NOTE---专四便条WORD纠错。。有案例详解--校内资料
英语专四写作便条范文
英语专四写作便条1.邀请便条：①发出邀请发出邀请aApril 20, 2008Dear Fiona,I am going to hold a dinner party with several other friends of ours. The party will be held in Room 6 of Lijing Hotel at 5:00 p.m. today, I sincerely hope you can attend and we will have a very happy time together. Please let me know whether you can make it.Yours,Amelia发出邀请bApril 20, 2008Dear Fiona,Here is a piece of good news for you. The * will give a performance in the * tomorrow evening. I am sure that you will be happy to watch it .The performance will begin at seven o’clock sharp. I will wait for you at the theater entrance. Please let me know whether you can make it at your earliest convenience.发出邀请cApril 20, 2008Dear Professor Zhou,I am Amelia from class 052; I need you to give me some suggestion on my project. If it doesn’t trouble you too much, shall we have a meet at your office tomorrow? Time is up to you.Respectful yours,Amelia发出邀请d(通知)April 20, 2008Dear girls and boys in Class 0403,This Saturday evening, from 7 p.m. to 9 p. m., at Singeing dining hall, there will be a ball held by Class 0301. We warmly invite you to take part in it. There you can enjoy yourselves with dance, music and various g ames. And we’ll have a chance of communication, which will enhance the friendship between us. Come and enjoy ourselves together.Yours, MikeMonitor of Class 0301②接受邀请April 20, 2008Dear Amelia,It’s so kind of you to invite me to the dinner party, I wou ld like to come. I will go to the place right after I finish my work at about 5 p.m. this evening. (如果是办在家里：I shall be very happy to call at your house right after I finish my work at 6:30 this evening.) Thank you again for your wonderful hospitality and I am looking forward to seeing you soon.Yours,Fiona③拒绝邀请April 20, 2008Dear Amelia，It’s so kind of you to invite me to the dinner party, I would like to but I have a meeting to attend this evening, please give my best regards to them all and I hope my absence will not cause you any serious inconvenience, have fun.Yours, Amelia2.请假条April 20, 2008Dear Ms. Jiang,I am terribly sorry that I shall be unable to attend this morning two periods of English Class (I‘m terribly sorry to apply for ten days’ lea ve from the Aug. 23rd to Sep. 3rd)due to a bad cold and high fever. I will show you the certificate from the doctor to support my application. I will go back to school as soon as I recover.(I promise I will do my best to catch the missed lessons on after I come back.)Wish for your allowance.Yours respectfully, Amelia3.请求便条a.讲清事情的因由(为什么请求)b.请求行为c.请求实现方式d.致谢套句：请求帮助： Would you do me a favor? Would you be so kind as to…?/ Could I trouble you to send this book for me?/ If it is not too troublesome, could you…?/ I hope this request will not trouble you too much.范文：April 20，2008Dear Professor Hu,I am very happy to have the chance to listen to your lecture on “American Literature”. But it is a pity that I was late that day due to an accident on my way to the lecture and failed to get the handout. Your lecture is really instructive for my English study, so I wonder if you could kindly e-mail the handout to the address: ******************.cn.Heartfeltthanks.Respectfully yours,Amelia4.抱怨投诉便条(关键词complain, dissatisfaction)a.抱怨投诉行为b.投诉内容具体描述c.要求弥补纠正赔偿d.抱怨投诉者对弥补纠正赔偿等的敦促或威胁套句：行为描述I’m writing to bring your attention to the problems I have had with … . Here’s the problem…解决方式的要求：It would be very kind( considerate) of you to…address this problem soon. / t ake steps to rectify this situation soon. / turn it down a little?敦促或威胁: Frankly, I really can’t put up with the situation any more. You must rectify the situation, or I will take it to the court. / If you can’t give me a satisfactory answer, I will compl ain it to the Consumer Association.英文书信有正式与非正式之分，英文便条为非正式书信。
英语专业四级考试便条写作评分标准(2006)
英语专业四级考试便条写作评分标准（2006）便条满分为10 分，从格式、内容、语言以及语言得体性四方面进行评分。
2006 年英语专业四级考试的便条写作为例，其要求是：“Write a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation: You have got to know that your classmate, Michael, is organizing a weekend excursion for the class. And you are thinking of joining the trip. Write him a note expressing your interest in the excursion and ask for information on two details related to the excursion.”2001年5月专业四级考试：Write on ANSWER SHEET ONE a note ofλ about 50-60 words based on the following situation:Yesterday you failed to turn up for the appointment with your teacher, Professor Wang. Write him a note of apology and make a request for another meeting. You should also suggest the time for the requested meeting. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness.λλ2003年5月专业四级考试：Write a note of about 50 - 60 words based on the following situation: You have heard that your friend, Jack, wishes to sell his walkman. Write him a note expressing your interest in it, asking him about its condition and offering a price for it. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness.λ英语应用文写作之便条写法(03/02)λ便条是一种简单的书信。
英语专业四级考试便条写作
2. Accepting an invitation
A note of accepting an invitation a. appreciation of being invited b. his/her certainty if having a good time c. his/her assurance of being punctual, his/her apology for having to be late d. his/her offer help e. his/her looking forward to the occasion
9. The help you give me is sincerely valued. 10. I hope everything will be well with you. 11. Please let us know if you want more information. 12. I hope you always enjoy yourself. 13. I wish you every success in the coming year. 14. Please remember me to your family. 15. With best regards to your family. 16. All the best. 17. With love and good wishes.
