湖南高考英语作文分析

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To my surprise, my math teacher praised me for my courage before my classmates. What an unforgettable day it was!
Teachers’ praise gave me the strength to solve other problems. As a matter of fact, we teenagers all want to obtain teacher’ s praise in class. As far as I’m concerned, teachers should praise students in class more often.
I can never forget that day, It was in the math class, our math teacher make a question on the blackboard, hoping us who could answer, a few minutes gone, my classmates still very quiet.
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At this moment, I lifted my right hand slowly and said, “ Let me try.” I announced my answer, but it was wrong. Then all the classmates laughed at me, my face got red immediately.
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Not only teachers should praise students, but also parents should praise children, which shows that parents pay great attention to their children and children will be pleased.
• 2015年湖南高考作文
Directions: Write an English composition
according to the instructions given below. 请以 老师当众表。 扬你为话题，用下面所给的句子开 头，续写一篇英语短文。
As a student, I can tell you that there is nothing better than being praised by my teacher before my classmates.
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So teachers should praise students more often but properly, because some other research state that being over- praised will make students satisfied with their present achievement and unwilling to go further.
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中间段是整篇作文的重头戏，考生 在写作时要注意以下三点。第一， 不管是故事描述类还是现象评论类， 首先要对整个受表扬有一个大致的 描述，交代经历发生的时间、地点 等。
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书写时要注意句与句的连贯性，以增 强中间紧凑性。高考英语作文轻内容 而重语言，所以大家不需要费尽心思 去写一个结局出人意料的故事。真正 需要斟酌的地方在于语言，灵活运用 各种词汇和句型才是得分法宝。
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3）准确而快速定档法：先确定“切题” 层次，再依“表达水平”（主要看语言 谋篇布局）定档次，并给分。
4）例如：根据“思想内容”判断短文 “充分切题，再依据“表达水平”，确 定是“一档”还是“二档”，并给分。
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2. 审题谋篇
高考作文三段式的结构对大家来说是再 熟悉不过了。开头段抄上去就可得1分， 相反，写表扬的缺点只能是四档或五档。 作文可以写表扬的过程，结果或影响都 行，可以是记叙文，也可写议论文。
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结尾段
结尾段归纳总结老师的表扬给你的 好处”。这一段不需要大篇幅的铺 陈，完全可以套用常用的句型 （Only by…can somebody…/In a word, As far as I’m concerned …..)
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As a student, I can tell you that there is nothing better than being praised by my teacher before my classmates.
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As a student, I can tell you that there is nothing better than being praised by my teacher before my classmates.
It makes me feel proud of me and gives me the motivation to study harder. Actually, research shows that being praised can give one confidence and inspiration and one will be eager to perform better.
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Hale Waihona Puke 24To be concluded, either teachers or parents should praise students and children in an appropriate way and only in this way can students and children feel that they are valued and paid attention to, and then they will be more confident ones!.
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注意： 1. 将所有句子写在答题卡上； 2. 续写词数不少于120个； 3. 不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
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高考如何阅卷？
1）切题，即短文思想内容切合“老师当众表 扬你”这个主题。
2）根据评分标准，切题有“充分切题”（一、 二档）、“基本切题”（三、四档）、“略微 切题”（五档）三个层次。