托福写作
托福写作范文185字(实用6篇)

托福写作范文185字第1篇Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.Throughout my life, I have been lucky enough to have a very good relationship with my parents. They have supported me, given me necessary criticism, and taught me a great deal about how to live my life. Parents can be very important teachers in our lives; however, they are not always the best teachers.Parents may be too close to their children emotionally. Sometimes they can only see their children though the eyes of a protector. For example, they may limit a child's freedom in the name of safety. A teacher might see a trip to a big city as a valuable new experience. However, it might seem too dangerous to a parent.Another problem is that parents may expect their children's interests to be similar to their own. They can't seem to separate from their children in their mind. If they love science, they may try to force their child to love science too. But what if their child's true love is art, or writing, or car repair?Parents are usually eager to pass on their value to their children. But should children always believe what their parents do? Maybe different generations need different ways of thinking. When children are young, they believe that their parents are always rights. But when they get older, they realize there are other views. Sometimes parents, especially older ones, can't keep up with rapid social or technology changes. A student who has friends of all different races and backgrounds at school may find that her parents don't really understand or value the digital revolution. Sometimes kids have to find their own ways to what they believe in.The most important thing to realize is that we all have many teachers in our lives. Our parents teach us, our teachers teach us, and our peers teach us. Books and newspapers and television also teach us. All of them are valuable.#( Books and newspapers) : Books, newspapers托福写作范文185字第2篇A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.New factories often bring many good things to a community, such as jobs and increased prosperity. However, in my opinion, the benefits of having a factory are outweighed by the risks. That is why I oppose the plan to build a factory near my community.I believe that this city would be harmed by a large factory. In particular, a factory would destroy the quality of the air and water in town. Factories bring smog and pollution. In the long run, the environment will be hurt and people’s health will be affected. Having a factory is not worth that rise.Of course, more jobs will be created by the factory. Our population will grow. To accommodate more workers, more homes and stores will be needed. Do we really want this much growth, so fast? If our town is going in growth, I would prefer slow growth with good planning. I don’t want to see rows of cheaply constructed townhouses. Our quality of life must be considered.I believe that this growth will change our city too much. I love my hometown because it is a safe, small town. It is also easy to travel here. If we must expand to hold new citizens, the small-town feel will be gone. I mould miss that greatly.A factory would be helpful in some ways. However, I feel that the dangers are greater than the benefits. I cannot support a plan to build a factory here, and hope that others feel the same way.托福写作范文185字第3篇Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.The twentieth century has brought with it many advances. With those advances, human lives have changed dramatically. In some ways life is worse, but mostly it is better. Changes in food preparation methods, for example, have improved our lives greatly.The convenience of preparing food today is amazing. Even stoves have gotten too slow for us. Microwave cooking is much easier. We can press a few buttons and a meal is completely cooked in just a short time. People used to spend hours preparing an oven-cooked meal, and now they can use that time for other, better things. Plus, there are all kinds of portable, prepackaged foods we can buy. Heat them in the office microwave, and lunch at work is quick and easy.Food preparation today allows for more variety. With refrigerators and freezers, we can preserve a lot of different foods in our homes. Since technology makes cooking so much faster, people are willing to make several dishes for even a small meal. Parents are more likely to let children be picky, now that they can easily heat them up some prepackaged macaroni and cheese on the side. Needless to say, adults living in the same house may have very different eating habits as well. If they don’t want to cook a lot of different dishes, it’s common now to eat out at restaurants several times a week.Healthful eating is also easier than ever now. When people cook, they use new fat substitutes and cooking sprays to cut fat and calories. This reduces the risk of heart disease and high cholesterol. Additionally, we can buy fruits and vegetable fresh, frozen or canned. They are easy to prepare, so many of us eat more of those nutritious items daily. A hundred years ago, you couldn’t imagine the process of taking some frozen fruit and ice from the freezer, adding some low-fat yogurt from a plastic cup and some juice from a can in the refrigerator, and whipping up a low-fat smoothie in the blender!Our lifestyle is fast, but people still like good food. What new food preparation technology has given us is more choices. Today, we can prepare food that is more convenient, healthier, and of greater variety than ever before in history.托福写作范文185字第4篇MA If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.If I could change one thing about my hometown, I think it would be the fact that there's no sense of community here. People don't feel connected, they don't look out for each other, and they don't get to know their neighbors.People come and go a lot here. They change jobs frequently and move on. This means that they don't put down roots in the community. They don't join community organizations and they're not willing to get involved in trying to improve the quality of life. If someone has a petition to put in a new street light, she has a very hard time getting a lot of people to sign. They don't feel it has anything to do with them. They don't get involved in improving the schools because they don't think the quality of education is important to their lives. They don't see the connection between themselves and the rest of their community.People don't try to support others around them. They don't keep a friendly eyes on their children, or check in on older folks if they don't see them for a few days. They're not aware when people around them may be going through a hard time. For example, they may not know if a neighbor loses a loved one. There's not a lot of community support for individuals. Neighbors don't get to know each other. Again, this is because people come and go within a few years. So when neighbors go on vacation, no one is keeping an eye on their house. No one is making sure nothing suspicious is going on there, like lights in the middle of the night. When neighbors' children are cutting across someone's lawn on their bikes, there's no friendly way of casually mentioning the problem. People immediately act as if it's a major property disagreement.My hometown is a nice place to live in many ways, but it would be much nice if we had that sense of community.