Workshop 4 You are Kate, write a note of accepting your friend, Rebecca’s invitation to her birthday/Christmas party/housewarming party.
TEM4NOTES便条
TEM4NOTES便条专四满分便条写作冲刺SECTION B NOTE-WRITING[10MIN]⾸先仔细读题，分解内容，标出重点，特别是便条中必须完成的任务要⽤数字标出来！Write a note of about50—60 words based on the following situationYesterday you failed to turn up for the appointment with your teacher. Professor Wang. Write him 1.a note of apology and 2.make a request for another meeting. You should also 3.suggest the time for the requested meeting. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriacy.参考答案：(1.交代写便条时间)Sep.16Dear Professor,（2.按提⽰写称谓）（3内容) 1)先道歉I am deeply sorry that I missed the appointment with you because of my mistake.2)提请求I know you’re busy these days, but I wonder if you could arrange for another appointment with me because I badly need your help with my thesis.3)约时间地点）Would this Friday afternoon be OK for you? If possible, I will go to your office at two p.m. I look forward to your early reply. (4.客套话)（68 words）（5.致敬签名）Yours sincerely,John格式:⽇期、称呼和结尾三部分内容与语⾔1.注意：⾸句需⽤⾃⼰正确的语⾔表达，不要抄提⽰。
英语专业四级考试便条写作解析
Dear Jane,
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Hearing you want to subscribe an English-languge newspaper. I
• 2)假设情景、灵活处理人际关系、圆满解决实际问题。
• 语言得体内容和语言是一个统一体。内容抓住后，应以恰 当的语言来表达。一般来说，便条的语言要简单明嘹，用 词平易。当然，语言风格还应与情景一致，不同的对象， 所使用的语言应有所不同。相对来说，对上级、长者、不 熟悉的人的语言较为正式，对亲朋好友的语言则较为随便。 不过，不管对方是谁，行文中都应体现态度诚恳礼貌。
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2.称呼
April 22, 2014 Dear Professor Wang,
I’m very sorry I didn’t keep the appointment with you yesterday because of my sick roommate. As his close friend, I had to look after him the whole day. I wonder if you’d mind having another appointment with me at your office at four o’clock tomorrow afternoon.
I’m expecting your reply. Yours sincerely, George
1.日期 3.正文
5.署名
4.套语
Part I: Note-writing(便条写作） ---格式
英语专业四级便条写作训练
Note writing（便条写作）1.便条的特点及要求便条是完成介绍、预约、道歉、请求、致谢、投诉等功能的简短的书信形式。
（1）特点A.构件简单（simple）书信由7个部分组成：●发信人信息（包括地址、邮编、写信时间）●收信人信息（如果彼此熟悉，此部分可省去不写）●对收信人的称呼（后边的标点符号一般用逗号）●正文●结尾客套语（之后一定有逗号）●签名（之后一定不能有标点符号）●职务名称（若写信人不是以集体名义写的，此部分不写）而便条相对简短，仅仅由时间、对方称呼、正文、结尾客套语和签名组成。
如便条是以集体名义写的，则要添加职务名称。
（2）文体适中（casual）与书信相比，便条文体的通俗，倾向于非正式化、始终口语化的语言。
●书信中，除了和亲近的、熟悉的人交流，一般不用缩略形式，如I'm,we’re,it’s,couldn’t等。
●一般要用较为正式的、略显复杂的语言结构，即句子完整、复杂而且比较长的句子；而便条不拘泥于此。
●书信中，除了和亲近的、熟悉的人交流，一般用词较正式，如“We are greatlyhonored to write to you”;“witnessed”等；而便条中可以用比较随意的“I’m sorry;many thanks”等等。
但是，以上区别并非绝对，如在双方地位悬殊或非常陌生的情况下，便条用正式的文体也是合理的。
（3）内容凝练（precise and to the point）（4）规矩细腻●日期写法：“月日（基数词），年”法，如Sep.23,2011;或“日（序数词）月年”法，如“23rd Sep.2011”。
