雅思A类小作文写作技巧
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雅思A类小作文写作技巧
考生在雅思A类写作时首先要仔细阅读题干，读懂题目要求。小作文标题一般都是分两句话，第一句话往往都是介绍图表内容，第二句话就是提出一些要求。也就是说，大家在写作时要做到以下两点：要选择并总结出表格的主要特征，同时还要进行一些适当的比较分析。考生如果只是单纯的列出一些图表信息，而不去进行一些适当分析的话，那么他们是无法获得高分的;一是必须要做到完整、并且有逻辑地谋篇布局、二是必须要有一个非常清晰明确的写作目的、三就是那些写作的主要内容完整、切题、正确、有理有据：考生一定要能做到自然地展开论述，同时还要善始善终地表达观点、陈述事实。其中所举的一些论据能很好的支持论点。
好文章的最高境界通常就是："能够连贯得让人没有一点感觉".也就是说并不需要刻意去用连接词，而且不滥用模板句和过渡句，就能够做到句与句之间逻辑清晰，语意连贯，甚至连接词和短语的运用都能够信手拈来，是整个文章感觉是浑然一体的。而通常大家如果想要文章的连贯性就要注意以下几个问题：
1段落衔接自然。
2论证时注意思路清晰，过渡自然。好文章是由思想编织的。
3适当运用连接词。其实对于雅思小作文写作来说，使用连接词的真是目的其实是为了更强大的逻辑引导和语气强调。
而想要在雅思A类小作文中熟练运用分段技巧，但是大家在进行段落划分时要注意以下几个问题：
1根据文章脉络划分自然段
2段落衔接自然3
每段主旨和要点明确想要在雅思A类小作文中用词达到多样、精确、自然、有风格。一定要做到以下几个非常重要的点。
1.多样：就是指体现出多变的用词。考生不仅仅要会使用一些最基础的词汇，同时还要能体现出能够运用高端书面词汇的能力。另外，考生还应注意经常变换地运用一些同义词，而不是总是去重复使用同一个词。这一点对于雅思小作文写作来说是尤为重要的。
2.精确：是指所用词在句中语意连贯正确，包括词性准确，同时感情色彩也要贴切，用法地道，保证拼写无误。
3.自然：做到灵活用词，不要刻意去堆砌辞藻，用词要做到恰到好处，为文章的表意去进行服务。
4.有风格：对于A类雅思小作文而言，考生在写作时应当保持一种客观严谨的写作风格。
5.小错误：满分文章也并非就是一点错误都没有。所以写作时千万不要为了刻意追求完美而影响了你的表意和流利度。
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Simon雅思小作文真题范文 Task 1： table essay
The table below shows changes in the numbers of residents cycling to work in different areas of the UK between 2001 and 2011. The table compares the numbers of people who cycled to work in twelve areas of the UK in the years 2001 and 2011. Overall, the number of UK commuters who travelled to work by bicycle rose considerably over the 10-year period. Inner London had by far the highest number of cycling commuters in both years. In 2001, well over 43 thousand residents of inner London commuted by bicycle, and this figure rose to more than 106 thousand in 2011, an increase of 144%. By contrast, although outer London had the second highest number of cycling commuters in each year, the percentage change, at only 45%, was the lowest of the twelve areas shown in the table. Brighton and Hove saw the second biggest increase (109%) in the number of residents cycling to work, but Bristol was the UK’s second city in terms of total numbers of cycling commuters, with 8,108 in 2001 and 15,768 in 2011. Figures for the other eight areas were below the 10 thousand mark in both years. (172 words, band 9)
雅思6.5分 小作文范文参考
●批改By Will 本次批改严格按照ILETS小作文评分标准进行。ILETS小作文评分项：TA (内容的完整性), CC (连贯性及一致性), GRA (语法范围及精准度), LR (词汇资源)。文末会进行总评及打分。 ●文中标识： 用词不当逻辑错误语法错误修改添加 The graph provides the information concerning the average temperatures on a month basis in three major cities.(介于有两张图，都要提一下。