托福写作范文185字第5篇People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.People attend colleges or universities for a lot of different reasons. I believe that the three most common reasons are to prepare for a career, to have new experiences, and to increase their knowledge of themselves and the world around them.Career preparation is becoming more and more important to young people. For many, this is the primary reason to go to college, They know that the job market is competitive. At college, they can learn new skill for careers with a lot of opportunities. This means careers, such as information technology, that are expected to need a large workforce in the coming years. Also, students go to colleges and universities to have new experiences. This often means having the opportunity to meet people different from those in their hometowns. For mosts tudents, going to college is the first time they’ve been away from home by themselves. In additions, this is the first time they’ve had to make decisions on their own. Making these decisions increases their knowledge of themselves.Besides looking for self-knowledge, people also attend a university or college to expand their knowledge in subjects they find interesting. For many, this will be their last chance for a long time to learn about something that doesn’t relate to their career.I would recommend that people not be so focused on a career. They should go to college to have new experiences and learn about themselves and the world they live in.托福写作范文185字第6篇It has been said, “Not every thing that is learned is contained in books.” Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why?“Experience is the best teacher” is an old cliché, but I agree with it. The most important, and sometimes the hardest, lessons we learn in life come from our participation in situations. You can’ learn everything from a book.Of course, learning from books in a formal educational setting is also valuable. It’s in schools that we learn the information we need to function in our society. We learn how to speak and write and understand mathematical equations. This is all information that we need to live in our communities and earn a living.Nevertheless, I think that the most important lessons can’t be taught; they have to be experienced. No one can teach us how to get along with others or how to have self-respect. As we grow from children into teenagers, no one can teach us how to deal with peer pressure. As we leave adolescence behind and enter adult life, no one can teach us how to fall in love and get married.This shouldn’t stop us from looking for guidelines along the way. Teachers and parents are valuable sources of advice when we’re young. As we enter into new stages in our lives, the advice we receive from them is very helpful because they have already bad similar experiences. But experiencing our own triumphs and disasters is really the only way to learn how to deal with life.。
托福官方写作范文

托福官方写作范文托福官方写作范文 1As the leader of a city, what would you doto ensure the prosperity and success of the city?A. creating job opportunities for theunemployed;B. lowering food price;C. providing affordable housingIn a society changing amazingly, that how to gurantee the prosperity and success of a city, the mon target of all citizens,has always been brought under the spotlight of the massive media. When talking about which factor plays the most crucial role in ensuring city's smooth development, among creating job vacancy, lowering food price or adjusting housing price, people’s notion varies from one to another. From my perspective, providing job opportunities for the unemployed is the best choice.In the first instance, offering job vacancies to the laid-offs will not only guarantee the social security and safety but also strengthen the purchasing power of the public. For one thing, given the indisputable fact that the unemployed without any ine are likely to mit crimes such as theft of wallets or burglaries due to lack of daily necessities, it isself-evident that the greater the number of laid-offs is, the more unstable our society will bee. Therefore,after satisfying their basic needs of life with the ine from the job offered by the government, they will no longer be a threat to the stability of the whole society, which is the solid foundation for social progress and prosperity. For another, as long as citizens with jobs have more free disposable money and thus possess stronger purchasing monitory power, the various industries will be stimulated and propelled to a large extent. To be specific, with the accruing wealth, an increasing number of people will purchase a private car to mute to their office, with the result that the whole industry of automobiles will experience a booming period. The same logic can also be true of other industries and fields.Furthermore, there are obvious disadvantages of the other two policies, lowering the food price and making the price of house affordable. Despite the fact that keeping the food price low and providing affordable housing will lessen the financial burden of the dwellers in the city in a short term, these two practices would hinder the future success of the whole society. To illustrate, the low price of food will definitely decrease the ine of food producers, especially the farmers who support their family by selling what they plant and raise. As a result, they are likely to have great difficulty in making their ends meet, thus ending up being homeless or jobless. Also, in a long run, increasing housing affordability will put a damper on the citizens’ passion for creating wealth and thus decrease the dynamics of thewhole society. Specifically speaking, when the priceis so cheap that nearly everyone can afford it with ease, no one will work hard any more.In a nutshell, I am convinced that the most effective and efficient way to boom a city is to create more job opportunities for the jobless.