. I eagerly wish to continue my graduate study on XXX at your university. I have taken Toefl （08/08/2005, 647）and GRE General Test (Oct. 2004, V680/Q800/AW A5.5). I do believe that the doctorate-oriented study at your university will be of great help to me. I hope my solid background in XXX can meet your requirements of entrance to XXX department as a graduate with financial supports. Would you please consider my application and send me the Application Forms, Financial Support Forms, the detailed introductions of faculty and research, and other relevant materials needed for application? Thank you very much for your kind assistance. My mailing address is