此后可加一句：In addition, clearly demonstrated in the table are the time of sunshine on an annual base.) (补充：在下一段看到了你对于后一张图的总结，这样的话建议你在开头强调一下“the first graph”) As can be seen from the graph, there is a similar trend in terms of average monthly temperature between London and New York during the period from January to December. (可加入连接词：To be specific) The average temperature in London (介于你后面写的是两个城市的数据，这里改为：for both of the cities) gradually rises from January to July both in London and new york, reaching a peak at 25 degrees and 20 degrees respectively. After that, the following 4 months witness a dramatic decrease both in London and new york. In comparison (这里不妨分段), an opposite trend is found in Sydney. It (这是悉尼的第一句，建议写出来具体的量词至少：The temperature) keeps stable at 25 degrees from January to march, after which the average temperature undergoes a considerable descent, reaching the bottom point at approximately 15 degrees, before there is (there is 没必要了，可以去除) a steady ascent by 10 degrees. It is obvious that the table depicts the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities. As we can see from the statistics, when it comes to the total annual hours of sunshine, new york ranks first, followed by Sydney ,London lies last. Specifically, people who live in new york enjoy 2,353 hours of sunshine every year, which is similar to people living in London with 2,473 hours (不是人和人像，是时间长短像，改为：which is similar to the amount of sunshine for those in London). However, only 1,180 hours of sunshine are found in London annually. 总评6.5（TA6.5 CC6.5 LR6.5 GRA7.0） 1.语法变化上从句数量可以了，分词的使用还可以多一些。偶尔试试一到两句倒装，如我在开头给你的那个。 2.趋势等词汇变化可以，试着多换换题目话题词汇，如people=residents=citizens
作文范文之雅思小作文真题
作文范文之雅思小作文真题
雅思小作文真题 【篇一：雅思作文题目汇总】 一、教育 1、教育应该包括哪些内容？ 母题：it is generally believed that education is of vital importance to the development of individuals and the well-being of societies. what should education consist of to fulfil both these functions? (050312) 提示：本题围绕教育的两大功能来展开（个人与社会），准备好这篇文章，即可应付教育类话题中的最大分支—教育的功能，做到以不变应万变。对于社会角度，可以从促进经济发展、增加社会流动性(social mobility)、维护社会稳定这几个方面来展开，对于个人，可以写改变思维模式、有利于就业和便利生活来写。 子题：大学应当教授理论知识还是实践技能？大学的是应当把学生培养成合格的公民还是让他们自己得益？准备未来职业最好的方法是上大学还是尽快离校积累工作经验？大学要不要扩招？中学阶段应当提供通才教育还是专才教育？要不要延长义务教育年限？要不要让农村地区的学生更容易上学？老师要教学生如何判断是非吗？ 2、学校的科目谁来选择？(060916) 母题：some people think that the government should decide which subjects students should study at the university, while others think that students should be allowed to apply for the subject they prefer. discuss the two views and give your opinion. 提示：这类题目采取的策略就是“双批判”，因为题目中提供的两种选择往往都是错误的。
雅思小作文及范文汇总
101. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph below gives information about the number of visitors to three London museums between June and September 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. Test Tip Check the horizontal axis to find whether the graph refers to past, present, future or all three. We use the present simple to describe the graph: The graph shows… , We can see… If the graph refers to past period of time, we use the past simple, and if the graph includes future times, we use will or it is predicted that. Look at the line graph and complete the text with the correct forms of the verbs in brackets and the correct prepositions.