托福官方写作范文 2Agree or disagree: students do reading by their own is as important as or more important than the reading teachers assigned.Reading is a process of procuring knowledge and the ways of reading vary for students between reading on their own and reading as told by their teachers. As for me, it will be more beneficial to read books in line with students’ wishes.For one thing, students should read what they are curious about and can find interests in, which canfind wide application among college students inparticu lar. In order to hone one’s talents and crafts with specific purpose, college students will find the more practical books to read to strengthen their petence for their future peting with other rivals in the job market. Take Steve Jobs as an example. After attending the college just for a few months, he couldn’t figure out how the college life would help him in the future except for imposing his working family enormous financial pressure.Then, he decided to drop out so he could stop taking the required classesand reading the assigned reading materials that did not interest him and began dropping in on the onesthat looked interesting. Finally, the last several months for his college life turned out to be priceless later on since he took a calligraphy class and read the relative books, the knowledge of which had been applied to produce the first puter with beautiful typography. Evidently, part of Steve Job’s acplishments can prove how essential for students to read by following their own curiosity and intuition.For another thing, students can be more absorbed in the books that they like. To be more specific, pared with the assigned papers or articles, students’ incentive can be more stimulated by reading what they like. For instance, the prevailing notion of children’s education is that they should developtheir own interests by reading what can intrigue their inquisitiveness or stimulate their imagination. Therefore, there is a voice ing out today that more freedom needs to be given to primary school students so that they can read some more interesting books like the science-fiction novels or tales and etc. Besides, too much focus on cultivating students’ academic abilities and the ignorance of developing theiroverall qualities will lead to the development of elites with less morality. Obviously, the benefits of reading books by students themselves and the detriment of just reading as assigned by teachers can tell us how important to give students’ rights to choose what they read.Admittedly, reading what teachers assigned can be of also importance. In other words, teachers will be familiar with which area students should be improved to achieve better academic performance. For instance, teachers will require students to engage in extensive reading to increas e students’ reading ability. However, it can not be the reason to regard reading as students wish as inferior because students can better improve their reading ability by being absorbed in what they like most.To conclude, students should enjoy the rights to decide what they read.托福官方写作范文 3Which do you prefer with the same rate of pay, an interesting and challenging job with less vacation or a job with more vacation time but less fun?The next two months will witness the graduation of a huge number of college students in China, triggering an urgent issue whether it is better to seek an interesting and challenging job with less vacation than finding those jobs with more vacation but less fun. From my perspective, a challenging andinteresting job matters more.For one thing, mentally challenging jobs can keep employees’ mind sharp even long after retirement. To put it more specific, even a mentally demanding job may stress workers out today; it can provide important benefits after retirement. “Base d on data spanning 18years, a study suggests certain kinds of challenging jobs have the potential to enhance and protect workers’ mental functioning in later life,” said by Gwenith Fisher, a faculty associate at the University of Michigan Institute for Social Research. Theresearch analyzed data on 4,182 participants in the U-M Health and Retirement Study, which surveys a representative sample of more than 20,000 older Americans every two years and the final result reveals people who had worked in jobs with greater mental demands were more likely to have better memoriesbefore they retired and more likely to have slower declines in memory after retiring than people who had worked in jobs with fewer mental demands. Accordingly, being engaged in a challenging and interesting jobwill benefit employees’ mental functioning.For another thing, the more challenging the job is, the higher salaries employees will be paid with. Generally speaking, a challenging job will require employees to master multiple capabilities and techniques and to undertake more responsibilities. Thus, they will be paid with high salaries, making it possible for them to do whatever stirs up their interest. For instance, one of my friends named Jason works as a top software engineer in a renewed IT pany in China and he is well paid. Besides, his hobby is photography and travel in foreign countries. On weekends or public holidays he often chooses to take photographs in different places of historic interest and scenic beauty or travel abroad. In the near twoyears, he has traveled in many countries in Europe and Southeast Asia and take a lot of beautiful pictures. Obviously, pared with average citizens in big cities who are busy in dealing with a variety of problems in daily lives, Jason’s life experience can tell us that his high-paid job gives him chances to live a more leisure life during vacation.Admittedly, if people choose to take a less-fun job with more vacation, they can spend more time with their families and doing what they like. In this way, they will live a less-pressure life. However, from what I believe, people should try their best to play to their strengths and talents on the career path especially when they are young and a challenging job will require employees to be fully devoted.。
TOEFL-WRITING-托福写作

• e.g. Where there is a will ,there is a way.
