IELTS 8分作文

You should spend no more than 40 minutes on this task.As part of a class assignment you have to write about6 the following topic.In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nerses to look after them. Sometimes the fovernment has to pay for this vare.Who shoukd be responsible for old people?Give reasons(argument) for your answer.You should write at least 250 wors.One of the most chanlleging problems of today’s society is the question who should be responsible for our old people. It’s not only a financial problem but also a question of the system we want our society to have. In my essay I would like ti four different models.Firstly, the company can be responsible for their reiired employees. For this reason a special fund could be established. The advantage of this model is, if you belief in the capitalist system, tha tit should be the cheapest solution. A possible problem is that the companies might have vomprtition disadvantage due to higher staff cases.A second solution is that the government has to tale the responsibility for the old people’s care. It can finance this with its tax incomes. Actually, this is the most democratic midel since everybody gets as much money as he or she needs. Unfortunately, as the present situation in our country shows, this solution seems not to work very well. The government can no longer afford suporting all the old peoples.Another way of solving this problem is to give back the responsibility to the individual. That means that everybody has to save money during their working life for the live after their retirement. This seems to be not a very fair model because their will certainly exist people who can’t afford to save part of their aslary. In this case the government would have to care for them.A last solution is to go back to the old model of the“big family”who cares for all their members.I don’t think this is possible in our days society because the family structures have so much changed.T o sum up I have to admitt that I can’t find a really good solution for ths problem. All models have advantages and disadvantages. Certainly we have to thind about ths topic much more in the future.共21个句子：第一段3句，第二段4句，第三段5句，第四段4句，第五段2句，第六段3句，317个错误（不影响理解）8分。

最后一段较诚实。

There have been two controversial issues about using computers in modern times. One issue states that using computers makes everyday life more（much）easier and it must be widly used. Antouer(another) issue, in contrast to the first one, believes that computers has many disadvantages and therefore it should not be used at all. It is a matter of choice, to choose first issue or the second one.（主题句）Those who support using computers in veryday life usually mention the benefits of computers on job, or at home or maybe as consumers.（主题句）For example, on the job, we usually do our work much more faster if we use a computer: at home we cancontact library or many other resources area that we need to get information by using computer and also consumers can use computer inorder to do their woek faster. Therefore it is useful to use computer widly(widely) around the world.Another issue proclaims that using computer causes loss of jobs for many people and also losing the privacy of individuals. These machines can do multi jobs at the same time without any need for people to help. Losing provacy is another main inportant diadvantage. Because(For) any professional person in using computers may easily reach the personal information of the individuals due to lack of security system. In vonclusion it is necessary to use computer and do something about it’s disadvantages. I do believe that, as the time passes, the technology of computers can reach to a point to overcomes to it’s deficiencies and solve thos e problems thatmentioned so far.263个词：14/16句；23个错误，可数名词要么用复数，要么用限定词可以写成：第一段4/5句：第二段3/4/5句：第三段4句：第四段2句；Writing TaskThe dominance of black people in US sport is due to sociological rather than physiological factors. Discuss.EXAMPLE:Since World WarⅡ popular American sports such as Baseball, Basketball and Field and Track have seen the qualitative and quantitative dominance of black (Arro-America) athletes. The purpose of this essay is to examine the relative importance of the sociologicaland physiological factors which have contributed to this phenimenon. It will be argued that, despite some tentative evidence of physiological differences, the factors which determine black pre-eminence in sport are primarilysociological.（简短3~5句）It is a fact of life that the development of science and technology has been accompanied by a decline in traditional culture. In my opinion, this is not necessarily a bad thing, because some aspects of tradition culture hamper progress an d should be abandoned Moreover, it is natural that people should want ot find new ways of doing things.In the first place, science and technology have cleared up many matters that were mysterious to us in the past. For instance, we now know that thunder and lightning are not caused by gods being angry, but are normal natural phenomena. As a result, a large number of harmful superstitions have disappeared, and nobody regrets their passing.In the second place, our everyday lives have been made more convenint by scientific and technological inventions. Nowadays electric lights have replaced the traditional oil lamps, and computers enable us to make quicker and more accurate calculations. Even more inportant is the fact that televion brings the family together in evening.(高度提炼的例证)In the third place, science and technology actually help to preserve the useful and pleasant parts of traditional culture. Take the celebration of the Chinese Lantern Festival for example. Lanterns are now designed with modern technology and materials to make them more attractive, and they are powered by electricity, which is safer than candles.Therefore, for the above reasons, I welcome the development of science and technology. Advances in science and technology have brought us many benefits. At the same time, they have eliminated the bad parts of traditional culture while preserving the good parts.It is an undeniable fact that scientific and technological developments bring raeat benefits to people. Especially since the Industrial Revolution took place, our lives have been made much more conveninent by inventions such as trains, airplanes and computers. But I think that the loss of our traditional culture is too high a price to pay for this.In the first place, our culture has formed the customs and valuse of our people for centuries. We must let our culture guide us in our everyday lives, and not allow machines to make our decisions for us. A comfortable but spiritually empty life, without the traditional bonds of kinship and friendship would not be worth living.(议论发挥)Secondly, it is obvious that people are anxious to preserve their culture. For instance, Chinese people who use computers and cars during the day sit down to watch Peking opera and eat traditional food in the evening. Especially when people move to other countries they become homesick and form national culture societies.（例证）Last but not least, we should make science and technology serve traditional culture. This can be done by making festivals and other cultural occasions more widely known, using radio and television. In addition, we should strengthen our family ties by using the latest developments in telecommunications, such as email. (by giving additional details—支持主题句)In conclusion, I think we should never allow science and technology to dazzle our eyes so that we lose sight of our cultural values. On the contrary, we should use the discoveries of science and technology to reinforce our fine cultural traditions. The result will be that our lives will be materially and spirtually balanced. Accommodation for Foregn StudentsIntroduction:Problem: 1: Limited on-campus accomodation, most students required to find houses and flats off campus.Problem;2: Rents generally very high, difficult ot find cheap and desirable accommodationProblem; 3: Proberty often unfurnished, diffcult ot find cheap furniturerecommendations.Recommendations;1.apply early for on-campus accommodation2.find a group to share costs with conclusion3.For example;见笔记More than three decades ago, man for the firdt time det foot the moon. Some people think that space research is a waste of energy and money. Discuss.In the thirty years since man set foot on the moon controvercy has beenThe graph shows the percentage of audiences over 4 yes old of UK follows（语法错误）the radio and television throughout the day during the period October-December 1992. It has been observed from the graph that less than 10% audiences follows the radio at 6:00 am and the percentage raised to a pick around 30% at 8’Am and decline gra dually to around 10% during the period 2’00 to 4’00 pm and again raised a bit to around 12% between 4’00 to 6’00 Pm. It hen again dropped to below 10% at around 10 Pm. The rate again raised to a bit between 10’00 Pm to 12’00 Pm and then dropped slowly by 4’00 Pm. On the other hand, the rate of television audience raises 0-10% during the period 6’00 to 8’00 am and remain steady up to 10’Am and then gradually goes down by 12’00 noon. The percentage raised dramatically goes down by 12’00 noon. The precentage r aised dramatically to around 15% by 2’00 Pm which again raised to a pick above 40% between 6’00-8’00 Pm and then gradually dropped between the period 12’00 Pm to 4’00 Am. （6分开头写得比较成功，简单的对照对比，容易阅读。