雅思宝典之写作篇
雅思宝典之写作篇 序： 本文所有资料来源于英特网上流传的免费资料和个人的经验总结，如果文章内容涉及版权问题，请告诉我。我对免费资料的内容进行了汇总整理，重新构建了文章的结构，以便于大家更好的理解。建议大家仔细阅读本文（比一些培训班的老师还强，或许读完本文后，你也能当老师了。^_^），我本人从中学习到不少经验和技巧，祝各位好运，取得好成绩别忘了通知我：Victor,E-Mail：xieyf@https://www.360docs.net/doc/aa11687475.html,。 目录： 4.0概述 (2) 4.0.1注意答题的展示 (2) 4.0.2了解问题的意思 (2) 4.0.3用三节式写作方法 (2) 4.0.4句子必须有意义 (3) 4.0.5考生常问的问题 (3) 4.1A类Task1 (3) 4.2G类Task1 (6) 4.3Task2 (6) 4.4IELTS常用词语（一） (8) 4.5IELTS常用词语（二） (9)
4.0概述 雅思作文包括两部分内容：Task1和Task2。A类和G类主要区分在Task1。A类Task1是描述一张图表。G类Task1是写一封信。Task1要求字数150。在Task2，您必须写一篇至少250字的评论或报告。因此，您必须合理分配写作时间。 4.0.1注意答题的展示 12点应注意的事情： 1） IELTS写作测验答题不用写题目，也不用重写问题在答案上方； 2）左右必须留下约一寸的间格； 3）您可用传统方法（即每段的下一行向右移一寸）或用现代方法（在段落之间留一行空行）来分段，但千万不要同时使用这种方法； 4）千万不要邻行书写； 5）应用尽每一行，由左到右的空间都应用尽，除非最后一个字太长会超过右面留空的间隔； 6）切记不要分字； 7）写大概10至12个字一行，这样可限制自己字体不会太大，字与字之间的空位也不会太大，而且数字时也比较方便； 8）用草写。草写令您的文章显得较成熟，但必须易看。正写字体显得幼稚。由于草写是一般受高深教育的西方人的写法，为留下良好的第一印象，您应采用这种写法； 9）尽量选择粗线条的原子笔和蓝色墨水。心理学来说，较粗的笔迹令人有较深的印象，而蓝色令人看得舒服和轻松； 10）如您写错字的话，划掉它重写一次便可； 11）虽然没有明文规定是否整齐会影响分数，但心理学来讲，您的文章是用来影响评分者的，因此整齐漂亮的文章会留下一个好印象； 12）标点符号绝不能用错，避免用感叹号（！）和问号（？）。 4.0.2了解问题的意思 如您不能做到以下几点，您的写作成绩不会理想： 1）用少的字数写出题目要求您写的答案。考试虽没有限定最多字数，但试卷的空间却有限； 2）直接针对问题，当您准确地认定题目后写作的时候不要偏离题目； 3）清楚您的文章是对谁写的。当您要考的是Academic Module,您的文章应用正式的格式来写。例如当 题目要求您写信给学校老师，您应用正式的格式。尽量不要用不正统的字眼，例如“etc”“and soon”等等； 4）写评分者想看到的答案，如题目要您写“your own experience”，意思是指您过去所有的知识，并非真指您的个人经验（personal experience）。如题目是叫您提出意见或建议，千万不要写得太概括、太简单和写一些人所共知的事。记着应详细和针对要点。 4.0.3用三节式写作方法 正统的文章段落句子和每一个字都可分3部分 一个字： (prefix) + stem + (suffix) 例： (un) + forget + (able) 一句基本句： subject + verb + complement 例： I + love + you
Simon雅思小作文真题范文 Task 1： 'waste table' essay
The table below shows the amount of waste production (in millions of tonnes) in six different countries over a twenty-year period. The chart compares the amounts of waste that were produced in six countries in the years 1980, 1990 and 2000. In each of these years, the US produced more waste than Ireland, Japan, Korea, Poland and Portugal combined. It is also noticeable that Korea was the only country that managed to reduce its waste output by the year 2000. Between 1980 and 2000, waste production in the US rose from 131 to 192 million tonnes, and rising trends were also seen in Japan, Poland and Portugal. Japan’s waste output increased from 28 to 53 million tonnes, while Poland and Portugal saw waste totals increase from 4 to 6.6 and from 2 to 5 million tonnes respectively. The trends for Ireland and Korea were noticeably different from those described above. In Ireland, waste production increased more than eightfold, from only 0.6 million tonnes in 1980 to 5 million tonnes in 2000. Korea, by contrast, cut its waste output by 12 million tonnes between 1990 and 2000.
