如何写好高中英语作文课件.ppt
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a result of, for the reason that 让步关系： though, although, even if, even though,
in spite of the fact that
递进关系：what’s more, in addition, furthermore
on the one hand …on the other hand, 条件关系：if, unless, as long as, on condition that …
flowers are many buildings of different
styles. A stream runs through our
school and you always see everything
reflected in the water. Our school is
just like a garden.
Topic paragraph Supporting Paragraph 1 Supporting Paragraph 2 Supporting Paragraph 3
Concluding paragraph
2020/12/12
3
Topic paragraph (Introduction paragraph) General statement
2020/12/12
10
正确使用有关连接词
时间先后：first, then, later, in the end, eventually,
since then, after a while 转折关系：but, however, on the contrary, nevertheless
人教高三英语 如何写一篇出彩的作文PPT优秀课件
人教高三英语 如何写一篇出彩的作文PPT优秀课件
人教高三英语 如何写一篇出彩的作文PPT优秀课件
学生作品
To increase our knowledge about the environment and improve our spoken English, the Students’ Union is going to organize an English-speaking contest, the theme of which is: “Protect our environment and save our energy”. The contest will be held in the Lecture Hall on the 5th floor in the classroom building from 4:00 p.m. to 5:30 p.m., on Friday June 5th.
人教高三英语 如何写一篇出彩的作文PPT优秀课件
人教高三英语 如何写一篇出彩的作文PPT优秀课件
写作基本步骤
How to write an excellent composition Five steps to write a composition（五步走
） 1. 仔细审题，列举大纲。 2．围绕要点，写出句子。 3. 添加过度，确保连贯。 4. 先求正确，再求灵活。 5. 认真眷写，卷面整洁。
人教高三英语 如何写一篇出彩的作文PPT优秀课件
人教高三英语 如何写一篇出彩的作文PPT优秀课件
Step 2.
Reflection 思
15 '
1.思考两个问题 培养总结归纳能力
2现场作文 (学以致用，直奔高考)
高考英语写作技巧(63张PPT)
有效地使 用了语句 间的连接 成分
上下文的连贯； 语言的得体性
语言地道， 规范
3、拼写和标点是语言 准确性的一个方面， 评分时，应视其对交 际的影响程度予以考 虑。
4、词数少于100和多于 140的，从总分中减去2 分。
5、如书写较差，以至影 响交际，将分数降低一 个档次。
Which composition feels more attractive, why?
4.The students there needn’t pay for their books. Books are free for the students there.
5. As a result the plan was a failure. The plan turned out to be a failure.
6、 定语从句 In my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place
where we can find much useful information.
Let’s come to the main teaching building, at the back of which stands the school library.
2.We all think he is a great man. We all think highly of him .
3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea. A good idea occurred to me. / A good idea suddenly struck me.
7、 各种名词性从句 That’s what I should do. We should do a favor to whoever needs help
写作如何写好高中英语作文English writingPPT课件
• If you come, you can choose three of the following four courses: Spoken English, English Writing, Britain Today and American Today. Meanwhile, you need to work 10 hours a week. Besides/In addition, you can also work as an advisor to our students’ English club or our school’s English newspaper.
从句非谓语动词终极篇
• Dear Tom,
• Having been informed that you were fond of working in China, I will share a piece of good news with you. Our school will employ a foreign teacher to teach some courses to senior high students. You can have a try.
Having been informed that you were fond of working in China, I will share a piece of good news with you. Our school will employ a foreign teacher to teach some courses to senior high students. You can have a try.
• Please let me know in advance if you are interested and if you have any other questions. I’d be more than happy to help. I’m looking forward to your reply.
从句非谓语动词终极篇
• Dear Tom,
• Having been informed that you were fond of working in China, I will share a piece of good news with you. Our school will employ a foreign teacher to teach some courses to senior high students. You can have a try.
Having been informed that you were fond of working in China, I will share a piece of good news with you. Our school will employ a foreign teacher to teach some courses to senior high students. You can have a try.
• Please let me know in advance if you are interested and if you have any other questions. I’d be more than happy to help. I’m looking forward to your reply.
高考英语作文 写一篇出彩的作文技巧课件 (共51张PPT)
Step 5: Evaluation(评） Step 6: Checking（检）
学情 教材 教学 重点 教学 教学 板书 分析 分析 目标 难点 策略 过程 设计
Learning procedure
3'
Step 1.