• 有压迫的地方就有反抗。 • Where there is oppression ,there is rebellion. • 有女人的地方就有商机。 • Where there are women ,there are business opportunities. • 有政府的地方就有贪污。 • Where there is a government ,there is corruption.
• Introduction:
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TOEFL iBT:The Test of English as a Foreign Language Internet Based Test.
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ETS: Educational Testing Service 美国考试服务中心
• 托福作为语言考试的本质:
• 测试考生对英语的综合应用能力——包括听、说、读、写的独立能力和综合能力 • (每个部分满分30分,总分120分);
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increase : n. / decrease
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定从
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in the last decade(s)
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significant / gradual / slight
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number / amount (修饰不可数n)
• Try :在过去的二十年中,花在食物上的钱逐渐减少了。
• In the last two decades ,there has been a gradual decrease • in the amount of money that is spent on food.
• 2.段落格式使用缩进式或者齐头式
托福独立写作开头模板(必备5篇)

托福独立写作开头模板(必备5篇)1.托福独立写作开头模板第1篇稳妥写法:先复述原题再引出观点题目:"We shape our buildings and afterwards our buildings shape ”模板:I believe this statement should be interpreted broadly—to mean that we are influenced by the exterior shape of buildings, as well as by the arrangement of multiple buildings and by a building’s various architectural and aesthetic While I doubt that buildings determine our character or basic personality traits, I agree that they can greatly influence our attitudes, moods, and even life点评:这种写法比起直接开门见山亮观点的写法来说可能更加稳妥一些,毕竟先简单复述题目再表达自己观点是托福官方指南OG中比较推荐的开头写法。
而且无论考生对题目观点是否赞同,对题目复述之后进行适当的让步再亮出观点也是一种比较委婉的表述方式。
当然这种写法需要注意不能引用太多原题,而且不能照搬需要用自己的话来适当改动一下。
这其中的度大家需要把握好,否则反而会引起一些不必要的扣分。
2.托福独立写作开头模板第2篇11、Recently, ______________ has become the focus of the society, and in this People swarm to12、______________ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day It has brought us a lot of benefits but created some serious problems as13、Man is now facing a big problem-______________, which is becoming more and more First, ______________ second,14、Nowadays more and more people are beginning to be aware of the seriousness of15、It is only during the last years that man has become generally aware that3.托福独立写作开头模板第3篇6、Everything has two sides and ______________ is not an exception, it has both advantages and7、For years ______________ had been viewed as But people are taking a fresh look at it8、It has stipulated by the government that To this stipulation, many people respond actively because9、______________ is a common occurrence in our daily Whatever we do,______________ can't be10、______________ has become a hot topic among people, especially among the young, and heated debates are right on their4.托福独立写作开头模板第4篇近三年的机经表明,托福写作的出题模式已趋向于单一且固定,即Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: 面对这样的题目,你可以有三种选择,同意,不同意,不置可否。
托福综合写作汇总

托福综合写作汇总托福综合写作可是个很有趣又有点小挑战的部分呢。
一、托福综合写作的结构。
1. 阅读部分。
在托福综合写作里呀,阅读部分是个很重要的开头。
一般会给我们一篇小短文,这个短文就像是一个知识小宝藏。
它会有个明确的观点,比如说可能是讨论某种动物的习性是天生的,然后会给出几个理由来支持这个观点。
这些理由呢,就像是小短文的骨架一样,把整个观点撑起来。
就像我们平常给小伙伴们讲一个事情,先说出自己的看法,再讲为什么这么想。
阅读部分的内容一般都比较学术,但是别怕,它不会特别难理解啦。
2. 听力部分。
接下来就是听力部分啦。
这个就像是对阅读部分的回应。
听力里的教授或者说话者呢,可能会同意或者不同意阅读中的观点。
如果不同意的话,那可就有意思了,他会一条一条地反驳阅读中的理由。