为避免失误，建议一般用第一种，注意“日”与“年”之间要用逗号。
月份的写法除五月（May）外，其余均可用简写形式：Jan.,Feb.,Mar.,Apr.,Aug.Sep.,Oct.,Nov.和Dec.等，但考试时写全称保险。
●称呼的写法1）对有一定社会距离、不熟悉的人：Dear Madam，Dear Sir，Dear President，Dear Mr.Smith等；2）对相识的人：Dear Shirley，Dear Smith等；3）对亲近的人或家人：Dear Mom，Dear Dad，Dear Mary等，甚至可以没有Dear一词。
专四便条写作
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Dear Hilda, There’ll be a concert in Da Huo Theter at 10 a.m. tomorrow morning by Dick Rock band. It’s very hard to get one ticket, but I happen to get two. How lucky am I! I will be very happy if you can go with me. We can have dinner together after the concert. Yours George
格式（日期，称呼，结尾）是否正确？（各占１分） 描述音乐会了吗？（２分） 提出邀请了吗？（２分） 句首是否照抄原句？（照抄扣１分） 有无严重语言错误？（酌情扣１－２分） 语言得体吗？主要考虑双方关系，在措词上是否合适？（１分） 得９分．
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格式（日期，称呼，结尾）是否正确？（各占１分） 不规范，日期，落款有错． 描述音乐会了吗？（２分） 没对音乐会做一定的描述,却浪费字数写得票不易及音乐会后安排． 提出邀请了吗？（２分） 句首是否照抄原句？（照抄扣１分） 有无严重语言错误？（酌情扣１－２分） Theter错，happen 应为happened. am I!应为 I am! 语言得体吗？主要考虑双方关系，在措词上是否合适？（１分） 得５－６分
便条写作
• • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • 题材：围绕学生日常生活中常发生的情况命题． 体裁：邀请、感谢、祝贺、道歉、请求、安慰、通知、告示等． 评分标准： １．格式： 日期（１分）． 正确写法：Saturday, April 17th【美】或 Saturday,17th April 【英】. 不用写年份。月份不要缩写。考试时最好写上日期。 正确位置：右上角． 称呼（１分）：正确写法：Dear Mike,(:)/ Mike,(:) （非正式） 位置：日期下一行左侧。 在正式便条中，如不知道对方的姓名、性别，用Dear Sir or Madam 来称呼。如对方有头 衔，如教授、博士，则在头衔后加上对方的姓，如： Dear Professor Lin. 结尾（１分）：正确写法：Yours sincerely,/ Yours, / Sincerely yours, （正式）。非正式便条 可用 Take care 或用你的（要求的）名字。 别忘了写名字，没署名的便条是没用的。人名 用XXX 或汉字扣０．５分。位置：正文下 面空一到两行左、右侧． 注：不符合上述正确格式或表达者，错一部分扣０．５分。错两部分以上扣1分。没有格式扣1分。
英语专业四级写作便条(样例)
apology
April 14, 2003 Dear Miss Nancy,
Much to my regret I was unable to keep my promise to attend your birthday party last Saturday, owing to the fact that my little son was suddenly taken ill early that day.
Grading specifications - Format: 3 points - Content: 6 points
* Purpose * Organization * More or less words: deduce 1 point * Grammar, spelling errors: 3=1 point
1. Apologize for failure to turn up for the appointment 2. The reason for failure to turn up 3. Make a request for another meeting 4. Suggest the time for the requested meeting
apology
April 14, 2010 Dear Victoria,
I was surprised not seeing you at my party yesterday until I terribly realized that I forgot to invite you. I am really sorry, Victoria. I planned to invite you when I borrowed your cook yesterday morning. However, you know, I saw you were really busy answering the phone from your mother at the time, so I forgot to invite you. Please accept my apology, Victoria. I hope that you can come to my home tomorrow afternoon and we can have tea together.