Leading in 导入
1.看书法 （培养审美观）
2.听英语 （树立正确价值取向）
• Emotional Encouragement（情感激励法）
润物细无声
学情 教材 教学 重点 教学 教学 板书 分析 分析 目标 难点 策略 过程 设计
My Teaching Strategy
Step 1: Leading in (导 ) Step 2: Reflection (思) Step 3: Discussion (议) Step 4: Showing (展)
思考，自主学习的能力，体现了由现 象到本质，深入钻研的思维过程。
Step 3.
Discussion( 议)
4'
小组讨论 保证每个成员的积极 参与
合作学习 构建完整学习框架
设计意图
• 这样发挥了生生间的相互交流，协作功能 ，挖掘了个体学习潜能，并且会达到1+1大 于2的学习效果。在小组讨论的过程中，各 个层次的的学生都会有所收获，优等生在 帮助他人的同时，也使自己的知识条理化 ，逻辑思维得到培养;中等生如鱼得水，在 他人启发下，跳一跳摘到了“桃子”;学困生 有了更多发问的机会，觉得这节课会更接 地气。
教材 学情 教学 重点 教学 教学 板书 分析 分析 目标 难点 策略 过程 设计
Analysis 情 教学 重点 教学 教学 板书 分析 分析 目标 难点 策略 过程 设计
Analysis of students :学生的心声
学情 教材 教学 重点 教学 教学 板书 分析 分析 目标 难点 策略 过程 设计
Learning procedure
3'
Step 1.
Leading in 导入
1.看书法 （培养审美观）
2.听英语 （树立正确价值取向）
• Emotional Encouragement（情感激励法）
润物细无声
学情 教材 教学 重点 教学 教学 板书 分析 分析 目标 难点 策略 过程 设计
My Teaching Strategy
Step 1: Leading in (导 ) Step 2: Reflection (思) Step 3: Discussion (议) Step 4: Showing (展)
思考，自主学习的能力，体现了由现 象到本质，深入钻研的思维过程。
Step 3.
Discussion( 议)
4'
小组讨论 保证每个成员的积极 参与
合作学习 构建完整学习框架
设计意图
• 这样发挥了生生间的相互交流，协作功能 ，挖掘了个体学习潜能，并且会达到1+1大 于2的学习效果。在小组讨论的过程中，各 个层次的的学生都会有所收获，优等生在 帮助他人的同时，也使自己的知识条理化 ，逻辑思维得到培养;中等生如鱼得水，在 他人启发下，跳一跳摘到了“桃子”;学困生 有了更多发问的机会，觉得这节课会更接 地气。
教材 学情 教学 重点 教学 教学 板书 分析 分析 目标 难点 策略 过程 设计
Analysis 情 教学 重点 教学 教学 板书 分析 分析 目标 难点 策略 过程 设计
Analysis of students :学生的心声
怎样写好英语作文课件(共36张PPT)【优秀课件】
注意:可以补充若干理由,不要仅仅 翻译以上各点.
词数:100左右
怎样写好英语作文课件（共36张PPT） 【优秀 课件】
怎样写好英语作文课件（共36张PPT） 【优秀 课件】
怎样写好英语作文课件（共36张PPT） 【优秀 课件】
练习
某英语杂志社 “家长之友”栏目 要举办一次征文比赛,要求围绕
“You can lead a horse to water, but you can’t make it drink.”这 一主题发表意见. 请根据下列提示 写一篇文章.
怎样写好英语作文课件（共36张PPT） 【优秀 课件】
怎样写好英语作文课件（共36张PPT） 【优秀 课件】
They spare no effort to offer their children as good a chance as possible: They not only send them abroad for further education and to private schools at great expenses, but also hire personal teachers. They buy all kinds of learning materials, computers and so on.
怎样写好英语作文课件（共36张PPT） 【优秀 课件】
怎样写好英语作文课件（共36张PPT） 【优秀 课件】
三.过渡词.
1. first, second, third, in addition, and…
2. immediately , when, later, before, after …
3. beside, beyond, behind, below, inside…
词数:100左右
怎样写好英语作文课件（共36张PPT） 【优秀 课件】
怎样写好英语作文课件（共36张PPT） 【优秀 课件】
怎样写好英语作文课件（共36张PPT） 【优秀 课件】
练习
某英语杂志社 “家长之友”栏目 要举办一次征文比赛,要求围绕
“You can lead a horse to water, but you can’t make it drink.”这 一主题发表意见. 请根据下列提示 写一篇文章.