比如说阅读里说某种动物习性是天生的,听力里可能就会说其实是后天环境影响的,然后详细地说出为什么是后天环境影响的,就像是在和阅读部分进行一场小小的辩论。
这时候我们就得竖起小耳朵,仔细听清楚那些反驳的点啦。
3. 写作部分。
最后就到我们大展身手的写作部分喽。
这个时候呢,我们要把阅读和听力的内容都结合起来。
先简单概括一下阅读的观点和理由,然后再把听力中对阅读的回应,不管是同意还是反驳,都清楚地写出来。
就像是在给另外一个朋友讲述这场阅读和听力之间的小“战斗”一样。
我们要让自己的文章条理清晰,就像我们平时给朋友讲故事,也要有个先后顺序,不能东一榔头西一棒槌的。
二、托福综合写作的常见话题。
1. 生物类。
生物类话题可多啦。
像什么动物的灭绝原因呀,有些动物是因为栖息地被破坏,就像那些可爱的小熊猫,它们的竹林要是被砍了,就没地方住啦。
还有动物的行为习性,是群居还是独居,这些都可能在托福综合写作里出现。
有时候还会讨论某种新发现的生物的特征呢,就像是发现了一个神秘的小生物,然后大家来探讨它到底是怎么生存的。
2. 历史文化类。
这个话题也很有趣哦。
可能会说到古代文明的兴衰,比如说玛雅文明为什么突然消失了呢?是因为战争,还是环境变化,或者是其他神秘的原因?还有历史建筑的意义,像埃及的金字塔,它到底是仅仅作为法老的陵墓,还是有其他更神秘的用途呢?这些话题让我们感觉像是穿越回了古代,去探寻那些古老的秘密。
年托福写作真题(实用5篇)

年托福写作真题(实用5篇)1.年托福写作真题第1篇托福综合写作:主题:防止海龟减少的办法是否有用。
阅读:有3种办法防止海龟减少建立金属围栏,防止海龟蛋被素食者吃掉禁用塑料袋,海龟吃了塑料袋,消化道会被堵塞把传统渔网改成只能捕鱼而不会限制海龟的,海龟被渔网捉住,会溺水听力:上述办法都不行金属围栏会阻碍小海龟的磁场发育,海龟靠磁场导航,找食物,找配偶,找地方产卵。
没有发育好的磁场,海龟根本无法生存,繁衍。
限制塑料袋或许有用。
问题是,现在海里已经有成千上万的塑料袋了,即使分解成了小片,一样会危害海龟。
所以限塑解决不了燃眉之急。
改进的渔网,渔民会拒绝使用,因为网到的鱼会减少,收入会减少。
即使有法律规定必须使用,渔民也会趁没人使用传统渔网,回到岸上再换成改进渔网。
托福独立写作:You are helping to select a leader for a student organization or a Do you think a person's honest is the most important characteristic for being a leader?2.年托福写作真题第2篇综合Whether the three methods to stop snakeheads from spreading is Reading:The reading raises three methods to stop the spread of snakehead fish because it threatens theMaking laws to prevent people from transporting snakehead Some people in the fish market will illegally transport or release unsold snakehead Educating fishers to catch If they recognize that people actually can eat snakehead as a food source, they will catch many to eat and to Researching some poison to kill the Though poison will also kill native fishes in the river, people can restock nativeListening:The listening contradicts all methods proposed by the author of the passage and points out their potentialEven if people do not transport the snakehead, the spread will still The reason is that there are already many snakeheads, and these snakeheads will move to other rivers even without human's efforts, because they can live and move on land as long as they areEducating fishers to catch snakehead will not help stop the spread of Conversely, it may lead to the increase of Because when fishers realize they can make profit by catching snakehead, they will introduce snakehead to other water bodies and raise snakehead in order to catch more snakehead, even this isIt is true that native fishes can be restocked; however, poison will also kill some insects and micro organisms, which cannot be So, native fishes that feed on these insects and micro organisms cannot grow to their original This is独立As a student of university that has a long break between university semesters, the university requires all students to do one of the following for one month during the break:1、Students must take a course on the subject that has no direct connection to their majors of study ( For example, a student majoring in engineering may take course in fine arts or social )2、Students must volunteer to work in the university’s city or their hometowns to improve some aspects of life of the city or their own ( For example, students may help local primary school children with their ) Which one do you think is more beneficial for students in their university? Why?Given detailed examples and Use your OWN words, do NOT use memorized3.年托福写作真题第3篇托福写作字数越多分越高?关于这点,实在是众说纷纭。