雅思写作应试技巧 答案
第二節經濟原則 1. Some people are strongly against space research because they think it is an extravagant and wasteful project for developing countries. 2. Many people are struggling at the poverty line, lacking food and shelter. Why not use the limited public funds to help them alleviate poverty? 3. The primary responsibility of a government is to help its people eliminate poverty, disease and illiteracy. 4. The development of tourism creates many job opportunities and great amounts of foreign currency. 5. Play ing computer games all day lavishes parents’ hard-earned money. 6. Art funding is a luxurious practice to many developing countries. 7. Improving people’s welfare is the government’s obligation. 8. The construction of stadiums and theaters squanders the go vernment’s tight budget. 9. It is a dissipation of taxpayers’ money for the government to subsidize artists and musicians. 10. It is a luxurious dream for children in the poverty-stricken area to receive formal education. 11. Net-surfing is a costly hobby. 12. Preservation of endangered species is a great economic burden on the developing nations. 13. Hosting the Olympic Games can increase the government revenue and create more employment. 14. A private car is a luxury to many destitute families. 15. It is a laudable endeavor to help children in the impoverished area to have access to formal education. 16. Sending children to study abroad is a heavy financial burden on many families. 17. The development of space exploration lavishes the limited public funds. 18. College students’ taking part-time jobs helps ease the financial burden of their parents. 19. It is a great economic burden for a government with a tight budget to subsidize artists and drama companies, which lavishes taxpayers’ money. 20. Legalization of gambling can bring the government a great amount of foreign currency and at the same time create a considerable number of employment opportunities.
雅思小作文真题范文-Process diagram answer
题目： The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. 范文： The first diagram illustrates the process of cement manufacture, and the second diagram shows the materials that go into the production of concrete. It is clear that there are five stages in the production of cement, beginning with the input of raw materials and ending with bags of the finished product. To produce concrete, four different materials are mixed together. At the first stage in the production of cement, limestone and clay are crushed to form a powder. This powder is then mixed before it passes into a rotating heater. After heating, the resulting mixture is ground, and cement is produced. Finally, the cement is packaged in large bags. Cement is one of the four raw materials that are used in the production of concrete, along with gravel, sand and water. To be exact, concrete consists of 50% gravel, 25% sand, 15% cement and 10% water. All four materials are blended together in a rotating machine called a concrete mixer. (160 words, band 9)
剑桥英语10雅思考官范文(大作文+小作文)
剑桥英语10雅思考官范文(大作文+小作文)
剑10 1-2 It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children? One important stage in a child’s growth is certainly the development of a conscience, which is linked to the ability to tell right from wrong. This skill comes with time and good parenting, and my firm conviction is that punishment does not have much of a role to play in this. Therefore I have to disagree almost entirely with the given statement. To some extent the question depends on the age of the child. To punish a very young child is both wrong and foolish, as an infant will not understand what is happening or why he or she is being punished. Once the age of reason is reached however, a child can be rewarded for good behavior and discouraged from bad. This kind but firm approach will achieve more than harsh punishments, which might entail many negative consequences unintended by the parents. To help a child learn the difference between right and wrong, teachers and parents should firstly provide good role modelling in their own behavior. After that, if sanctions are needed, the punishment should not be of a physical nature, as that merely sends the message that it is acceptable for larger people to hit smaller ones-an outcome which may well result in the child starting to bully others. Nor should the punishment be in any way cruel.
英语考试作文-9分雅思图表写作范文全集之地图篇 学校变迁
英语考试作文 9分雅思图表写作范文全集之地图篇学校 变迁 9分雅思图表小作文范文全集之地图学校变迁The diagrams below show the site of a school in 2004 and the plan for changes to the school site in 2024. 真题传送门：2017全年雅思写作真题范文大汇总（第一时间更新） 范文集结：全部9篇9分雅思写作地图范文汇总放送 范文 The two pictures compare the layout of a school as it was in the year 2004 with a proposed site design for the year 2024. It is clear that the main change for 2024 involves the addition of a new school building. The school will then be able to accommodate a considerably larger number of students. In 2004, there were 600 pupils attending the school,
and the two school buildings were separated by a path running from the main entrance to the sports field. By 2024, it is expected that there will be 1000 pupils, and a third building will have been constructed. Furthermore, the plan is to join the two original buildings together, creating a shorter path that links the buildings only. As the third building and a second car park will be built on the site of the original sports field, a new, smaller sports field will need to be laid. A new road will also be built from the main entrance to the second car park. Finally, no changes will be made to the main entrance and original car park. (183 words, band 9)
【优质】雅思小作文真题范文：咖啡的制作-优秀word范文 (1页)
【优质】雅思小作文真题范文：咖啡的制作-优秀word范文 本文部分内容来自网络整理，本司不为其真实性负责，如有异议或侵权请及时联系，本司将立即删除！ == 本文为word格式，下载后可方便编辑和修改！ == 雅思小作文真题范文：咖啡的制作 The diagram shows the stages in the process of making chocolate . Chocolate comes from the cacao tree , which is grown in parts of South America , Africa and Indonesia . The tree produces large red pods which contain white cocoa beans . Firstly , when the pods are ripe , they are harvested , the beans are removed and they are fermented for several days in large wooden boxes . During the fermenting process , the beans turn brown . Next , the brown beans are spread in the sun to dry . They are then put in large sacks and transported by train or lorry . After this , the beans are taken to a chocolate factory where they are roasted in an oven at temperatures of between 250 and 350 degree Celsius . After being roasted , the beans are crushed and the outer shell is removed . This part is not needed for making chocolate . Finally , the inner part of the bean is pressed and liquid chocolate is produced .