怎样写好英语作文课件（共36张PPT） 【优秀 课件】
怎样写好英语作文课件（共36张PPT） 【优秀 课件】
They spare no effort to offer their children as good a chance as possible: They not only send them abroad for further education and to private schools at great expenses, but also hire personal teachers. They buy all kinds of learning materials, computers and so on.
怎样写好英语作文课件（共36张PPT） 【优秀 课件】
怎样写好英语作文课件（共36张PPT） 【优秀 课件】
三.过渡词.
1. first, second, third, in addition, and…
2. immediately , when, later, before, after …
3. beside, beyond, behind, below, inside…
河南省鹤壁高中人教版高中英语复习课件：如何写好作文(共60张PPT)
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书面表达题的“版”法 三段或四段体，切忌一段到底。每段开头 缩进。不可超格、超框。“版”的核心就 是要让文章看上去像文章！
书面表达题的“式 ”法 文章无乱涂乱画现象，整洁爽目。修改的 地方应该尽量不留明显痕迹。写作一定要 有从草稿到誊正的过程。
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第一，单词硬伤。 第二，语法硬伤。 第三，卷面硬伤。
工整的字体，干净整洁的卷面是所有英语满分作文的必备 特征。
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高考英语书面表达高分写作技巧公开课教学课件(共25张PPT)
二、忌次序混乱，连接词单一或缺乏
审完题后，不少考生虽已知道了要写的内容，却不能合 理地组织所给的材料，东一句、西一句，写得支离破碎， 文理不通，让人不知所云。考生最好能迅速地列出要点， 在这个过程中，要考虑一下先写什么，后写什么，句与句 之间，不得逐字或逐条翻译。 段与段之间最好能使用一些能清晰表达逻辑结构的连 接词或句子，如first of all , above all , secondly , next , in fact,besides, in a word , at last , the most important point is that…等等，使文章过渡自然、流畅，做到前后连贯、 层次分明、有条不紊。
注意：不能不 用，且不能少 用，但也不能 滥用。
一、怎样使用较高级的词汇
1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable. Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable. 2.We all think he is a great man. We all think highly of him . 3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea. A good idea occurred to me. / A good idea suddenly struck me.
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六、忌充分自信、不回查
写出来的东西，很可能有不正确、不恰当的 地方，因此，在答完卷时，至少应从以下几个方 面认真检查：（1）对照题目要求，看全部要点是 否都已包括进去，有无遗漏或误解；（2）文体格 式是否正确规范；（3）词语使用是否合适、正确， 有无语法与用词上的错误， 表达是否符合英语表 达习惯；（4）单词拼写、字母大小写有无错误， 标点符号有无遗漏或用错等等。 一句话，对书面表达应尽量做到：不跑题，不 漏点，语言精简合习惯，灵活表达要规范，书法 整齐词有限。
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举办一 次征文比赛,要求围绕 “You can lead a horse to water, but you can’t make it drink.”这一 主题发表意见. 请根据下列提示写一篇文章.
内容提示: 许多家长望子成龙,不惜重金送孩子上私
立学校,到国外留学,请家教,给他们买大量的 资料,电脑等,但往往这些都…… 注意事项:
Go into the park. Go forward. Cross the street. Turn right. →After you enter the park by the main gate, walk straight till you come to a stream. Cross the stream and turn right.
作文: 1.记叙文
2.说明文
3.议论文
英语写作多数为指导性写作或称: 半命题写作，也就是说，是先给一定的材
料，然后让学生依据所给的材料按要求作文。 方法：组写、缩写、扩写、
改写、 或看图作文等。
一.写好句子
1.句子要正确：
1).Do you know where is the People’s Park ?
《如何写好高中 英语作文》
陕西省府谷中学 郭渊
How to Write a Composition ?
如何写好英语作文呢?
一.写好句子 1、句子要正确。
2、句子要平行。 3、句子要连贯。 4、句子要有逻辑性。 5、句子要避免过多重复。 6、句子要避免头重脚轻。 7、句子要避免汉式英语。
二.写好段落 三.用好过渡词 四.写好开头和结尾
This proves the meaning of the saying “You can lead a horse to water, but you can’t make it drink.” That is to say, you can give someone all the opportunities for success, but you can’t make every person successful.
listening to popular music.