托福综合写作满分范文

一:网络故事书(web-storybook service)reading网络故事书的好处网络故事书的好处可以教小朋友读书1.可以教小朋友读书经济实惠,家长不需要为孩子买书了2.经济实惠,家长不需要为孩子买书了可以代替父母陪伴孩子,为家长节省时间3.可以代替父母陪伴孩子,为家长节省时间lecture反驳反驳1.使用时不能和小朋友互动(ask question and get feedback)网络上的故事都是过时的,要想读新故事还是要买书(不足)2.网络上的故事都是过时的,要想读新故事还是要买书(不足)父母与孩子一起读书可以增进感情3.父母与孩子一起读书可以增进感情例文: The speaker rebuts the reading's argument by pointing out例文:the inadequacy of the web-storybook services' interaction with children, the incompleteness of the data pool, and by undermining the assumption that saving parents' reading time is a benefit.The speaker begins by stating that merely pronouncing the words and story for the children will not provide adequate learning experiences. Despite the time saved and pronunciation utilities laid out in the reading, the web services can only respond with "correct" or "not correct". The lack of feedback to children's questions will not create an effective learning process.Then the speaker goes on to argue that the current web-storybook services have a very limited collection of books, thus not being able to save parents the cost of new books as the reading states, because the parents still have to buy many books that the web services do not provide.Lastly, the speaker challenges the validity of the assumption of saving parents' time to read stories to children. The reading argues that saving the time is a benefit for the parents, but the speaker maintains that the whole point of reading stories is far beyond reading stories alone. In contrast, it is an essential way of communicating and building relationship between parents and children.二:药品广告(drug advertisement)提出命题:药品广告所提供的信息都是客观全面的,且病人对药物了解得越多越好提出命题:药品广告所提供的信息都是客观全面的,且病人对药物了解得越多越好1.病人可以更多了解处方药的相关信息(information)医生开药时,病人可以与广告上进行比较,有利于选药2.医生开药时,病人可以与广告上进行比较,有利于选药通过广告,病人可以了解到新药的发展,提醒医生3.通过广告,病人可以了解到新药的发展,提醒医生挑战命题:病人不需要对药物了解太多,因为有时候了解得太多会对非专业的病人产生困扰,而且广告所提供的信息也不完整全面而且广告所提供的信息也不完整全面)一笔带过,病人很难判断1.广告通常只有宣传好处,对副作用(side effects)一笔带过,病人很难判断病人对药物的准确用法用量不了解,可能会用错2.病人对药物的准确用法用量不了解,可能会用错广告只宣传新药,对旧药没有宣传,但是针对不同的病情,也许旧药更为合适3.广告只宣传新药,对旧药没有宣传,但是针对不同的病情,也许旧药更为合适The speaker raises serious counterarguments against the reading paragraphs by providing drastically different evidences regardingthe effects of the advertisement, the impact of self-selecting medication, and the impact of trends in the pharmaceutical industry.Firstly, knowing more information from the ads will not necessarily help the patients make better-informed decisions, as the reading argues. On the contrary, patients, without professional training and knowledge, will be more susceptible to misunderstanding information. For example, they would focus only on the positive sides of a certain medicine while ignoring the serious side effects.In addition, if the patients bear the responsibility of prescribing their own medication, they assume more responsibility to their own health. This makes doctors less liable for potential risks and undesirable consequences.Lastly, as for the new trends' benefits to the patients, the speaker does not challenge the reading directly. Instead, he argues that the new medicine, which will count for most of the ads may not necessarily be the best medicine, even though the patients can inform their doctors about the new products.