雅思小作文范文-地图
The development of Chorleywood village from 1868 to 1994. 思路: 1. 严格按照时间的推进进行描述，不可以出现倒序或是插叙的情况。 2. 物体的坐标词汇应该是绝对方位词：东西南北，物体的大小词汇应该是相对单位词：较大，较小，倍数等。 3. 线段的描述应该包含两方面：方向和动作。 4. 注意使用被动句来表达客观存在。 答案： The map shows the changes and development of Chorleywood village in Great Britain over a period of 126 years from 1868 to 1994. Chronologically, during the first 15 years from 1868 to 1883, Chorleywood was merely a very small village with two crossing main roads for its all transportation. From 1883 to 1922, with the expansion to the south, a new living area took shape and almost tripled the original scale. Besides, in 1909, a railway line, parallel with the east-bound main road, was built, linking the east and west, as well as forming Chorleywood Station. During the next period between 1922 and 1970, Chorleywood extended both eastward and westward and almost doubled the previous size. The year 1970 saw another big change of Chorleywood--the establishment of a south-bound motorway as the axis, which connected east-west main road with the railway. By 1994, there emerged 5 new resident places and some entertainment including Chorleywood Park and Golf course, all of which scattered along the two sides of the newly-built traffic system.（177）
雅思小作文7分万能模板汇总
雅思小作文7分万能模板汇总 在这一雅思备考阶段，不知道雅思小作文如何观察图表，如何对比构思，尤其是一些涉及数据表达句式，可以借用雅思小作文万能模板进行练习仿写。。下面就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。 雅思小作文7分万能模板 1. as is shown/demonstrated/exhibited in thediagram/graph/chart/table... 如图所示... 2. according to the chart/figures... 根据这些表(数字)... 3. as is shown in the table... 如表格所示... 4. as can be seen from the diagram, greatchanges have taken place in... 从图中可以看出，...发生了巨大变化。 5. from the table/chart/diagram/figure, we cansee clearly that...or it is clear/apparent from the chart that... 从图表我们可以很清楚(明显)看到... 6. this is a graph which illustrates...
这个图表向我们展示了... 7. this table shows the changing proportion of a b from...to... 该表格描述了...年到...年间a与b的比例关系。 8. the graph, presented in a pie chart, showsthe general trend in... 该图以圆形图形式描述了...总的趋势。 9. this is a column chart showing... 这是个柱型图，描述了... 10. as can be seen from the graph, the two curvesshow the fluctuation of... 雅思小作文7分万能模板 1. there is not a great deal of differencebetween...and... ...与...的区别不大。 2. the graphs show a threefold increase in thenumber of... 该图表表明...的数目增长了三倍。 3. ..decreased year by year while...increasedsteadily. ...逐年减少，而...逐步上升。 4. the situation reached a peak(a high point at) of [%].
雅思写作教学计划
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老外的标准雅思小作文范文(分享)
老外写的小作文范文，比较直观~~ 第一篇 作文题目 第一篇范文参考 model answer: The two graphs show that oil was the major energy source in the USA in both 1980 and 1990 and that coal, natural gas and hydroelectric power remained in much the same proportions. On the other hand, there was a dramatic rise in nuclear power, which doubled its percentage over the ten years. Oil supplied the largest percentage of energy, although the percentage decreased from 42% in 1980 to 33% in 1990. Coal in 1990 was the second largest source of energy, increasing its proportion to 27% from 22% in the previous decade. Natural gas, the second largest source in 1980 at 26%, decreased its share very slightly to provide 25% of America’s energy ten years later. There was no change in the percentage supplied by hydroelectric power which remained at 5% of the total energy used. Nuclear power the greatest change: in 1990 it was 10%, twice that of the 1980s. (152 words)