→In my spare time, I enjoy swimming, skating……
→In my spare time, I’m fond of swimming,……
→In my spare time, my hobbies are swimming, skating……
4.句子要有逻辑性
I’m very interested in computer and won first prize last year.
→I was very interested in computer and won first prize last year.
5.句子要避免过多重复.
You will continue to walk. You’ll see a hill. You will go around the hill. You’ll get to a lake.
They spare no effort to offer their children as good a chance as possible: They not only send them abroad for further education and to private schools at great expenses, but also hire personal teachers. They buy all
→After walking for a while, you’ll come to a hill, walk round to the other side of the hill. There you’ll see a lake.
6.句子要避免头重脚轻
Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry and computer are the main subjects.
2.句子要平行
In my spare time, I enjoy popular music and collecting stamps. →In my spare time, I enjoy listening to popular music and collecting stamps.
3.句子要连贯
投稿人应提示内容,表明自己的观点:
Nowadays, knowledge is becoming more and more important with the development of society, so many parents expect the children to be useful or successful.
→The main subjects are Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry and computer.
7.句子要避免汉式英语 My spare lovers are swimming, skating, collecting stamps and
Kinds of learning materials, computers and so on. But no matter what their parents do for the children, what becomes of the children ? Some of them really make it, but most of them want to enjoy and relax themselves and at last they are really disappointing.
→Do you know where the People’s Park is?
2). There are many visitors enjoy the dish.
→Many visitors enjoy the dish.
→There are many visitors who enjoy the dish.
内容提示: 许多家长望子成龙,不惜重金送孩子上私
立学校,到国外留学,请家教,给他们买大量的 资料,电脑等,但往往这些都…… 注意事项:
Go into the park. Go forward. Cross the street. Turn right. →After you enter the park by the main gate, walk straight till you come to a stream. Cross the stream and turn right.
作文: 1.记叙文
2.说明文
3.议论文
英语写作多数为指导性写作或称: 半命题写作，也就是说，是先给一定的材
料，然后让学生依据所给的材料按要求作文。 方法：组写、缩写、扩写、
改写、 或看图作文等。
一.写好句子
1.句子要正确：
1).Do you know where is the People’s Park ?
《如何写好高中 英语作文》
陕西省府谷中学 郭渊
How to Write a Composition ?
如何写好英语作文呢?
一.写好句子 1、句子要正确。
2、句子要平行。 3、句子要连贯。 4、句子要有逻辑性。 5、句子要避免过多重复。 6、句子要避免头重脚轻。 7、句子要避免汉式英语。
二.写好段落 三.用好过渡词 四.写好开头和结尾
This proves the meaning of the saying “You can lead a horse to water, but you can’t make it drink.” That is to say, you can give someone all the opportunities for success, but you can’t make every person successful.
listening to popular music.
→In my spare time, I enjoy swimming, skating……
→In my spare time, I’m fond of swimming,……
→In my spare time, my hobbies are swimming, skating……
4.句子要有逻辑性
I’m very interested in computer and won first prize last year.
→I was very interested in computer and won first prize last year.
5.句子要避免过多重复.
You will continue to walk. You’ll see a hill. You will go around the hill. You’ll get to a lake.
They spare no effort to offer their children as good a chance as possible: They not only send them abroad for further education and to private schools at great expenses, but also hire personal teachers. They buy all
→After walking for a while, you’ll come to a hill, walk round to the other side of the hill. There you’ll see a lake.
6.句子要避免头重脚轻
Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry and computer are the main subjects.
2.句子要平行
In my spare time, I enjoy popular music and collecting stamps. →In my spare time, I enjoy listening to popular music and collecting stamps.
3.句子要连贯
投稿人应提示内容,表明自己的观点:
Nowadays, knowledge is becoming more and more important with the development of society, so many parents expect the children to be useful or successful.
→The main subjects are Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry and computer.
7.句子要避免汉式英语 My spare lovers are swimming, skating, collecting stamps and
Kinds of learning materials, computers and so on. But no matter what their parents do for the children, what becomes of the children ? Some of them really make it, but most of them want to enjoy and relax themselves and at last they are really disappointing.
→Do you know where the People’s Park is?
2). There are many visitors enjoy the dish.
→Many visitors enjoy the dish.
→There are many visitors who enjoy the dish.