三:网络问卷(web based survey)reading网络问卷相对传统问卷的优势网络问卷相对传统问卷的优势1.调查范围更广,所以调查结果就更为准确(逻辑错误:调查范围更广,所以调查结果就更为准确(逻辑错误:参加人多并不代表范围广,也不能参加人多并不代表范围广,也不能保证效果好)保证效果好)2.发放,填写和收集问卷更加方便简单发放,填写和收集问卷更加方便简单3.成本低成本低lecture反驳网络问卷的优势反驳网络问卷的优势1.所取得的调查结果不全面(biased ),因为不是所有人都会上网,中老年人上网会比较少,而年轻人上网比较多少,而年轻人上网比较多2.成本并不会低,因为一个好的网络问卷需要一个团队的大量工作因为一个好的网络问卷需要一个团队的大量工作(提出新的证据:(提出新的证据:网络问卷也需要成本和人力资源)卷也需要成本和人力资源)3.大多数人对网络问卷都不严肃,会得到不正确的信息,容易混淆视听。
托福综合写作19分钟

托福综合写作19分钟托福综合写作只有19分钟,听起来是不是有点紧张刺激呢?就像一场限时的冒险游戏,咱们可得好好准备,才能在这个时间里大显身手。
一、了解托福综合写作的结构。
托福综合写作主要是先读一篇文章,然后听一段相关的讲座,最后根据读到和听到的内容进行写作。
这就像是要把两个不同来源的信息巧妙地融合在一起,编织成一篇逻辑清晰、内容丰富的文章。
读文章的时候呢,要快速抓住重点。
一般文章会有一个明确的观点,然后有几个支持这个观点的理由。
咱们的小脑袋得像个超级扫描仪一样,迅速把这些关键信息都记下来。
可不能慢悠悠的,毕竟时间就是分数呀。
听讲座的时候也不简单。
你得一边听,一边把讲座里和文章相关的内容找出来。
有时候讲座是支持文章的观点,有时候可是反对的哦。
这就像在玩一个找茬游戏,只不过这个茬找出来是要用来写文章的。
二、19分钟的时间分配。
1. 前3分钟:阅读文章。
这3分钟可宝贵了。
咱们要快速浏览文章的开头、结尾和每段的第一句话,这样基本就能确定文章的主旨和结构了。
如果还有时间,就再扫一眼那些看起来像是关键论据的句子。
就像在一堆宝藏里先挑出最闪亮的几颗宝石一样。
2. 中间10分钟:听讲座并做笔记。
听讲座的时候,手可得跟上耳朵的节奏。
把讲座里的主要观点、重要论据都简单地记下来。
这时候可不要纠结于某个单词没听懂或者某个句子没记全。
就像在跑步比赛中,不能因为鞋带开了就停下来系鞋带,要一直往前冲。
而且要注意区分讲座内容和文章内容的异同之处,这可是写作的关键。
3. 最后6分钟:写作。
这6分钟就是把前面读到和听到的东西整合在一起的时候啦。
先把文章的观点和讲座的观点简单地概括一下写在开头,然后就开始对比着写论据。
可以是先写文章中的一个论据,再写讲座中对应的反驳或者支持的论据。
写的时候要注意语言的连贯性,就像把一颗颗珍珠串成一条漂亮的项链一样。
虽然时间紧,但是字还是要写清楚的哦,要是考官都看不懂你写的啥,那可就亏大了。
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写作方法无灵主语1、我感到难过一想到要再待一年The thought of spending another year makes me physically sick.2、希望有更多的城市与外国城市结为友好城市。
It is hoped that more cities will establish friendly relationship with foreign sities.3、职责所在,我不能临阵脱逃。
My duty forbids me to fly from danger.4、官方尚未作出为难民提供住房的决定。
Official decision has not been made on how the refugees should be housed.5、从过去的经验中我得到不要总是依靠别人的教训。
Past experiences has taught me not to depend on others on everything.6、中国过去20年发展很快。
The last 20 years has witnessed china’s fast development.EducationV ocabularyPoor\excellent\lackluster academic performances 学业成绩Subject ,disciplines, field of study, curriculum 课程compulsory subjects必修课optional subject 选修课major, minor, extra curricular activitiescredit, GPA, diploma, degree, bachelor, master, phDprepare\study for an exam, do well in an exam, fail\flunk an exam,pass the exam\scrape through the examcheat in an examassignment, presentation报告,project, hand in homework, experiment, research, paper lecture, seminar, group discussiongeneralist, specialistversatile, well-grounded 多才多艺的tuition, scholarship, teaching assistant, research assiatantworth learning expressionsI firmly\strongly believe 我坚信In the contrast to books 与书本相反Rely on theory and equations 依靠理论或公式One’s participation in situation 亲身参与Take place in large variety of ways 通过许多方式Seek out assistant 借助其他手段I go along with the idea that\ I am in favor of the idea that 我同意…观点Improve their efficiency of study 提高学习效率Widen one’s horizon 拓宽视野Distract to do 分心做Measure exactly 准确检测According to a recent survey 最近的调查表明International perspective 国际化视野SentenceHistories make men wise; poets witty; the mathematics subtle; natural philosophy deep; moral grave; logic and rhetoric able to contend.-------Francis BaconBooks to mankind are what memory to the individual书本对人类就像记忆对每个人具体:they contains the history of our race, the discoveries of we’ve made ,and the accumulated knowledge together with experience of age.题目体育活动对人有好处体育活动游泳跑步。