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Note writing 1May 5th, 2012 Dear Jason,I will throw a party at 5:00pm next Monday in Holiday Inn. I hope you can join the party on time. At the party, there are many interesting performances and delicious food. So I think you will be satisfied with the paty. See you then.Your sincerely,一定是Yours sincerely,TomWriting 2May 5th, 2012 Dear Mrs. Katy,I am sorry for being late for class yesterday. I had a stomachache yesterday morning. And I had to see a doctor. I went to school with the fastest speed.前后原因说明比较让人困惑,能否编一个别的理由? But I was late at last. I hope you can forgive me. I will not be late again.Your sincerely,TomWriting 3May 5th, 2012 Dear Mike,记住,首先要感谢对方的邀请. I am sorry. I can't attend the party. I would really like to join the party but I have to pick up my grandpa at the airport at 6pm next Monday How I wish I could come. Have a good time!Your sincerely,TomWriting 4May 5th, 2012 Dear Professor Wang, 这类的申请一般都先说自己在哪里得到一个什么信息, 自己很感兴趣.I am a university student. I want to get the part-time job. I am interested in English very much. And I have a passion for teaching others. I think I can do my job well. You can post a letter to tell me your decision. Thanks for you reading my application letter.你所列举的不足以证明你是合适的人选.Your sincerely,TomWriting 5May 5th, 2012 Dear Mr. Johnson,I am sorry to trouble you. I know you are engaged. 这两句话非常像我们中国人的语气. 不合适,应该直截了当说明你想做什么. But I want to ask you some advice about my graduate essay.So I hope we can make an appointment when you have the time. 如何预约阿? 请参见前几天QQ 上的改动.You can decide time and place. Then you can tell me your arrangement by mail.非常不合适的表达!!Thanks very much.Your sincerely,TomOn Aiding StrangersToday, more and more people want to aid strangers.As the society advances, many people have a very good life. Many people are very rich. And they have earned money more than they need. Nonetheless in the other side of society, many poor people who live in mountain village or poor family don't have enough money to go to school. Even some people have a serious illness, but a lack of money for the treatment lead them to death.This imbalance situation has been realized. Many kind-hearted people want to help others who need to help. People are active to do charity without paying back. Even Many people do a lot of charity without giving their name. So as we know, after Wenchuan earthquake many volunteers went to there and gave a hand to strangers. Many kind people donated necessities and food to homeless people. And some people take care of orphan who lost their parents in the earthquake.When any people need help we should do our best whether they are strangers. Maybe one day we fall in trouble too. As well as strangers will give a hand to us.作文字数偏少; 最重要的是, 没有显出是一篇议论文,观点不明, 论述中间单句过多, 无法拿高分。
1.May 5th, 2011Dear Mike,I’m glad to be invited to the party at 6:00 pm next Monday.线表示感谢。
It 这个情态动词不恰当may be a wonderful party. However, I will not have time that day because I’ll meet my grandpa at the airport. So, I’m sorry that I can’t take part in the party that day.I hope we can have great time next time.Yours,Alan2.May 5th, 2011Dear Professor Wang,I’m Alan. I heard that you want to hire a part-time teacher for English training on summer vacation. I want to apply for the job. English is my major in university, and I 这里主语变换过于频繁，能否保持一个主语？have some experience of teaching English.Now, I hope you can give me the chance.Yours sincerely,Alan3.May 5th, 2011Dear Mr. Johnson,I have finished my graduate essay, but I still have some problems with it, and I wantto ask you for some advice. I’d like to make an appointment with you. What about next Friday at Central Park? 约老师到公园似乎不大好。
I’m looking forward to your coming.？？？your reply.Yours sincerely,Alan4.May 5th, 2011Dear Jason,I’d like to invite you to a party next Monday. It will be held at 5:00 pm in Holiday Inn.There will be a lot of delicious food, and you can meet some old friends at the party. I’ll be glad if you can come. Hope you will have a good time there.着一篇不错！！Yours sincerely,Alan5.May 5th , 2011Dear Mrs. Katy,I’m sorry for being late for your class yesterday. it’s not good to raise such habit.???But there is something wrong with my clock yesterday, because it did not ring at 7:00 am.前面半句句子太简单，不得分。
这个解释跟你迟到之间的关系？？原因没有讲清楚。
My alarm clock got broken and it did not ring at all at 7 a.m.. As a result, …..I am so sorry and I promise that I will not be late for class next time.Yours sincerely,AlanNote 1April 21st, 2012Dear Mike,Thank you for your invitation to the party. I was so glad to receive it and would like to join you . However, the time clashes with my grandpa’s arrival, and I 改为同一个主语have to pick them up at the airport then. I’m very sorry to miss it.Hope you enjoy yourself at the party!Yours sincerely,ShineNote 2April 21st, 2012Dear Professor Wang,I hear that there’s a vacancy for part-time teacher in the English training center. I’d like to apply for that position because 不是因为你是英语专业学生，你就想申请，两者没有因果关系I’ve been an English major student for 2 years and I once worked as a governess for 2 terms. I do hope to have the opportunity to improve myself and make my summer vacation more meaningful 没有意义的话，请参见昨天的QQ 留言。