好处放松心情锻炼身体应不应该可行性利弊分析Mass mediaV ocabularyBe replete\imbued\saturate\inundated with 充斥Mainstream media 主流媒体tabloid 小报paparazzi 狗仔队Journalists, reporter , correspondent 记者Current affairs 时事Report, story, column 专栏Objective , balanced 客观的biased prejudiced 有偏见的Misleading 误导的stereotyped 呆板的discriminative 歧视的Propaganda 宣传rumor 流言scandal 丑闻Trustworthy reliable credible sound 可信的Pornography 色情violence 暴力offensive language 攻击性言语Censor 审查parental supervision 父母监管cover up 包庇Comedy tragedy cartoon animation scientific movies documentaryCast director 剧组导演producer 制片人critic 评论Plot 情节character 人物protagonist 主角hero|heroine 男女主角villain 反派Episode 集finale 剧终sequel 续集trilogy 三部曲Box office 票房block buster hit 大片Academy award , 奥斯卡golden globe 金球奖Satellite TV 卫星电视cabled TV 有线电视News program , quiz show , sitcom contest, reality show, beauty pageant , variety showCouch potato, 沙发土豆myopia, 近视obesity 肥胖Advertisement, commercial 广告False(fraudulent) advertising, 虚假广告exaggeration 夸张Endorsement, spokespersonUseful expressionsEnrich children’s knowledge and improve their academic performances增长知识提高成绩Have a character-building education on 健全。
的性格Get a temporary escape from 从。
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Deteriorate\promote the relation 恶化\促进..。
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I would choose…Endure any hardship 忍受各种困苦Be amply rewarded 得到回报Emotional development情感发展Wealth marks success 财富标志成功Give the credit to-=attribute to=due to 归因于A variety of professions 很多专业领域Fields(most often )associated with creativity (最常)与创造力相关的领域More generally 更宽泛的说Tested Questions1、do you think success is important, or it is more important to remain happy and optimisticwhen you fail?2、The expression “never never give up”means to keep trying and never stop working for yourgoals3、People who go outside are more happy and successful than those who live in villages.4、Only people who earn a lot of money are successful.5、When people succeed ,it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with it.6、Some people like to do only what they already do well. Other people prefer to try newthings .which do you prefer?7、Being creative, rather than planning carefully comes up with best solutions to a problem.8、Some high schools requires their students to wear uniforms. Other high schools permitsstudents to wear what ever they want. Which policy do you prefer?9、A person’s childhood years are the most important years of a person’s life10、要不要gap year11、to become financially responsible toLeisureTourist resorthistorical relic历史遗迹landscapePyramid of Egypt .the Colosseum of Rome in Italy 罗马斗兽场the statue of liberty 自由女神像the Eiffel tower in Paris 埃菲尔铁塔the Louvre in Paris 卢浮宫the British museum in London 大英博物馆theme parkItinerary行程表hotel reservation 酒店预订visa 签证insurance 保险airplaneeconomy\business\first class 各种仓cruiser 巡洋舰liner 游轮sleepertravel agency旅行社tour guide 导游local custom 当地习俗taboo禁忌work out gym jogging lift weights pump iron 举哑铃锻炼Tested questions1、visiting museums is the best way to learn about a country 绝对性有好处但是但是2、it is better to spend money on the traveling and vacation than saving3、playing sports teaches us lessons about life 攒rp4、出行交通工具的比较。